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Author Topic: [OFFICIALLY DEAD] Voidlight Academy [OOC] (16/inf): Feel free to use the concept  (Read 19044 times)

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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #240 on: July 13, 2016, 10:20:24 pm »
General notes: This is a high school game, and you're neither mentally nor physically high school aged. You might wanna change that.

Perks: Microbot Factory needs numbers but is also very weak. If you want to keep something like the current effect, make it something like a level-scaling heal per turn for all allies, or give a strong healing action.

Actions:
You need a basic attack and defense.
Your two damage-dealing actions are somewhat weak, you could add some minor additional effects to them.

Items:
Healing potion can be slightly stronge.
Spare parts are probably useless gameplay-wise but good fluffwise.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #241 on: July 13, 2016, 10:39:34 pm »
Give me a minute, should have most of it fixed, forgot the high school thing when I was making this, other wise okay.

EDIT: How's that look now?
« Last Edit: July 13, 2016, 10:47:55 pm by chaotic skies »
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #242 on: July 14, 2016, 02:20:20 am »
Move the basic actions out in front of the regular actions.  Also, specify what's what.  And what level it is.

You still didn't change microbot factory.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #243 on: July 14, 2016, 02:30:20 am »
17 is almost graduating high school but it is a high school age
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #244 on: July 14, 2016, 02:40:12 pm »
Marked all actions as level one, moved basics to the top of the list, lowered age (again), made microbot factory activate more often.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #245 on: July 14, 2016, 03:03:14 pm »
Basics don't level.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #246 on: July 14, 2016, 03:15:33 pm »
character application updated. am on discord for feedback.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #247 on: July 14, 2016, 03:17:26 pm »
Besides the basics thing, am I good? Also removed levels on basics.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #248 on: July 14, 2016, 03:21:43 pm »
Lenglon:These abilities need numbers, and they're


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You cannot have a l3 ability on a l1 character.  Like, it is against the rules to do so.

Chaotic Skies:Make it proc every (5/level) turns, starting turn 3, and make it heal based on a stat.

You're good to go after that.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #249 on: July 14, 2016, 03:22:00 pm »
Nobody complained when I made Edwinn 17.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #250 on: July 14, 2016, 03:54:48 pm »
Rustle is an adult. :p
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #251 on: July 14, 2016, 06:09:18 pm »
Rustle probably shouldn't be.
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #252 on: July 14, 2016, 06:50:56 pm »
high school age tho
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #253 on: July 14, 2016, 08:38:40 pm »
Made it proc once every 5/LVL turns after turn 3 and heal INT damage. So to start that's every 5 turns after turn 3 for 3 damage. How's that look?
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Re: Voidlight Academy [OOC] (0/inf)
« Reply #254 on: July 14, 2016, 08:42:46 pm »
Sounds good for a mass heal.
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