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[Chevaleresse]

First draft of the sheet done, any thoughts?

[Nakéen]

Spoiler: Rev'Raka the Dom'Chaka (click to show/hide)

Name: Rev'Raka
Age: 45
Gender: Male
Sex: Male
Species: Dom'Chaka

Stats:

Strength: 7 [+3?]

Intelligence: -2 [-1]

Agility: 7 [+3?]

Dexterity: 4 [+2]

Wisdom: -6 [-2?]

Perception: 4 [+2]

Charisma: -4 [-2]

Personal Information:
Species Description :
Dom'Chakas are a species of tall tailed humanoids with four arms, known for their incredible physical capabilities and ruthlessness in combat. Originating from the planet Tak'Balat, they never developed space travel, instead being discovered by the Ksura.
A portion of the population chose to join the Ksura as a mercenary force, in exchange for letting the rest of their people live undisturbed on Tak'Balat.

Physical Description :
He stands at 2m70 tall and sports a very muscular and broad body.
He has four arms, the lower two ending with clawed hands, and the upper two end with a long scythe like blade made of a strong material close to ivory.
He has a tail for balance, and his mouth is full of sharp teeth.
His hands have five digits, and his feet have five toes.

His skin is ash, and he bears white tattoos reminiscent of his people. His body bears the scars of many battles.

Mental Description :
Proud and warlike, Rev'Raka is a typical 'civilized' Dom'Chaka. He loves to fight and follows closely the Warrior Code of his people.
Strength brings respect, and the honor gained from battles is eternal.
He hates treason, and is extremely loyal to his superiors. Yet if he had to choose between orders and his moral code, he would chose his morals, according to the creed of his people.

Backstory :
Rev'Raka was born among the Ksura, far from the Dom'Chaka homeworld, Tak'Balat. Born from warriors, he himself was born a warrior. As soon as he could stand on two legs, he was trained by his kin to become a strong and proud warrior.

Like the great majority of his fellows, he was enrolled to become a soldier for the Ksura, joining the prestigious Chaka Corps. Composed only of his brothers and sisters, this special force was to be sent on the frontline of every battle, taking control of key points or breaching through the enemy defenses with brute force.

Distinguishing himself for his ruthlessness and loyalty, he was eventually chosen for a new operation : to discover new worlds for the Ksura, and eliminate any opposition in the process.

Profession: Soldier / Shocktrooper

Equipment: (This will be decided based on backstory and profession.)

Skills: (See Equipment.)

Faction: Warmongers [Ksura]

[spümpkin]

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Name: Alikvun Gor Freschtni (Alek for short)
Age: Impossible to determine
Gender: Also impossible to determine
Sex: Once again, impossible to determine
Species: Illiac

Stats: (Each stat starts with a base of 0, and each point added, adds to the roll score and how many points are needed to gain another additional bonus. (E.g. Strength:0 = No bonus, Strength:-1 = -1, Strength:-2 = -1, Strength:-3 = -2, Strength:1 = +1, Strength:2 = +1, Strength:3 = +2, and so on.) The bonuses are more for me to figure out, so putting them on the sheet is helpful, but not necessary. You start with 10 skill points to spend, and you can subtract from other skills to get more.)

Strength:-2 ((-1 bonus)) (How strong you are, and your physical exertion capacity)

Intelligence: +2 ((+1 bonus)) (How smart you are, and how far your mind can be pushed)

Agility: +6 ((+5 bonus))(How fast you are, and your capacity to run)

Dexterity: +6 ((+5 bonus))(How coordinated you are, and your accuracy with both melee and ranged weapons)

Wisdom: -2 ((-1 bonus))(How much you know about the world, and your ability to reason with people)

Perception: +3 ((+2 bonus))(How good you are at seeing past the surface, and your ability to search)

Charisma:-3 ((-2 bonus))(How convincing you are, and your ability to speak to people)

Personal Information: Little is known about the past of Alikvun, save that he was a planetary navigator at some point. His family is a mystery, same story with his homeworld, physical traits, and even most of his personality. Like most Illiacs, he hides his true self behind a mile of gauze, pitch black goggles with reflective lenses, and a voice modulator that sounds like he's talking through a fan. What little bits of his personality that do show indicate that if he makes a friend, he's got their six. He's extremely loyal  to those whom he has befriended.(Backstory, personality description, and physical description.)

Profession: Navigator/Sherpa(This relates to your backstory, and determines your equipment and skills.)

Equipment: (This will be decided based on backstory and profession.)

Skills: (See Equipment.)

Faction: None.(See the Info on Species, and below post for available factions. This is a sort of teaming system, so choose wisely. You can always change mid-game if you wish.)

*Rubs forehead at self-caused annoyance.*

Ok, so, you can't play as Illiacs. I thought that was clear by the fact that they don't have a description, but I guess I was wrong. Also, just a reminder to all, Faction is not determined by species. You can be whatever faction/species combo you'd like. As long as it isn't an Illiac.

Spoiler: Space Mech Okuu (click to show/hide)

Name: Esfir Vasilyev
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Sex: Female
Species: Voron

Stats:

Strength: 4 (How strong you are, and your physical exertion capacity)
Intelligence: 6 (How smart you are, and how far your mind can be pushed)
Agility: 1 (How fast you are, and your capacity to run)
Dexterity: 3 (How coordinated you are, and your accuracy with both melee and ranged weapons)
Wisdom: -2 (How much you know about the world, and your ability to reason with people)
Perception: -1 (How good you are at seeing past the surface, and your ability to search)
Charisma: -1 (How convincing you are, and your ability to speak to people)

Personal Information: Esfir is a member of a race of raven-like humanoids from a highly volcanic planet. They have high body temperatures and large wings that allow them to take advantage of the thermals and geysers in their home environments, though they're a bit too heavy to actually achieve true flight without assistance. Still, they're a bit lighter and more fragile than humans due to their bone structure being adapted for flight. They're a relatively young race, having only recently reached the stars in the grand scheme of things, and as a species they seek to make their impression on the universe as a whole.

Esfir herself is . . . somewhat of a strange case. She's a genius when it comes to mechanics and has shown such for a long time, but is frightfully naive at times, and seems to have her mental capacity occupied at all times by thoughts and calculations relating to her machinery. She went to school for engineering (focused on shipbuilding and nuclear tech), and was going to be sent out as a representative of her race, when tragedy struck. She was caught in a machine and lost most of her right arm along with her right foot, and it was thought that her future spacefaring career had ended. Instead, it was taken as an opportunity to display the technical expertise of the Voron people. She was fitted with an advanced set of cybernetic prosthetics, powered by an experimental miniaturized fusion reactor. Her cybernetic arm has multiple attachments, including a hand for fine work, a less precise but stronger hand for general use, and an attachment that acts as both a welding torch and a potent energy cannon for self-defense.

Esfir is a somewhat tall, shapely woman whose most striking features are the pair of wings adorning her back and her cybernetic limbs, whose powerplant is mounted around her chest and back but usually hidden by layers of thick clothing - though the power for her prosthetics produces a fair amount of heat, it's not enough to keep her comfortably warm most of the time. She likes to wear green bottoms and white tops, sometimes with decorative patterns, and a large hair ribbon. Her hair is black and extends a fair distance past her shoulders, and her eyes are a dark red color.
Profession: Engineer
Equipment: (This will be decided based on backstory and profession.)
Skills: (See Equipment.)

Faction: Chancellors

Sounds good to me!

I'll answer the questions later, because it seems to have erased all my previous answers :c.

[Nakéen]

*Rubs forehead at self-caused annoyance.*

Ok, so, you can't play as Illiacs. I thought that was clear by the fact that they don't have a description, but I guess I was wrong. Also, just a reminder to all, Faction is not determined by species. You can be whatever faction/species combo you'd like. As long as it isn't an Illiac.

You should probably update the character sheet then, as you wrote this

"Species: (either Human, Robot, Yrasil, Sertani, Ksura, or Illiac ((Check 'Info on Species")))"

Also, sheet cooked ! Waiting for feedback concerning the custom species.

[spümpkin]

*Rubs forehead at self-caused annoyance.*

Ok, so, you can't play as Illiacs. I thought that was clear by the fact that they don't have a description, but I guess I was wrong. Also, just a reminder to all, Faction is not determined by species. You can be whatever faction/species combo you'd like. As long as it isn't an Illiac.

You should probably update the character sheet then, as you wrote this

"Species: (either Human, Robot, Yrasil, Sertani, Ksura, or Illiac ((Check 'Info on Species")))"

Also, sheet cooked ! Waiting for feedback concerning the custom species.

Yeah, I know, that's why it was self caused. I came up with all the names of species before actually deciding what they would be, so yeah.

Also, sheet will be read now.

[IamanElfCollaborator]

Spoiler: Draft Red-oh, wait, wrong show. (click to show/hide)

Name: Oskar Bielecki
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Sex: Male
Species: Human

Stats:

Strength: 4

Intelligence: 3

Agility: -2

Dexterity: 2

Wisdom: 1

Perception: 0

Charisma: 2

Personal Information:
Description: Oskar is of average height, around 5'10'', with a muscled build from his profession. He has messy blonde hair, often tousled from hours of wearing the Red Try Jacket Aegis Crimson suit (see below), with deep blue eyes. His face is freckled across the cheek and nose, and he wears functional clothing. He speaks with a faint Polish accent, gone from years of working in space among other extraterrestrials and people from other nations.
Aegis Crimson Armor: The armor covers Oskar's whole body and is coated with red paint to allow him to be easily identifiable by imperiled targets at a distance. The visor can be covered by metal plates, with small side-mounted environment-resistant cameras on the helmet, to prevent damage to the visor by debris. The entire armor folds out from a relatively-light backpack which also folds into the air-tanks and carbon filters that allow the suit to create a breathable atmosphere within.

Personality: Oskar is rather friendly outside of rescue operations, with an open personality and a desire to make friends; indeed, if one was not aware that he was a rescuer, one would mistake Oskar for being laidback and lazy- not that he isn't laidback. However, within rescue operations, he can get rather hot-blooded, and he will go to any length to save a target, even at the cost of his own life. Oskar works hard when necessary, preferring to do so to save time for him to be laidback later. He is also very loyal to his friends, to the extent that he also sticks his neck out for them when it seems almost unnecessary. Years of experience in the rescuing profession have given him an almost older-brotherly outlook on people, as he watches out for his crewmates and ensures they are out of danger.

Background: Oskar was born in what was originally the nation of Poland on Earth, but is now within the Pan-European Confederation comprising the majority of Eurasia. His father was an Earthbound fireman, who taught Oskar the values of his line of work, inspiring the young man to look up to people in his line of work. After he had become an adult, Oskar entered training to become a member of the Aegis Rescue Corps, an elite organisation dedicated to the rescuing of people- human or extraterrestrial- from hazardous environments and situations, from places as mundane as a burning building to as exotic as a rapidly depressurizing spaceship. Showing immense aptitude for the job, Oskar was quickly entered into the Aegis Space Rescue division and was assigned the Aegis Crimson Armor, a special armored suit designed for survival in the harshest environments, allowing the wearer to survive temperature extremes, radiation and even the harshness of space. Such armors were assigned to the others in the division, color-coded to allow easy identification. He served with distinction in the Corps in a variety of successful rescue operations before being assigned by the Corps by order of the Chancellors to watch over the crew, using his survival and rescue experience to aid the crew's mission of exploring dangerous, often hazardous planets for colonisation. He was also assigned with the Aegis Crimson armor, and his kit, to aid his mission.

Profession: Rescue Worker
Equipment:
Aegis Crimson Armor:
Properties: Acid Resistance, Temperature Resistance, Limited Damage Resistance, Pressure Resistance, Radiation Resistance, Life Support, -3 to Agility
Skills: (See Equipment.)

Faction: The Chancellors, nominally.

WIP

[Sosoku234]

alright, I understand. I'll go change my race. But, an amazing pont you brought out is my lack of a faction. I puposely put no faction. Even if I'm a race who primarily resides in one faction, I'd still go factionless.

I tranmutated into a tree.

[spümpkin]

alright, I understand. I'll go change my race. But, an amazing pont you brought out is my lack of a faction. I puposely put no faction. Even if I'm a race who primarily resides in one faction, I'd still go factionless.

I tranmutated into a tree.

Yeah, ok. Also, your sheet looks good now.

[IamanElfCollaborator]

Is Oskar okay? And should I describe Aegis Crimson or not?

[spümpkin]

Is Oskar okay? And should I describe Aegis Crimson or not?

It'd probably be a good idea to describe it's capabilities somewhat, so I can remember them, or just list it in your equipment. Other than that, it looks good to me.

[IamanElfCollaborator]

Done.

[spümpkin]

Done.

You're missing ths agility penalty. I can put it in, but it'd be easier if you did it.

I think that a -3 to agility rolls shluld suffice, considering all the benefits you get.

[IamanElfCollaborator]

Done.

[spümpkin]

Alright, that looks good to me.

[Chevaleresse]

I should mention that Esfir's STR is mostly based on the nuclear powered robot arm, for when you're deciding what equipment bonuses she gets.