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AlanL

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #555 on: December 28, 2007, 12:25:00 am »

Thanks  :)

Yeah, well, if my portrayal of magic was truly 100% realistic to this world then I'd probably be using it, so...  :p
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Blitukus looked around the airport. Not much was different than the last time. He walked to the terminal... a surprising number of seats were open, but he still reserved one. Blitukus then decided to at least have a look through the city. He left the airport, and waited for the train to arrive at the terminal nearby. When it had arrived, he boarded it and rode back into the city. He found that he had the seat to himself on the way there. He sighed and looked out the window into the starry night sky... surprisingly, the aura of the city was much dimmer than that of the other cities, most of the light contained within the city itself. The stars were quite visible despite proximity to the city. Much of the visible lighting in the city was either a contained whitish light from the vehicles on the road or a dim bluish light emitted through the windows of the buildings. Eventually, the train reached its stop in the city, and Blitukus stepped out. He walked to the crosswalk, and crossed to the other side of the street, waiting for the next train through the city. When it had arrived, he boarded that, and again, found himself sitting alone. The city seemed surprisingly quiet... he felt strangely detached as 2000 approached... a detachment he hadn't felt since his nightmare. He looked out the window as the train passed through its stops. The glass surfaces seemed almost crystalline in the dim bluish and whitish light. As the train passed the University, one of the reasons behind the dim lights became obvious. Among the blue and green glows of the university, white light could be seen emanating from the observatory. The observatory was open, its lens fully deployed, aimed with machine precision. Blitukus cought a glimpse of the structure within the observatory. The telescope was aimed by various mechanical machinery that seemed to slide nearly frictionlessly while aiming the telescope. The telescope zoomed in... there were several computing machines within the building, and on the largest display, a crystal-clear picture of a white, barren, ringed planet... the planet he had gotten the cat relic from. The train moved on... eventually it cornered near a building, and traveled toward the central area of the city, perched near a cliff face. Several bridges seemed to cross from the tall buildings to the top of the cliff, the buildings being built near the bottom of the cliff. Blitukus exited here. All in all, transit was rather rapid... likely no more than 25 minutes. But, considering the 25 minutes to get back, it only left him with about 20 minutes to look around.

He saw a tunnel into the cliff face, and walked that way... there was a large tunnel, well lit, allowing large vehicles to proceed down into the mine... apparantly even after over 150 years of operation, the mine was still producing ore. Next to this tunnel was a small tunnel, hardly big enough for a kobold to walk through. The tunnel was dark, and old, rusting steel track leading out of it. Likely, it was one of the original tunnels, before Metropolis became Metropolis... Blitukus walked up to it, and looked into it. Apparently the tunnel itself had caved in, but one engraving, right near the entrance, got his attention. It was a simple engraving, depicting a large, exaggerated rocket blasting off, and on the back of the rocket, a peculiarly exaggerated kobold riding, wearing a wide-brimmed hat. Beneath, the text "MOON or BUST" was engraved. Apparently, it was a political 'cartoon' relating to the first impressions of the original space program. It was technically vandalism, but over the decades it had been preserved for some reason. Blitukus turned around, and found him looking into the center of the city. He walked towards this, passing between the tallest buildings, and into the square, following the path down toward the middle. He walked down the path, through the green heart of the city, and emerged in the central circle. He had noticed an engraving there before, and now knew what it truly was. The image of his mother and himself was engraved into the stone, a list of their achievements etched below, the text at the bottom reading "And that's not the half of it!" Blitukus laughed and grinned. Apparently he and his mother had been quite an inspiration behind what he saw around him. It also confirmed what he had suspected earlier... his technology was preserved through the ages, and was a critical part in allowing civilization to flower to such beautiful, grand proportions. He stood still, and smiled, a deep sense of pride arising within. At the exact center of the circle, an image of the sun was engraved. Apparently his story had also inspired the founder of Metropolis... but who was this person? He looked to the side, and saw the answer in the form of a statue, plainly marked, "Our founder." The statue was of obsidian, with ruby gems forming the eyes. The statue in many ways appeared to depict a demonic kobold, bat-wings spread out. Blitukus wondered, how could such a demonic-looking being found such a beautiful, benevolent city? Blitukus stood next to the statue... Her stone form stood, wings spread, hands on her hips, a grin on her face, and a stare that seemed to extend onward to infinity. The grin seemed to convey a powerful sense of mischief and chaos, but also a sense of trust, as if a close ally were grinning. Her stare extended out toward the horizon, an expression of determination as if she were staring out toward a distant, future goal. On the rear of the base of the statue, text was engraved in a rather spiky font, "Sure doomsday will come and all hell will break loose, but whose doom will it be? Yours, or theirs? I'm on your side, whether you like it or not!" Blitukus traced her stare, seeing it trace into the distance, past a still operating dam placed in the middle of a river that ran through the city, and past an old pad, once the launching pad for the original space program, not a historical monument. But... doomsday? Blitukus noticed a slight tremor again. Associating these two, he felt a sense of fear build up... but quickly extinguished it. He told himself, it is the landmasses and their natural, regular shifting, nothing more. Blitukus walked away. The thought still haunted him. He looked around as he walked, seeking a way to drive the thought from his mind. He found a crowd near the side of the road near one of the buildings, music playing and walked toward it. The crowd cheered, and a kobold standing on a stage tossed a bag out to a member of the crowd. It seemed a small band of music artists was playing for the public, the kobold in the front of the stage apparantly running some kind of contest regarding it. Blitukus approached. When the next song had finished, the kobold in front seemed to ask a question. Several people in the crowd replied, "1924!" "1942!" "1934!" "1934!" "The 6th of Hematite, 1934!" "The 8th of Hematite, 1934!" The kobold on the front of the stage replied in an odd accent Blitukus had never heard before, "Yes to the guy in the blue shirt, 6th of Hematite, 1934." He then picked up a bag and checked it, "Lucky guy, you got the 4 chimichangas!" The crowd cheered as the kobold sealed the bag and tossed it to a member of the crowd. The crowd handed him a card, and he opened it, read it, and then spoke, "Just looking at the date on this one makes me wonder why you guys voted for it!" He typed something into a computer, and then seemed to read through a page full of various facts, and a music sheet. He then continued, "Hey, that's actually not half bad!" He then printed the music sheets and then handed them out to the various instrument players, proceeding to direct the song. Blitukus recognized the song... it was one of the first songs he had become attached to as a child! He smiled as they played, his heart warmed by the memories it brought back. He even had met the composer as a child... As the music continued, he decided to shed his previous concerns, and dance to it in the traditional method. The crowd seemed rather impressed by this... apparantly that specific dance had become a lost art over the eons. It was one of his truly favorite songs, for it seemed to resonate with his soul. When the song had concluded, Blitukus kept the final pose of the dance held for a moment. The crowd clapped. Blitukus laughed. The kobold on the stage spoke, "I don't think I've ever seen moves like that before!" A few moments passed. The kobold continued, "Ok ok, this one's so old just any general detail. Even the database doesn't say much!" Several people in the crowd spoke, "Composed in 10...." "1059?" "No, later, gotta be 1070." "1079, by, A... Aki...r... dammit." Blitukus whistled, drawing the attention of the kobold on stage to himself, and spoke, "'4th Sunrise' was composed on the 1st of Felsite 1069 by Akim Brigtenedspeaches, born among the northern empires in 1044, he had a white, fluffy, skittish cat named Maine and a strange preference for copper." The kobold on stage replied, "Damn, did you know the guy or something?"

Well, actually...

The kobold took up a bag, looked in it, then looked at Blitukus, smiling, "Ooh, you got the magma pepper, enjoy carefully!" He sealed the bag, and tossed it. Blitukus cought it, then looked in it. It contained 5 moneys, and a small, red pepper, so brilliant with red and a tinge of orange that it almost seemed to glow. Blitukus took out the pepper, and pierced it slightly with one of his teeth. He tasted a single drop of juice from it, just to try it. This resulted in his entire mouth stinging from the intense spice. He grunted, and coughed. He felt as if his entire mouth had become a bit warmer. He snickered, then put the pepper back into the bag, sealing it. He then proceeded to walk back toward the station. He looked up... the buildings pierced high into the sky, aluminum circles suspended on titanium spokes, the blue glow emanating from the center. A flying machine slowly passed overhead, letting out a dull roar as it did so, the blue flame of its engines clearly visible against the night sky. Blitukus walked out onto the path near the road, then back toward the station. He looked back at the building, and noticed the blue image of pure light projected into the air in front of it. It seemed to be emitted from a small device mounted in the wall. It portrayed a 3 dimensional map of the city, a large arrow above it marking the location of that building, and above it all, a display of the time. It read "11:28 PM" He had a few minutes left... then he would have to go back. Then again, judging by the route of the train, it would take those few extra minutes to get back in the first place. Blitukus looked up. Fireworks were being readied at the top of the cliff. He realized the implications of his departure... his flight left at midnight. He waited for the train to arrive. When it did, he and the small crowd around him boarded it... be noticed that these trains lacked an operator, and continued automatically. It took him further, up through the west side of the city... looking back on the shining metal and almost crystalline glass of the city, he smiled... he truly did like the idea of being a citizen of such an establishment. Despite how much he did want to enjoy life as a citizen of Metropolis, his loyalties still lay elsewhere. He was still loyal to Anthath Sizet, loyal to his mother... and neither the mightiest magic nor the most ingenious technology would change that. He kept looking out, and took out that pepper again. He attempted to slowly consume it, taking frequent breaks to allow his mouth to clear. It was a very small pepper, but it still took a long time to consume due to its shear fiery nature. Indeed, the magma pepper had an apt name. Eventually, the train circled around the exterior of the city, stopping at several other stops, finally reaching the transfer to the airport train once again. Blitukus hadn't even finished the pepper by this time. He exited the train, and crossed the street, waiting for the train to the airport on the other side. During this wait, he decided to eat the rest of the pepper whole... the resulting burning sensation brought a tear to his eyes. He grunted, and held his mouth shut with his hands, for he felt if he were to open it he would find he and dragons would have something in common. He breathed heavily through his nose, the sensation traveling up and throughout his head. At least it left him feeling his head had been cleaned out afterwards. There was no water nearby... and that was good, considering him drinking water would've simply made it worse. He cleared his throat. Some of the crowd seemed slightly amused by what he did. Slowly, the sensation simmered down. The train slid up, and stopped, lowering itself and opening its doors. Blitukus boarded it with the rest of the crowd, and rode it back to the airport. He felt as if his body temperature had risen, and felt strangely awake by the time he reached the airport. When it had arrived, he left the train, and proceeded back into the airport. He observed the sign. It was 11:59 PM... but it seemed his flight had been, in the words of the sign, "Delayed to 12:10 AM by popular request. Enjoy the fireworks!" Blitukus noticed all of the people that used to be at the terminal watching the cliff face from the windows. Blitukus left the airport building, and stood just outside of it, watching Metropolis... All of the flying machines that had once flown overhead had either put distance between themselves and the city or had landed. Behind him, the sign still rendered its display...

11:59 PM

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12:00 AM

Fireworks launched from the top of the cliff, flying in a triangular formation, several larger fireworks launched below them. What appeared to be an up-arrow trailed into the sky, then one by one, the fireworks burst, painting '2000' in enormous font in the sky. Suddenly, several fireworks shot out of the cliffs edge, arcing over the city in a parabolic path, exploding into an array of colors that painted a rainbow above the city. The various colors dimly reflected off of the buildings in the city below, giving the city a slight but unusual glow. Blitukus smiled as he watched fireworks launch, timed to the pattern of music being played at the top the cliff, broadcasted throughout the city via radio. A few moments later, an earthquake shook the ground beneath Blitukus' feet. Blitukus noticed particles on the ground jumping slightly. Suddenly, once more, he felt detached... he felt a deep sense of gloom enter his heart... he felt, something, somewhere, had gone horribly wrong.

Meanwhile, far below the surface...

The pure, metallic adamantine of items near the surface was self contained and unaffected... but over the course of millenia, the adamantine which the dragons had placed far below degraded to impure forms, embedded in stone. The mana flux that had kept these adamantine walls intact was no more, and slowly, the impure substance turned to silver. The pressure which the adamantine had once withstood could not be supported by the silver, and the stone crumbled, letting the surface above it slide down, sending shock waves throughout the lands and allowing fissures to trail upwards.

An aftershock occurred, and as the midnight festivities continued, Blitukus felt as if he was no longer a part of it. Suddenly, Blitukus felt as if he were not truly alone, as if he were being tracked by someone who, like him, was displaced in time... he looked behind himself, and saw nothing out of the ordinary. He looked around. Everything... still seemed to be OK... to the naked eye, at least. He let a deep breath out of his nose, and entered the airport building once more. He took the reservation out of his seat, and while everyone else was still observing the show, moved to cross the terminal into the aircraft. As he did so, he noticed one of the employees at the terminal gate looking closely at a display. He spoke, "Hey... Sir, I-" The other employee interrupted, "Shush! See this? He's on 'important business'..." This employee pointed to a spot on the display, then smiled At Blitukus, "Nice bag. Enjoy the flight." Blitukus nodded, then continued. He entered the parked aircraft, and took a seat near the rear. He had once looked forward and had seen an even brighter future... but now, he saw only darkness. Whether this darkness was just a cloud in his vision... or truly was what lay ahead... was yet to be determined.
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I get the feeling that something about this update kind of leaves it empty... maybe its because the ones before it were actiony and this one is just a stroll around town.

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« Reply #556 on: December 28, 2007, 01:50:00 am »

First again!

Late edit: I read it but couldn't edit do to various problems. The explanation more than makes sense, didn't adamantine turn to silver in the old versions? Although there probably wouldn't be enough adamantine collapsing to cause much of an earthquake.

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« Reply #557 on: December 28, 2007, 02:39:00 am »

Then I guess You're a slower reader then me...

FIRST ACTUAL REPLY!

Ok, that SORTA makes sense on the earthquakes... but it still seems weird.

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« Reply #558 on: December 28, 2007, 10:26:00 am »

Something... something importnant died that night, there are no longer magic in the world...

BEYOND QUALITY!

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I get the feeling that something about this update kind of leaves it empty... maybe its because the ones before it were actiony and this one is just a stroll around town.

How ironic, its not the update that lacks content, this world that is a part of you has just lost an important component, so unavoidably you feel this emptiness, you just misinterpreted its source.
And thit is a good thing, a world whit no losses is a dead and static world, this death of magic is an important part of the story just as well as the death of Fale.
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« Reply #559 on: December 28, 2007, 12:36:00 pm »

Thanks   :p

Regarding the death of magic... well, I don't think it's to that extreme, although it is important. Magic is only dead on that one planet.

Regarding the earthquakes, I'm assuming that the adamantine walls are like in the old version, and stretch for miles and miles. So, when they all of a sudden turn to silver and crumble, that's miles and miles of stone that starts crumbling all at once.

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« Reply #560 on: December 28, 2007, 11:37:00 pm »

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Blitukus waited, sitting back, then eventually turned to rest his legs on the adjacent seat, his back resting against the inner wall of the fuselage. He felt very tired... he would likely just sleep his way back. He had paid nearly all of his money for the flight... he had only 6 moneys left, but it should be more than enough to arrange transportation from the airport to the center of the city once he arrived. He sighed through his nose... several minutes passed, and as the fireworks continued, people began to hurriedly board the aircraft. Many of the seats were taken, but a few weren't. Blitukus was able to keep the adjacent seat as a footrest. Apparently, according to a nearby sticker on the back of the seat in front, he wasn't supposed to though. He sat back up as the aircrafts engines started. When boarding finished, the doors closed, and the walkway retracted. Soon after, the aircraft taxied out to the runway, and a minute later, the engines spinning up to their full power, accelerated down the runway and took off. Blitukus saw the aircraft had left the ground, and promptly moved himself to once again rest his legs on the adjacent seat, back against the wall. He then emptied one bag into the other, and used the empty bag to shade his eyes. Despite the light in the cabin and the screech of the engines, he slowly fell asleep.

His dream started out nebulous... and then, he felt as if he were a ghost, watching a city, not much different than the Rametaru of 1999, from above. The city was on an oceanic coast, though. A large, obsidian colored aircraft approached... a loud siren sounded in the city. The aircraft exploded... and when the fireball dispersed, it revealed a demon, holding a large ranged weapon of some kind. The demon laughed, aimed at a small building, then fired the weapon. The weapon seemed to let loose some sort of rocket, that started out slow, but accelerated rapidly toward the building. The rocket struck the building, demolishing the building in a large fireball. A screeching sound could be heard... a military aircraft was approaching from the left. It fired its dual heavy automatic crossbows at the demon, and the demon grunted, slowing its flight, bits of ichor splattering towards the ground. The demon then fired again, the rocket zipping through the air, and striking the aircraft. The aircraft erupted in a ball of flame, one of its wings blown clean off. It trailed flame as it spiraled toward the ground, then exploded on impact. The demon laughed... another rocket approached, and flew right into the back of the demon, knocking the demon into a flaming tumble. A second rocket struck the demon as it fell. The demon trailed ichor and gore through the sky as it plummeted, splashing down into the ocean. A screech was heard as a second military aircraft zipped from right to left, pulling up and ascending, then turning to fly out to the ocean. Dull, distant explosions and thuds could be heard... Blitukus turned his presence to look out to sea... a naval battle was going on between red-painted steel clad ships, and dark, spiky ships. The vessels exchanged fire, blowing holes into one another... more and more of the dark vessels approached, black smoke and flame billowing from their exhaust pipes. Several rockets were fired out of the city, arcing in a parabolic path towards the ocean, creating large explosions as they landed in the water near the dark ships. One of the dark ships blew apart in a wall of flame, the remains sinking into the waters, another dark ship capsizing and sinking shortly after. Several demons in flight arrived, holding heavy weapons, firing on the steel ships... then suddenly, many of the steel ships simultaneously exploded for no apparent reason... but that reason became apparent a few moments later. In a previously unoccupied region of the waters, several shadows appeared... then several sleek, previously submerged vessels surfaced, their obsidian-dark surface absorbing all light, making it very difficult to detect them. The demons in the air stormed toward the city, and an immense battle between the demons, and the city, involving the citys military aircraft and armored vehicles ensued. Some of the vehicles seemed to deploy armored infantry, which further aided in the fight. Glowing shots streaked across the sky, to the ground, and up from the ground. Explosions burst in midair, sending shrapnel out in all directions, shredding the flesh of the demons. It seemed the demons were causing heavy tolls, land, sea, and air, the tolls exacted on the demons quickly remedied by more and more demons joining the fight... aid to the city arrived from the south. Several titanium-clad ships, one seeming to be very large and heavily armored, quickly made their way toward the battle. The dual-cannons of the large titanium ship seemed to consist primarily of crystal glass, titanium platings protecting it. The ship carefully aimed... then fired two bright beams of energy, striking one of the dark ships. The dark ship began to glow with heat, then exploded, the remains sinking into the ocean. The demons... actually laughed at this... a large, dark submersible craft emerged, far away from the battle. Several doors on its top opened... then it fired a large rocket into the sky. The rocket streaked upward, and arced forward, trailing through the sky, and coming down in the frantically scattering titanium fleet. Much of the fleet was annihilated in a brilliant flash of energy... another rocket streaked into the sky, destined for the center of the city... but, despite heavy damage, entire pieces of their glowing-hot hulls missing, the few survivors within the titanium fleet persisted, launching rockets and heavy explosive rounds at the dark ships as they approached.

Blitukus shut his eyes, his heart in pain from what he saw... but he felt his presence shift. When he opened his eyes, he found himself in the middle of a sealed room, far, far beneath the surface. The room was full of military personell, walking about in a hurry. Several computers were in the room, and advanced equipment around, the room sealed by thick, heavy steel bulkheads. It seemed a prominent military figure, a human, was watching over it all... in the front of the room, a large display, showing a map of the entire world... on this map, simple symbols of aircraft, naval vessels, land forces, and infantry could be seen. War had spread throughout the entire world... but it seemed that the front was positioned westward... the demons were winning... but, the nations of the west continents were making a comeback, pushing the front eastward. Still... fear and tension could be sensed throughout the room. Blitukus felt his presence shifting again. He saw himself in the center of a city... the buildings were familiar... it was the Rametaru of 1999... only, it seemed, it was no longer 1999. The buildings were darkened with soot, the sky black and red. The center of the city was now dominated by a large, dark tower... carrying the OmnireCo label. Demons flew above the city as if it were their own... a beam of energy swept through the sky, melting the wings off of several demons. A very large titanium-clad aircraft slowly made its way through the sky. It was a leviathan aircraft, armed to the teeth and having several turrets on its fuselage. On its side, the name "Dreadnought" was painted. Several smaller aircraft flew near it... an immense aerial battle ensued, ground forces firing on the aircraft. It seemed it was doomsday... for the demons... Demons fell from the sky, vanquished by various high power, high energy fire from the advanced aircraft. But... the demons were laughing. Blitukus found his presence shifting again... he found himself out in the middle of nowhere, in a desert, a subterranean facility below. There was a large, flat concrete floor below, several towers on the mountains nearby. A demonic laughter seemed to echo among the hillsides... then, part of the ground seemed to move. An enormous steel lid slowly opened, revealing a dark, shadow-filled chamber below... it was very dark, so not much could be seen, but there seemed to be an enormous rocket loaded within the chamber. This filled Blitukus with an overwhelming sense of gloom... he shut his eyes, and found his breath shaking. He heard a voice, "Hey..."

"Hey... HEY!"

Blitukus slowly opened his eyes. He was back in the aircraft, looking into the face of a human. The human smiled, then continued, "We've landed..." Blitukus sat up, "Oh, yes we have, thank you." The human nodded, then walked away. Blitukus rubbed his eyes, stood, checked his possessions, then walked into the aisle and stretched. The aircraft was nearly done unloading. Blitukus blinked, then proceeded out the door, through the walkway, into Rametaru airport. He was nearly home... He walked through the building, and left it. He looked around. The vehicle that had carried him the day before was not present, and it seemed it would not be present for a long time... he needed an alternate means. He began walking away, back toward the center of the city... although, he knew he would never, ever make it on foot. He noticed a small vehicle with a sign on it pick up a passenger from the loop of the airport, and drive away. The passenger seemed unaffiliated with the driver of this specially marked vehicle. Blitukus kept walking for a few minutes... the strange position of the sun in the sky seemed to play havoc with his bodys internal sense of time. It was an odd effect of such rapid aerial transit. Eventually, he noticed one of these oddly marked vehicles passing down the road. Perhaps they ferried people around? Blitukus waved and gestured toward it. It pulled over to the side of the road, stopping by Blitukus. Blitukus opened the door. The driver spoke, "Back seat!" Blitukus shut the door, then opened the other door. He hesitated a moment... judging by the design of the interior, it was a vehicle meant to ferry others around. Blitukus entered the vehicle, sitting in the rear seat, then shut the door. The driver asked, "The A-shaped building near the center of the city... and I must be there by 3:42." The driver replied, "Okay." The driver drove away, accelerating down the road. He continued, "Businessman eh?" Blitukus responded, "No, but I do have a very important deadline to meet..." The vehicle continued down the road. Blitukus sat, and looked out the window... the driver seemed to perform skilled feats of rapid maneuvering as if there were nothing to it. Blitukus quickly found himself getting nearer and nearer the center of the city... although, eventually, the driver had to stop due to a large crowd lining both sides of the street again. There was a loud roar in the distance. Suddenly, two sleek cars roared by, traveling at such a speed they both were blurs. The driver commented, "Damn street racers..." The driver then honked at the crowd, causing it to part, allowing him to continue on. The vehicle continued, Blitukus remaining silent. Quite some time passed, but eventually the vehicle reached the A-building, the alley Blitukus had entered from visible nearby. The rift was not there. The driver pulled off to the side of the road, then stopped. The driver spoke, "That'll be 3 moneys." It was far more expensive than the other, large vehicle... Blitukus realized, that small competition he attended was luck tending to his needs. If it weren't for that, he wouldn't have the money to pay. He gave 4 moneys to the driver along with thanks, then got out of the vehicle. The vehicle drove away a moment later. He walked to the intersection, and crossed over. He then walked down the path near the street to the mouth of the alley. The rift was still not there. He sighed through his nose, then looked around the city... Everything still seemed OK... but, he felt a sense of gloom and detachment as if he were about to experience his nightmare manifested in reality... time passed, and nothing happened. He looked back. The rift had happened to come into existence again... and there was his home, back so long ago. He approached the rift, and crossed, exiting Rametaru, and exiting the year 2000.

Meanwhile, after the street race had ended...

The human sat in his sleek, blue car, grinning at the light ahead, grinning at his winnings, revving his engine, his expression full of pride. Not long ago, though... in a dark, distant alley of Rametaru... one fissure, resulting from the collapse of the adamantine, seemed to be extended and expanded upward be forces from below... until finally, the ground parted, leaving a dim, red, glowing pit open in a dark corner of this back alley. The human was still waiting at the light, waiting for it to turn... and there was no traffic going the other way. The human revved his engine, "Come on! Sh*t!" A tall person, shrouded by a blood stained brown coat, hood shrouding this persons head entirely in darkness, approached. The being approached the vehicle, and stood by it. The being observed the gas-guzzling engine, the careful paint job sporting a flame design... The being then spoke, "Magnificent *vehicle*..." The being then placed his hand on the aluminum hood, revealing his hand to be red and strangely amphibian, "I like it..." The driver spoke, "Hey what the f*ck?!" The being cracked its knuckles and tilted its head back, collapsing the hood of his coat, revealing his red, amphibian head, glowing eyes, and vicious, cruel grin. The demonic frogman continued, "I think I'll take it..." The driver then locked the doors, "Oh hell no!" The demon grabbed the door, and ripped it open, tearing the latch open. The driver stomped on the throttle petal, and the vehicle began to dart away. The demon quickly reached in and snatched the human driver by the shirt collar, pulling him out of the vehicle. The demon then held the human up in the air by the throat, grinning into the humans face. The demon then grabbed the humans head, and twisted it with enormous force, snapping the humans neck. Then, the demon threw the body against a wall, leaving a dent in the wall. The demon then walked back over to the body, and proceeded to consume something from the body... although the result wasn't visible. He then strolled back to the vehicle as if nothing had happened, sat in it, and, this being his first time out in daylight in over 2000 years, was at a loss about what to do with it. He played with the controls until he figured it out, then drove away. He rolled the window down, looking at the innocent bystanders... he held his hand out, and attempted for form a ball of destructive energy, finding that nothing happened... "Hmmnh." He then began to search through the various compartments... ripping out doors and scattering items upon the seat and floor, paying no attention to the road ahead. He smiled as he found a small hand crossbow, among several bags of various illegal goods... apparantly the previous owner of the vehicle had been up to no good anyway. He ratcheted the string back on the crossbow... the crossbow seemed to do the rest automatically. This would drastically improve fire rate! He laughed, "I see I have a little catching up to do!" He then slowed, and aimed out the window. He found a poor female human, pushing a stroller forward. He fired at the stroller, and when the bolt pierced through, it caused a spattering of blood and a high pitched squeal. The mother jumped back, and let out a scream of horror and heartbreak. The demon pointed and laughed, readied the crossbow again, then fired again, the bolt piercing the knee joint of the mother, who stumbled over, letting out a tortured scream of simultaneous physical and emotional pain. He drove along, firing at random passerby, and firing at other vehicles. Eventually, he fired at a certain, shady looking vehicle, the vehicle then rolled down its windows, the rear passenger holding out an automatic crossbow. The passenger in the other car yelled, "YOU GOT A PROBLEM PENDEJO?!" The passenger then promptly fired at the demons car, breaking several windows and piercing through the aluminum. The passengers car then drove away at high speed. The demon looked down at his shoulder, finding a bolt sticking out of it. He spoke, "Ow..." He then ripped the bolt out, tossed it away, and laughed about it. The demon continued driving, driving up a ramp onto a highway. He looked to his side, and observed the bag of illegal narcotics. "Pain killers!" He grinned, took some of the yellow, powdery substance, rolled it up into some paper, and breathed a slight bit of flame on the end to light it. He smoked it as he drove down the highway, taking potshots at passing vehicles. He noticed that these specific narcotics contained carefully formulated chemicals, and other carcinogens, engineered to make the product immediately and hopelessly addictive, as well as slowly destroying the user from the inside out. The demon laughed, "What would we do without our loyal alchemists?" He took in a deep breath through the narcotic, and exhaled a plume of smoke out the window. The plume of pollutants was dense and pitch black. It coated the windows of the vehicle behind him, obscuring their view. That vehicle slowly began to move from its previous path... it ground against the center divider, swerved, then veered off of the highway, falling into the grass and rolling over several times. The demon laughed, then fired at another vehicles tire. The vehicle in question was right next to a very large cargo hauler vehicle. The vehicles tire blew out, causing it to slam into the cargo hauler and wedge itself into the cargo haulers wheels, knocking the cargo hauler off course and causing the hauler to drift off into the grass, its cargo container toppling over, crates and barrels spilling out everywhere, their contents spilling out further. The demon pressed down the throttle petal, shifting up. Eventually, the vehicles and land around became a blur as his newly 'reclaimed' vehicle reached high speed. He still took potshots at vehicles, buildings, signs, wildlife, whatever he felt like. He soon found himself taking potshots at the hallucinations caused by the industrial chemicals coursing through his veins. He laughed menacingly, looking at his vehicle and his weapon, "I think I'll enjoy this future..."

Upon exiting the other side of the rift, Blitukus immediately felt immersed in a sensation of being refreshed, a power being restored... but then, he looked back, at the steel and glass towers of 2000 AD... and let out a sigh... where was it all going to? His dreams had a tendency of being prophetic it seemed, but who would truly win? Perhaps... in the nature of all technological wars... nobody would win. The mere thought stung at his heart, and he pushed it from his head. Still... he felt concerned...
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Hmm... I hope the name Dreadnought was appropriate, all I know about the word is that it was used to label a now-outdated class of battleship.

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« Reply #561 on: December 29, 2007, 01:27:00 am »

First post!! Awesome story by the way Alan again!
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« Reply #562 on: December 29, 2007, 01:33:00 am »

Thank you  :)
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« Reply #563 on: December 29, 2007, 02:39:00 am »

I liked it. I liked it a lot.
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« Reply #564 on: December 29, 2007, 09:34:00 pm »

You are simply Amazing, so is your world, so is your story...

Beyond Quality.

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Regarding the death of magic... well, I don't think it's to that extreme, although it is important. Magic is only dead on that one planet.

Yes, I understood that, I was overly dramatizing.
It isn't really completely dead on that planet either, not as long as the cat amulet is still around.

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Regarding the earthquakes, I'm assuming that the adamantine walls are like in the old version, and stretch for miles and miles. So, when they all of a sudden turn to silver and crumble, that's miles and miles of stone that starts crumbling all at once.

Actually whit that in mind it's strange the earthquakes weren't much stronger, admantine is so light and silver so heavy that the volume would really decrease by several orders of magnitude.

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Hmm... I hope the name Dreadnought was appropriate, all I know about the word is that it was used to label a now-outdated class of battleship.

I'm no expert, but I think that really depends on what size you meant it to be exactly, as you described it I think Dreadnought is a little small, but it's not exact and it certainly works.

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It is strange I didn't actually realize the admantine disappearing would release the demons until you described the pit as glowing red, I think because you meant it that way, we even discussed it, my mind doesn't feel manipulated but apparently it is, this it how things should be when a story is really really good.
As always the awesomeness of this is indescribable on words, or any other way for that matter.

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« Reply #565 on: December 29, 2007, 11:59:00 pm »

I'm definitely glad people enjoy it so much  :)
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He looked on into the rift for another few moments, then began to turn back to walk back to his control panel. "MEOWWWL!" He quickly turned back. A cat jumped through the rift. Blitukus watched as the cat ran past him, stopped, then looked back at him. The cat seemed to smile, then spoke, "Greetings, mortal!" The cat then walked away, into the corridor. Blitukus felt curious about this.

A talking cat? Is this whole time travel business getting to my head? Maybe the cat is... no, highly unlikely.

Blitukus heard footsteps... he turned to see an immaculately dressed human running toward the rift. Such a bystander getting involved was likely not a good thing. Blitukus ran back to the console, but the human passed through before Blitukus could shut the rift. The human stopped, then looked to the side, observing the cat relic. He spoke, "Just as I..." He then looked around, observing the various magma and water equipment, steam based machinery, "... thought?..." The human seemed surprised by this. He walked up to Blitukus, then checked a small, slightly glowing device. The human spoke, "This... so it really was you?" Blitukus asked, "Is everything OK?" The instability bell began to ring. He asked, "Blitukus Siegedriven?" Blitukus nodded. The human breathed a deep sigh of relief, then spoke, "I never thought they would be right." Blitukus asked, "Who, and who are you?" He replied, "That's not important, what's important is that the wavefront propagator is in good hands... we knew it was a kobold, and we knew the general description... but only a few people ever suggested you were the one who took it. I guess that means I met your mother... and didn't even know it at the time." Blitukus spoke, "So you are a time traveler as well... may I ask why you are so interested in this device?" He replied, "I am part of a team that monitors the whereabouts of the Wavefront devices in time and space. It is our job to make sure that they never fall into the hands of demons or gods. These devices are of unimaginable importance... knowing you were the one who took the propagator answers many questions. We couldn't have asked for a better recipient of that device... although due to the nature of time and probability, I cannot disclose further information. Further details are for you to observe yourself." Blitukus replied, "I understand. How far back did you have to travel to get here?" He then spoke with a smile, "Far enough... Good luck with your quest... not even we know of your destiny, but considering the legacy you've left us, it shouldn't disappoint you." The human offered a handshake, and Blitukus accepted. The human spoke, "It was an honor meeting you... I would stay for longer, but duty calls... farewell." Blitukus waved. The human saluted Blitukus, entered a few things into a device, seemed to levitate slightly, then disappeared in a blue glow, leaving no trace behind.

The bell got louder. Blitukus looked out the rift again... civilization was tough... it would survive, and that was proof... maybe... then again, could that have simply been a human from another world who happened upon the desolate, ruined future of this one? What lay beyond 2000 was still yet to be determined. Blitukus sighed, then shut down power to the ring, allowing the rift to vanish. He then cut steam flow to the dynamos, and vented the boilers. He shut the feed to the channels off, and as they drained, he walked back toward the incomplete cat relic, took out the bag, unzipped it, took out the gem, then placed the gem into its designated slot in the device. It fit snugly, then latched. The cat then entered the room again, and walked up to the device, looking at it, then looking at Blitukus, "Mrr, I see you found our gift. My following you might attract Armoks attention... and we both agree we don't want him finding this... so I'll make myself scarce... for now." The cat then quickly left the room, and proceeded toward the exit of the tunnel. Blitukus didn't even have a chance to speak to the cat. A moment later, it was as if the cat had never been there at all. Blitukus stood for a moment, thinking about it... Dracha then entered the room. She spoke, "Looks like you're half way there! Glad to see it working out. At this rate I should tell the other dragons to get ready to depart." Blitukus spoke, "Hello, Dracha." Dracha continued, "Hi. I got important news for you. All that scratching around in the astral plane finally amounted to somethin'! For a brief moment, someone broke through and sent out a message! Whoever it was must be one hell of a determined soul, for it was not a demon. Souls of the dead usually are forbidden from ever doing anything back here. Musta been one hell of a powerful soul too for this! The part that REALLY makes it news, is that the message is for you!" Blitukus asked, "Me?" Dracha continued, "Yeh! The first part of the message told me to relay the rest to you, an' I think you should get something to write this down with." Blitukus nodded, and left the chamber, gathering his bucket of coal dust and a relatively sparsely-written-on piece of paper. He then returned, and readied himself to write, listening attentively. Dracha relayed the message, copying the tone and speech pattern perfectly, "'I love you. I promised you I would give you a gift for your birthday, and I still will.' I'z had to hide da ting from Armok... Bring dat steel suit!" Blitukus immediately felt his heart warmed by hearing this... he knew of only one person in existence that spoke like that... it seemed his mother had also made a promise, and was intent on keeping it. She had struggled with immortal determination and had managed to, for a short time, pierce through the barriers between the planes of existence... just to give her son a birthday gift. Blitukus breathed deeply and smiled, his love for his mother seeming to make all of his previous fears and concerns seem insignificant. Dracha continued, "The message has 2 more parts, although they're not words." Blitukus replied, "I am ready to write." Dracha continued, "Good. 8923 1923 284975 12399 19357 71239 239847 9923 51235 36983 6754. This wasn't even really spoken... it just popped into my head as I was hearing the message!" Blitukus wrote the coordinates down, "Recorded. What is the last part?" Dracha continued, "I got a feeling about this present of yours... I think it might come in handy in the future." Blitukus nodded. His mother had always given him birthday presents that were useful in one way or another. But... useful in the future? Considering the circumstances, that could be anywhere from the day after to several thousand years ahead. Still... Blitukus set down the writing implements, walked up to Dracha, and gave her a hug the best he could, "Thank you, my friend, thank you... that was my mother..." Dracha smiled, "And she loves you more than anything else." Blitukus looked up and smiled, a tear forming on one of his eyes, "I know. I love her too, more than anything else."

Blitukus stepped back, and waited a moment, taking in what had happened. It occurred to him... it was in a place so far he needed his machine, and he also needed his suit... it was only logical, after all, since Armoks scope encompassed the entire world, in order to truly hide something from him, it had to be hidden off world. He was eager to travel to it... but it was a birthday gift... he would wait until his birthday. Blitukus spoke, "Pardon me for a second..." He then left the cavern, and walked to the river, drinking from it. He felt the brisk, clean water refreshing and surprisingly pristine compared to what he had drank during his stay in the year 1999. Upon his return down the tunnel, he found Dracha walking up to meet him. He entered his room, and Dracha followed... although she found it immensely difficult to even try to fit through the door, so she stayed outside. Blitukus asked, "Something I've sort of been curious about... why do the first 3 letters of your name match the first 3 letters of your species name?" Dracha replied, "My parents named me the first sound that came to their mind, and then realized what they did afterwards. We had some laws in place that made it so you couldn't change your name... so, I got stuck with it! Ah well, as my parents always told me, it makes me unique!" Blitukus snickered, then nodded. Dracha asked, "So what's the future like?" Blitukus replied, "Indeed, technology does become the new magic. It's a world that's different than that of the ancients in every way, yet also surprisingly similar. You would see it as a different take on familiar concepts. Given a few more decades, I expect the technological civilization of the future would become just as grand and advanced as the magical one of the ancients... although, I have a feeling, a similar fate may befall them..." Dracha asked, "What do ya mean exactly?" Blitukus replied, "Nevermind... I would rather not think about it. Speaking of the final fate of the Dragons, though... what are the details of your star-portal project? I have been rather curious about that." Dracha replied, "Well... when you were with Arkus, did he try to test his back-up spell on you?" Blitukus replied, "Close, but I turned it down." She replied, "A wise move, it was full of flaws and errors right up until we encased the demons. It might've turned your soul inside out! But, as we were developing the portal, we solved the problem of the projection on the back-up spell. We got it to work... and it proved to be the key to making the whole idea behind our resettlement plan work. You see, the energy flowing into the portal is so enormous that it can only run for a short period, once. We only have one shot. We couldn't just cram thousands of dragons through the portal, what we could get through would be so small it would guarantee our extinction... but, we can send thousands and thousands of back-up modules through, and activate them on the other side. After the portal itself was designed, and we had the back-up problem solved, we had to pick a world among the stars to settle upon. Even the most powerful among us couldn't examine these distant worlds directly. They're just too small and too far away! We had to use indirect means to even find them. We sensed the mana aura around these distant worlds to the best of our ability... and determined one world within range as having the highest probability of a successful colony. It's a rather small world with a noteworthy atmosphere. That's all we could tell about its properties on the physical plane. On the astral plane, we sensed it contained a powerful and pure aura of mana, enough energy for generations to come, and on top of it, the planet generates its own mana supply from the forces of its parent stars!... 2 stars, to be exact, each small and circling close to the other, each a serene blue. The entire combination is so serene and charged with mana we decided to use the unicorn as the symbol on the colonys banner. The world we chose is just over 9 years of light-speed travel away." Blitukus spoke, "How will you survive on a world that is likely nothing like this one?" Dracha replied, "We'll be sure to bring plenty of food, mithril and crystal along with the entire back-up stash, and leave with our mana topped off. When we first arrive, we'll cast a bubble around ourselves to shield ourselves from the environment, our most diligent and capable alchemists casting a spell to modify the atmosphere within the bubble to make it breathable. While the bubble stands, we'll dig out a network of rooms beneath the terrain. After we move our belongings inside and build a nice, sturdy hatch, we'll collapse the bubble and start building our colony up beneath the surface. There's only about 20 of us left here but there's closer to 20,000 back-ups in a stockpile near the portal. The 20 of us still awake here are gunna have to review the old books though... it's been centuries since we've last used these advanced magics." Blitukus spoke, "It sounds like quite an adventure. Good luck on it. When the day comes, may your colony flourish." Dracha smiled, "Thanks! Although when I'm gone I don't think we'll ever be talking to eachother again... you see... when crossing such enormous distances at such enormous speeds, time does weird things. We've seen this apply equally to both physical and astral objects. On top of it, when our initial lodgings are dug, we'll want to sleep to acclimatize ourself and refresh our souls in the flux of the new world... and being dragons, we can sleep for a long time. All in all I don't know when we'll become active again, but it might be centuries. There's been theories around about boring rifts through the astral plane to allow for travel that, although it still technically isn't moving that fast, it effectively exceeds the speed of light... but nobody has ever figured out how to make it work. It's beyond even us... the cats are the only ones we have seen using such methods of travel, and they didn't want to tell us how." Blitukus thought about it for a moment, then spoke, "Interesting concept. I understand that the end of my quest may be the last time we ever see each other... but I have come to terms with this already. I do not know my fate, but I may be parting this world. I hold out hope that I will still be here to enjoy life... but, no matter what, I have confidence that I will succeed, that my mothers soul, and my... well, at least my soul, will live on..." Dracha replied, "It looks like we're both in for one heck of a ride." Blitukus nodded. Dracha continued, "I like ya... I'm gunna miss ya, but we've both gotta do what we gotta do... I need to get back to my studies, I gotta be ready for the big day ya know." Blitukus nodded, "I also should rest and reflect... magic is dead in the future, and I would rather carry as much as I can before I leave for an even further future. Goodbye, Dracha, and best of luck." Dracha replied, "Magic is... well, I guess that was to be expected... damn I hope that adamantine held up. Anyway, goodbye Blitukus, I'll stop by again soon." And having concluded their conversation, Dracha left, traveling down the tunnel and taking off, flying above the chasm. Blitukus sat back on his bed, and began to reflect on the situation... he realized the situation with the adamantine, the mana flux disappearing... his visions of the war, of the rockets, of the end... but, a human from the far future, part of a highly advanced, apparantly technological civilization? Which fate lay in the future? There was only one way to find out... either way, whether it be from the grand halls of a grand civilization, or from the ashes and dust of charred ruins, he would find the next component, and perhaps, finally find an indication to the final fate of Arkus and Kazo.
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I get the feeling that I did something wrong with these convos, but I can't pinpoint what. Then again, I may be just being paranoid about it.

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« Reply #566 on: December 30, 2007, 01:55:00 am »

:o

I hadn't had a chance to read this lately, WOW!  I'm very, very impressed by the quality of work, and intrigued by A) The demon Blitukus unleashed, B) The Cat artifact, and C) Arkus/Kazo.

Looking forward to the continuing installments!

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« Reply #567 on: December 30, 2007, 03:04:00 am »

The cat was... strange.

I eagerly tear my hair out in wonder of it, but don't give me spoilers this time.

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« Reply #568 on: December 30, 2007, 01:17:00 pm »

I'm definitely glad people appreciate it so much  :)

Thanks.

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« Reply #569 on: December 30, 2007, 10:55:00 pm »

Beyon... saying this is getting a bit repetitive.
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BEYOND QUALITY!!!  :)
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I'm definitely glad people appreciate it so much  :)

Thanks.



*I* thank *YOU* for giving us this wonderful story and world!  :D
It's nice and all but don't you really think you say thanks little TO often, at least vary the smiley. Well, I won't complain, it's really only nice, but... I don't know. Maybe I feel I need to thank you back every time you say that. Ignore this.

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I get the feeling that I did something wrong with these convos, but I can't pinpoint what. Then again, I may be just being paranoid about it.

"convos" means conversations, right? I'm not very god at internetish.
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The cat was... strange.

I eagerly tear my hair out in wonder of it, but don't give me spoilers this time.



It wasn't THAT strange, not for being a cat and all, rather I would describe it as MYSTERIOUS.

But no spoilers, to much of that already, I newer seem to have willpower enough to resist spoilers.
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