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« Reply #510 on: December 20, 2007, 07:37:00 pm »

Actually my inspiration to this action came from some ripped music and a couple of flash games. My previous inspiration, before I felt this way, came from several other sources. I think what triggers me to feel this way is probably music though.

I've been inspired about it for quite a while, but it's only been today that I've felt this way about it. To be honest... I haven't felt this way since I started with Fales quest.

Edit: Come to think of it... the way I structured the end of this story is inadvertently a good lead up to Kazos story.

The reason I'd be doing Kazos story right after this one though is more a matter of not wanting this feeling to go to waste rather than anything else.

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« Reply #511 on: December 21, 2007, 12:25:00 am »

I find that I just really have to try not to sound like I'm catering to Armok, really the reason he gets a lot of stuff in is because he offers a lot of ideas and generally gives good reasons why.

Then again, I may be just reacting to sentiment that isn't there.

About the ADOM reference, in ADOM, there was a casino, and if you won anything a guard would block your exit until you spent it all at the gift shop.

About the files... maybe I could box.com it, but what I was thinking is having all of the text, images, and the save files, all in a zip file. It's not a small download. I guess I could, maybe...
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Blitukus looked around, and smiled. He was beginning to feel the sense of being displaced in time... only this time, he felt that rather than himself being displaced back in time, the whole world except him was displaced back in time... such were the effects of a relative viewpoint. His curiosity came to front as it fully sank in that he was standing in a future that he had once daydreamed about as a child. He was curious in particular about that new metal. He kept looking around, and eventually spotted a potential power source. A large steel box, marked with a sign carrying the image of a lightning bolt on it. This box was placed near the wall, out of sight near one of the business places. If enough power was going through enough wire, perhaps he could sap some of the magnetic field from it, and convert it to mana. Blitukus walked over to it, crouched down by it, and held his amulet near it. He noticed his amulet begin to be magnetically repulsed by the box. The box was making a quiet hum. Blitukus held the amulet closer, using the force to determine the best location to hold it. He opened himself to receive the energy. He actually found he had to focus and intentionally draw energy for this specifically to work. The amulet glew brightly, and Blitukus felt a powerful surge of mana course into his soul once he got it going. Blitukus sensed by the force that the magnetic fields within the box were becoming perturbed by this, and much much larger amounts of energy began to have their direction shifted. The box began to buzz annoyedly. A second later, there was a distant POP, and the power ceased. The nearby business place went dark. Blitukus stopped, and stepped back, "Oops..." Blitukus wondered... the box carried power far in excess of what he was siphoning from it... why was it so vulnerable? Then, Blitukus heard a yelling from inside the darkened business place,

"Hey!"
"What the hell is going on NOW?"
"Get the maintenance guy, fuse 8 just blew and we're all outta replacements... I wouldn't doubt it was the pizza shop plugging their lights into the wrong circuit again."
"I swear those... rrh... bunch of morons. Ok, on it... you know I swear that pizza shop does those things as some kind of scheme to cut down their power bill... I think I'll call management too."

Blitukus snickered. That was the answer... the system was already under strain, and Blitukus messing with it just pushed it over the edge. On the up side, this facility was obviously capable of keeping itself maintained, and Blitukus sensed he had mostly replenished his mana. Blitukus walked away from the shop. He then used his newly gained mana to check his sphere of direction. It pointed straight downward, and a bit to the west. It didn't change as he moved. It pointed to a spot on the other side of the world, which just happened to be where Metropolis lay. A few minutes passed. A utility worker entered the shop. A minute after that, the lights came back on within it. Blitukus then looked around again... far to the rear of the building was an organically shaped long table, several large devices with glowing displays on it, and chairs at each one. Blitukus walked over to this area, and sat down before one of these devices. The device consisted of a display, a box with several slots on the front, a movable pointing device, and a control panel that contained a button for every recognized character in the local language. Stuck to the side of the box portion with an adhesive tape was a piece of paper. On the paper was an image of an odd silvery disk with a hole in the middle, then a buster bar over that. The text under it read, "Do not install private software on public terminals. -Admin". On the screen, someone had apparantly left whatever they were doing up, for there was a box with a white background, a slot, and a virtual button labeled "Search Database". Blitukus thought for a moment about how to use this, then reasoned it out fairly quickly. He selected the slot, typed in "Metals", and then selected the search button. A few seconds passed, apparantly the machine was doing something, the markings on the display changed. Then, a large list was printed onto the left side of the screen, images available to the right, on the very top a highlighted text reading "Definition of Metals". Blitukus, of course, already was satisfied as far as knowing what a metal was. He looked through the list... Aluminum, Antimony, Arsenic... many metals were listed that he had hardly heard of before, some of which he had truly never heard of before, pictures provided to the side. None of the pictures matched what he had seen. Magnesium, Manganese, Mercury, Molybdenum... nowhere was it to be found, although some things were mentioned he didn't know qualified as metals. He kept looking... Sodium, Tantalum, Thallium... Titanium. He recognized it immediately. The metal he had seen was Titanium. It was a metal he had never heard of before, with properties he had never seen before. He selected the text. A page of text was displayed with images depicting the configuration of the fundamental particle that composed titanium. Quite a lengthy description of the metal was available in several sections, with details of its use ranging from mining all the way to finished goods. Blitukus read through this... and snickered upon finding the primary ore used in the production was ilmenite... when he was a child the dwarves had regarded ilmenite as merely rock. If only they had known what they were in some cases literally sitting on... It became apparent why Blitukus had never seen it before. The smelting process was very lengthy and required relatively sophisticated technologies and techniques. Apparently it wasn't until 1892 when the dwarves first figured out how to properly smelt titanium, and even then its use was limited to only the most advanced nations until the early to mid 1900s. It seemed quite a bit of titanium was used as a component of paint, most nations using relatively little titanium metal, using steel instead. It seemed, though, that the high-tech entities of the world were distinguished in that unlike other nations, they had quite an appetite for titanium metal. Blitukus spent quite a while satisfying his curiosity regarding metals, finding much had been discovered about the innermost details of each down to the fundamental particles of each. He smiled as he noticed... the forces of unstable particles he had inadvertently caused an explosion with back in the days of the ancients were harnessed as a smog-free power source in this future. Uranium and Plutonium were listed as naturally unstable, but their decay had been contained and controlled for a gradual release of energy that fueled massive power-generating facilities. Blitukus smiled. It was ingenious... as long as it was properly maintained.

The sun was beginning to set. Blitukus finished what he was doing, stood, and walked away. Dracha had once mentioned the cats traded for minerals they thought were useless... but the cats had mastered both branches of civilization. They had mithril, and they had steel, titanium... but adamantine... He looked at his amulet. The black material that encased the non-adamantine part of his amulet... it was the technological equivalent of adamantine... apparently it hadn't been found by humans or dwarves as of 1999, for it was nowhere to be seen other than his amulet. Perhaps he would satisfy his curiosity regarding it eventually... strangely, it seemed to not even be a metal, yet in at least its strength and lightness was like adamantine in nearly every way. The future still held further secrets, deeper within. Blitukus walked up to the window, and looked out. As the skies darkened, the city slowly became lit. Vehicles on the roads sent out rays of light, the source slowly moving through the city. A faint orange, electric aura could be seen gently resting upon the city. Then, he realized... he had probably spent his hour already. Blitukus walked back to the middle of the building, looking up at the board. It was 5:24 PM, his flight arrived at 5:30, boarded at 5:50, and departed at 6:00. Blitukus walked back to the terminal, and looked out the window. Several minutes passed, and another titanium aircraft, its wingtips strobing with blue lights, slowly set down its rear, and then set down its front as it traveled down the strip. It slowed, turned, and taxied up to the terminal. From the electric lights near the terminal and the fading sunlight above, Blitukus noticed several markings on it that he had overlooked on the previous one. On the tail, the words "Metropolis MesoTrans" were painted in blue using an odd font he had never seen before. The bottom of the aircraft was decorated by various spray paint markings, various drawings in various colors, none of them vulgar. The aircraft parked, and shut its engines down. The corridor on the terminal extended, connecting with a door on the side of the aircraft. Soon, people began to exit the aircraft, leaving through the terminal. Meanwhile, several smaller service vehicles pulled up, and began tending to the aircraft. Many crates of cargo were unloaded from the side of the belly of the aircraft, other vehicles waiting for that to get finished to load on new crates, destined for Metropolis. Blitukus noticed the aircraft seemed to accept 2 types of fuel... a standard liquid propellant that seemed the staple fuel for turbine aircraft, and another fuel... seeming to require high-pressure-low-temperature equipment to handle. An announcement was made regarding the arrival of this flight. Boarding would begin in 15 minutes. In the mean time, Blitukus found a newspaper discarded on a table, and read through it. The front page read, "Heroic freelance pilot saves dozens after giant reptile invades coastal city! He states, 'I asked the mayor for a job and he gave me one.'" Beneath the headline was a picture of a well equipped human standing by a small aircraft that, although it was equipped with weapons, didn't seem to be military. Blitukus read through the paper. Apparently there were still challenges to be faced by the upstart adventurer even in these eras... although no longer were titans and hydras around... it mostly came from the results of civilizations actions. Apparently the reptile was actually of a peaceful and fairly dormant species, intending no harm... until a fisherman in a boat provoked it into action by stabbing at its eye. The newspaper mentions that the fisherman and the reptile were the only two deaths of the incident. Blitukus read through that, then the next story, "Small town left soggy due to poorly designed artificial waterfall: 'We didn't think it'd pump that fast!', remarks architect." Blitukus read the details, and snickered... it reminded him of a dwarven incident... in fact it mirrored it almost perfectly. Soon, the call to board was made. Blitukus set down the newspaper, and waited in line. Most people payed the employee there with some sort of card or paper note. Blitukus surprised the employee by paying in coinage. The employee didn't object... 214 moneys was 214 moneys. Blitukus stepped into the cabin, finding it rather spacious and long, seating enough for many people. Blitukus sat near the back, on the right side of the aircraft, sitting next to the window. He had a view that overlooked the middle-rear of the wing. Service vehicles began to depart, their job having been done. The cargo bay shut, the empty vehicles retreated back towards the building. Meanwhile, people were taking seats all around the cabin. A female human sat next to Blitukus, "Hello." Blitukus replied, "Greetings!..." He noticed... she looked familiar... she looked just like that mechanic from Oris army, the one who had wanted to chat over a meal, those many, many years ago. She asked, "Everything OK?" Blitukus responded, "Yes? Oh... for a moment I thought I had met you before, a long time ago." She replied, "Odd... I felt the same way looking at you."

Blitukus gazed out the window. After everyone had boarded and all vehicles had dispersed, the door closed, the corridor retracted, and the engines started. The human sitting next to him drew a small device out from a small bag, and activated it. Its prominent features were a single speaker and an antenna. She spoke, "They always say to put electronics away but since this thing can't transmit they don't care about it. I just like listening to the air traffic chatter." Soft but scratchy voices could be heard from it, communications chatter between the aircraft and the building. After all was readied, the whistle of the engines increased in pitch and intensity, the aircraft slowly beginning to move forward. Blitukus looked out the window as the aircraft taxied, Blitukus watching the other aircraft around. Strangely, only 2 of the 5 engines of the aircraft were being used. These 2 were relatively large, but the other 3 had their inlets shut to the airflow. The aircraft made its way to the end of the strip. As it approached, the pilot could be heard, "Flight 4314 heading out to Metropolis, requesting clearance to depart." The controller replied after about a minute, "Flight 4314... you are cleared for takeoff." The aircraft, having already moved onto the strip and turned to face down it, spun up its engines. The whistle became a screech as it rolled down the wide, paved strip. Blitukus was pushed into his seat by the acceleration, but kept looking out the window. The aircraft tilted upwards, then gently left the ground. Blitukus smiled... he wondered how this aircraft was going to make it half way around the world in such a short time, and soon he would find out. WhirrrrrR-Kclunk. The landing gear retracted. The aircraft ascended slowly, tilted up, obviously uncomfortable with such slow speed travel. It turned westwards, and began flying away from the city. Blitukus watched the city lights passing into the distance. A more distant and scratchy controller could be heard, "Flight 4314, you are leaving Rametaru airspace. Good luck, see you next time." The pilot responded, "See you then." The aircraft was uncomfortable and clumsy during slow-speed flight... but there were no speed limits in inter-city airspace. The engines spun up to their full power. The aircraft seemed to become much less clumsy in the air. The feathers on the trailing edge of the wing straightened out, no longer sacrificing drag for lift. Blitukus looked out towards the front of the aircraft... it was flying into the sunset. As it ascended high above the ground, nearing the clouds, the dim gas behind the engine burst into a brilliant blue flame, the whistle becoming a loud roar. Blitukus felt himself pressed firmly against his seat, the aircraft accelerating rapidly through the clouds, leaving trails of condensation from its wingtips.The aircraft accelerated further and further, ascending higher and higher. It ascended for quite a while, its speed reaching the point where waves in the air piled up upon themselves, forming a shockwave in front of the aircraft. The sunset rays scattered beautifully over its titanium wings as it ascended to almost twice as high as when Blitukus had first tried to reach heaven. The stars were a bit brighter, and the horizon ever so slightly curved. The aircraft then nosed down, diving, increasing its speed further. Eventually, the dull metallic roar of wind on titanium could be heard over the engine, the frame of the aircraft moving in the ripples of the high speed shockwave showing it was truly designed for these speeds. The roar died away to a whistle again, and the whistle died down. The inlets to the 2 turbine engines capped themselves as the turbine engines shut down. For a moment, no engines could be heard. Then, the 3 other engines opened their inlets. They looked like turbine engines on the outside but didn't seem to have a visible turbine, their inlets shaped rather differently as well as their exhaust nozzle. A dull roar could be heard from these engines as they started. They trailed a beautiful flame. The front of the flame, by the nozzle, seemed invisible. The middle and rear of the flame burned a brilliant orange in the inside, a reddish on the outside. The flame burned clean, no pollution visible. The aircraft continued to accelerate, nosing back upwards, the nozzles of the engines expanding as speed increased. The shockwave in front of the aircraft became more and more a cone. Blitukus recognized the flame from these engines as a hydrogen flame... likely that fuel was hydrogen stored at extreme pressure... perhaps even somehow condensed into liquid form. Blitukus grinned as he and the ground became more and more distant. The desert and swamp terrain of his homelands passed rapidly below, far below. The sunset seemed to occur in reverse as the aircraft outpaced the rotation of the planet. The aircraft ascended into the upper regions of the atmosphere, gliding seemingly frictionlessly on wisps of air as it moved at extreme speed over the surface. The stars remained noticeable in the sky as the sun rose in a reverse path, the smooth titanium aircraft piercing through the thin upper atmosphere, empty space all around, the suns rays scattering off of the metal, and back into the heavens, blue lights on the wingtips strobing on and off, blended with the light from the red-orange flame behind the engine. The engines reduced their thrust as the aircraft reached its cruising speed and altitude, softening to a quiet rumble. Blitukus took in a breath from the cabins air, still retaining the pressure from ground level, and let it out slowly, smiling. This was far beyond what even the average turbine aircraft could hope to achieve... yet it was commercial and available to all. The aircraft really was the product of a high-tech nation at least one step ahead of the city he had left. Perhaps he would find the artifact there, perhaps he would find answers there, but either way, he had a feeling, he wouldn't regret paying Metropolis a visit.

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« Reply #512 on: December 21, 2007, 12:37:00 am »

FIRST POST!

We knew it, high atmosphere flight...

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« Reply #513 on: December 21, 2007, 01:06:00 am »

Yeah, I based it on a real-life idea I heard about on the science channel IIRC. Personally, I like the idea of a commercial ramjet  :p
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« Reply #514 on: December 21, 2007, 08:01:00 pm »

Beyond Quality!  :) *movie clip of friends being reunited*
Now I must beat you to it!  :p
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This story is Beyond Quality!

How often do you cheek your PM:s? Did the one I tried to send yesterday not work or you just not checked yet?

One thing I noticed in this post was the sound bang was hardly noticeable and Also I that Blitukus failed to associated the computer terminal whit his own 11D calculating machine. generally Blitukus refer less to his own work when seeing related things than I imagined he would do. I still don't imply you should change anything, it's probobly intentional and is still flawless.

DAMN! I always think out a lot of things to say in these posts but then I never remember it!  :mad:

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« Reply #515 on: December 21, 2007, 08:32:00 pm »

I must've missed the notification about the PM. I replied.

I find certain music helps to improve the results of letting my mind wander, and it's this improved mind-wandering where I get my inspiration from. So, it's indirect.

And about the sonic boom, you actually don't hear the actual sonic boom from inside the aircraft since you're traveling with the shockwave. The only reason you would notice it would be the sudden shift in flight dynamics. Blitukus' flying machine was designed for speeds much below Mach 1 and had an open cockpit, so at transonic speeds the difference was relatively extreme. The titanium aircraft was designed for a cruising speed around Mach 4 or 5, designed explicitly for supersonic speed and designed with precision, so, it makes the transonic transition smoothly and gracefully.

Edit: It seems my feelings regarding Kazo have become dormant, but this doesn't change my decision. Perhaps they'll reemerge when I begin writing his story.

Edit II: Almost forgot to mention, the reason Blitukus tends not to compare his own works with similar things in the past or future is because the nature of these items are so different. What a computer does today looks nothing like what it did 60 years ago, except at the very heart of the concept, a heart which is hidden under all the other stuff a lot of the time.

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« Reply #516 on: December 21, 2007, 09:11:00 pm »

quote:
Originally posted by AlanL:
<STRONG>I find certain music helps to improve the results of letting my mind wander, and it's this improved mind-wandering where I get my inspiration from. So, it's indirect.</STRONG>

Oh, that explains it, I can't concentrate on anything whit annoying music around either. (I know thats not what you meant (probobly), I just being silly)

quote:
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<STRONG>And about the sonic boom, you actually don't hear the actual sonic boom from inside the aircraft since you're traveling with the shockwave. The only reason you would notice it would be the sudden shift in flight dynamics. Blitukus' flying machine was designed for speeds much below Mach 1 and had an open cockpit, so at transonic speeds the difference was relatively extreme. The titanium aircraft was designed for a cruising speed around Mach 4 or 5, designed explicitly for supersonic speed and designed with precision, so, it makes the transonic transition smoothly and gracefully.</STRONG>

*feels stupid*

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<STRONG>Edit: It seems my feelings regarding Kazo have become dormant, but this doesn't change my decision. Perhaps they'll reemerge when I begin writing his story.</STRONG>

Most likely it will, these thing don't die.
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<STRONG>Edit II: Almost forgot to mention, the reason Blitukus tends not to compare his own works with similar things in the past or future is because the nature of these items are so different. What a computer does today looks nothing like what it did 60 years ago, except at the very heart of the concept, a heart which is hidden under all the other stuff a lot of the time.</STRONG>

That is true whit anyone except Blitukus, he looks directly into the core of everything and should really be able to see this, he even predicted most of it while building the cruder versions, he already looked into the casino cardmixer. This it at least how I interpreted it, maybe in overestimating him... (that last few words was just an unfair teasing thing to make you angry)
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« Reply #517 on: December 22, 2007, 12:07:00 am »

Basically what I mean about differences at heart is that a machine with an interactive display on it doesn't exactly indicate it's a calculating machine, no visible math is being performed. Blitukus might be able to mess with these things but he doesn't automatically know how a modern PC would work. Of course, once introduced to the concept it wouldn't take him long at all to figure it out. If he saw a computer visibly doing math I'm sure he'd make the connection in a heartbeat. In fact, I think I'll make the point clear in the story.

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Blitukus looked out the window, his breath fogging the window slightly as he exhaled. He watched the wisps of air zip by, the deserts and terrain of his homeland slowly rolling over the horizon behind, new lands he had never ventured to before appearing in front. The human sitting by him spoke, "You know... you look like... say, do you have any lineage in common with the old Siegedrivens?" Blitukus snickered, "I can confidently say I do." She replied, "That's... surprisingly uncommon. You know, you look just like that portrait of Blitukus in my old history book, and seeing you reminds me of the day I took my first stand in life... your ancestors inspired a lot of people, you know." Blitukus smiled, honored by these events, "What has their memory done for you?" She sighed, then replied, "It's a bit of a story but we've got a lot of time. I grew up as an orphan... my parents left to work at the factory one day when I was 9... and they didn't come home. I learned a few days after that they were killed when a broken machine started up for no apparent reason while they were working on it. They found out afterwards that it was caused by a switch that had its contacts fused, so it acted as if it were on even though it said it was off. It was a pure accident, and they learned from it. Now they use failsafe switches for power links. I lived on, and eventually got on with life... but those things leave a scar that doesn't go away you know..." Blitukus nodded empathetically. She continued, "When I read about Blitukus, how he faced his parents death and made a legend out of himself despite that... I decided, I couldn't go on as just some forgotten kid from the orphanage. I paid attention at school, and even though I couldn't get a good job afterwards, I saved up money whenever I could... It'll be my 25th birthday soon... and now I'm headed to the most advanced city in the world, to earn a degree from the most advanced university in the world. I'll make something out of myself yet." She smiled, "I traced my lineage back and it looks like I'm related to some of the military from the old northeast. Historical records show it's very likely my ancestors knew the Siegedrivens personally." Blitukus smiled, "I had a feeling that was the case. What of the legacy of Fale Siegedriven?" She replied, "Fales story and her leadership have been an honored piece of history and culture, a traditional story in the southeast. Her role as an adventurer has inspired several others to take the path of the freelance, some with a lot of success. Her role as world leader has led to the creation of some of the most widely respected books on leadership, and really, her legacy probably saved the world once or twice." Blitukus asked, "Saved the world? I am curious as to what... I still have much to learn about more recent history, as I haven't been around to see more than a small part of it." She replied, "I can only think of 2 instances... the era of the steam loop literally just died back in 1840, and tensions rose as civilization expanded westward and downward, seeking new energy. War broke out, and the most advanced nations struggled to keep it from turning into another world war. This is actually how Metropolis was founded... it started out as just a bunch of kobolds who wanted to establish themselves in the west continents in 1850. Virtually nobody was out there at the time, so the government just gave land away to anyone who asked. This settlement started as just a little mining camp, but grew into a boomtown that eventually became a small city. The leader, well, kind of looked like a demon in a way, and she acted like one to people she didn't like. But, even though she expected a lot out of her people, she gave them the fruits of their own labor. She often assigned her people to carry out massive projects. She had them build an enormous hydroelectric dam out there, it's still around and it's still putting power on the grid. She practically gave away energy, which promptly crashed numerous businesses into the ground, but in return got people to stop fighting for a while. She used some of Fales old negotiating tricks to get nearby nations together on an enormous project. They wanted to launch a rocket into space, an entirely insane idea at the time, but her brother had already started the project, and when people actually saw rockets flying, they were convinced... of course, when they were all on board and they started building bigger and bigger rockets, they hit a million problems. Among these was a war breaking out between a mostly kobold faction and a human faction... apparantly the leader of the human faction was racist. They continued anyway, and blew up their launch pad a few times before they managed to get something to really, truly fly up there, and now they are known as the birthplace of spaceflight, having launched the first manned flight above the atmosphere. It's just amazing how they pulled it off with their relatively crude technology too, but as their leader said regarding it, 'It's amazing what you can do with a few dozen tons of explosives and a can strapped to the top.' Seeing that speck of light moving overhead was reason for celebration all around the world as at the end nearly all nearby nations were invested in spaceflight. They saw what true collective effort could do, so peace treaties slowly got signed all throughout the middle and west continents. This achievement was what made Metropolis, Metropolis, and it was renamed to reflect that in 1903. If it wasn't for Fales legacy, their leader might not've been able to convince the other nations to join in on the space program. There would've been no launch, no Metropolis, and no peace at the end."

Blitukus smiled, "You are very knowledgeable." She laughed, "Yeah, well as I said I paid attention in school. Plus, I couldn't help but read all about these people. The second case of Fales legacy likely saving the world I remember reading about was the quasi-war of 1963. A group of scientifically inclined kobolds established themselves on an island volcano. They wanted to escape the regulations of the government on their projects. They got into some outright freakish stuff, there were rumors of mutants from those who passed nearby. Not much is known about them, since their establishment was destroyed when the volcano erupted right under them, but what they did left a lasting impact. They developed weapons the world had never seen before, and went on a crazed power trip, demanding ransoms of billions of moneys with these doomsday weapons pointed at national capitals. They played nations off against eachother, creating small conflicts around the world while creating enormous political tension between the superpowers of the time. The plans of these specific kobolds went up in flames when the volcano erupted. Their leader escaped in a fighter aircraft, an aircraft never seen before rumored to have been able to take a missile directly and still keep flying as well as fire a ray of energy capable of slicing right through titanium. Two freelance pilots from two opposing superpowers put their differences and political disagreements aside and after a heroic battle in the skies, sent the escaped leader down to the bottom of the ocean, never to be seen again. They got married shortly after, and their nations reached a peace agreement. If it weren't for Fales legacy, these nations might've never put their differences aside and one of the deadliest wars in world history might've ensued." Blitukus sighed, "That group of kobolds that did that... they were a disgrace to their species... in fact, their story reminds me of a particular group of dwarves I had once met..." She replied, "Dwarves have been kind of neutral ever since the goblin wars, they haven't been causing trouble in the world at all, but they are renowned for their disregard of environmental regulations and personal rights. They enact these things when they know it would be stupid not to do so... except for Endlesslabors. That place, is bad for your health..." Blitukus nodded, "I will keep it in mind."

A few moments passed. Blitukus kept looking out the window, allowing his mind to wander and ponder what he had seen and heard so far. The human next to him took out a small handheld device with a large, color screen, and began to do various tasks with it. Blitukus looked out, watching the terrain change as the aircraft soared over various biomes, eventually passing over a large ocean, the suns rays scattering off of the surface. He looked up, and saw the sun, and also saw why the windows were black from the outside. They seemed quite transparent from within the cabin, but were only transparent in a certain range. The more harmful rays of the sun were blocked by the window, and all rays of the sun were dimmed considerably by the window, meaning it was only merely slightly annoying to have it directly in ones field of view. Quite a bit of time passed. Eventually, Blitukus turned, and asked, "Did you say those were meant to be put away?" She replied, "Yeah, well, the reason they want you to put electronics away is because some electronics screw with the avionics up front, but I know enough to know this handheld uses the wrong frequency to mess with anything. I just make sure the attendants don't see it because it would be hard to convince them of that." Blitukus asked, "What exactly does that, erm, specific model, do?" She replied, "Oh it's just a generic brand handheld, got a processor that runs 500 million calculations per second, nothing special, although you can do a lot with it if you know your stuff." 500 million calculations per second? Blitukus had previously nothing other than a slight suspicion that these devices were calculating machines, but now there was real evidence for it. His idea for an electronic calculating machine was made a reality, and the results were beyond what he had imagined. 500 million calculations per second... and it was regarded as nothing special. Blitukus smiled, and continued to let his mind wander on the subject... if that was nothing special, then what would Metropolis hold? Blitukus looked out far toward the horizon... small islands could be seen to the north, ocean below. He then silently observed what the human was up to. Various applications were used... it seemed even this remarkably small handheld device could do just about any task that involved information. He watched for quite a while, taking note of these applications, and thinking of the implications such technologies would have on society... already, at least two hours had passed. He looked out the window, and kept watching the world roll by. Eventually, the human sitting next to him spoke, "Hey, if you want, I got an uplink for the millennium festival on the eastern borderlands." Blitukus turned, and looked. Her handheld displayed an image of a crowd near a fireworks display, arranged in a pattern to form the characters "2000". This was a major event... as midnight rolled across the planet, nations would celebrate their advance into the next millennium. The Age of Steam was coming to a close then... but what would be the age after? The sound of a crowd chattering could be heard through the device, a sound that was dull and faint, but was likely much louder where it was actually taking place. They both watched for several minutes. Several people appeared near the fireworks, and the crowd cheered. The crowd then proceeded to shout in unison, "5! 4! 3! 2! 1!" A loud cheering was heard as the fireworks were sent up into the sky, painting out the characters "2000" in brilliant and enormous text, burning in the sky. A few moments later, the sound of surprise and startle was heard among the crowd as the city seemed to be shaken by an earthquake. No damage was caused, but the shake was quite visible. People in the crowd looked around unsure of what had just happened. The human sitting next to Blitukus commented, "I don't think that was planned... what a coincidence it happens right in the middle of the new millenniums celebration." Blitukus nodded, and watched closely. Something felt wrong about this... then again, nothing really seemed actually wrong. The earthquake did nothing more than disrupt the festivities slightly. Everything seemed to be OK. Besides, every second Blitukus drew nearer to Metropolis, and nearer to his goal. He still had a quest to achieve, no matter what events transfired.

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« Reply #518 on: December 22, 2007, 02:50:00 am »

FIRST POST!
This story is so awesome that we would go so far as to say that it is BEYOND beyond quality.
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Armok, you should try some music that has a POINT. Social commentary, that sort of thing. I personally reccomend Micheal Franti and Spearhead to anyone in the US, but I guess a lot of it would still have the same point in other countries too.

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« Reply #519 on: December 22, 2007, 11:58:00 am »

Thanks  :p

I tend to listen to things that are sort of ambient without any singing. Some time I rip music from games etc. and listen to that since those songs often time are designed to fit a certain theme, and plus, some game soundtracks I just find good to listen to. I tend not to find conventional music with singing very useful most of the time. There are some exceptions though.

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« Reply #520 on: December 22, 2007, 02:40:00 pm »

I like social commentaries in all their forms...
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« Reply #521 on: December 22, 2007, 02:53:00 pm »

It must be enough for a book now!
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« Reply #522 on: December 22, 2007, 07:28:00 pm »

Beyond Quality!

Ok, I just finished chatting whit AlanL for 6 hours straight, this means two things;
1) I have said most of the tings to AlanL that I need to and use to do in this post.
2) I have even less time than usual

I have one (semi) important announcement, my mom is going to kidnap me and drag me away to some strange thing she calls "Christmas", there will most likely be no Internet there, so I might not be able to post for up up 3 days, and I wont be able to read this wonderful story, its all quite horrible.   :(
Just so that you don't think no posts mean that I have forgotten about this masterpiece when I don't post as usual.

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This story is so awesome that we would go so far as to say that it is BEYOND beyond quality.

Why didn't I think of saying that first!  :mad:

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Armok, you should try some music that has a POINT. Social commentary, that sort of thing. I personally reccomend Micheal Franti and Spearhead to anyone in the US, but I guess a lot of it would still have the same point in other countries too.

Thats the worst kind, some political propaganda whit someone screaming and smashing barrels around in the background. That is what I meant whit "more like random torture to the ears than music."

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I tend to listen to things that are sort of ambient without any singing. Some time I rip music from games etc. and listen to that since those songs often time are designed to fit a certain theme, and plus, some game soundtracks I just find good to listen to. I tend not to find conventional music with singing very useful most of the time. There are some exceptions though.

Thats more like it!
This reminds me of...
look what computers can do!

Really I mostly (only?) listen to classical music; Carmina Burana (can't spell), Vivaldi, Mozart rarely, various other things...
Also sometimes some music in some games, sometimes.

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"social commentaries" are another wording for "political propaganda".

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Yes this should really be made a book; it would be the best book ever!
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« Reply #523 on: December 22, 2007, 11:02:00 pm »

That's not true. It's not always POLITICAL propoganda. And it's actually got all sorts of different types of music that fit it. Well, actually, I just prefer any music that can't be summarized by "I wish you were my girl/boyfriend," "I have an awesome girl/boyfriend," or "they used to be my girl/boyfriend." It's pretty limited.
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« Reply #524 on: December 23, 2007, 12:11:00 am »

Thank you  :)

Long enough for a book? All together... I don't know, perhaps. Hmm... to be honest, maybe it is literally as big as a book, a small book, but enough anyways.
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The human next to Blitukus spoke, "So I guess in a few hours the Age of Steam will be nothing more than a memory. I wonder what they'll call the new age... I have a feeling a lot will happen between now and 2499, so I hope they pick something to reflect that." Blitukus nodded, then asked, "May I use that device to access the database from here?" She responded, handing it over, "Sure, I figured out how to patch into the satellites from the phone jack a while ago... I guess they just never notice." Blitukus smiled. Satellites... it was how some referred to the moon, but these must be man made platforms in the heavens... technological equivalents to the platforms of the ancients. Blitukus noticed several buttons to be selected, but nothing to select them with. He looked all over the device for some kind of pointer, all to no avail... She spoke, "It's touchscreen. Don't use the tip of your claws either, I notice kobolds like to do that and it messes the screen up." Blitukus nodded slightly, then pressed the text "Index" on the screen. It was selected, the video stream stopped, and the page displayed refreshed, showing a slot and a button. Recognizing this as access to the database, Blitukus selected the slot, and rested his fingers on the small buttons under the screen. Blitukus recognized the texture of the material... it was the same kind of stuff the cover to that book was made of, only harder. Blitukus spoke, "Interesting material... what is it?" She laughed, "You haven't seen plastic before?" Blitukus responded, "I, erm, wanted to know what type of plastic it was." She replied, "Only the manufacturer knows that. Maybe you can dig up the design somewhere but I doubt it, this thing is fairly recent." Blitukus searched the database for "Arkus", and relatively few results came up. Arkus was listed as a historical person, nearly every detail unknown, other than "Unknown being of likely some historical significance. Archaeologists found the name engraved on ancient artifacts and buildings, apparantly the subject of respect among some, fear among others. The name is often seen in reference to a tower. Several triangulations mark his/her tower somewhere in the northern end of the central continents, but these results deviate from one another and several sources could not be verified. Currently, the location of his/her tower has been narrowed down to a circle 60 miles in radius, but recent archaeological excavations have turned up nothing." Below was a map of the central continents, a small red circle painted near the top, various yellow lines marking political boundaries. Below that were several pictures of eroded and degraded buildings and artifacts with ancient texts, focusing on the word "Arkus". Much of the texts were too degraded to read, but some included writings vaguely hinting at a position. Blitukus sighed. Arkus had achieved much, and would have been a legend... but when magic disappeared, so did his legacy. Next, Blitukus searched the database for "Kazo". Only one result was turned up. It was a single image, showing a heavily degraded and scorched tablet, the only word, readable, and barely readable at that, was "Kazo", visible next to a worn image of a small, reptilian figure. Arkus was dead... if he was still around, it would be known. Kazo... all evidence said he was dead... but none of this evidence was truly conclusive. He could be anywhere, he could be nowhere... the truth lay deeper in the future, perhaps, when more was discovered regarding this. Blitukus returned the device to its front page, and handed it back, "Thank you." She replied, "Don't mention it." Blitukus watched as she shut down that application, and started a new one. This new application presented a menu over a black screen. She navigated the menus, and eventually proceeded to begin playing a game on her handheld. Blitukus noticed that it seemed to be a rather detailed simulation of a dwarven establishment, the entire graphics system rendered in text characters. Blitukus watched this for a few minutes, "Interesting... I see there is not much of a focus on realistic visualizations." She replied, "Yeah, in my opinion, it's better that way. It's been kind of a trend in video games, after all, computer development was controlled by scientists for the longest time. They wanted more power and couldn't care about pretty graphics, so they always invested into developing the CPU. Videogames picked up on this trend, and we have a lot of calculation-heavy but graphics-free games because of it. This one runs slow as hell on my handheld, but some computers, especially the new optical ones in Metropolis, can run this at flat 200 all the time with all the features on." Blitukus smiled. Optical? Something even better than electrical? He spoke, "It looks fun!" She replied, "It is, and it's free too, it's an independent project... what's especially fun is digging out everything except one tile under a human town, then sending one person to dig out the last tile. Splat!" Blitukus snickered, "That is rather malicious." She smiled, "That's the point." Blitukus watched for a few minutes, then asked, "If you had to struggle to get here, why did you keep this device?" She replied, "It was a gift. I'm not going to just sell it off right after someone gave it to me, that would be rude." Blitukus replied, "I understand." Blitukus kept watching her play, taking note of the various details of the program. It sort of reminded him of his own experience, digging out his home and building his machines.

Eventually, the engines of the aircraft cut off, and the aircraft began a slow descent. As it began to descend, the blue lights of another such aircraft could be seen flying across the skies. Suddenly, radio chatter could be heard again,

"Hey *static* the *static* do today?"
"Not much, any news from your route?"
"Ah well *static* damn ATC guy *static* damn f*** idiot I swear, *static* and the *static* damn *static* close to crashing right into me!"
"I'll take note not to fly that route then."
"I filed a complaint and *static* and *static* STILL didn't fire the f*cker!"

Blitukus snickered. The human next to him commented, "Looks like I forgot to turn that off. I guess I'll leave it on." The air slowed the aircraft as it descended. Eventually, Blitukus looked down and saw the aircraft was approaching a brilliant, shining, truly enormous city, miles on each side. The pilot yawned, audible on the receiver, "I'm f*cking bored!" A traffic controller from the city responded, "Identify yourself!" The pilot replied, "I said I'm f*cking bored, not f*cking stupid!" Blitukus laughed. The human next to him commented, "Looks like the pilot's a kobold. You can always tell kobold pilots from human pilots because of the kobolds mischief and general antics. If you ever see a military aircraft play dead on a training run, it's being piloted by a kobold." A few minutes passed. The aircraft circled the city, approaching and descending as it did, close and closer to the clouds below. The engines capped their inlets, the turbine engines uncapping themselves and starting up once more. The shockwave in front of the aircraft vanished as the aircraft slowed. The aircraft descended below the clouds, Eventually, it started lining up towards a runway of a facility, covered with shining metal and windows of clear glass, nearby what appeared to be a large paved pad with a crane of some kind, a railway connecting it to the main city. The pilot spoke over radio, "This is flight 4314 inbound, requesting landing clearance on runway 2 east." The tower replied, "Flight 4314... say, you sound kind of like... never mind. The runway is not clear, wait for clearance." A dull, muffled snicker could be heard, then the pilot responded, "Acknowledged." The aircrafts engines sped up, the aircraft nosing up as it dropped to slow speeds once again. It flew over the airport, turned, then looped around. The tower spoke over radio, "Flight 4314, you are clear to land on runway 2." The aircraft descended, its feathers bending downward as it slowed. It nosed downward slightly, then as it approached the strip, nosed back up again. There was a bump and a dull rumble as the rear tires touched down. The aircraft then nosed down, until its front tire touched down. There was a dull roar as the turbine engines reversed their thrust, slowing the aircraft further. This roar died down, and the engines came to near idle as the aircraft turned and taxied off of the runway. The aircraft taxied up to a terminal, and came to a stop. The corridor extended, connecting with the aircraft. The engines shut down, and the door opened. People unseated themselves, retrieved their belongings, and began to leave the aircraft. The human sitting next to Blitukus shut off her handheld and put it away, stood, retrieved her belongings, then joined the back of the line. Blitukus stood and followed her. Eventually, they made it to the exit and traversed the corridor into the airport. Blitukus looked back, and smiled upon seeing the kobold pilot exit the cockpit. Blitukus followed the human, who walked towards the left side of the facility to retrieve a backpack full of belongings from a rotating platform. They waited for a while for it to appear as the aircraft was unloaded, but eventually it did. She retrieved it, wore it, and carried her other belongings with as she moved towards the exit. Blitukus looked around... the airport building he was in was 2 story, containing shops and facilities tucked to the side, potted plants along the middle. Many of the shops he had seen in the airport he had left from had standard signs that were lit by electric lights. The shops he saw now had signs that consisted of electric lights, the images they consisted of moving on a display. The building was merely warm within, despite the view outside indicating a desert, the sun high in the sky. They made their way to the exit, exiting into the scorching desert. It reminded Blitukus of home... yet the towering cacti in the distance were something he wasn't familiar with. The building seemed U-shaped from this perspective, near the middle, by the exit, a display under a roof, supported at the corners. In front of the sign, titanium characters formed the words "Welcome to Metropolis Air and Space port". The display behind this sign seemed to project a glowing image into the air above it. Blitukus walked up to it, and looked at it. It reminded him of the display on the fully functional Sphere of Direction, and he found it was also non-solid as well. The image, consisting of nothing but light it seemed, displayed the world and its moon, a red spot marking Metropolis placed on the world, and a blue spot marking a colony placed on its moon. Two small specks were en route between the red and blue spots. One of these specks, a small arrow pointing in the general direction of the displayed moon, had displayed a cargo manifest of "9 T Foodstuff, 3 T L.Ox, 3 T Water". The other, a small arrow pointing in the general direction of the displayed world, had a displayed cargo manifest of "12 T Titanium Ores, 2 T Radioactive Ores, 1 T He3 Ores". Blitukus looked at this... a lunar mining operation? He noticed his human copassenger was walking towards the rail station. Blitukus rushed to meet back up with her. He noticed, behind the station lay the spaceport... the paved pad there was empty, a framework tower nearby holding nothing. A building off to the side seemed to have a hollow interior. A long, finned cylindrical vehicle was being assembled there, a steel crane nearby holding up a titanium panel. A sudden blue glow shone at this construction site, then stopped, sparks raining down from where a worker was working.  Behind the pad was a single runway, designed specially for high speed landing. It seemed that although the spaceport and airport sections were rather close, they were arranged carefully to keep their lines of traffic from interfering. It was likely the airport ceased operations for a few minutes during a spacecraft landing anyhow, flights being scheduled around that time, rather than during it. On the pad tower, a flag carrying a white background, a blue full circle in the middle laying within an empty circle, a blue + marking the flag from bottom to top, left to right. Blitukus followed the human, ascending metal steps onto a platform near the railway, a sleek, metallic train approaching silently from a vast city in the distance, glistening with an array of light as the suns rays scattered among its shining buildings. Blitukus gazed into this, and laughed in appreciation of its beauty. It seemed the technological civilizations of this era were well on their way to becoming equals with what the magical civilizations of the ancients once were. They nearly were equal... it likely would be only a matter of a decade or two further into the future. Still... something still didn't feel right about that earthquake. His soul still took note of it for some reason. He pushed the feeling aside. It was only a small tremor, nothing more, nothing less, at least, he hoped. He had entered this realm at the time of 3:44 PM, and it was now near to being 10:00 PM, so a little less than 18 hours remained. Only 12 of those were available, since another 4 to 6 might be needed to get back. 12 hours, he expected, would be more than enough time.

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