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Endiqua

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #45 on: October 21, 2007, 04:45:00 pm »

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<STRONG>Once epic,twice epic,thrice epic [Yes i know thrice is not a word.]
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Yes it is.    :)   Lionel Ritchie just couldn't figure out how to make it scan or else it would have been "You're once, twice, thrrrrrice a lady"

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #46 on: October 21, 2007, 04:52:00 pm »

*cough* *A rabid Badger falls on Endiqua*
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Moveing on.
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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #47 on: October 21, 2007, 11:54:00 pm »

Thanks  :)

I feel this story might push the envelope on some fronts eventually, but I hope it'll turn out to be a new frontier rather than too far  :p
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Blitukus thought about what he might be up to face, but reminded himself... it's just errant critters from a chasm full of bats. Nothing to be concerned of. The sasquatch will likely just stay outside, and if it comes inside, it will be at a disadvantage... it would literally have to stoop down to Blitukus' height, making its head vulnerable to the point of his pick axe. For now, he had the blocks ready, but his design called for more than just blocks. He would need 2 floodgates, a lever, and the mechanisms to link them all. And that was only for the magma. He would need all that all over again for the water. He decided to make the floodgates first, since they would be placed first. His experience with setting up the farm was still fresh in his mind when he was chiseling out the device, and he used this experience when making the new floodgates. These would be more efficient, and take less effort to open wider. As he left to get stones from the top of the tunnel, he felt nervous whenever he crossed the damp bridge. The river was calm again, and eventually the feeling passed. The workshop now had several floodgates laying about and was littered with blocks. Not a very efficient work environment. Good thing he had finished. Now, he needed to make the mechanisms. 2 levers would be needed to operate the machine, and each would go to 2 floodgates. A total of 10 mechanical set ups would be required, 2 of which would simply be the levers. A slight problem was beginning to present itself... a problem which Blitukus had never expected to encounter. Regular, run of the mill grey stone boulders were starting to become of short supply. It was of little importance since much more would be produced while tunneling. Blitukus was still very skilled with mechanisms, and produced high quality mechanisms rapidly. These were simple levers and pulleys, after all. What they would go into, on the other hand, was much more complex. He found actually most of his time was spent hauling stone in order to make the mechanisms with.

He took a break and got another drink. It was hardly becoming necessary to drink alcohol now that he had put his fears aside, and he felt that he was doing his mother a disservice by keeping his mind off of the subject. Then again, it may just be efficient. She was gone, and most would say there was nothing he could do about it. He thought otherwise. Despite being stone, many of the mechanisms produced were superior, one being truly exceptional. These pulleys would allow the heavy stone floodgates resting among the magma to be lifted easily from safety. If it all went right. The mechanisms, floodgates, and blocks were complete. Now he needed to dig the tunnel. He walked down the tunnel back to the magma, and dug a small section near the walkway. This would be the bottom of the tunnel, and the magma would, through its thermal pressure, push itself up to Blitukus' home where it could be safely converted to steam... again, if it all went right. Across from the segment he had made, he dug a small alcove to put the lever. Now he needed to place the infrastructure that would siphon the magma up into the system. He was not an exceptional mason, but his floodgates had been decently crafted, and he walked back, choosing the best of them to use to interface with the magma river. The floodgate was made of heavy stone, suitable for handling the heat and pressure of the magma, but quickly became heavy to Blitukus, slowing him as he hauled it. He brought it to the very edge of the magma river, and dug a spot for it actually slightly in the magma. He found himself amused at the sight of his pick axe glowing red at the tip when he finished. Then again, he was lucky the magma hadn't decided to spatter onto his face. He dug the rest of the grooves and placed the floodgate. Then, he etched a trench into the floor, bringing the path across the walkway into the coal mining area. This channel would have to be bridged, or emptied before coal mining. He then chose his second best floodgate to put at the end of the channel to allow it to spill into the magma tunnel. This floodgate wasn't as critical. If it failed, then magma would cease flowing, but if the one directly interfacing the river failed, he would be fried. If his floodgates hadn't been prepared properly, he would be fried. If the lip wasn't raised to the perfect height, he'd be fried. If the mechanisms weren't perfectly reliable, he'd be fried. He payed careful attention to building the floodgates and choosing them and the proper mechanisms. He checked and double checked as he moved mechanisms and installed the lever. Nature was proving to be a tough motivator: do it right or be fried. As Blitukus hauled the various mechanisms to assemble them at the site, he snickered at the thought and took a drink out of his flask. He began whistling an old tune, and he sang, "... drinking dwarf rum all day long, keeps you happy makes you strong..." laughing at the end.

He wasn't motivated just by the fear of death, he was motivated by the desire to reach his mother primarily. Death was only a dishonorable shortcut to reach that goal. He allowed his negative emotions to be drowned in alcohol. Carelessness and shakiness due to bad feelings would have a worse impact on work quality than a slight drunken sluggishness. So, he pounded the pulleys into the wall, and made double sure they turned perfectly, and the wires fit in the groove perfectly, that the hooks worked perfectly, and that it all meshed together just right. Finally, the bottom of the system had been completed.

His stomach growled at him. He jokingly growled back at it, and walked back up the tunnel. He retrieved one of his home-grown purple mushrooms from a barrel, and took it to his room to eat it. Despite being mostly a carnivore, he found it was actually rather tasty. He deposited the leftover seed in the seed bag, followed up with another drink, and then continued work. He had a lot of tunneling to do. He dug space out for the bottom of the aqueduct and then began to dig the tunnel on the chasm side toward the magma. He began to think about what this project was doing for him. No longer was he merely an inventor and a mechanic, he was becoming a true gadgeteer, a rarity after the fall of the gnomes, and on top of it, he was everything he needed for his little town, population 1, to survive. He found he was exploiting the imperfections in the stone with greater precision, and was able to tunnel faster and faster. If he managed to produce great machines here, then some day, if someone happens upon the site, he would have a name for himself on top of being able to meet his mother again. He chipped the limestone away and was stopped by his own floodgate. This major segment of the tunnel had been completed.

He walked back up the empty magma tunnel, and proceeded across the chasm bridge to clear room for the aqueduct on the other side. Much of the stone was knocked away, falling off of the ledge. Several more angry screeches could be heard from below. He picked where in the space he wanted to place the aqueduct, and began the long repetitive task of hauling the blocks to it. 6 loads worth were needed, and he brought 6 loads worth. Unlike the bridge, he had drawn out a trussed design for the aqueduct, eliminating the need for guy wires. This was preferable since liquids tended not to travel well over arches. He had to build a level deck. After 6 trips, he began to build it. He cleared the obstructing debris, but realized how tired he was and how long this massive construction would take to build. He walked away leaving the blocks stacked, and went to his bed to sleep. He looked at what he had brought from home; his mothers backpack, carrying the world map, and also some old items that reminded him of her. Back in the glory days of her adventuring, the 1050s, when she fought against those who killed her family, when the revolution happened, when she pioneered freedom and justice for all... but now it was the 7th of timber, 1080. The glory days of the past were over. He sighed, missing his mother, and without reading anything, went to sleep. He felt as if he had no dream that day. When he awoke, he felt saddened. He took his pulse. His heart was still beating, yet it was missing a part. He got up, and sighed again out of his nose, a tear running down his cheek. As it fell to the floor, he felt the sadness in his heart pool up like water. But, something else was rising. He looked up, and felt the drive of his cause, and his heart and his eyes lit again like a furnace, the sadness becoming the steam that would drive him to his goals. He had a project to finish, and a goal to reach.

He walked back to the construction site for the aqueduct, and continued what he had started. He began building the truss, stopped for a drink, then continued extending the truss. The drinks were nearly all gone, and he was glad. What was a pain killer could become a burden. He finished the truss, spanning from one end of the chasm to the other, and began laying the blocks on top of it to form the deck. It was slow, but he did it enthusiastically. A lot of surface had to be covered, and eventually, he did it. He dug the trench to siphon magma into the inlet of the aqueduct, and continued the tunnel. Every block had been put to good use, and the aqueduct was sturdy, sound enough to hold the weight of the magma and then some.

He looked back. His new achievement dwarfed his old. He found it in him to smile, even grin a bit. Today may be a day in Timber of 1080, the glory days may be over, but today is beyond yesterday. Today is the first day of the future. Ahead of him lay solid rock. He proceeded through solid rock, leaving a tunnel behind him. He happened upon some gems, red spinels. He smiled as he dug through the cluster... but found he had broken all of the gems into shards accidentally when he reached the end. It wasn't his goal to do so, but it wasn't part of his true goal to mine gems anyway. He found opals, this time leaving a sizable chunk on the floor. Maybe some day when he was more settled in, the lava machine off, he would recover these gems and cut them, but until then, he had more to focus on. The tunnel was dug as far as needed for the magma to go, and he then dug the channel that would hold the magma for the boiler. He then dug space out of the wall where he would put the boiler. There was still a flaw. He had only seen one flaw in the entire construction of the magma machine. It was a flaw that would kill him had it gone unnoticed. There was a leak in the tunnel as it merged to the aqueduct, and had he activated the machine without noticing it, the magma would overflow throughout the tunnel and his home would be turned into a volcano, a remarkably similar fate to that of the fortress that his mother had adventured through.

Suddenly, a thought entered his mind, a thought detailing something more elaborate than a simple lipped channel to guide the magma. A statue that would have features driven by the magma itself. He pondered it for a while, then decided to do it. He hauled a stone back to the masons workshop and chipped at it, assembling several stone parts together to make a statue that remarkably resembled him in shape. He had created ducts within the statue, where the magma would thermally rise and spill into the features of the statue. He smiled at his stone self, and hauled the statue down to the leak. He then dug an inlet for the statues ductwork, and plugged the leak with the statue. He finished, and stood, observing his stone self. His stone self observed him with a similar expression. He had carved the eyes in a special manner to create an optical illusion that the statues eyes always followed you. He had, through a little cleverness and ingenuity, turned a flaw into a feature.

His work was nearing completion. He still needed to dig the water tunnel. He proceeded back to the end of the tunnel, and dug a branch off to the side. He had designed the water tunnel to leave room for expansion for his work room. He dug the tunnel. It was short compared to the magma tunnel. Now he needed to place the proper infrastructure to siphon the water into the tunnel. This could be done a lot easier than the magma, since less was in the way and less was at stake. Simply 2 adjacent floodgates, much like the farm. He placed the first floodgate at the end of the tunnel, in an alcove allowing him to take advantage of the rivers current to drive the water in. Then, near the boilers space, he dug an alcove for the water lever, and began the process of linking it to the floodgate. He had to carve loops into the ceiling and string a cable all the way down the tunnel in order to reach the floodgate from the lever, but, using a wheel at the corner, and properly aligning the cable within the loops, he managed to get this done efficiently. Then he placed the second floodgate, an outlet for the first. He linked it to the same lever looping a second cable through the same loops down the tunnel. He smiled, and his smile had become a grin as he hooked the cable to the lever. By hooking that in, he had officially completed his magma machine and his water machine, together they were nearly his steam source. He pulled the water lever, and water rushed through the tunnel, stopping at the lip near the designated area for the boiler, just as Blitukus had planned.

He then proceeded to walk down the walking path, down to the magma to pull the feed switch for the fiery fuel. He reached the lever. Now was the moment of truth. Either his magma machine would work, and he would have steam, or it would fail, and he would die a fiery death. He pulled the lever, and the floodgates opened. The magma crossed the floodgate, siphoned into the channel, and spilled into the magma tunnel through the other floodgate. The magma was contained perfectly, and flowed as expected.

Blitukus walked up the tunnel to the statue and waited eagerly for the magma to pass his stone self. It sizzled through the tunnel, passing into the inlet of the aqueduct, and passed through, some of it thermally pumped into the statue. He watched his stone self, his earthen counterparts eyes glowing red with magma, the statues grinning mouth glowing red and its cupped hands filling with molten rock. It very much appeared that Blitukus' earthen counterpart was offering him a drink of piping hot magma, with an expression of demonic humor on its face.

I think I'll drink from the river! Thanks for the offer though.

Blitukus smiled. He felt like a just person, yet all of history and the world itself seemed completely random for a moment. He felt chaotic, staring at the randomly formulated statue. A sound cought his ears. A hissing, a pneumatic sighing, a sizzling familiar to his ears.

He had succeeded where the dwarves failed. It worked. Finally, he had a power source! Now that the test was a success, he could shut down the machine and build the boiler, after all, the steam was nothing more than pretty vapor without a proper boiler to harness it. He would have to expand his plans though, for he originally expected a fair bit of steam from his magma machine but it was outputting steam at a high enough rate to flood the halls with the stuff.

I still need a boiler... too bad I haven't a clue how to fish for lobsters, or I'd have a new food source too!

He licked his lips at the thought, and grinned. That was a lot of steam. Maybe even enough to drive him all the way to heaven, and then provide a transit back.

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #48 on: October 22, 2007, 05:52:00 am »

Beyond Quality!
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« Reply #49 on: October 22, 2007, 09:39:00 am »

The story can't be beyond quality. It is quality.
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Endiqua

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« Reply #50 on: October 22, 2007, 10:14:00 am »

I love the statue!!!!  That is SOOO cool!
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« Reply #51 on: October 22, 2007, 10:32:00 am »

Excellent story!  I'm sorry that the first Kobold's Quest was over by the time I started visiting the forums, but I'm glad that I'll get to follow this one.
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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #52 on: October 22, 2007, 11:57:00 am »

Once again,Masterwork.
Please bring about this much awsomeness this often,Armok knows no one else has more then you...But dont nuke the fortress!.

[ October 22, 2007: Message edited by: Bringer of Ironic Deaths ]

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« Reply #53 on: October 22, 2007, 03:06:00 pm »

quote:
Originally posted by Bringer of Ironic Deaths:
<STRONG>Once again,Masterwork.
Please bring about this much awsomeness this often,Armok knows no one else has more then you...But dont nuke the fortress!.

[ October 22, 2007: Message edited by: Bringer of Ironic Deaths ]</STRONG>


No one else has more then you... But don't nuke the fortress!   :D
AlanL you are the next most awesome creature in the universe! The most awesome being Toady.

And I misread your post Bringer of Ironic Deaths, the dental is god, not good, hopes the contract still holds?

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« Reply #54 on: October 22, 2007, 10:56:00 pm »

Thank you all for your comments  :D

I think that the feelings that drove me to write these two stories will fade after this one is finished (it has already mostly faded since the end of the first), but I feel I am capable of still writing good stories after. I already have the basic concept of one in mind.
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Blitukus walked back down the tunnel to cut the magma flow. On the way, he thought of how he would build his boiler. Originally he had envisioned a spherical design, but now such a boiler would be too small, constrained by the height of the ceiling. He pulled the lever and walked back up the tunnel. The magma now had no pressure backing it, so the steam ceased. Blitukus pulled the lever for the water as he passed the boiler space. Then, he pondered how he would harness such a large amount of steam. As a kobold, he could only reach so high with a pick axe, and more volume was needed. He decided on a cylindrical boiler, which wouldn't be able to handle as much pressure but had much more volume than the spherical design. He returned to his room, and sketched the design of the boiler itself. It would be little more than a bronze pressure chamber with a pressure gauge and a manifold attached. He included thick bands of bronze around the boiler to help reinforce the container. He spent nearly an hour drawing up the design, and decided to get materials together. The boiler would have 2 sections, and each would need 2 stacks of bronze bars to make the cylindrical casing, another stack of bars to make the side panels and piping. A single bar would suffice for making the pressure gauge, as when the steam compressed a pad down a small cylinder, the indicator would move straight along with the pad, showing, in an exponential scale, the pressure difference between outside air and the steam inside. After making sure a decent pressure could be achieved with such a set up, he decided to build his design. He had 2 stacks of bronze bars, and 4 more were needed. In order to make those bars, more coke was needed. Coke would be needed in many cases, so his first project, before building the boiler, would be to build a bridge over the magma channel.

Since the channel magma didn't spatter, he could use simple stone. He harvested a boulder out of the water tunnel, and brought it back to the masons workshop to chip it into blocks. But, another thought occurred to him as he chipped away. In order to be able to sink the stone into the lip of the channel, the channel needed to have been recently muddied. An inconvenience, but one that would make his machine more reliable and more flexible. He would have to alter his machine to allow water to flow back into the magma channel in order to muddy the channel at the end. All he had to do was install a floodgate, and a secondary set of mechanisms at the end to do so. He finished the blocks, and harvested another rock, hauling it back and chipping a floodgate out of it. He found that he had found new enthusiasm on the sight of steam. He quenched his thirst with the second to last full drink of the rum, and continued. He eventually finished the floodgate, but needed 6 mechanisms to complete the modification. He continued, using this as an opportunity to clear his new tunnels of rubble, and put said rubble to productive use. The floodgates would serve other functions rather than making the system work both ways. It would also be a safety in case the magma floodgates failed, releasing molten rock into the system when it was uncalled for. Of course, this is also expecting that the magma wouldn't just spill into every available tunnel in such a situation. Snow storms howled outside, and the water quickly evaporated from the farm. The glacier became covered with rising snow, and the suns path lowered.

Winter is upon you.

But, Blitukus had grown plenty of food for himself, and was ready to survive even the harsh glacial winter. He continued, turning unsightly boulders into beautiful mechanisms. Hauling the boulders and chipping away at them took time, but Blitukus worked with efficient speed. When he had finished the tip of the last lever, he walked back over to the masons workshop, and dragged the stone floodgate to where the magma feeds into the boiler. This floodgate would allow a reverse release from the channel, meaning water could flow beyond the boiler. He then went to dig an alcove for the new lever, but saw that where he was digging could cause a release of steam into the halls. Instead, he dug on the opposite side of the tunnel, and then left the opposite wall to prevent unwanted steam flow. He then moved the lever into position, and fixed it to the floor. Then, he strung a mechanical link from the lever across the tunnel to the new floodgate. Then, he walked down the tunnel, and when he reached the magma river, he expanded the alcove, making room for a second lever. He installed the new lever, and joined it to the linkage of the magma-spill floodgate. The machine was never meant to operate in such a manner, but all in all, it was a major upgrade. Upon finishing, he pulled the lever. The floodgate opened, no liquid on either end. As he passed the aqueduct on the way up, he realized that the aqueduct would only function one way, and would not accept fluids passing into its outlet and out its inlet. It would add even more cost in floodgates and mechanisms, but it was able to be made two-way. It would take 2 floodgates and yet another 5 sets of mechanisms. But, this upgrade would also allow the aqueduct to be completely shut down in an emergency, potentially preventing a lethal overflow in the future. Blitukus hauled stone from the tunnels, and produced 2 more floodgates, 5 more sets of mechanisms. Another benefit was becoming apparent. By making all of these components, he was becoming even more skilled. Slowly, rubble cleared from his home, and he found himself becoming even better at making these mechanisms, his ability to chisel stone workings advancing further and further. Blitukus laughed.

Yet another large project shot way over budget!

But, unlike previous over-budget projects, this was not a subject of complaint and stress, this was an opportunity, to perfect his creations and hone his skills. Eventually, he finished. He now had to put it all together. He celebrated opportunity by finishing off the last of the dwarven rum, and continued, hauling the floodgate to the inlet tunnel of the aqueduct, and placing the valuable flow-control structure. He then dug a small trench at the outlet of the aqueduct, and placed a floodgate to control the output. The trench made the statue functionally obsolete, but he left the trench open to spill on one side, providing the statue with as much fluid access as it had originally received. A space was already available for a floodgate, and Blitukus placed it. It was on the opposite side of the aqueduct as the statue. It wasn't complete, but it was a satisfying accomplishment for a days work. He left the site and proceeded to his room to sleep. That day, he read "Encased Evils" by Urist Deepdig. He read some of it, but didn't get far into it before his fatigue started to get to him. He placed the book on the floor and let himself drift off to sleep. That day his dream began with him walking through a cloud of steam, and proceeding to literally walk on water, then walk on magma, neither harming him at all. Before him lay a grand machine, towering up what seemed hundreds of feet into a vast caverns ceiling. In the heart of the machine was a portal, and the portal led to his mother. Be ran towards the machine, but just before he reached the portal, the magic in his dream failed, and he fell into the magma. A split second of fiery pain later, and he woke up. He rose from bed, and spoke to his subconscious,

No, I will NOT fail.

He felt determined. He yawned, and, disregarding his bit of hunger, continued what he had started the day before. As he picked up the mechanisms, he noticed a bat taking refuge in the wood furnace. Luckily for the bat, he had no need for the furnace anymore, but the bat spread its wings and seemed to smile at him as it rested, hanging upside down in the interior of the furnace. Blitukus couldn't quite identify why, but he felt as though something was significant, and symbolic about that. He continued, and finally completed all required upgrades to make the system reversible. Now was the time to test it. Either this would be a grand day, or a rather wet day. He pushed the lever, opening the aqueduct to flow. He walked up the tunnel and pulled the lever there to open the reverse-flow floodgate. Then, he opened the water tunnel again. The water spilled through the tunnels, and splashed through the new floodgates, flowing backwards through the magma tunnel. A flood never happened, and the water muddied the magma-baked tunnel. It splashed up against the magma inlet floodgate, a slight bit of steam rising as it came to rest.

Blitukus eagerly hauled the blocks down the tunnel. The channel was now flexible enough for a bridge to be built upon it, and when it was backed dry by magma, the entire assembly would be as solid as the stone itself. Blitukus stopped once more at the statue. The statues eyes now had a blue reflection, and its mouth had a reflection of light moving through it in rough circles as the water churned within. Blitukus' stone counterpart gazed deeply into his eyes, giving a sense of a timeless presence. The statue peacefully offered Blitukus a drink of water, and Blitukus drank from the statues cupped hands, smiling at his eternal counterpart.

Finishing his drink, he nodded at the statue and continued down the tunnel. he placed the blocks down and moved a lump of hematite. Then, he pulled a lever, shutting the spill floodgate, clearing the space of water and leaving a muddy trench behind to sink stones into. The building site was ready, but another need arose. He was putting his hunger off, but now it was getting to him. He walked back up the tunnel and retrieved another purple mushroom. As he ate it, he dug out and left multiple spores on the table. He thought that the spores themselves could be cooked and at least used as spice if needed. He walked back down the tunnel upon finishing, moved the other lump of hematite that was in the way, and lay the blocks in a neat arched bridge across the trench. The trench was not very wide, so this was quick and easy to do. Upon finishing, he realized, he had just completed, truly completed, a very major part of his infrastructure. Now that the tunnels had been suitably upgraded, the boiler could be built. He walked back up the tunnel, and shut down the fluid tunnels completely. He needed more coke in order to make the bronze. He walked back down the tunnel crossing the new bridge, and, magma sizzling to his side, struck the coal vein once more. After he had dug out a sizable amount, he brought the coal back to the smelter, and proceeded to process it into coke, taking a break to drink from the river. He had dug enough coal to repeat the process 2 more times, so he did that, each time using preexisting coke to fuel the refining, each time getting twice as much coke as what he used, each tome becoming more and more annoyed with sparks shooting out of the smelter and nearly landing in his eyes. As he hauled the coal from the mine to the smelter, he stepped over a strange, fiery, snake-like creature. He thought it was impossible. Creatures living within the magma?! He hoped that harmless snakes were all that would surface from the hellish liquid. He saw several of these creatures milling about the fiery surface of the magma flow on his last hauling trip.

He finished processing the coal, and rubbed his face, several marks from the sparking furnace having landed near his eyes. He decided on his first manufacturing project. He used scrap coke and some leftover bronze, and heated it within the forge, the scraps just barely heating the bronze hot enough to work. He took some sand off of the floor of the work space, and, using the last intense heat from the coke, melted that down into a small bit of glass. He then used a stones to force the glass to cool into two hollow half-spheres, and hammered the bronze to create a small pair of attached rings to hold the makeshift lenses. He harvested part of a nearby cave spider web, and strung the threads into a strap. He had made the joint between the two bronze rings flexible, and attached the strap, one end to each side, then he placed the makeshift lenses into the rings. He donned the resulting bronze goggles. Despite being made from scraps, they seemed to fit him quite comfortably. He felt a new feeling of confidence arise from the event of him wearing the goggles from the first time. Yes, he would no longer have to worry about sparks flying into his eyes, but he felt that the goggles held a greater significance as well. Yet again, he couldn't quite indicate to himself why.

Blitukus now had piles of coke, but now he needed to make more bronze. He walked down the tunnel, and hauled a heavy lump of cassiterite back to the smelter. Then, he walked into the dark depths again, fetching a large lump of malachite. Using some of the fresh coke, he smelted them together to make more bronze. After the bars had all cooled, he had 2 more stacks of bronze bars. 2 more to go. He repeated his previous steps. He found that wearing his new goggles, the fiery magma and the churning furnace were no longer a hazard to his eyesight at all. Sparks simply bounced off of the goggles. After smelting for the second time, the area around the smelter was littered with bronze bars. He now had enough to build a boiler with, and provide piping as well. He spent three trips hauling bronze from the smelter to the forge, then another hauling the needed coke. He then melted the bronze, pounding the bars together, flattening them into the bronze ribs that would encase his sought after power source. He had learned well as a metalsmiths' apprentice, and found the process familiar. He checked that the parts sealed airtight, and hammered a siding to seal it all off. He finished one section of the boiler, slowly, but with quality, and then proceeded to begin on the second section. As he slowly hammered the bars into the curved ribs, flat sides, solid supports and hollow tubes, he also created a pressure meter, doing the math in his head to determine where the meter would indicate a dangerous amount of pressure, and where it would indicate an optimal amount of pressure. He etched these markings in, and, once again, made sure everything fit air tight, that the pipes lined up and fit together, that there was no structural flaw that would cause the boiler to explode. As a precaution, he also made another device fitting on the back of the boiler. It was obvious that he would not have all day to tend to the boiler, and the boiler would occasionally need purging of excess steam, otherwise it would explode with devastating force. He built a device that, when a dangerous level of pressure was applied to its inlet, automatically vented gas out of a vent pipe. The boiler would be self-purging, and all Blitukus would have to do is make sure it was being fed water and magma. He fitted the ribs together, and riveted them in place, pounding the rivets in by hammer. He completed the two sections as well as their corresponding bronze mechanisms, and they would be fixed together at the site, as each alone was nearly too heavy to haul. He grunted and groaned as he strained himself slowly dragging the boiler section to its spot, but eventually, maneuvered it into place. He grunted and set it down, the segment resting upon its sturdy supports. Blitukus grunted, and walked to the forge yet again. He dragged the second segment down the tunnel and lined it up into place, nearly toppling it over in the process. He lined it up, and fastened the pipes together. He riveted the two segments together, and the inner chamber was air tight, the pressure meter reading equal to air pressure.

Now was the time to finally harness the power of steam. He pulled the lever to begin water uptake, then walked down the tunnel. He reached the magma, and pulled the magma uptake lever. The floodgates opened, and magma slowly sizzled its way through, under the bridge, steam rising from the muddied tunnel as the mud was fried back into hard stone. The bridge was frozen in place in the newly baked dust. The magma flowed through its tunnel, reclaiming it from the mud, and crossed the aqueduct once more. It passed through, and now only the new floodgate held the fire and water apart.

The system was ready. Blitukus pulled the lever, and the magma was let loose upon the helpless water. Both elements were taken up under the boiler, and there was a loud hissing as the pressure gauge began to rise. It rose, and rose. The boiler hissed and creaked as the gauge red optimal, and passed it. The pressure rose further, and began to near the danger level. The boiler occasionally creaked as the heat made the metal expand and the pressure made it expand further, but the rivets held firm. The pressure gauge reached the danger level.

I've never seen such a big steam boiler up close before, let alone seen one explode!

He stood before it in anticipation of whatever would come next. The failsafe device kicked in, and there was a loud hissing and a pneumatic sigh as steam was vented out of the back of the boiler. The pressure gauge fell, and reached equilibrium near the optimal mark.

He turned a valve on the manifold, and high pressure steam shot out. Soon he would connect pipes to this manifold, and on the other ends of these pipes would be steam driven machines. He shut the valve again, stood back, and admired his work. It was a large undertaking a good margin over the original cost expectation, but it had all gone right. Blitukus now had a power plant, and he had also built one of the first real, working, large scale steam devices in the world in making the boiler and its automatic purging system.  It was a great day and a great achievement, but it was just infrastructure. Blitukus had opened the path to larger, more advanced devices, devices never before built, perhaps devices to reach his mother some day. He built it, and it worked. He grinned as he observed his achievement, adjusting his goggles.

Blitukus has become a Steam Gadgeteer.

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« Reply #55 on: October 23, 2007, 02:47:00 am »

Nice! I wonder, if (far) later on in the development of the game, Toady could make it possible for stuff like this to actually happen by computer control only.

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« Reply #56 on: October 23, 2007, 03:41:00 am »

Wow, This is just unbelievably awesome! I was actually beginning to think the fey mod was wearing of, then you say so yourself. AND THEN, IN THE VERY SAME POST, YOU DO SOMETHING LIKE THIS!!! I am in awe!

I love DF;
I love kobolds; (not in THAT sense)
I love stempunk;
I love very detailed description about HOW magic or technology works;
I love these wonderful characters; (again, not in THAT sense)
I love your way to write;
Means I love*7 this story!!

This is the most awesome story in POSSIBILITY!

Edit: And the symbolics about that statue is just beautiful!

When powered by the powerful magma who burn entire fortresses and turn landscapes into ash, it's eyes glow with a sadistic smile and it offers you the burning blood of the mountain.
No sane person would drink that.

When powered by the mild water who drips the caves away and turn the planet green, It smiles comforting and offers you a drink of the finest springwater.
You drink.

Yet the water have drowned infinitely many more than ever burned in all the volcanoes of the world.

Both is needed for the steam that will bend time itself, for the sake of a single kobold to meet his mother once again.

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The beauty will kill me, because despite all my godly powers, it is still to grand for me to hold.

Damn, I'm getting poetic, look what this is doing to me!
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« Reply #57 on: October 23, 2007, 04:15:00 am »

This story really is great, but I do have one thing to say: It was a bit tiring to read the small details of making the machine. Your story will be nuch easier for you to write and us (or me atleast) to read if you use a little less details, and it won't be a bit less incredible.

Edit: Seems that Armok thinks otherwise, so nvm I guess, do what you want.

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« Reply #58 on: October 23, 2007, 04:54:00 pm »

Yeah, I had a similar feeling. I feel like I'm going a bit too slow. As I said, once things start getting in place, things should speed up. And things should be in place relatively soon. I guess in the mean time you could skim over the details if you'd like  :p
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« Reply #59 on: October 23, 2007, 05:03:00 pm »

These stories have struck me an idea! AlanL, would you mind if I posted the first Kobold's quest on Facepunch so that more people will know about it? (Therefore increasing the people coming here, which means more players and more donations! I HAVE STRUCK UPON A GOLD MINE!)
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