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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #405 on: December 06, 2007, 05:58:00 pm »

The extensive timetravel sounds great! It is something that is fairly damn hard to write, but I have no doubt you will make it great, keep whit your vision!
I kind of suspected this actually, you can see some ideas I got on using the portal to greater effect in the last post.

Wee immortals are like stars, really, there are life cycles...

This tread seems strangely detached from time, the reason for this might be that I keep jumping back and forth in the same...
Reign, didn't you have the post as death for some time? When you where promoted you immediately jumped back to be a god from scratch and the very beginning of the multivese, and since you resided in the abandonees except for short visits of a few millennia at a time every other eternity, until you somehow lost your godhood and was forced to flee here for some reason? Or is that them memory of what NOT happened? There should bee some reference... It was you that I needed that unified formula to throw planets on???

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« Reply #406 on: December 06, 2007, 06:03:00 pm »

Thank you very much for your support... I remember when I first started writing the first one, I half expected to get buried and forgotten. Now that expectation has been buried, although not forgotten.

Good ideas, but there are some catches:

The conventional capacitor barely holds enough charge for one shot (I actually got close to doing the actual math for the area needed, but I couldn't find certain constants. Sufficient to say real-life capacitor rigs with that amount of storage room probably exist, although they're probably tons of small capacitors linked up, not one huge one). The n-dimensional capacitor could hold a theoretically infinite amount of energy, seeing as how expanding space across further dimensions results in a "volume" that from a 3 dimensional standpoint becomes infinity, giving an infinite amount of room for standard charge to propagate. I'm assuming, though, that the cats built it for the purpose of working with energies that manifest equally on all dimensions, and therefore it would have a limited capacity for such exotic energies.

About multifiring, those high energy particles that get dumped before the beam is emitted have to go somewhere, and so does their energy. The filters and the lead around the particle cannon get hot when it fires. 30 minutes is plenty of time for it to cool, 5 seconds or less would result in things getting melty pretty fast.

About Dracha, you might find she makes much more of an appearance soon anyway   :p

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About him extending the amount of time away he can spend, the idea I originally had was actually fairly close to that, although it's done in an automated way and on the same charge.

Also, regarding his tech getting corrupted... I have plans involving him traveling into the future that may or may not happen depending on the result of whether people think its a good idea or not.

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #407 on: December 06, 2007, 07:46:00 pm »

AlanL: On the topic of an adventure through time, I think you should go for it, this story has gone beyond the boundries of DF and as such you should not really feel limited by the genre of DF. I say that you go for it, as Armok has said, you will no doubt blow us away with your writing, whatever the time period. ^^

Armok: We do kick ass, don't we. And yes, to have invented a device that could set the course of a universe, let alone build it, I have no doubt we Felysians have a long way to go technologically.

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« Reply #408 on: December 06, 2007, 11:43:00 pm »

Tomorrow marks 2 months since this all first began. I remember in the very early days of October, or perhaps the late days of September... I started thinking about the idea of writing a fanfic story with a female kobold as the main character... the first idea was nothing special... what it became when I started writing it... I don't know how, but all this started coming to me. It's ended up far superior to my very first thoughts. I feel writing this has changed me for the better, and I thank you all, for if nobody had replied, the idea would have just been another forgotten plot, never to come to fruition.

Seeing as the general opinion seems to be positive regarding the adventure, I'm going with it, and I'm glad to.
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Blitukus took in a deep breath, and let it out, smiling. It was finally coming to be... where, and when, he would be taken in searching for the missing pieces to the device was yet to be determined, but he would gladly stroll all chapters of time from its beginning to its end to once again guarantee the immortality and honor of his mothers soul. The final 'chapter' of his quest had begun. He heard a whistling, and looked over. The whistling suddenly stopped. He saw Dracha, who seemed to be frozen at the sight of what lay beneath the calculating machine. She spoke, "My eyes must be playin' tricks... no. The world plays such cruel tricks!" She seemed to ignore Blitukus, walked right over to the calculating machine, and retrieved the device under it. Apparantly Dragons had very keen vision... or the image had been burned into Drachas memory somehow. Dracha spoke, a tear running down one of her cheeks, "It just burns my eyes to see this false image... this impersonation shall taunt me no more!" Blitukus spoke, "Dracha, Dracha! Don-" Dracha closed her eyes, then crushed it in her hand... but, when she opened her eyes and opened her hand... it was still perfectly undamaged. She found that it was for all intents and purposes, indestructible. She looked at it closely... then a very surprised look appeared on her face, a look Blitukus had never seen before. She spoke, "The ancient souls may rejoice... it isn' false..." Blitukus asked, "Dracha, what's going on?" Dracha looked at the ring of the portal... the machine all around, and spoke, "So... it really does work..." Blitukus nodded. Dracha gently set the incomplete relic down, lowered herself to the ground, and hugged Blitukus as properly as she could manage considering size differences. She spoke, still teary eyed, "You've done us all such a great favor... anything you want, anything, just ask, friend!" Blitukus gagged, "Stop... crushing me?" Dracha let go, "Oops, sorry, I... It's a long story." Blitukus laughed, "I have all of the time in the world! I understand this is a powerful relic, but why does it bring you to tears to see it?" Dracha replied, "Ok... back before the cats were reduced to mere animals, they considered it their crowning achievement, a breakthrough toward realizing some long term goal of some sort, they wouldn't tell us what but we knew it was something big. They told us it had many functions, but only one of them we would understand. It was a vast power source, and could create the energies of magic and technology seemingly out of thin air in vast amounts! Just before the cats were silenced, they told us, they knew a calamity was about to happen, and trusted we would be the next 'Grand Avatar Civilization', their successor. They told us they wanted us to have the device, to use the device to "Clear a proper field for the transformation of powers", that whatever they meant by this was of critical importance. We asked them what they meant by proper fields and transforming powers but they just told us, 'You will understand, just give it about 2000 years.' Then, they hid the frame of the device on a world near our sun, and scattered the 4 missing components upon our world among the epochs of time. They said that they themselves didn't know where the components ended up, and that they didn't wish to, that it was for US to find out, and to never, ever, ever allow the device to fall into the hands of a god. After the time travel experiment failed so horribly we thought we would never be able to retrieve the components... and now here you are, with a real, working time machine. The cats were silenced... and then the demons came. Our civilization was left in shambles, and as magic began to fade, we knew our days were numbered. As a last ditch effort we decided we had to do SOMETHING! With the last of our civilizations might, we scoured the worlds, searching for the frame... just after we finally managed to dig below the cat communications building just outside one of our outposts, finding a strange crate there, our civilization finally let out its last breath... it all collapsed as the magic that powered it faded, leaving us all to live out the last of the days of magic as individuals in caves. And now, you somehow got to that distant world, broke the encryption and brought the frame back! This world no longer has anything left for us Dragons, but should the device be completed, we could use it to complete our portal to the stars, and leave this world to colonize a world near a distant star. Our civilization will begin anew! You are the sole person able to complete the device, for I am much too large to fit through that portal, and I lack the technological capabilities to make or even use any of this stuff. I would ask to learn it but neither of us have the resources for me to pursue such things! I understand... it's vital to your quest as much as it is to my new quest, but I ask one simple favor... may I keep it when you are done using it?" Blitukus nodded, "Absolutely, Dracha, and may your species once again reach its former glory... The future holds vast potential for us both." Dracha closed her eyes, and lowered her head slightly, "Thank you, Blitukus. Thank you, very much." She looked up at him and smiled, "I'll be braggin' to people about how I was your friend, you know." Blitukus smiled, and stood proudly, honored by her words.

Blitukus asked, "The sphere of direction... it will show me the way to the components, but, does it work in a more effective way?" Dracha replied, "Power it properly, and it becomes much more than just an arrow pointing the way. It will provide your exact location as well as the exact location of your goal, a convenient color map projected beneath. It was one of the later developments of our civilization, actually, coincidentally around the time we first started sending our first craft beyond the atmosphere." Blitukus spoke, "I will have to look into that, but, does it work in more than 4 dimensions?" Dracha grinned, "Ah, that's one of the most beautiful things about magic, and the secret to becoming a high mage. Mana is not directed through metal like the energies of technology, it is channeled and directed using the will and mind of the user. Therefore it always scales to the mind of the user, so the question becomes, do you work in more than 4 dimensions?" Blitukus smiled and nodded, "I believe I do." Dracha laughed slightly, "It takes months to train people how to properly use magic most of the time but you know so much about the universe you'd just be able to pick it up in a heartbeat! You really should try it some day." Blitukus replied, "Perhaps I will, but until then, more pressing matters are at hand. I have accomplished my original quest, my mother may have died but I have met her former self, and finally I was able to speak with my mother once more, but my current quest, it does not end there. You see... in making this work, I had to make a deal with a demon to get the proper materials and stay alive. My mothers soul is in danger, and I must act to save her. To do this, I must harness the full power of the cat relic. Of course, I will honor my word as well." Dracha nodded, still a bit teary eyed, "Good luck, my fuzzy friend, and may our futures both shine bright as a hundred suns... I guess this means I need to leave you to work on it then?" Blitukus replied, "If you wish." Dracha continued, "I have to grow some food and tend to my cages... but, just drop by any time you need something. I'll probably be showing up more often myself. Goodbye, and good luck, for both of our sakes." They waved, and began to part, but they exchanged smiles as Dracha left the cavern.

Blitukus shut the feeds to the channels, draining them, then walked back to his room. One large problem was in the way... the rift would collapse far before he could return with any component. He thought about it... he pictured the neck of the rift, existing in the fundamental levels of space and time... rather than letting the common a-to-b method of analyzing things, he used his own chaotic nature to picture that of the universe, leaving all outcomes truly random. He kept searching for a way to stabilize the randomness... but in order to have stability at all, order had to be introduced. Artificially inducing order was unnatural and didn't work at those levels... he thought, the portal always began to drift as it destabilized... the very chaos that he felt at home with is what collapses the rift. But... perhaps that very same chaos could be used to his advantage. Everything exists as probabilities unless it is actually being observed... so if nothing is observing the very heart of the rift, its waves of probability would begin to expand... not my much, since it was already a mature rift, but maybe by just enough to nudge the destination a little while it was open... perhaps nudge the destination into the future. While the rift was still small and growing, its probability waves are so huge that its destination could be moved on the scale of decades... perhaps a few days would be reasonable for when it was fully open but unobserved. Blitukus could walk through the portal... then a machine would nudge the portal into the future when literally nobody was looking, and when that future arrived, Blitukus would have returned to meet the rift at the new destination. The rifts destination would in essence jump forward, allowing ample time as Blitukus 'cought up' to it. Blitukus smiled. All it would take is to calculate what exact combination was needed to nudge the destination forward, and make a simple clockwork machine to trigger it. The energy to force the portal destination back and forward by millenia would come from being stored in the cat relic... it did function as a capacitor, the note said. Also, this would be useful for nudging the portal when it was already open... a gentle nudge would do just about nothing, but a nice kick from a capacitor should move it at least a bit. These two enhancements together, he expected, would be the last additions he would have to make to his machine. Indeed, he might be doing many things for the last time here... as what happens when the cat relic is truly harnessed was still very unknown. He smiled. No matter what happens... if he saves his mothers soul, it would be worth it.
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Shorter than optimal because I was being inefficient. It happens when I'm tired   :p

Also, hoping I didn't botch the explanation about the portal nudging, but I'm guessing it's alright.

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« Reply #409 on: December 07, 2007, 02:33:00 am »

Thought I might grab first post since it seems so widely loved, love the story, this is just the first time I've posted about it. Keep up the good work!   :D
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« Reply #410 on: December 07, 2007, 10:25:00 am »

Yet another new guy.
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« Reply #411 on: December 07, 2007, 05:06:00 pm »

Hello, and glad you like it  :)
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« Reply #412 on: December 07, 2007, 06:01:00 pm »

Beyond Quality! As always.  :)

REIGN, A PUNY LITTLE MORTAL TOOK OUR FIRST POST!!! WE MUST PUNISH THIS SACRILEGE NO THAT IT WILL NOT BE REPEATED! UNITED UNDER A COMMON ANGER WE MUST INVENT A THOUSAND NEW KINDS OF PAIN TO TORMENT THIS...KUGU.  :D

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« Reply #413 on: December 07, 2007, 06:08:00 pm »

You do realize I am currently mortal?
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« Reply #414 on: December 07, 2007, 06:55:00 pm »

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Originally posted by Reign on your Parade:
<STRONG>You do realize I am currently mortal?</STRONG>

When did this happen?!? How?!?  :eek:

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« Reply #415 on: December 08, 2007, 12:22:00 am »

Thank you all  :)

Really, the main reason I don't want to include a firing through the portal is because first, it wasn't part of the original plan (to be honest I didn't think of it until you suggested it) and would conflict with the plot, two, I don't want Blitukus to really have to repeat what those dwarves did to such a degree. Although your explanation makes it feasible, it still doesn't fit... the only place it would would involve far too much collateral damage for Blitukus to consider it.

2 months... I really find it hard to believe how it happened myself... this has been truly amazing on my end as well. Sheesh, just thinking back on it... when I first started this story, DF was still completely 2d, and adventure mode travel was just T, no huge local maps, no placing a fort anywhere, carp was unheard of... outside of DF, a season change has occurred as I wrote. Looking back on it it feels like the world evolves around me while I write. It's really a good feeling, for several reasons this is the most dedicated I've ever been to a hobby.

When I finish this one, I'm going to have to do some sort of a full circle link. Maybe I'll dig up the old thread too... looking through it, it might be good to revisit, maybe one more time after I finish this.
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Blitukus thought... the cats had said the meaning of 'proper fields' and 'transformation of powers' would be understood somewhere around 2000 years after that contact... it likely was in the vicinity of 2000 years ahead of that contact as of 1085, although the cats likely also never foresaw the fall of the draconic civilization. He needed to build further mechanisms. It would only take one more stack of bars... not even that, actually, but it would take more than small scraps. One stack of bronze bars was all that was left. Blitukus walked back to the work room, and took up enough bronze for another mechanical device. He held the bronze under one arm, and placed his hand on the steel surface of the top of the inactive magma smelter, letting the cold of the metal sink into his hand. He smiled... he had worked for 5 years bringing this project to fruition... and this very well could be the last time he would be using his magma equipment for these goals... it could very well be the last time he would use it period. He brought the bronze back to the magma forge, and fired the forge up. He sketched out a small, general design for the device on the table of the forge. All it was was a simple spring-driven timer, connected to a weighted lever that would cause the clockwork controls already present to release in a certain way. As he designed it, he determined this certain way, calculating which spheres would have to fire to drive the destination rift into the future without moving it in space. He found it was conveniently only certain spheres that would have to fire, and the longer it fired, the further it would get pushed, a direct proportionality. He designed the modification to wait for 2 minutes after the rift formed to nudge it forward 1 day. 2 minutes would give him enough time to clear away from the rift enough for it to be truly unobserved. If it was observed in any way, it wouldn't budge... and he could freely pass back into the cavern, and try again in that case. He forged the device, brought it back to the cavern, and removed the panel on top of the clockwork controls, linking the new timer to the controls. It was a simple modification... but he expected, it would turn out to make a big difference. He then took up the incomplete cat relic... it did have two nodes, one on each pole, that looked rather conductive... an n-dimensional capacitor, it would do just fine, a simple modification as well. He connected it to the line between the dynamos and the silver spheres, before the switches, placing it between the wires. It would gain a charge, then, when the silver spheres fired, instead of being limited to a mere fraction of the power of the dynamos, it would have available as much power as those silver wires could carry... of course, this meant the range of the portal was still limited, as these wires had a resistance and a melting point, but it would be a drastic improvement, and if even that proved insufficient, the silver wires could be upgraded to adamantine.

Blitukus stopped for a drink. As he drank from the river, he looked over the bridge... he remembered as if it were last week when he broke through the limestone wall to the river... he remembered when that bridge was but a rough stone construct barely able to safely hold its own weight... his mind, his body, his work, and his soul had evolved so much since then... He smiled, finished his drink, then went back to his room. He retrieved the sphere of direction and the amulet, and brought them back to the cavern. He opened the feed to the channels, allowing them to fill. When steam had built, he started the dynamos and began charging the capacitor. His love for has mother has seen him through his quest, taking him from that makeshift rough stone bridge all the way through the years to this beautiful time machine... his dreams were coming true, and now, finally, the light was becoming visible at the end of the tunnel... it would all be alright again, soon enough. When the capacitor charged, he switched power over to the portal ring, not only spinning it up, but slowly adding charge to the cat relic. Blitukus changed a few internal settings in the calculating machine to compensate for the added power to the coils, and then wore the amulet. He needed mana in order to properly operate the sphere of direction, and he had a way to convert between mana and electricity as well as a source of plenty of harmless electricity. Blitukus brought the sphere of direction to the portal ring, and held his other hand up, allowing the oddly harmless energy to arc into his fingertips. The amulet glew brightly, and he felt rather warm within. He found that with a little concentration and willpower, he could shift this astral energy around his own body. He held the sphere of direction out in front of him, and focused, directing energy into his right hand. He felt the sphere absorbing energy out of his hand. He gazed into the sphere... the arrow glew brighter and brighter, then collapsed, vanishing. The transparent shells of the sphere began to glow, and a structure within moved slightly as if it were aligning itself with the orientation of the rest of the world. Shortly thereafter, a red and blue dot appeared, hovering above the sphere. A sky-blue dot appeared at a corner of the space above the sphere, then extrapolated itself, forming a line. The line then extrapolated itself, forming a sheet, which extrapolated itself, forming a box. Points within the box began to move, until eventually it formed a bumpy shape, which faded from a sky-blue to a mixture of whites, greens, blues, all of the colors of the worlds terrain. He looked down upon a 3 dimensional map of the world. The red dot fell upon a glacier to the northeast corner of the map... that was his position, he inferred. The blue dot, however, fell upon a small temperate and tropical continent surrounded by islands near the center of the map. He focused his attention there, and the map, as if sensing his intention, reduced down to the area in the vicinity of the blue dot, and then expanded, filling the space the entire world map once occupied. He noticed that this map was a bit transparent and non solid, as if it consisted only of light. The blue dot was his destination. The map was jagged and rough, but it seemed to refine itself gradually until it accurately conformed to the real terrain. There was his destination... but there was a problem. It was obviously rather distant in time... since nothing was there but hills, stone, and slightly cold grasslands. Blitukus let his attention drift from the map, and the map vanished, leaving a simple sky-blue dot hovering above the sphere. Blitukus then focused his attention on that dot... he pictured it clearly in his mind, and wrapped it in his own intentions. Then, in his mind... he pinned the dot, and stretched it out, pulling it into a line. He found that the actual dot mirrored this. He then pulled the line out into a sheet, then, extruded the sheet up, forming a box. Then... focusing with the expanded views of further dimensions that he had experienced from the fundamental levels, he parted the box from itself, extrapolating its second face from its first, creating a structure in 4 spatial dimensions. The sky-blue box above the sphere extrapolated itself, forming a structure that was solid and primitive from the viewpoint of 4 spatial dimensions, but from 3 spatial dimensions, it would appear to be distorted and "inside out" in the most peculiar and seemingly impossible ways. Blitukus pinpointed the blue dot, and focused his attention there... working in a total of 5 dimensions, the sphere began to resolve the map. Blitukus noticed that the sphere was drawing far more energy from his hand, and was beginning to become rather hot to the touch. For a moment, he cought a glimpse of his true destination... and then the overheating sphere stopped working, likely a failsafe to avoid breaking due to thermal expansion. Blitukus walked back to the control panel, and set the sphere down, allowing it to cool. He had seen that his true destination lay among some kind of group of structures... although these structures had mithril supports. He didn't have enough time to pinpoint the exact location in space or time, but these indestructible components were guaranteed to last a while, and Blitukus would have time to reach his destination if he happened to emerge distant from it. He could afford a large error of margin... although, of course, not too large, otherwise the component likely would have moved quite a bit. The sphere of direction would be able to point the way to the component once he arrived. Mithril supports... mithril structures were seen only among the ancients in this world. The exact nature of the location and time of the component could not be determined, for as more dimensions were involved, using the knowledge of fundamental space, the prevailing chaos of fundamental space also became involved... it was not truly observed, it was not instant, therefore it was all probabilities. On top of it, Blitukus realized, there was an interesting phenomena occurring when he tried to pinpoint it, but couldn't... the more accurate his determination of the prediction of where the component would be or has been, the less accurate the determination of where it actually was relative to him, but the more accurate the determination of where it actually was, the less accurate the determination of where it would be or has been. It seemed through the fundamental workings of the universe, chaos would always prevail, and there would always be unknowns, for even an infinitely advanced machine wouldn't be able to pinpoint all aspects of an object... the very act of observing it changed its state. Blitukus smiled. He knew chaos inside and out. Even though his happening upon the component wasn't a guarantee, he could always go back through the portal and 'recast his dice' as many times as he wished. Blitukus snickered. He felt lucky.

He used the spatial deltas of the last jump, putting him outside of the capital of Anthath Sizet, and decided on a time delta of about -2000 years. Previously, his machine fell remarkably short, such a delta would be considered laughable... thanks to the cat relic, it was now a very serious proposal. He entered these approximate deltas into the calculating machine... then he closed his eyes. He spun the last digits of the input rollers downward, then spun them upward, making sure to keep the motion somewhat balanced but other than that, the rollers would spin to become whatever they will. Without observing the rollers in any way, he started the calculating machine, turned the other way, and let it calculate.

I really enjoy how you work, Universe, and I'm always open to surprises.

Blitukus smiled, and waited. The ring had already gotten up to speed, all that was left was waiting for the calculating machine. The rollers clicked... solutions were likely being formed. Blitukus readied the timer, and when the 11th clunking sound was heard, Blitukus discharged the capacitor, firing the particle cannon. When the rift formed, Blitukus stepped back, and activated the clockwork output of the machine. Energy arced forth from the silver spheres, unlike the thin tendrils of before, vast arcs permeated through the air, carried aloft on the intense magnetic fields circulating about the portal ring, powered by discharges from the cat-make device, an exceptional capacitor in its current form, something far greater in its true form. Blitukus looked down, taking in the sounds and sensation of the various forces pulling at him. When he looked up, the portal had formed. Unlike the ample time provided when he had ventured only a relatively slight distance into the past, this long distance connection would be naturally less stable. He expected, beforehand it would probably become unstable after 12 minutes... now 5 minutes would probably sum it up... although it was still much better than only a matter seconds. He started the 'nudge' timer, took up the sphere of direction, still wearing the amulet and carrying his usual equipment. He places his other hand on the control console, and slowly moved it. He grinned, and looked at the beautiful controls, the sight of the beautiful machines all around him, arcs of energy forcefully but peacefully permeating the room, the portal ring ahead containing a rift, on the other side of which was a yellow land and a blue sky, devoid of structures of any kind. The steam, the steel, bronze, the magma and water, it was all beautiful, and it had all brought him so far... and now, empowered by its finally complete form, he would embark upon the final journey of his quest. He took his equipment with him, walking toward the portal... then passing through. He vanished, relative to that time, becoming displaced as he crossed over. It was over the course of the smallest fraction of a second that traversed eons for the rest of the world...

As he vanished, all became still... frozen in place. Then, from the grand clocks in the castles of kings to the timepieces of the novice mechanic... the clock ticked in reverse. Minutes rolled back, hours were undone, night regressed to day, which regressed to night, as Blitukus crossed through the paths of fundamental space within the portal. The clouds rolled backward, rain drops rising, gaining within the clouds, the clouds then un-forming, sinking as vapor back into the waters. The suns arc regressed... autumn turned to summer, to spring, to winter, to autumn... All functions went in reverse. Buildings unbuilt themselves, and people became young, disappearing into the future. The large towns of the humans shrunk from their city-like state, to towns, to settlements, to nothing, the first wagons regressing back through the terrain as Blitukus moved back through the years. Ruins un-eroded, and eventually their former vigor was restored, old civilizations revealing themselves as true empires... but even these empires saw their behind their advanced state a developing state, a beginning state, then little other than scattered settlements. Steel and mechanical contraptions vanished far into the future, and simpler times were once again to be seen, but as these devices vanished, runes and crystal of the past were present in the halls of the dwarves and trees of the elves. Human settlements seemed to vanish into the future... then, as dust in the wind blew backwards to rejoin its original form, old ruins of mithril buildings, the towers of the draconic civilization, began to rise. Trees ungrew, and grass shrank, revealing an ashen, charred landscape of the past, devoid of much vegetation. The reason was evident, black clouds obscuring the sun rolled through the sky, explosions and arcs flashing about as the demonic wars unfolded in reverse... but as buildings, flora, and fauna were un-destroyed, the clouds vanished into the future along with the demons, revealing the true glory of the draconic civilization, shining mithril towers reflecting the sun upon a pleasant landscape, various white and brown buildings and facilities below, constructed soundly and efficiently, vast cities to make the most grand human settlements seem small. An aetherially charged landscape abound in wonders existed all around, a lush, green, pristine landscape permeating around as well as within the cities, the cities built to work with nature rather than against it. Glistening rivers drew lines upon the landscape, networking the waters, as crystalline flying machines and aetherial portals networked the cities of the dragons, a network that even extended far into the heavens above.

Blitukus emerged on the other side of the portal, and found himself standing upon the top of the elevated lands that once... once would support the capital of Anthath Sizet... but this was before Anthath Sizet, there was nothing around but pristine deserts, swamps, and savanna. The lands to the southwest that had always been corrupted during Blitukus' lifetime were once again pristine. Blitukus looked at the sphere of direction... it was fully functional, ready to map, powering itself in excess from powerful ambient flux. The entire world seemed abound with mana. Blitukus checked his timepiece, it read, "09:15 PM, Slate 18, 9011". It had rolled backwards past 0... the real year was -989. The sphere of direction indicated a destination actually very near him, in a valley by the plateau. He walked away at a decent speed toward this point, ignoring the rift behind him, focusing on the beings that seemed to be in the valley. 2 minutes had passed... whether the rift was there or not would determine whether he would have to abandon this attempt or not. He looked back to observe the rift... but found that, luck have it, it just happened to have vanished into another time, no longer visible to him. Blitukus smiled, then continued. As he approached the beings in the valley that were marked as his current objective to reach, he noticed their winged, reptilian form. Likely citizens of the ancient empires. Much was to be accomplished... getting the component as well as perhaps attaining some of the knowledge of the ancients to help him on his quest. He sensed it... he himself was oddly displaced in time. It was a true reminder that his quest was partially completed, partially being completed, and partially yet to be completed... wherever, whenever he would have to go to reach that which has yet to be completed. He felt determined; he would find a way to get there.
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Yet again I find myself tired, but it's due to school more than anything else. Luckily, tomorrow starts the weekend  :)

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« Reply #416 on: December 08, 2007, 01:39:00 am »

FIRST POST!!!!


Armok, it's simple really. I was born mortal, became a god, but when I helped get rid of the other gods and sealed off that universe, I used my immortality as a sort of fuel. As far as I know, there isn't a single immortal left.

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #417 on: December 08, 2007, 06:26:00 pm »

BEYOND QUALITY!

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Really, the main reason I don't want to include a firing through the portal is because first, it wasn't part of the original plan (to be honest I didn't think of it until you suggested it) and would conflict with the plot, two, I don't want Blitukus to really have to repeat what those dwarves did to such a degree. Although your explanation makes it feasible, it still doesn't fit... the only place it would would involve far too much collateral damage for Blitukus to consider it.

Fine, then don't make it, Blitukus might consider it but decide against it because of the collateral damage you mentioned and the similarity to the dwarves action, to corrupt simply.

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Armok, it's simple really. I was born mortal, became a god, but when I helped get rid of the other gods and sealed off that universe, I used my immortality as a sort of fuel. As far as I know, there isn't a single immortal left.

Are you still going on about that? Of coarse you have been born as a mortal, several times, I have to, thats what you do to get a anchored avatar avatar, when that mortal body dies you become a god again, standard procedure, it's just a may to battle the "sandbox mode" of omnipotence.
But you had to make it "role play complete" that singe one time, by erasing you memory, I told you it would not return normally unless it identified you correctly, and just as I predicted you lost all your eternities of memory and experience permanently, you are only lucky enough that I recovered a part of them enough for you to restore your identity, THAT time you was damned near to be mortalized.
But you still identify whit that body for some reason apparently, yous because your first noninduced memories are from that period it doesn't mean that you didn't exist before that, or ever was truly mortal.
This is why I am still more experienced than you and also have the multiverse creator title despite you being technically older than me.

You "helped get rid of the other gods"? I have not noticed being gotten rid of, who did you help? You sealed of WHAT universe? Not the one to the left whit the benzier flowing pinpoint manna flows I hope, damn you if you did that, it's my favorite.
Also one can not kill immortals, thats kind of by definition. Also we jump back and forth in time so mutsh that even if that somehow was possible there would be in jumps from the past immediately so it really would not affect anything, talking about simultaneousness whit all these separate timeflows in different universes is really quite meaningless.
You remain naive as always, Reign.
About your immortality that guy that wanted you to "help get rid of the other gods and sealed off that universe" by the cost of your immortality was probably a well planed scam for taking your powers, involving inducing a ILLUSION of mortality, I will deal whit him immediately, so that you can go back to your parading vacation, Where is he/she/it?

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« Reply #418 on: December 08, 2007, 06:37:00 pm »

Get rid of the gods IN that universe, and seal them out (the only link to other universes that remains is the outernet). And no, not the one with the mana flows, I could never hope to stay there, the natives love awful poetry WAY to much. It's the one with the space-faring silicon-based civilization that has holidays every other day.

And you are aware that I came up with the idea in the first place, and immortality simply appeared to be the only fuel that would do?

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« Reply #419 on: December 09, 2007, 12:13:00 am »

Thanks   :)

I also enjoy reading the RP, forms an interesting backstory to some things   :p
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The full moon was present in the sky, its light shining down. Blitukus walked towards the two black dragons, smiling. He felt for a moment as if, in a way, he was somehow continuing an overarching quest that begun with his mother and still continued. It was all a single chain of events in a way... He felt further at peace thinking of this, and, second to that, proud of what he had achieved. The two black dragons were working with what looked like a purplish, cylindrical device with a spiked end on the bottom and transparent innards, and it was suspended on a wheeled frame of some kind. It was readily able to be carried by the dragons, but it was nearly as big as Blitukus. One dragon, a dark green color, was holding a handle on the purplish device, the other, pure black in color was holding a handheld device of some kind, looking into a display of sorts.

The black dragon with the handheld device spoke, "No, we're still in the yellow... try... two meters to the west." The dark-green dragon rolled the wheeled device a bit to his right. The black dragon spoke again, "You passed it, a little back, a quarter meter." The dark green dragon slowly moved it towards his left. The black dragon spoke again, "Ok, the signal is good but all we're getting is a blank glow here." The dark green dragon replied, "I think she only forwarded it for the first 4, she'll catch up to us in an hour or two. Good enough, anyway." The dark green dragon then pressed down on the handle, pressing the cylindrical part into the ground, then lifted up, causing the frame to part from the cylinder, leaving the frame held in his hand, the cylinder sticking out of the ground. The dark green dragon then continued, "5 down, 10 to go, then we can call it a night." Blitukus walked up to them and spoke, "Hello!" They both spoke, "A kobold?" he black dragon continued, "Hi there." Blitukus thought... his goal was painted there, where they planted that cylinder... what they were doing had to be fairly significant somehow. Blitukus asked, "I am curious, what is this? I am new here, you might say." The dark green dragon spoke, "We're placing teleport nodes for the network." The black dragon continued, "Scattered among this world are weak points in space. The main hub sends a signal out among the aetherial plane, and it can be detected with the most strength at these weak points. This is how we find where to put new nodes." The dark green dragon continued, "The operator at the main hub forwards a connection out to the weak points where we're working... she's supposed to do it before we get there but sometimes we're faster than she is." Blitukus smiled... a hub of teleportation portals... it would definitely make transit far faster. Blitukus spoke, "Fascinating, truly, but I must reach this hub, I am on an important quest." The dragons spoke in unison, "Just teleport!" The black dragon continued, "It's a free service provided by the government... we may have just planted this one but it works just fine." Blitukus responded, "Teleport... erm... of course..."

This makes me feel like a complete outsider... then again, I actually am, here.

The black dragon spoke, "WHOA! Uh-oh!" The dark green dragon asked, "What?" The black dragon continued, "I just cought a message from our surveyor circling the heavens above, he said he was right over the sunny side of the world when he got hit by a dense region of the solar flare! He's ok, but he says his sense of the aetherial has been temporarily saturated... it'll be another 2 hours before he can get us more locations." The dark green dragon replied, "He's OK? Good... well, I guess we'll have an extended dinner break after the next two." The black dragon laughed, "I guess so." The black dragon then spoke again after a moment, "Hmm, you know all it takes is one greedy pr*ck in a high place getting the wrong idea, and I bet the kobolds will end up subjugated. Wouldn't be surprised if they end up getting pushed so far back the rest of the world would look down on 'em." Blitukus sighed slightly from his nose. The dark green dragon replied, "Nah, they can be pretty resourceful given the chance, that happens and I'll bet you 5 moneys they'll bring themselves right back up, it's been too long since we've seen a real kobold hero about anyway." The black dragon chuckled, "You're on!" Blitukus smiled... perhaps somewhere down the line, 5 moneys would be changing pockets. Blitukus had reached that objective point... where was the next? He looked at his sphere of direction, the map it displayed clearly marked with a red and blue dot... the blue dot was far to the northwest, likely over a thousand miles away. If the teleportation network was as advanced as it seemed, it shouldn't be a problem... of course, assuming Blitukus could figure out how to use this teleportation network.  Blitukus asked, "I understand you know quite a bit about what's where, having planted these things after all, what's at this location here, marked by the blue dot?" The dark green dragon looked at it, then looked at the black dragon. The dark green dragon picked up the wheeled frame, and gave it to the black dragon, "Here, you get the next one ready, I'll answer his questions, this one might end up being a long answer." The black dragon accepted the frame, and began to move off to ready it again, "Ok, have fun."

The dark green dragon crouched, and looked closely at the blue dot. He spoke, "The color of the dot says that's sure... but I wouldn't stay there too long. That's Arkus' tower." Blitukus asked, "Who's Arkus?" The dragon replied, "Not many times people have asked me that one, he's one of the most famous high mages. He's seemingly invented several new spells and nearly built an entirely new level of magic from scratch just out of nowhere, as if it all came as an odd inspiration... the thing is... he pursues these at all costs. His trains of thought make absolutely no sense to us... and some of his proposed ideas, well, made us do a double-take. Some regard him as a genius the scale of which should be worshiped, some regard him as... well..." A moment of silence passed. Blitukus asked, "Erm, well...?" The dragon continued, "He's alone in his tower, and has looked into arts many of us consider a bit, well, too far. He's a very nice person most of the time but can be rather forceful and generally doesn't like uninvited guests. Although his contributions are many and well known, the methods he uses to develop them indicate to all witnesses, he possesses some rather questionable ethics. Sufficient to say, the inspectors are no longer willing to go to his tower and the government is at a loss about what to do about him, although things have started to sour ever since that one experiment of his broke loose and the military had to get involved. I'd recommend just not going over there, but I sense you're dead set on it, so second to that, I recommend taking the time to watch your own back." The black dragon spoke, "Ready!" The dark green dragon replied, "Ok, let's go." He then turned to Blitukus, and spoke, "Good luck, and be careful." Blitukus nodded. The two dragons then flew away, headed north.

Kind of reminds me of me, except for that whole questionable ethics and rampant experiments part.

Blitukus walked up to the node, and looked at it... all he knew about magic was that it used aetherial energy and was focused by willpower. He felt his soul coursing with energy... it seemed the environment provided enough ambient energy for most personal-use needs. He sat, and focused on the node. He tried to interface with it with his mind as best as he could... and found that only the vaguest sort of interaction was possible, but it was refinable. He spent the next few minutes using his will and thought-power to refine his connection with the node until he actually had a clear connection with it, almost as if it were telepathy... although all it told him was the location of the main hub, sitting in the very center of the central continents. He began thinking of ways to try to actually teleport... his shift of concentration caused the connection to close. He refocused himself and found this time he was able to connect with the node much easier and much more quickly than the last. He smiled... Dracha was right, he was picking this up quickly. He stood and walked toward the node... it felt as if some sort of aetherial signal was tugging at the energies within him... wherever his energies were concentrated, it felt as if the matter there were slightly jumpy. He sat a bit further from it, and felt how it was pulling at his aetherial energies... Blitukus moved the energy within him, and spread it out evenly among his body. Then, he began to allow it to build up... he willed for it to evenly begin to fill every particle of his body. He felt his matter becoming attached to his energy, as if by some sort of energy-based string. He then put force behind his energy... and found that it simply splashed to the front of his body and he was left back at step 1. He retried this, except, he tried to unbind his energy, setting it adrift among space before putting a force behind it. He found that it moved, and he began to feel a bit displaced... but then the binding broke between his matter and his energy, causing the unbound mana to simply evaporate away, leaving him sitting there feeling rather drained. He breathed deeply, and slowed himself, absorbing new energy from the ambient environment. When he and his spirit had restored a proper amount of energy, he tried again... this time, as his decoupled body of mana drifted away, he placed his willpower on keeping the bond between his mana and his physical body together... this bond became taut, and he forced his mana to move further, dragging his existence behind it... he felt suddenly displaced. He felt as if he were hovering, drifting. Then, he noticed, his mana, sent ahead of him and dragging him behind it, was nearing the node. The node sucked in Blitukus' body of mana, and then cast it through aetherial space, following a signal to its source. Blitukus was pulled along behind it, breezing across, above, and literally through the continents, zipping past biomes at a rate that would have made his flying machine seem to be, at best, moving at a snails pace. With pinpoint precision, as if it were on a rail, Blitukus' body of mana took him forth, directly to the central continents. He suddenly emerged from aetherial space, finding himself falling. He soon after landed softly on a hard, smooth stone floor. He looked up. The sun was high in the sky, nearly at 12 noon. In a matter of seconds he had traversed such a distance as to set himself on the sunny side of the world. All around him were towering constructs of mithril and crystal glass, arching into the sky. There was a peaceful chatter about. Many large antenna-looking protrusions stretched into the sky from large, more complicated looking teleportation nodes nearby. In the center of this hub, a conical tower with a spherical top, overlooking the entire hub. The hub had many dragons milling about, some disappearing in flashes of light, others appearing out of nowhere. The entire area seemed heavily trafficked. Upon the land, some dragons sat, some walked, but there were several vehicles traversing a smooth stone road, hovering above it silently, each hauling metallic crates, doubtlessly either containing or destined to contain various cargoes and goods. In the air, near the ground, dragons were flying around, going about their daily business. Above them, the tallest towers were linked to one another by barely visible bridges seeming to consist of nothing but energy. Above the top of the highest towers, an occasional flying machine would zip overhead, blue and green, organically shaped, silent, yet swift, a dull red glow appearing around their rear, what one would infer would be some kind of engine. The buildings were vast, but plants seemed to grow on their metal structure. Indeed, it seemed the entire city was a fusion of nature and civilization, a peaceful combination. The gunk and pollution of overuse of energies, present with technology and likely having a counterpart in magic, was not present at all. The air was pristine. All around, the people were happy, their benevolent government and powerful civilization providing even the basic workers a good standard of living it seemed. There were no signs of starvation or epidemic, and everyone had what they needed plus a bit extra for fun. Blitukus looked around, and grinned. It was beautiful, a place full of wonders unseen since after the demons... it was everything Blitukus had dreamed a future technological civilization would be... and it was rather unfortunate it was doomed to crumble. Perhaps, in the future... after all was said and done, the Dragons would be able to rebuild their grand civilization. It was truly grand in all ways... in scale, the city spanned out, approaching the horizon, its harmonious presence seen throughout the entire local area. Another trait of the city was the ability to at an instant tell which buildings were more advanced. The milky white mithril buildings were either cylindrical, spherical, conical, or a simple combination of these. The more intricate and organically shaped buildings had a large amount of brilliant blue adamantine used in their construction. In general, it seemed the most advanced objects were made of adamantine, the more adamantine, the more complex the object. Relatively nearby, toward the rear of the city, near a hill, was a large toroidal mithril building, arcs of mana circulating around it. Several dragons, each wearing a fairly well detailed adamantine robe, stood atop this building, channeling the energies toward the center. A powerful glow emanated from that direction, the building seeming to require its own power infrastructure to function. One one side of the building, several different metals, mostly piles of silver, and glowing crystals were stacked along with several liquids of different colors. On the other side, fine spools of adamantine, a loading bay for vehicles on both sides. Adamantine was produced at a very slow rate despite the immense amount of energy, but it seemed numerous strands were produced simultaneously, although beyond that, details were unavailable to Blitukus at such a distance. Judging by the construct of the building, compared to the rest of the mithril buildings, only the most advanced and resourceful nations would have the ability to develop and build such a facility, and judging by the robes of those dragons, and their glowing eyes, only the most skilled mages would be able to properly understand and run the operation... it did take knowledge and experience with extremely small-scale functions applied to large scale operations, after all. The adamantine creation facility was surrounded by various flags and statues... perhaps developing it was actually a multinational effort? Blitukus smiled. This civilization was advanced both in its methods and in its society, for the government had long been benevolent, and the world at peace, for such a massive research project to be completed in such a graceful manner. Blitukus enjoyed it all, but brought his focus back towards his goal. He had less than a day to retrieve the component and get back to the portal.

He walked up to the central node of the hub... it was all rather busy, but things moved swiftly. As he entered within range of it... he got this sudden feeling of omnipresence, as if the entire world were at his fingertips. He studied his sphere of direction, and charted a path between the red dot and the blue dot. When it was his turn, he connected to the hub, and indicated his desired course to it. The glows seemed to shift a bit as it aligned itself to a new destination. Blitukus once again sat and focused himself, parting his mana, dragging himself behind it through the astral realm. The hub sucked him in, and catapulted him northward. He emerged shortly after, launched up slightly, then falling down, landing softly on dry grass and mud. The air was cool. He was in a deep valley, and to his right, a single tower, consisting of adamantine supports and dark glass, mithril spikes attached to it, each spike holding a ruby-based crystal assembly. Near the top, an energy-bridge joined a door at the top of the conical tower to the top edge of the cliffs surrounding the valley. Blitukus walked up a hill to the side, then up various slopes until he reached the top of the cliffs, then stood before the energy bridge. Blitukus stepped onto the bridge, and felt as if the only force keeping him from plummeting a rather long distance was a strange force repulsing against his feet. It was a bit hard to move on it at first as it behaved differently than a solid bridge, but eventually he got used to it and was able to move upon it with more ease. When he reached the other side, he found that a heavy mithril door stood in his way. Suddenly there was a loud beeping to his right, he looked to his right and upward, seeing a crystalline optical device focusing its attention at him. He waved at it. It seemed inexpressive toward him. Blitukus thought for a while... he had to get through and speak to this Arkus. Then, he remembered... he had figured out the essentials of teleportation from his preexisting knowledge of particles and energy. Now was a good time to put it to formal use. He sat down, and focused himself, driving his mana to pull him through the astral plane. While in the astral plane, he phased through the mithril door, then willed himself to rematerialize. He fell to the floor, inside of a hall, the mithril door behind him. He continued through the hall, keeping an eye out for any possible threats. He ascended some steps, and continued forward, finding himself near a window. Suddenly, tentacles sprung from the wall, grabbed him, then pulled him against the wall, pinning him there. A few moments later, a snakeman approached. The snakeman was much different than anything he had seen or heard of before... it had blue scales, much of its cranium and some of its body was adamantine plate rather than flesh, it had a crystal replacing one of its eyeballs, and it didn't seem very amused by Blitukus' presence. It walked up to Blitukus, grabbed him by the neck, tore him from the tentacles, then threw him towards the window. Blitukus seemed to phase through the window, fell a short distance, then slammed into the mithril floor by the energy bridge. He found himself stunned and a bit sore, but otherwise uninjured. He stood up. He was once again outside of the mithril door. Blitukus walked up to it again, and this time tried to teleport directly into a room at the top of the tower... but found a barrier of aetherial energy blocked him. He found himself back where he started... he would need to physically go there. Blitukus wondered... was the snakeman raised there or taken from somewhere else? Was the snakeman willing to undergo such changes... or was it forced upon him? Blitukus felt a bit nervous. He might make it through the tower, and meet Arkus, despite these test subjects being on patrol... but he would have to be careful... for there was the chance he could end up a 'test subject' himself.
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