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« Reply #285 on: November 21, 2007, 05:41:00 pm »

But he LAUGHED afterward!

As soon as I finally get Yahweh fired for crimes against humanity, I'm going after the collective universe.

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« Reply #286 on: November 21, 2007, 11:52:00 pm »

I'm glad someone has similar ideas on magic to me, I felt like my views were a bit of a rarity  :)
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Like particles emerging from nothingness and vanishing within the froth of space and time, two ideas appeared in Blitukus' mind, then shortly met and cancled eachother out. No machine was 100% efficient... much energy would be lost as heat, light, and other forms of emission, meaning more would be needed... but at the same time, the mass of the charged particles would contribute to the amassed energy within that region of fundamental space, reducing the needed energy. These two effects canceled one another out, and 2 gigawatts would still be needed as input. He thought of the largest electrical generator he could efficiently produce, and began to calculate its power... it came out to be around 400 kilowatts. That was one five thousandth of 2 gigawatts. But, he would be storing energy rather than releasing it directly from the generator. Five of these generators, working together, could produce the amount of total energy needed in around 15 minutes. The voltage could be stepped up to allow for much more efficient travel along the wires... the limit would be around 50,000 volts, over which the glass he used to insulate the wires may break down, ruining the whole machine. This was also going to take a capacitor big enough to walk inside of... Blitukus felt confident that with enough time he could build anything. The capacitor plates would be silver, and would be coiled up to save space, although the final discharge would have to be carried on adamantine wires... silver wires would be vaporized. The amount of adamantine on the capacitor would determine how long it took to discharge... he designed the capacitor, allowing for adamantine ribbing on the silver spirals spaced just right to allow for a 1 second discharge. The silver would be very thin to conserve material and maximize area, and the spiral sheets would be spaced very close to one another. He would need to make a whole new kind of magma forge to make these sheets, and as a byproduct... he could use it to turn large amounts of water to steam, then collect the condensation. Water was conductive to energy only because of its contaminants. When vaporized then recondensed, these contaminants were removed, and water actually insulated very well. This is what he would suspend the silver panels in... it probably wasn't the best material to use but it was at least structurally a better idea than leaving the thin sheets out in thin air. In order to unleash the power of it... he still needed adamantine.

Blitukus walked back to his room, and retrieved the Sphere of Direction. He looked into it... and, as he expected, it pointed down within his tunnels, to a location beyond the magma river. He would need to bridge the magma first, and that meant steel. He remembered the width of the magma flow... about 6 steel bars would be needed. Blitukus retrieved his pickaxe, and walked down the tunnels, proceeding to dig into the exposed hematite vein behind the platinum. When he had dug out 6 decent lumps of it, he brought 3 back to his smelter, and began melting them down, stopping to get a drink first. When he finished that, pouring the bars, he went back down the tunnel, digging out the needed 3 lumps of coal, then bringing them back and processing them to 6 lumps of coke. As he walked across the bridge above the magma, he noticed a fire snake lounging on the side of his bridge. A very warm blooded reptile indeed... it was still odd that anything could survive in magma. Blitukus continued, stopping to eat, thinking of the fire snake. As he moved near the magma, he wondered... there was adamantine beyond it... but demons? He would need to protect himself from the demons somehow... he would need to once again wield the automatic crossbow, even though he now was ashamed of the abomination of technology. Even though he felt strongly against it, he had to, if he wanted to meet his mother again. He would never be able to speak with her again if his soul were to be consumed. He shrugged off the thought... no force would stand in his way. He took up his pickaxe once more, and from the shores of the river... the one friendly demon he knew... dug out 6 more lumps of limestone. He then melted the iron bars back into molten metal then turned it into pig iron. He then walked back to get the rest of the hematite, piece by piece, using it with the rest of the limestone and coke to make steel, paying careful attention to adjust the chemical combination to make this steel more resilient to heat.

Winter is upon you.

Heat was extreme within the mountain, but was now at an opposite extreme outside of it. Just before finishing, he stopped to once again drink from the cold river, the waters that it consisted of also becoming a major physical part of Blitukus. He finished the steel, planned out his bridge, then forged the still-hot bar stacks into the wire, sheets, and supports he would need, bringing it down to the shore of the magma flow. He found himself becoming drowsy as he did this... that productive day was coming to a close. Indeed, before he could begin actual construction, he found himself too drowsy to continue. He placed the steel bars gently down, then walked back up the tunnel, the air around him cooling as he ascended. He walked back into his room, lay on his bed, and thought about it all... this train of thought continuing into his sleep. That day he drempt of the machine... the portal... and once again, his mother stood on the other side, waiting for him. Like the previous instance, he ran towards the portal... finding himself walking upon the surface of magma and water with impunity... this time, he did not fall into the magma. As he leapt into the portal, the dream ended... leaving him feeling a bit let down, but it was still a good omen. He awoke, and smiled, feeling confident.

No matter what forces resist me, no matter what I must achieve, I will succeed.

He got up, yawned, then continued what he had begun the day before. It was magma... molten rock. It was laughable to try to sink supports within the fluid, so none could be used. Instead, he extended a steel truss out, supporting it with cables attached to the roof above. When he had finished the truss, he lay the steel sheets over it. As he walked the thin supports of the truss, he found himself often looking straight down into the magma, the heat starting to get to his head. One small misstep... and flaming death would ensue. Blitukus worked carefully, riveting the plates down to the truss. Eventually, it was finished... a steel bridge, suspended by cables, without supports below. A testament to the strength of steel and clever solutions of engineering. Blitukus smiled... it was a structure that might stand for decades... centuries... he walked to the center of the bridge, and looked over the side at a metal panel mounted to the outside edge... the panel he had engraved words into while forging it.

"Dedicated to the memory of Queen Fale 'Siege Engine' Siegedriven, the Ageless Purple Spear. May this structure, and her memory, last until the end of time."

Blitukus breathed rapidly, then took a deep breath in, slowly letting it out through his nose. He smiled, teary eyed. It was all done in the name of reaching his mother again... he silently promised that these miracles of science and technology would give him the strength and power to overcome death itself... to undo deaths deeds. He felt the love of his mother, unwavering within... among this all, the steel, steam, electricity, magma, coils, pistons, minerals, adamantine... wars, machines, gods... he just wanted to be with his mother again. He sniffled and became more teary eyed as he walked up the tunnel again. He walkd to the front, opening the door to the river, and on the opposite side of the river, stood Dracha. Dracha spoke, "Good news, you may have both luck AND fate on your side!... You alright there?" Blitukus replied, "I am, I think. I have just spent a few moments remembering my family... fate, you say?" Dracha replied, "I did a bit of looking up information on you and looking back through some old texts... there was an old prophecy listed and I think you might be the subject, the Prophecy of the Cats Legacy." Blitukus asked, "Cats... the small fuzzy creatures that speak with meows?" Dracha commented, "Back before they were silenced they spoke with a lot more. They occasionally visited us here on this world... even during our height, both their magic and their technology exceeded anything to have been seen on our world. All we knew of the cats is that they were a friendly, albeit occasionally aloof race of star-faring scientists, and we sensed they had visited every star visible within our skies. Their large craft, the size of a small moon, descended from the cosmos, parking in space near to our world. Then they made contact with us, spoke with us, then happily traded with us... there were quite a few crystals and ores that we thought were useless junk that they found particularly valuable for some reason, so trade went rather well. They refused to trade for secrets of magic or technology, though, responding to us, 'the best fruits are those of ones own labor'. Around 1200 years ago, all of a sudden, for no known reason... the cats, well, just suddenly lost their intellect, and became like animals, their craft and settlements buried and their visiting populace stranded among the worlds. We never found out why this happened." Blitukus nodded... maybe after he came to peace with his situation, the wound in his soul healed, he would venture through time and see these grand extremes... maybe, some day. Dracha continued, "The prophecy states that one being of this world will once again unite the forces of magic with the most extraordinary technology, and will achieve power the scale of which is indescribable by words." Blitukus thought, perhaps a reference to the use of adamantine in his design, allowing for enormous currents? Blitukus spoke, "I have found evidence of adamantine beyond the magma flow. I need this material for my constructs. As such, I will strike it and also reach whatever lays beyond it and-" Dracha interrupted, "Unwise! Very unwise! Pits to hell lay near adamantine, and the demons that come forth have annihilated fortresses that number well over a hundred! You... are a lone kobold, Blitukus! And absolutely nothing you do will stop the demon housed within the adamantine." Blitukus didn't ever want to have to wield his automatic crossbow again... but if that's what it took... He replied, "I am well armed, Dracha. Regardless of the odds, I do have a chance, and I must take it." Dracha responded, "Well... ok, then. It was nice knowin' ya, lad! Just please do me a favor... no matter how long they torture you, don't tell them the whereabouts of my cave. I would rather not die at the moment!" Blitukus sighed out of his nose, then nodded. Dracha spoke, "Goodbye then... if you're still alive the next time we meet, I might have a gift for you. Until then..." An expression of sadness and concern appeared on her face as she walked away. Blitukus looked down for a moment, then looked back up.

I have already been through hell once, and if meeting my mother again means facing hell again then I must face hell again. I have learned how to fight fire with fire. No force shall stand in my way.

He walked back to the armored vehicle, and took up his automatic crossbow and consolidated the remaining bolts... he had expected to never need to use this device again, and had dumped many bolts in his game of 'roulette' with the dwarven leader. Only 75 bolts remained. If he wanted to take on multiple enemies... he would need more, much more, at least 175 total... and even then there was no guarantees. With 175,000 bolts there would be no guarantees... but chaos smiled upon him. He took up his pick axe, and continued down the tunnel, digging out the needed malachite and cassiterite, then continuing further, digging out enough space for him to store his firepower. Then he hauled the lumps of ore back to the smelter, producing bronze. Half of the way through, he stopped for a drink. After smelting the bronze and pouring the bars, he forged the bronze into clips, each holding another 25 bolts. The added 100 bolts gave a total of 175. Part of the way through this, he stopped to eat... he was hungry, but he also felt the urge to stop what he was doing. He did NOT want to abuse his own technology... and luckily, this would truly be the last time he would have to. He moved the weapon and bolts down to the shores of the magma flow... if he were to encounter anything out of the ordinary... he was still perfectly agile. He could retreat back to his weapon and turn to fire upon any who pursued. If it would work... that was debatable. Ranged weapons have been known to be far more effective than traditional melee in skilled hands, and for Blitukus, this advantage was enhanced further by his stockpile of ammunition and his rapid-fire crossbow. Whatever happened... at least he tried. He drew his pickaxe, crossed his bridge, then began digging into the earth beyond the magma flow.

He felt a bit of dread. He may find adamantine, he may find demons, he may find both, he may find neither. Whatever he found, at least he was prepared... hopefully prepared well enough.
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« Reply #287 on: November 22, 2007, 01:27:00 am »

They did it on purpose. And eventually, after all these centuries of living in our homes, eating our food, killing our vermin, and most importantly PLOTTING, they are going to retake controll.
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« Reply #288 on: November 22, 2007, 04:06:00 am »

Beyond Quality.

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I'm glad someone has similar ideas on magic to me, I felt like my views were a bit of a rarity  

Have you ever read Eragon?
Not nearly as good as this story but the magic is a little more consequent than most.

Are those cats a subtitle Noctis referens? Or is that just me being overly symbolic?

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« Reply #289 on: November 22, 2007, 04:14:00 am »

That's what we thought to, I think it's a reference.
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« Reply #290 on: November 22, 2007, 10:42:00 am »

Thanks     :p

It's not really a reference to Noctis (I make a lot of references to other things that I like in my story though, and I do think Noctis is one of the best exploration sims available), but it did remind me of Noctis before I wrote it. It was inspired by the myths and beliefs regarding cats having extraordinary powers. For instance, the ancient Egyptians worshiped cats as gods.

I've never read Eragon but I've heard about it.

Edit: Remembering the cat in the first story, it's partly a reference to a flash game I played, I think.

Edit II: I think once or twice I thought about making it directly a reference to Noctis, but decided against it since it wasn't part of the original idea.

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« Reply #291 on: November 22, 2007, 12:02:00 pm »

Sadly, in our opinion the magic of Eragon is one of it's few redeeming traits.

We and Our friends have a joke "Hmmm... I feel like writing a book... I KNOW! I'll just steal the plot of another successful book and move it to a completely different setting! It worked for paolini, should work for me."

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« Reply #292 on: November 23, 2007, 12:07:00 am »

Too true in a lot of modern productions.

Hmm... I remember when I first started the first story... I'm amazed myself at what has come of this.
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Blitukus continued digging... his mind traveling back in time without need of a machine. After tunneling deeper, he found that the heat was becoming even more and more intense. He felt thirsty, and left for a drink, returning and continuing further... He remembered his childhood, his mother, his days spent as a child, those simple days of happy innocence. He remembered his mother, how her smile and grin comforted him, how he loved her as a parent and friend, how she was in many ways a hero of his as well. Days where everything was simpler, everything was looking up, and everything was alright... and now, he stood swinging his pickaxe into the stone of a mountain, alone, in the middle of a frozen glacier, searing magma behind him, unforgiving cold outside, and who knows what ahead... his mother had been torn away, cast out of the mortal realm... but he felt his love transcended the confines of the dimensions. He became teary eyed, and found himself breathing rapidly. He was still attached to her memory... and perhaps, her soul, wherever it was. He found, Armok, the time machine, the world, his life... all seemed immaterial. His heart painted one goal, and it shined through.

Mother, I think I now understand what gave you your strength, when you emerged from the caves of your ancestors... those many years ago... indeed it may be the secret of heroism entirely. I now have a cause so important that whether I live or die is irrelevant... either way I will reach you again, either way I will live or die happy, my quest accomplished. No demon will be able to touch my soul... for my love for you grants it invulnerability to evil and corruption.

It lay before him... he sniffled in a breath, then yelled, with new-found strength driving the pickaxe deep into the walls, collapsing entire sections. He hardly noticed the infernal heat blasting across his body... but eventually, turned around, and peered into what he had unveiled.

A miner has located some eerie glowing pits.

Fire sprayed out below, the walls lined with hideous and sadistic engravings, yells, squeals, and horrifying laughs emanating from within. Blitukus felt no fear. He stepped back, and crouched, ready to leap straight into the pit... but a thought stopped him. Yes, he may end up seeing her again either way... but one reason to preserve his life came to him... if he lived... there was a chance he could set it all right... make it so that none of this ever had to occur... make it so those days of happiness and prosperity within the peaceful, quaint little towns would never be torn away... it would be a bonus on top of his primary goal, if he lived. No, he needn't face the demons on their own territory... they would have to fight him on his. Blitukus darted back to his weapon, and stockpile of ammo. He grinned menacingly and laughed on the way.

It's pincushion time!

He retrieved his equipment, then crossed the bridge again, lugging it down the tunnel, then setting up near the pit, crouching down, the automatic crossbow ready, propped up against his knee and shoulder. He waited for a few moments... then grinning a bit, in a heat likely exceeding 120 degrees, he yelled, "Hey ELVES! It's getting a little chilly up here! Let's trade metal, or are you too busy with your <<rope>>? I'll make you a few new a*sholes for free if you little pansies would get up here!" A demonic fury erupted from the vents. A voice from within snickered, "Too chilly for ya eh?" Suddenly, a spirit of fire hopped out of the pit then roared, breathing flame at Blitukus.

Horrors! Demons in the deep!

Blitukus ducked further, flame pressing its burning hand against Blitukus and everything he held... he felt the flame punching into his fur, the searing heat removing every trace of water on his surface. The tunnels were filled with smoke, and the spirit of fire was the only thing to be seen moving. It laughed, and a moment later... it found itself stumbling back, bolts flying out of the wall of smoke, striking the parts of it that were solid and damaging them. The smoke began to clear... behind it, Blitukus, uninjured save for a slightly darker hue of fur color. As bolts broke several of the magical members that held the flame together, parts of it vanished. One bolt flew high... and pierced through the very core of the beings neck, shattering the physical binding within. Its flame dissipated, and the remnants of its head fell to the ground, landing in the ash.

Blitukus coughed, releasing the smoke from his lungs, then laughed with a power that the demons themselves took notice of. Demons were beginning to rise. Blitukus turned and found himself looking at another spirit of fire... having witnessed its stronger accomplice annihilated, hesitated at the sight of the mere lone kobold. Blitukus took advantage of this to get by the spirit of fire, retreating down to the end of the tunnel. Now the demons were all bottlenecked... they couldn't surround him!

Yay shooting gallery!

Blitukus backed up further, guarding the end of the bridge, waiting for the spirit of fire to come around. The spirit of fire yelled at him, but Blitukus just grinned back at it. It spat an orb of fire, but Blitukus ducked and it passed overhead, blazing up the tunnels behind him. As the spirit crossed the bridge, Blitukus crouched, took aim, then fired. He fired the last of his bolts, damaging the spirit of fires legs, shattering one, sending it crashing to the steel floor. It grunted, then an expression of surprise appeared on its incandescent face. Blitukus lugged his weapon, out of ammo, over to it, and stood above it, ignoring the heat of the flame. It swung to no avail, then roared with a demonic fury. Blitukus looked down into its eyes, and tilted his head a bit, grinning, the light of the magma making his eyes seem to glow red. Blitukus raised the automatic crossbow, and brought the heavy assembly of dense metal down on the fragile magical members that held the spirit together. It furiously tried to fight back... but couldn't even manage to set Blitukus' clothes on fire. Its retaliation was to no avail. Aside from a slightly singed upper arm, he was unscathed.

He kicked the ash into the magma, then removed the clip, tossing it away. He then went back to his stockpile, and loaded a fresh one in. He walked to the mouth of the tunnel down, and guarded there. He saw none remaining. He continued in further. He waited... he looked back, saw nothing, looked forward again... he was staring a tentacle demon in the face. It wrapped a tentacle firmly around Blitukus' arm, and pulled Blitukus to the ground, squeezing tight enough to injure Blitukus' arm a bit. But, the demon found a factor had appeared that had never been there before... the mass and size of the automatic crossbow interfered with the attack. Blitukus tried to tear away, but finally got away when he fired a bolt right into the tentacle, causing it to release. Immediately he leapt back then stood, backing up further. The tentacle demon grunted in pain... it could feel pain? Blitukus snickered, grinning. He fired at the demon, breaking its foot, sending it to the floor, then kept firing at its non vitals until the pain drove the demon unconscious after causing it to let out a hellish scream. Blitukus finally decided to fire into its vitals, killing it. Immediately a frog demon sprung out... nervous due to the sight of its peer having a bolt sticking out of many of its joints. The heavy crossbow slowed Blitukus, but he was still strong and agile enough to avoid getting pinned down. Blitukus dragged his weaponry back, away from the frog demon, the steam generator making a ruckus as it bounced along the ground. He then turned and fired on it... it felt no pain, and despite bolt after bolt hitting it... it didn't even slow. It's nervousness seemed to fade. Blitukus stopped, stood, moved back, then crouched again... his bolts were having little visible effect. He picked himself up again and retreated to the bridge... he fired at the frog demon as it emerged from the tunnel. This time luck acted. The demon stood far taller than Blitukus... but much to its surprised, as it stopped and gagged, found a bolt sticking straight out of its chest, goo oozing down. It found it very hard to breathe... Blitukus grinned and kept firing. Its black heart beat no more... it soon fell unconscious and fell to the ground. Eyes missing, throat missing, innards pierced and poking out... the frog demon died in a pool of hideous goo.

Nobody dare stand between me and THIS goal! I mean nobody.

Blitukus dragged his equipment down the tunnel... another tentacle demon approached. The tentacle demon yelled, "I wonder how many tentacles I can stick up your a*s before your pelvis busts. Let's find out!" Blitukus replied, "I am not the subject of a dwarven engraving, thank you." Blitukus crouched down, and aimed. The tentacle demon, ignoring its fallen accomplices, laughed... but that laugh was stopped when a bolt pierced into its lower body, lodging firmly in the wound. Another bolt stuck in... a third bolt stuck in, sticking out of its head. The pain stopped it from laughing... it saw the bolt sticking out of its head, and for the first time, Blitukus saw fear on the face of a demon. Blitukus laughed, then kept firing, using up the rest of his bolts. It yelled in pain as bolt after bolt sunk in, and it fell to the ground unconscious. Blitukus ran out, then dragged his heavy weapon over... he laughed upon seeing the pincushion effect his weapon was capable of.

Shortly there after, ichor and goo spilled everywhere, the demon died, its tortured soul sent back to hell. Another tentacle demon was walking up the tunnel... slowly... it stopped. All around were the corpses of demons, impaled with numerous bolts in a manner most painful to gaze upon, goo and ichor spattered everywhere. This demon had been offered a contract... its superiors had offered it a promotion if it could see the death of a dwarven fortress of 100 well armed individuals... or see the death of a lone kobold. If it failed, it would be demoted, if it died, it would be demoted... it went with the obvious choice, which was indeed the wrong choice. Such was the nature of demonic contracts. It mumbled, "I've seen some messed up sh*t down there but that was just cruel..." Among the shredded remains of demons resting in pools of their blood-equivalent, stood that lone kobold. Blitukus, a fraction of the size of the average demon, stood, his fur scorched, ears back, holding a large weapon, grinning, the light of the magma on one end and the pit on the other giving his eyes a fiery glow. The demon asked, "... are... are you a demon, or an angel?" Blitukus raised his head, his grin widening, showing the menacing expression that he inherited from his mother, "I am a Siegedriven..." Blitukus laughed slowly and deeply, pulling back the ratchet of his crossbow and letting it snap forward, then walking toward the demon, his grin unceasing. The tentacle demon backed off, "I... I'll kill you tomorrow!" The demon then turned around and fled, diving back into the pits. Blitukus laughed loudly, amused by the cowardice of the demons... they had no virtues so bravery wasn't to be expected anyway... the demon didn't even notice that Blitukus was out of bolts. Blitukus looked at his weapon... he found it no longer disgusted him. Technology was but an amplifier of the will of the user, and as such was inherently neutral, even weapons. Weapons could be used for extortion and murder... but they could also be used to protect the innocent and vanquish the agents of evil. He walked down the tunnels... then walked back up. The demons had been repelled.

He dropped his weapon, then took his pickaxe back up again. He walked back down to the pit, busted a boulder of limestone into smaller pieces, then used the chunks to plug up the pit.

Kill me tomorrow? No thanks, I have a few things to do before I die, and 1 day isn't enough time.

He found himself getting dizzy... not from the battle, and not from exertion, but from heat exposure. It was scorching, as hot as the hottest summer day he could remember from his desert home, and it would only get hotter as he went deeper. He wouldn't be able to go on like that... he needed a way to keep cool. For now, anyway... he was finally done with the struggles of combat. He had gained access to all that he needed it seemed. Smiling, he left the sealed pit, walking back up the tunnel. He dragged the dead demons up the tunnel, slinging them over into the chasm. Upon hauling the last stench-filled corpse, he met Dracha, walking down the tunnel. She was looking down, sighing, "... and when It's all over I'll be the one to bury 'im... why d-" She looked up, and spotted Blitukus, dragging the corpse of a demon behind him, made a pincushion by several stuck bolts. Dracha raised herself up, and stood motionless. She spoke, "Well... I'll be darned!...." She hesitated, but continued, "Congratulations, you, kobold, have impressed a dragon." Blitukus smiled and laughed. He then proceeded to chuck the corpse into the chasm, dusting his hands off afterwards. Dracha continued, "You deserve a nice long title for this! Not my job to think of one though." Blitukus smiled, letting a breath out of his nose, "My last name is all that I need, Dracha... It's one of the things I can still share with my mother..." Dracha smiled at such modesty, then sighed a bit as well, realizing the pain that those words indicated. It was becoming evident... technology in certain circumstances is a fair match for the divine...

Armok threatened my soul and my mothers soul should he find evidence of my contact with the collective universe... by the time he learns of it, it will already be too late. History would have been rewritten... my mothers soul would still walk this plane, and this part of the mountain would lay untouched. No evidence would remain. I fear no demons, and I fear no gods. It will be done.

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« Reply #293 on: November 23, 2007, 01:27:00 am »

Alan...as always....Beyond Quality.......*runs and hides from armok for stealing his first reply spot*
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« Reply #294 on: November 23, 2007, 02:55:00 am »

It's times like this I have to recite my resume to myself to avoid feeling small. THAT'S how awesome this story is.
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« Reply #295 on: November 23, 2007, 10:01:00 am »

I am in awe.


Beyond Quality.
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« Reply #296 on: November 23, 2007, 11:30:00 am »

Wow, thanks  :D

Now I'm really hoping that I don't get too-deeped here. I'll be keeping seasonal backups just in case, but... a long time ago I tried hacking the adamantine count, messed up, and got too-deeped anyway. Any tips?

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« Reply #297 on: November 24, 2007, 01:07:00 am »

So, I guess I'll be just hoping that everything goes ok  :p
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Dracha, sensing Blitukus' pain, spoke, "You can count on me to help if you need any, Blitukus." Blitukus smiled, "Thank you, Dracha. I offer the same." Dracha spoke, "I had my doubts but now those doubts are no more, you are the one in the prophecy! I was one of 15 to be entrusted with a converter artifact, the cats left them behind, and I was told to give it to the one in the prophecy should I ever meet him. It's the gift I mentioned earlier." Blitukus noticed the Amulet Dracha was wearing. Dracha took off the large amulet, and dropped it in front of Blitukus. Blitukus picked it up and looked at it. The amulet was rather light for being so large. In fact, it looked as if it weren't originally meant to be an amulet, rather a device of some sort that had been attached to a long string. The right side of the device was encased in a blue, light metal... this must be adamantine. It was a beautiful substance, lustrous beyond all of the other metals, its blue shine piercing through. Within the case was an assembly of fine crystals, so fine it almost looked like large grains of sand adhered to the surfaces. These crystals were suspended in a matrix of adamantine, a magical controller below, connected and complex beyond anything Blitukus had seen before. The crystals were all perfect, and all perfectly aligned, as if they were assembled particle by particle. the left side was equally encased but in a material that was dark and slick, a nonmetal and not shiny at all... but it seemed to have similar properties to the adamantine. Within were coils and capacitors using materials Blitukus had never seen before, suspended in a matrix of the dark substance, below it an electrical circuit of some sort, enormously complex and again seeming as if it had been assembled on the scale of fundamental particles. The control was connected to the electronics above by some kind of optical fiber, made of a similar material to the cover of the book "The Worlds Easiest Atom Smasher". In the middle of the device lay an interwoven mesh of adamantine and the dark substance, holding up a crystal that glew an electric yellow, surrounded by coils and wires. Blitukus curiously looked at the odd fusion of extreme magic and extreme technology, analyzing every part of it. Blitukus asked, "What does it do?" Dracha replied, "We've never had a use for the technological side but I guess you will if the prophecy is right. The cats said it allows for conversion between the forces of magic and the forces of technology... in theory, if someone had a large supply of technological power they could use that to wield magic regardless of the mana flux of the world."

A fusion of magic and technology... perhaps more than the sum of its parts.

Blitukus tied the string to make it suitable for him to wear, then put it on... it was rather large for him but still didn't weigh him down much. He felt a strange physical sensation in his chest when he did so, a minor sensation of astral energy draw. The crystal on the amulet glew very slightly, then Blitukus felt slightly electrically charged, until the sensations of astral energy and physical energy came to a balance. Blitukus laughed a bit, "Thanks... I don't know how to use magic but I guess I could learn eventually." Dracha said, "If you get enough power together then just experiment. Unlike what people tend to say it's pretty hard to hurt yourself unless you're doing something large scale." Blitukus nodded, then asked, "Have you received any messages?" Dracha replied, "Nutt'n yet, except static of course. Death's been doin' a great job of keeping the astral bands clean, well, except for those ruins which keep making a ton of random noise... the ruins down where Anthath Sizet used to be are quiet as solid rock though. The sounds those ruins made used to give me the shivers, but now nothin' but silence ever since 1050 on." Blitukus snickered and smiled... that was his mothers work, still standing a glorious truth. He spoke, "Thank you, my large, scaly comrade." Dracha smiled and struck a proud pose at her species being acknowledged in such a positive light.

The battle... the heat... all night and into the day. Blitukus felt exhausted. He spoke, "I need sleep. Good luck, Dracha." Dracha replied, "Same to you! I think after this is all over I'll sleep too... I hope you're long lived, I don't like being woken up. Anyway, until then I'll be around. Goodbye!" They waved at eachother, then parted. Blitukus continued up to his room, let himself fall onto his bed, and nearly immediately fell asleep. That day he slept so deeply that despite indications that he had drempt, he remembered none of it. When he woke up, he sensed no presence other than his own. He was useless to Armok now... and that meant he didn't have Armok observing him. He got up, then walked to the river and took a drink. He noticed that the amulet hadn't drained his energy any more since he first put it on, and felt his energy had restored itself as he slept. He finished, then walked back down the tunnel to retrieve his pickaxe... but as he was about to grab it, there was a slight flash and a pop sound. He felt electrical energy jump from his fingers into the metal of the pick. He immediately jumped away, and felt the amulet siphoning his astral energies to replace the electrical charge. Blitukus took off the amulet, pocketed it, then proceeded to pick up his pickaxe again. He walked back to his room, and set the amulet down on the table. It was a beautiful device... but it hadn't a use... yet. He thought about the heat problem... as temperatures grew above 150... perhaps above 200, 250... he would need an air-tight suit to keep from cooking. But, normally such a suit would only provide a temporary cooling until it also became heated, slowly cooking its inhabitant to death. The problem was air temperature... air, its temperature could be manipulated by changing its pressure and density. As any gas expanded, it cooled, but as it contracted, it heated. If the air within the suit could be circulated, compacted by a device in the back, the heat radiating away, then expanded once again as it left... heat could be, in essence, pumped out of the suit. He knew that even in the most compact and efficient design, such a suit would be heavy and cumbersome, but it was either that or slowly fry. Bronze would be far too heavy for the task... steel was the only option, but it would take a lot of it in order to, counting in other mechanisms and the waste of being inexperienced, forge the suit. He had a stack of steel bars but 7 more would be needed... it was an unreasonable amount of weight to wear, but 'luckily' only a portion of it would end up in the actual suit, and Blitukus was extraordinarily strong, especially for a kobold. He walked back down the tunnels, and began digging out the requisite material. He stopped to eat after digging out the hematite, then afterwards continued back to dig out the coal. After digging out the hematite, coal, and limestone, he started the magma forge and began smelting the hematite into molten iron. He found again he had to pour it into bars before processing the coal... why he hadn't worked this inefficiency out first seemed without a valid explanation. He made a note to start with coal first next time. He stopped for a drink as he did this. After finishing the coke processing, he melted down the iron again and turned it into pig iron.

Spring has arrived!

It was the year 1084... for once, the date seemed irrelevant. It may be the anniversary of his mothers death, but at the same time it was a day that brought him closer to meeting her again. He brought more hematite back, and began smelting the hematite, pouring new iron into pig iron. He adjusted the steel not for strength but for heat resistance. After pouring the bars, he let them solidify, but while they were still hot, held them in the smoke of a fire produced by the rest of the coke. This infused an enormous amount of carbon into the very surface of the bars, meaning the surface could hardly be called steel, and was weak, but had regular steel under it and was more resilient to heat flow. He transfered some of the fire into the glass furnace, then quickly, before it went out, gathered a small bit of sand, and made a small glass panel... it wasn't large at all, but it would do. He began forging his suit, stopping for a drink just after the river gushed through, stepping through the passed flood waters. He had been the apprentice of a metalsmith who in turn had once been the apprentice of a dwarven smith. The skills he had gained allowed him to make a well-crafted suit, even though he never worked with steel in his apprenticeship. He made the suit hinge-jointed, weaving cave spider silk into an elastic that sealed the joints air tight. The helm he made had two openings, one for each eye, each opening sealed with green glass. On the back of the suit, he mounted a small steam generator, and a small piston, driving a small air pump that sucked air out from within the suit, compressed it, and pumped it through a series of small tubes on the back, the tubes opening up, allowing the air to expand as it entered the suit again. The air would heat up as it was compressed entering the tubes, the tubes would radiate away the heat, cooling the air, the air would cool further as it expanded to re-enter the suit. It was all very heavy, but it wasn't beyond what Blitukus could wear. For the sake of safety he installed inside and outside temperature thermometers, made as small as he could manage, just under the eyepieces. Luckily, the faceplate of the helm was a bit distanced from his actual face at that point, giving the thermometers room to fit. He proceeded then to slip into his new suit... it was very difficult for him to get into it, as usually putting on such a suit would likely be done with the aid of a friend, but he managed, fitting himself into the leggings, slipping the boots on under it, and sealing the elastic together. He then wore the plating for his upper body, sealed it shut with the leggings, and then equipped the gauntlets to protect his hands. He then wore the helmet, sealed it, but left a vent on the mouth open... since it was otherwise air tight, he would have a limited amount of air supply when it was fully sealed. He found it difficult to move, his balance offset by the weight on his back, but he picked up his pickaxe and used the front of his pick in order to, at least to a small degree, balance out the weight. He slowly made his way down the tunnel, his metal boots thumping along the stone floors, and clanking over the steel bridge as he crossed the magma. He watched the outside temperature escalate... the inside temperature following slowly. When he neared the sealed pit, the external temperature read 125... it jumped to 135 just as he neared it. As he passed it it fell again to 125. Blitukus walked to the end of the tunnel, took his pickaxe up, and swung at the wall. He found the clumsy and heavy suit made his movements slow but at the same time gave his swing much more momentum. It balanced out, allowing him to dig at the same speed. After digging only one space of rock out, the temperature jumped from 128 to 138... he was near another pit. He felt the walls, and dug through the coolest one, traveling to the right. The temperature dropped... but soon after, it spiked again. He backed up a space, and then dug deeper into the mountain, avoiding what was likely a pit. As he dug down, the temperature gradually increased. Blitukus switched on his suits cooling system, and it clicked repeatedly and shook slightly. He felt air being sucked out from the suit, a blast of cool air replacing it. The temperature within the suit began to decrease. It worked... it would stave off the heat, for now. The temperature jumped from 134 to 144... another pit ahead. He dug to the right again... he didn't strike a pit, but it escalated further to 154. He was between two pits. He let out a nervous sigh and continued. He would've been made demon food 3 times over if it weren't for that thermometer... he thanked the universe that it didn't fail him. The temperature dropped... he felt the side facing towards the center of the mountain was the cool one. He turned and dug deeper into the mountain. The temperature dropped again... he was free from those pits. As he dug further, the temperature spiked again, the heat coming from deep and to the right. He dug to the left, then continued downward into the mountain. The temperature fell again... but the base temperature continued to rise steadily. 150... 170... 190... The internal temperature rose above 110 as the cooling system started to find itself overwhelmed. Just before the temperature outside of his suit reached the boiling point of water...

The Metal of Metals!
You have found it!

You have struck adamantine! Praise the miners!

Of course, there was only one miner... Blitukus looked right into it, the beautiful ore... it was every dwarfs fantasy, and he had found it... but was it just a puny pocket, or was it enough to provide him with the materials for his time machine? He dug along the sides of it, and couldn't help but find himself in awe of the ores beauty... it was no wonder the dwarves loved it so much. He dug, and dug... he found that the face of the adamantine vein was concave... there was likely miles of the stuff, enough for a time machine and a lifetimes worth extra. He walked back to the corner, and pressed himself against the wall. He took in all that his senses brought to him.

He looked deep into the adamantine... it was a marvelous but blatantly artificial construct. It was actually, in essence, silver, although magical bonds, placed at the level of fundamental particles, channeled all energies effortlessly and held the silver particles spaced in a perfect structure, holding them together and giving the entire structure immense strength. The mana contained within the bonds is what gave the metal its beautiful lustrousness and blue tint, but, it all was dependent on mana flux... if mana flux dropped too low, then the bonds would fail and it would all turn to silver. Silver wires were conductive but this was infinitely more so. Something was amiss though... he sensed a sinister aura, vileness oozing from behind the wall... whatever it was, he felt confident it would not keep him from reaching his mother... he disregarded the feeling. He took a break to let it sink in, and ate, returning as quick as possible afterwards. He took his pickaxe and dug into the adamantine. Soon though, the wall collapsed and tumbled downward into the distance, and he found himself peering into sheer darkness, evil radiating from within.

A miner has broken through to an expansive cave system.

A sense of gloom seemed to erupt within... Blitukus did his best to shrug it off and continued, mining out the adamantine. He dug out quite a bit... then decided to retire to sleep, laughing a bit on the way back. He shut off his suit and took it off, letting himself immediately get to sleep on his bed. That day, he had a nightmare. In essence, his nightmare depicted his being mercilessly torn apart then eaten by a demon that would crawl from those dark caves. He was startled and a bit shaken by the nightmare, but he shrugged it off, put his suit back on, and got back to work. He dug, and dug, and dug, laughing occasionally as he did so. He stopped for a drink, thanks to the heat, then continued. He dug until he was was out of breath, the scorching air stinging at his mouth and lungs. He looked around... dozens of lumps of raw adamantine lay on the ground. It was time to go to work extracting it. He had read that adamantine, when unraveled, turned to fiber that could be woven into clothes or wafers, which could in turn be used to assemble basically anything. He eagerly picked up a lump of raw adamantine and hauled it back to his workshops. He set it down, and slowly began to pick the adamantine out of the rock, the centuries-old strands unraveling themselves. It was very slow but he found himself unaffected by the tedium. He then brought the strands over to the smelter, and gradually smelted the strands together, forming a stack of solid wafers. As Blitukus stepped away to get more adamantine, he slowed... there was a deep laugh, and a flash of magical energy from down the tunnel... a sense of dread slowly crept into him. He peeked out into the tunnels, and saw nothing. He sensed a great avatar of evil... right behind him. He felt his fur stand on end. Something tapped his shoulder. He jumped and turned around, and found himself looking right into the eyes of a female kobold, fur blood red, eyes glowing as hot as the surface of the sun, heart as dark as coal-covered obsidian. He backed away, but before he could move much at all, she punched him in the face, breaking an eyepiece on his suit and knocking him to the floor. She seemed without pain despite having hit a steel surface. Blitukus grunted in pain... luckily the neck joint of his suit saved him from a neck injury. He tried to sit up, but before he could do so, she ripped his helm off, grabbed him by the neck, pulled him up, then pinned him against the wall. There was nothing he could do to break free.

The demoness spoke, "I just love it when they squirm!... Hi." Blitukus gagged, "Hello....." Despite the fact that she was likely about to mercilessly devour him... he couldn't help but notice that despite her demonhood, her looks were very appealing. She licked her lips, forced him to the ground, then started to slowly undo his leggings, "I'm gunna have fun eating your soul!" Blitukus stopped her, then replied, somewhat defiantly, "You are beautiful, but you are not my type, demon." She tilted her head slightly, got up, grabbed a nearby metal bar, then returned. She let the metal bar fall to the palm of her other hand repeatedly, then smiled sadistically, "We can do it that way too, I just get to have a different kind of fun, that's all." She drew back to hit him in the knee with it, but he interrupted, "Halt! I, erm, I have an offer to make." She let the metal bar drop to the ground, then grinned wickedly, "Go ahead then, talk!" Blitukus spoke, "You know my rich, flavorful soul will not fall easily..." She replied, "Hmmhmmmhmm, pure hearts are tasty..." Blitukus continued, "I declare that you may consume my soul and the soul of any other of your choice upon my death, if you spare me now and allow me to mine the adamantine." She spoke, "Tasty... and more tasty... in exchange for the walls of my prison..." A scroll seemed to materialize, and she held it in front of Blitukus, only showing the line to sign on, the rest rolled up. Blitukus reached out to grab it, but she pulled it away, speaking, "Sign first!" Blitukus spoke, "I have nothing with which to sign it, so I must take it and-" She swiped at his hand, gashing it, causing it to bleed. She spoke, "There you go! Sign." Blitukus grunted, mumbled a bit in protest, but complied, signing his name in his own blood at the bottom of the scorched scroll. The scroll disappeared. She grabbed Blitukus' head, and pressed her face against his, speaking, "Congratulations, you get to live and you get to mine the damn stuff, but when you die, I get to eat your soul, and about the other soul of my choice, I choose your mothers soul." In that moment, Blitukus' heart sank to the depths of regret and sadness. She continued, "I'll eat hers first just so I can make you watch, and then I'll eat yours." She threw him against the wall, and then stepped back, spreading her wings. She winked at him, grinning, "It was a pleasure doing business with you." She then walked out, running up the tunnels and taking flight into the world, free after a millennium of imprisonment. Blitukus sensed the voice of Armok in the distance, "What? Another one broke loose?... Send one of my more adventurous slaves to do away with her... no, you fool, the one with the <<adamantine>>!" Blitukus sat against the wall, feeling the deepest depths of regret... now he had doomed himself and his mother... He felt himself begin to cry, but that very moment, another thought entered his head. He felt the regret vanish. He smiled, grinned, then laughed. Indeed, it was the demon who was swindled, for Blitukus' quest, in stopping his mothers death, would stop his journey to the arctic, and stop his entire quest from starting in the first place. By giving him rights to the adamantine, the demon gave him the power to render the contract null and void by eliminating it from the continuum of time, forcing it from existence. All he had to do was stop that one event... and all would be well. The gods and demons would have nothing on him. He just had to make sure he didn't die before then... or else.
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I'm going to run a test tomorrow to see if my adamantine hacking strategy is working or not. If not, no major damage, I just need to find out what works.

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #298 on: November 24, 2007, 05:29:00 am »

But... the souls... time it... doesn't work that way... NOOOO! Stupid Blitukus!

Firs post; Beyond Quality award AlanL!

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #299 on: November 24, 2007, 11:57:00 am »

Thanks    :p

Don't worry though, it doesn't end in tragedy.

Edit: And we probably have different views on how time works and how the spirit realms relate. I guess it might show later. It's not really relevant but, something I might as well point out is the signing of the contract was an event that took place in the mortal realm, and was therefore subject to its laws, rather than the laws of the spirit realms.

[ November 24, 2007: Message edited by: AlanL ]

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