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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #165 on: November 08, 2007, 09:04:00 pm »

Sorry to point out,but Dwarf fortress isnt dwarf fortress beyond steam punk.You can spin tales in steam punk better then anyone i know, but i cant imagine a DF where dwarves weild lazers, elves use ion beams, and kobolds think that a 100 ton war machine, which weve already gone over,wouldnt work quite well, would be a GRRRREAT idea.You're a Beyond Quality yarn spiner, one of the best i know, but id advise agenst that plan.
As for the friggin epic tale you spun, and the one before that, you have it down.
But...i cant tell you what to write.Just telling you what i think.If you have some ideas on how to not go TOO FAR then by all means rock on.If not...remember that role play i told you about?.Its like that.
You rock dude, tell me you're ideas so that we may still think you are the best thing to hit this place since Armok started giveing out Elf Blood.

P.S Also...the tank battle is gonna be awesome.
P.S.S I like that song.I put it on when i feel down.

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #166 on: November 08, 2007, 09:13:00 pm »

(pretty highly spoily)
There's going to be a part where Blitukus ends up in the far future late in the story, far past 2000 AD. This part will take place outside of the confines of DF. And in this specific part of the story, it will mostly be human and kobold characters. I don't see why mechs and the like wouldn't be possible with technology that's yet to be invented, especially considering in the case I have in mind, it would have been teams of people working with large equipment to assemble the mechs. Although, there's another story I have in mind that involves future-tech dwarves, and I think I know how to pull it off without changing their character (they still end up being short stubborn miners with a utilitarian lifestyle).
(/pretty highly spoily)

In essence, I think I should be able to pull it off without being ridiculous.

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #167 on: November 08, 2007, 09:24:00 pm »

*Sigh*
Well...have fun...with that.That doesnt explain much [Not how it happens in the sotry, just possibilty.] Really, i stuck around becuase steam punks cool.If i hear one more story with a friggin mech battle or space battle, or some weird explanation as to why elves would bother with technology, as they are strictly one with nature. [That last one was mostly what you were gonna do with it.]
Guess ill only be here for half the story....Still,what a half itll be.Sorry if im a whiner but i just got finished with that one roleplay i told you about,2 mech roleplays that stunk in the end, and for the past month i cant find anything Interesting other then space crap.Steam punk sounded really interesting,and you doing Fales story in the first place with out changeing the very fabric of DF resulting in so many epic moments.It went beyond what other people have done.
Peace.
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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #168 on: November 08, 2007, 09:34:00 pm »

Sorry to hear (really, I am), but this is what I had in mind from the start.

(spoily)
I'm not making the elves advanced... in fact I'm going to end up getting rid of the elves due to their lack of tech in that part. If you really want to know how I'm going to impliment it in the story... I didn't want to give out plot details ahead of time, but it's essentially a military vehicle of a corrupt human government that gets stolen.
(/spoily)

If all it is is the mech that's getting on peoples nerves, then it isn't needed as the mech in that part wasn't actually in my original plan. I guess I could eliminate that part and go closer to the original plan, if that's what people want.

The point is to write an interesting story, and what I'm doing near the very end does end up trekking quite a bit away from the original DF scene. I had a feeling from the start that this might not appeal to people, but it's what I chose to do. Oh well, at least it's only a relatively small portion of the story.

Edit: If people really hate the idea of any sort of future setting... I guess I could get rid of it, but it would have to be a pretty major negative response to the idea as it was part of the original plan. Well, the sooner people state their opinion, the more seamlessly I can try to fix whatever might be wrong.

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #169 on: November 08, 2007, 10:58:00 pm »

I was still feeling the emotions that drove me to write these stories when I started this. It's an odd feeling, but one I'll never wish to lose hold of.

Still, I want this to turn out as good as possible. I'm glad I've received feedback, thanks for posting it. It would be a disservice to the story and the characters if the ending were to turn out bad.
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Blitukus walked back up to the tank, hopped on top of its front side, and climbed to the top of the cabin. He opened the steel hatch, and lowered himself into the cabin, taking a seat within and sealing the hatch above himself. Then, he toggled the generators. The generators warmed up, and the boiler tapped as it pressurized with steam. The pressure stopped rising as it reached a high level, the generators unable to add more steam into the already full boiler. He sighed through his nose, checked the reverser was forward, and pressed the regulator forward. There was a hiss, and a clunk, as the piston, gears, and axles meshed with one another. The vehicle jerked forward slightly, and accelerated, the piston hissing and chugging, expelling excess steam out the underside of the vehicle. First, he was going to test it. No sense in riding off into battle if he wasn't sure of his own equipments reliability. He pressed the regulator all the way forward, and the vehicle kept accelerating. It rolled across the thin snow, reaching its top speed. Unlike the flying machine, the terrain didn't blur... except for the immediate surroundings. The vehicle traveled at about 3 times Blitukus' top running speed. A hill of snow was ahead, and Blitukus thought of launching off of it.

A test of just how tough the structure is!

The vehicle plowed into the hill, but didn't launch off of the top. It plowed through the top, toppling the peak and sending snow into the air, continuing on down the rear of the hill.

That works too!

He pulled back on the regulator, zeroing it. The machine slowed rapidly, but Blitukus pulled the reverser. The gears regulating the left tread changed, meshing violently. Both treads locked, and the vehicle turned left, skidding rapidly to a stop, a small pile of snow at its right side. Blitukus snickered, and pulled the regulator back behind the zero mark. The vehicle stayed at its position, but turned right. He zeroed the regulator, then pressed it forward. The vehicle turned left. Then, he checked the thermometers. The outside temperature was 90 below, the cabin temperature was 30 degrees, and the mechanism temperature read 110 degrees. HE then sat back, and turned a valve on the cieling of the cabin. There was a hiss, and the piston under the cannons front extended, raising the angle of the cannon. When it had raised by about 30 degrees, he shut the valve off, and the cannon rested at that angle. He toggled the cannons magma loop, and slowly a charge of magma built up in the front chamber, causing it to glow with heat. Then, he opened the steam loop to the rear chamber, allowing it to build up decent pressure, then stopping it. It wasn't rapid fire by any means, but it was capable of a fire rate much higher than that of a ballista. He steadied the cannon, and pulled the trigger. Both the valve sealing the barrel and the valve separating the chambers opened simultaneously, and the steam under pressure drove out the magma charge as one lump. It arced up, then came down, landing on the glacier a short distance away, melting through the snow and ice. Then he sealed the valves, allowed another charge to fill, and pressurized the rear chamber.. this time letting it go all the way, the specially designed steam loop allowing for pressures of steam near the failing point of steel. It took longer to ready this shot, but when the maximum charge and pressure had been achieved, Blitukus pulled the trigger. The entire vehicle seemed to recoil slightly, a large puff of steam shooting out of the front of the barrel and rising into the air as the lump of magma flew rapidly into the distance. The magma landed a rather long distance away, splattering on impact, sending little bits of superheated magma scattered about. Blitukus grinned and snickered as the magma scorched through the terrain.

The automatic crossbow swiveled freely and efficiently... but Blitukus realized... in his eagerness to get into the drivers seat of his new vehicle, he had neglected to forge bolts for his crossbow. He pressed the regulator forward a bit, turning the machine left until it once again faced the storage. Then, he switched the reverser forward, and drove towards his home. When he had traveled about half of the way there, Dracha flew over him, and landed in front of him. He immediately yanked the regulator all the way back fully. There was a loud hiss and the gears remeshed in the opposite direction. The treads stopped and the vehicle skidded to a stop, a bit of snow piled in front of it. Blitukus zeroed the regulator, and a burst of steam shot out of the exhaust of the piston, leaving under and behind the vehicle. Blitukus opened the hatch, and stood, poking his head out into the open. Dracha grinned, and spoke, "Got a new toy I see? Nice and shiny, and it's got a big ol' cannon on top too! Good work, I've never seen anything quite like it before." Blitukus replied, "... did you realize that you nearly got yourself flattened?" Dracha laughed, "I knew you'd stop in time, I just wanted to see how you'd react. Besides, its big and heavy but it wouldn't leave a scratch on me." Blitukus replied, "I beg to differ. Not even your might would repel this amount of mass." Dracha stood on her hind legs, spread her wings, and looked down at Blitukus and his machine. She spoke, grinning, full of pride, "Nothin's mightier than a dragon!" Blitukus asked, "Are you able to provide proof?" Dracha stepped back, and lowered herself, speaking, "Sure, go ahead and try to knock me back, I'll end up pushing YOU back, you'll see. I won't even use magic!" Blitukus grinned, and replied, "Ok! Let us see." He sat back down, shut the hatch, and pressed the regulator all the way forward, Drasha charging at him, low to the ground, ready to catch the front of the vehicle.

Yeah... this is so stupid, but heck, it's fun!

When they collided, the sheer momentum of the vehicle broke through her efforts to catch it, the majority of the impact breaking through to land on her head. Blitukus immediately zeroed the regulator, as Dracha stumbled back on her hind legs and fell over, stunned. Blitukus laughed. She spoke, slowly, "... Ow!..." She then shook off the stun, rolling over and standing once more. The armored vehicle had a dent in the front, but it wasn't even very noticeable. She laughed, "Been a long time since I charged into something and ended up getting knocked back! Looks like you win... that machine's got a lot more metal in it than your last one!" Indeed, the armored vehicle lacked the grace and elegance of the flying machine, but it had sheer strength and toughness, and that was what was needed of it. Blitukus nodded, and she saw through the window. She smiled, and spoke, "Well that was fun! I'll be seeing you... probably whenever you return, then. I've just managed to turn some iron into mithril for my cages. Containment is looking up!" Blitukus replied, waving, "Ok, have fun with your zoo!" Dracha replied as she took off, "Sure thing!"

Blitukus continued driving, stopping to correct his course once in a while, until he let the machine slow to a stop in the storage. He shut off all of the generators, and opened the release valve, steam hissing out of the boiler as pressure fell to ambient levels. He opened the hatch, and hopped out, walking back down the tunnels and taking up his pickaxe once more. He silently cursed at the rather blatant oversight. He thought about how much ammunition he would need. He decided on an even number of clips... 10 clips, for a total of 250 bolts. He dug out the needed 5 cassiterite lumps, and remembering the slight bit of malachite present in the stone of the exhausted vein, dug into the stone there after stopping for a drink. Behind the stone lay more malachite. The vein wasn't exhausted, it was interrupted by stone but there was still plenty more copper. He continued mining until he had 5 malachite lumps laying on the floor, breaking through a gem cluster. Then he brought the lumps back to the smelter, and melted the ore down, dumping the slag and pouring the bars. The cave river gushed through the tunnels as it overflowed once again. He forged the bars into bolts, creating a bronze disc that held 6 clips, but dawn was breaking. He moved the bolts to the vehicle, and lowered them through the hatch, placing the loaded disc on the floor and the 4 extra clips on top of it. He stored away several bits of food on the opposite side of the cabin as the clips. Now, properly supplied, he hopped back into the vehicle, and shut the hatch above. He activated the generators and shut the steam vent, allowing steam to build. When it had built sufficiently, he pulled back the reverser, allowing him to turn to face the exit, then pushed it forward, allowing him to drive away. The vehicle continued with no input, clanking as it rolled straight across the snowy glacier. The sun continued to rise, and Blitukus felt drowsy. He sighed through his nose, and stopped the machine, shutting it down. He left the cabin sealed, and then lay back in his chair, allowing himself to fall asleep as quickly as possible. The shut cabin retained heat for quite a while, but unfortunately, it eventually did get rather cold as the metal readily conducted and radiated heat. That day, he had an odd dream... as if he were playing an unnamed evil entity in a game of chess. He plotted strategies and executed them, and over a long period of time, eventually reached a stalemate... When he awoke, he thought about this. This kind of war was cold, but was there a kind of war where nobody ever truly won? He felt sickened at the thought, and drove it out of his mind. He had nothing but himself and his machine with which to face his foes. It wasn't a game of chess when you participated directly in the battle... and Blitukus was alone in this one. He sat up, and shivered. The metal was sapping away his body heat. He started the machine again, and continued driving. He moved about the cabin, trying to warm himself using the heat of the mechanisms. Eventually, despite the bitter cold outside, the cabin warmed due to the magma within the generators below. He passed through the valleys and vast glaciers, following the same path he had taken 3 years ago in reverse order. The glacier eventually gave way to tundra, the tundra to frigid grasslands, isolated in a warm spot in a large valley. Beyond this isolated patch of grasslands lay further tundra. He drove through the muddy shores of a lake, and through the shallowest points of rivers to cross. The armored vehicle was a land vehicle, incapable of travel through deep water, so he was careful in choosing his path to cross. He followed a river through the tundra. He reached a road that led out of the tundra and into the grasslands, into a town of the odd civilization. He approached the town, but noticed dust and smoke rising from it. In the distance, he saw a battle beginning to erupt, dark, iron land and air vehicles roving near the town. There weren't many vehicles... but if the human civilization hadn't advanced to higher technologies with which to defend itself... it wouldn't take many vehicles to eliminate them. Blitukus sighed, growled, and pressed the regulator as far forward as it would go. He was right. He wasn't the only target, and innocents were being slaughtered once again by the murderers. He may be a bit late to arrive, but he would stand in the way of the plans of the criminal dwarves, no matter the mass and speed of said plans he was standing in the way of. These murderers, the ones that ordered his mother dead, were to be held to pay dearly for what they had done, for what they were doing... at last, he would try. Blitukus knew he didn't have a super-weapon, but it was the closest he could come, and it would have to do, no matter what he faced.
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Sorry if I overreacted to your comments. I get nervous sometimes since I really don't want to mess this up.

[ November 08, 2007: Message edited by: AlanL ]

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #170 on: November 09, 2007, 12:06:00 am »

dont worry Alan....you still are making an amazing story.....the idea for a future setting for later could fit really well. It could also fit not so well. But your ideas so far ahve been amazing and holding the mech idea off till the future is better then having it in the steam punk era(in my opinion regular steam mechs would be relatively weak and impossible with the mechanics and the amount of armor needed for protection on the legs).........and that dream blitukus had earlier about the giant portal suspended above the magma might work for a portal to "heaven" that shoots him into the future....


BOID finds a note lying on the ground as he teleports in to facilitate a few ironic deaths "dear bringer. the village I watch over is in the midst of a plague. And it has been said, that you and death are after the same job. Alot of people are about to die here and death will be very busy and distracted. If you wanted that job, why not ironically remove him from the promotion game?"

(i figured id give a hand at your guys rp..if you care to ignore me please do so)

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« Reply #171 on: November 09, 2007, 12:13:00 am »

Thanks  :D

To be honest, that made me feel quite a bit better.

Yeah, I have my ideas but they won't really be anything more than nebulous ideas until they're about to be put into text. I guess it would be better to wait until it starts getting close to really discuss it if it needs discussion.

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« Reply #172 on: November 09, 2007, 02:31:00 pm »

We finally read all of this and the previous incredible stories. When this story is over, we are mandating a Parade in Your Honor.
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« Reply #173 on: November 09, 2007, 03:41:00 pm »

[Generic comment on this story's infinite awesomeness]
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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #174 on: November 09, 2007, 04:41:00 pm »

Thanks, you brought a smile to my face, and I need to smile more often  :)

Well, I've come up with a few solutions, and my confidence is basically restored. On top of it... 3 day weekend! At least for some of those who live in the U.S.

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #175 on: November 09, 2007, 09:33:00 pm »

I may have...done a few things with Grim.Hes a bit distracted like you said, and im far closer to geting the rank of 'Death'.Also, ive finally have a ambition Armok.Some day...I shall be God of IRONY!.
Awesome update.

P.S Thanks for puting up with my role playing Alan.Im have loads of fun.Ive never tryed forum rping before.And better yet, the seting is in the Seigedriven universe.

As your friendly neibrohood evil entity, i bid you farewell...or just goodbye. :P

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #176 on: November 09, 2007, 11:41:00 pm »

Thanks   :)

Anyway... now the battle begins.
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Blitukus leaned forward onto his controls as the armored vehicle charged toward the town at full speed. He slowed as he approached the town, loading the automatic crossbow. There were a total of four vehicles, including two goblin flying machines and two land vehicles... they weren't like Blitukus' armored vehicle, but instead one carried several goblin troops, the other carried little other than a ballista. More goblin mercenaries wielding dwarven equipment.

These dwarves are such cowards! They refuse to even fight their own wars! I've known other dwarves before... and these criminals are a disgrace to their species.

There was a loud racket, and one of the goblin flying machines buzzed overhead. There was a dull panging as several bolts struck Blitukus' armored vehicle, but the bolts ricocheted harmlessly off of the thick steel plating. Blitukus aimed and fired at the flying machine. Several bolts missed, but a few hit, sending small scraps of material flying from the thin armor on the goblin flying machine, the last hit striking the tubes behind the boiler, causing a large puff of steam to rise into the air. The machine shook and stumbled through the sky, but remained aloft and active, trailing steam behind it. Blitukus zeroed the regulator, and let the armored vehicle come to a stop. He leaned into the automatic crossbow, letting his eye peer through the bronze sight. He aimed carefully. The damaged goblin flying machine circled around, and approached Blitukus' armored vehicle directly. This was a very bad move on their part... with their damaged engine, they were powerless to evade as Blitukus took careful aim and fired above the goblins cockpit to hit the sensitive mechanisms behind it. Most bolts were batted away by the rotor or ricocheted off of the cockpit armor and iron engine, but the occasional one sunk into the pipes and mechanisms. A bolt lodged in the gear assembly driving the rotor, immediately jamming it. The goblins rotor seized, sending the goblin flying machine spinning, plummeting to earth. The goblins cheaply made drive piston exploded under the sudden pressure, and burning magma spilled out from under it. The flying machine trailed steam and black smoke as it fell. Blitukus saw the broken machine arc through the sky... it was going to make its 'landing' right on Blitukus' head! He jammed the regulator forward, and the armored vehicle jerked ahead. A large puff of flame came out of the back of the broken machine, and it crashed behind the armored vehicle, its boiler exploding on impact, the shockwave rocking Blitukus' armored vehicle a bit. The fire still hung in the sky, and fell... flaming liquid poured down all over the armored vehicle, and seeped through into the cabin. They had dropped burning oil as a last ditch attack. Blitukus pulled his legs up and zeroed the regulator. Flames sizzled beneath him as the burning oil cooled. Smoke filled the cabin. He opened the hatch and pulled himself out. There was the sound of crossbow fire and the chugging and clanking of steam vehicles in the distance, punctuated by occasional screams. Blitukus looked at the town under siege... looked into his smoking cabin... then looked at the town. He would have to wait for the oil to burn away.

F*CK! Someone needs to invent something for this kind of situation...

The second flying machine was attracted to the smoke. A bolt whizzed by Blitukus. He looked up, and saw the goblin flying machine approaching. Another bolt whizzed by. Blitukus took cover behind the cabin as the goblin flying machine passed overhead. The flying machine turned around, and opened fire once more. A bolt whizzed by, sending up sparks as it ricocheted off of the steel. Blitukus scrambled to take cover behind the cabin. Another bolt whizzed by, and pain shot through Blitukus' arm. He yelled as several drops of blood were sent flying onto the steel. He held his arm as he jumped in front of the cabin, then looked at what had happened. The flying machine flew by overhead. Blitukus' pain rapidly dulled to much less than a typical hit. He saw that his clothes and flesh were somewhat torn, but no bolt was sticking out. That was a grazing shot. He grunted, and pulled himself on top of the cabin, and looked down into the smoke once more...

... F*ck it!

He hopped into the cabin, propping his legs against the wall plating to avoid the small flames below. He left the hatch open, and jammed the regulator forward. He charged the cannon, and allowed steam to build up. Smoke made it difficult to navigate and nearly impossible to aim. He realized the metal he was sitting on had become rather hot... but he focused his attention ahead despite the stinging pain. He saw the silhouette of the flying machine turn and once again approach from the front. He raised the cannon, and despite the smoke and motion, fired. Magma shot out of the muzzle of the cannon, and arced through the air. Blitukus quickly stood upon the chair to view the trajectory of the magma. It would have cleanly missed the flying machine, had the goblin pilot not panicked and pulled up sharply, causing his machine to travel streight into the path of the projectile. The magma directly hit the goblin flying machine, piercing into it and splattering throughout the cockpit and mechanisms. The flying machine became a ball of flame, tumbling through the air. About 2 seconds later, the goblins boiler exploded, causing the goblin flying machine to disintegrate in midair. Flaming bits of armor and iron parts rained down, bouncing off of the ground and bouncing off of the armor of Blitukus' armored vehicle. Blitukus laughed.

Note to self: goblins are the worst pilots in the world.

The flames died in the cabin, and the flow of air due to the hatch being open drove the smoke out. Blitukus seated himself once more, and when the smoke had cleared, closed the hatch above him. Blitukus was rapidly approaching the town, traveling at high speed over the stone road. A goblin troop, clad in leather and light iron armor, heard the approaching machine, and expecting easy targets riding on top of it, sprung from behind a tree and loosed a bolt. The bolt glanced away upon striking the armored vehicles thick plating. The goblin froze there, dropping its crossbow. It mumbled, ".. ah crap!" It turned to jump away, but a fraction of a second later, the treads of the armored vehicle rolled over the goblin, leaving behind a bloody red mush, flattened iron armor, and the mangled remains of a crossbow. Blitukus continued into the village. Many of the villagers were engaged in combat with goblins, some fighting over long distance with bow against crossbow, some fighting up close, swords, axes, and maces clashing. The goblin troop carrier carried several goblin crossbowmen, and the ballista vehicle had its ballista aimed and drawn by steam pistons. Blitukus reached up to charge the cannon, but stopped. If he killed the inhabitants of the vehicles, the vehicle could be reclaimed and put to use against its former owners. He pulled into the front of the town, and pulled the reverser back. He turned to face the troop carrier, and aimed with the automatic crossbow as it drew closer. Both of the goblin vehicles were leaving an exhaust of dark smoke behind them. Apparently they used conventional steam engines, not magma-loop-powered ones. As the troop carrier turned to lay siege upon a not-so-unsuspecting crowd of villagers, Blitukus opened fire into its side. The goblin troops were packed in such a tight group that nearly every hitting bolt struck a goblin, several of their number dropping dead as Blitukus emptied the clip firing at them. Blitukus turned the machine to lead their vehicle, shoved the reverser forward, then shoved the regulator forward. His armored machine rammed into the troop carrier, sending two goblins falling from the opposite side of the carrier and stopping said carrier from moving further. Blitukus zeroed the regulator, and reloaded the automatic crossbow, leaving the empty clip on the floor. Blitukus' armored vehicle rolled back, and the troop carrier continued on without its passengers. Blitukus opened fire, mowing down the two unlucky goblins sitting in the dirt, then aiming to fire into the other side of the troop carrier. SPANG! Something large and heavy struck Blitukus' armored vehicle in the side, denting its armor and causing it to rock sideways slightly. Blitukus ignored it, and fired into the troop carrier. As most of the goblins aboard had been killed, more bolts struck metal this time. The last remaining passenger fell to the dirt as it was struck in the head, and the driver was hit a total of 3 times. The driver gagged, spat up blood, and fell to the dirt, unconscious, leaving the troop carrier to continue unmanned, crashing into a building and stopping there. It hissed and let out steam. The troop carrier could still be salvaged as he had hoped. SPANG! Sparks were shot up into the air and some of the cabins plating was bent, visibly bulging toward Blitukus. Blitukus pulled the reverser back, and turned the machine left to view whatever was attacking him. It was the ballista vehicle, firing large iron arrows at him. Steam sprayed out of it from several points, and a multiple goblin crew loaded another large iron arrow. They quickly launched the arrow. It flew towards Blitukus, and struck the bottom of the front side, punching through the plate and damaging the bronze struts and mechanisms below. The armored vehicle creeked and tilted slightly. Blitukus tried to force the reverser forward... but it wouldn't budge. He growled loudly and readied his cannon once more. As steam and magma built up, the goblins readied another arrow. Blitukus aimed carefully, and was first to fire. The magma struck the ballista, setting the wooden parts ablaze. The !!large arrow!! was released at the same time, flying through the air, soaring over Blitukus' machine, and landing behind it. The goblins, those that survived,  immediately abandoned their flaming vehicle, and ran off into the town.

Blitukus found that although his reverser was jammed, he could still use the regulator and the engine still worked. He turned the machine to face into the town. The goblins, realizing they were now defenseless against the armored vehicle, chased as many humans as possible into an alley. They were regrouping. Blitukus readied the cannon once more, allowing the steam to build up to maximum power, aiming into the crowd of half-fleeing-half-attacking goblins. The goblins bottlenecked in the alley as they chased the villagers. Blitukus aimed the cannon low into the crowd. Several goblins started yelling and the group began to scatter. Blitukus fired, sending the magma lump flying through the air, full speed, splattering as it directly hit several goblins, the splattered bits, traveling at high speed, setting the surrounding goblins on fire. Blitukus began laughing, but his laughter quickly faded. He saw a goblin... a victim of his own fury... still standing after being engulfed in molten rock. Half of the goblins face was missing, revealing the skull beneath, the other half was char black, the eye and ear missing. The goblin was missing an arm, the bone exposed in the other arm. Much of the goblins innards were exposed and hanging out, the skin and muscle having been melted away from its body. Flames and smoke slowly rose from its already char black body. The disfigured entity, no longer in any resemblance to a goblin, stumbled forward two steps, its blackened internal organs hanging out, its charred brain exposed. It then fell to its knees, then slowly fell face first into the dirt, flame engulfing what once was a body, its heart turning into a shriveled cinder, its brain melting away. Blitukus felt deeply disgusted by the sight of this, and felt a gag reflex. Something was truly demonic about what had just occurred. He shut his eyes tightly, took in a deep breath, then sighed it out.

This IS a new kind of war... where "conscription notification" is a euphemism for "ticket to hell, third class".

He felt sadness rising within him, a form of sharp regret. He sighed again, but this feeling was cut short with the shouts, screams, and the sounds of bolts ricocheting and weapons clashing. He would keep fighting... if nothing else than to make sure this war was the last of its kind. He grunted as he heard his hatch being opened. He looked up and stood. The hatch opened and a goblin crossbowman hopped down into the cabin, finding itself unable to aim in such a cramped environment. It swung at Blitukus with its crossbow, but Blitukus cought it and wrestled with the goblin for possession of the crossbow. He clung to the weapon and kicked the goblin in the gut until the goblin was forced to release the crossbow. The goblin fell over, and looked rather sick. Blitukus fired the goblins crossbow into the goblins head at point blank range, killing it right away. Blitukus took up the goblins crossbow, and ratcheted it back, loading one of the dead goblins iron bolts into it. He heard another goblin troop climbing up onto his vehicle. Crossbow in hand, he pulled himself up... just to see the goblin swinging its crossbow down. It clubbed Blitukus in the side of the head with its crossbow, knocking him to the side. The goblin then bashed him in the head, a dull "crack" being heard. Blitukus let himself fall back into the cabin, and found himself semi-conscious... but still wielding a crossbow. As the goblin hopped down into the cabin, Blitukus loosed his bolt, the bolt striking the nearby goblin in the neck. The goblin yelled, fired into the metal plating, then crouched down, rapidly bleeding to death. When the goblin had bled out, it slumped over, face in a pool of its own blood. Blitukus felt his nose bleeding, and the side of his skull was causing him a lot of pain. He had been hit hard, but he was still at least half-conscious.

Blitukus grunted and sat up, proceeding to place the ammo and food up higher as the blood of the dead goblin pooled all around the cabin. He slowly pulled himself to his feet, another goblin climbing up onto his vehicle. He had been swarmed, and was now defenseless against his attackers. He felt a sense of dread. This was not the end he had picked for himself. The goblin pointed its crossbow through the hatch, aiming at Blitukus. Several bolts whizzed overhead. The goblin yelled loudly as multiple bolts sank into it, causing it to drop its crossbow and roll off of Blitukus' vehicle. Blitukus had recovered most of his consciousness, and stood up fully, pulling himself up to the hatch, and looking out. There was a steam vehicle approaching, but not of dwarven or goblin design. It was armored in wood, and sported two crude automatic crossbows, fed by belt rather than clip. It bore the flag of this human civilization. Despite a rather massive headache, Blitukus managed to smile. The humans had adopted his technology. A human army stormed in behind the human vehicle, a squad of marksmen advancing in front of a squad of 6 heavy infantry, which wielded and operated belt-fed automatic crossbows in groups of 3 per weapon, for a total of 2 weapons. Each one of these crossbows was larger, slower and less powerful than Blitukus' original version, as the mechanisms weren't created with such masterful skill and also they required conventional boilers to be wheeled along to supply them with steam as humans hadn't been able to get steel, but they still did the job, and did it at an astonishing rate. The human troops advanced, quickly mowing down the remains of the goblin troops. He, and what was left of the town, had been saved. He slowly exited the cabin, and lowered himself from the top of the tank, still feeling intense pain from his head. He stood there, and the human vehicle slowed to a stop before him. The hatch of the human vehicle opened, and a visibly highly ranked human climbed out. Likely a general, the human wore light iron goggles with crystal glass lenses, had a prominent mustache, and was wearing thick clothing, his clothes adorned with awards from a prolonged service. The general looked at Blitukus in disbelief, and raised his goggles to his forehead. Then, the general stepped down, and approached Blitukus. The general spoke, "It's really you? Blitukus Siegedriven?" Blitukus, standing in front of his armored vehicle, wearing his bronze goggles with green glass lenses, nodded. Blitukus still felt the pain of whatever injuries his head had been subjected to. He couldn't pinpoint the sources of the pain. The general approached, and held out his hand, speaking, "I'm Ori Axebane. It's an honor to meet you, Mr. Siegedriven." Blitukus smiled and shook hands with him, although one could tell Ori was looking at the damaged right side of Blitukus' head. He remembered what his mother said of him... late in his mothers campaign against evils around the world, in the year 1057 to early 1059, a young officer Axebane fought bravely under her northern allies command... and now here he was, 23 years later, general of the northern civilizations army. Ori continued, "We all thought you had died 3 years ago... I never thought I would get a chance to meet you!" Blitukus replied, "I nearly was killed. I escaped to..." Blitukus felt the pain in his head preventing him from speaking further. His jaw had been damaged it seemed. Blitukus touched the right side of his head, and pain shot through it as he touched it. Maybe he had been hit harder than he originally thought. Ori replied, "... yeah, I will await your return from the regions border then?" Blitukus replied, "No, I... I am ok, we must repair and mobilize as... as soon as possible." Ori asked, "You say you're ok?... er, well I don't think you would've said that if you had looked in a mirror." Blitukus responded, "We must continue." Ori looked at Blitukus, and held back laughter. Ori commented, "You remind me of your mother." Blitukus smiled, deeply honored by that. Ori continued, "I'll take care of repairs, go and get healed. You won't be missing out on much." Blitukus felt the right side of his head again. Some of the bone was slightly disfigured, and his slightly deformed eye socket was putting pressure on his right eye. He had been hit harder than he had originally thought. Such are the effects of metal hitting flesh. Now, his face was slightly numb. Blitukus nodded, replying, "Ok, but please be swift, comrade." Ori nodded back. As Blitukus walked away, he looked back and saw the humans salvaging the goblin troop carrier. Ori yelled, "Mechanics! Over here ASAP, and bring the big toolkit, not the little one!" A few seconds later, Ori announced, "Our new ally has turned out to be Blitukus Siegedriven!" A few seconds of near silence passed. Then, Ori could be heard again, "No, I'm not kidding!" The human troops talked among themselves for a few moments, then cheered excitedly. A force had been united against the criminal dwarves. Maybe, if luck was still a loyal ally, there really was a real chance to take down the super-weapon after all.

[ November 09, 2007: Message edited by: AlanL ]

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ricemastah

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #177 on: November 10, 2007, 12:28:00 pm »

Awesome!! My turn to hand you your award Alan!
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« Reply #178 on: November 10, 2007, 12:36:00 pm »

*accepts*

Thanks  :)

Interesting take on the first post idea, and I'm honored to have it happen with one of my own stories  :p

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #179 on: November 10, 2007, 01:10:00 pm »

BEYOND QUALITY!.
Please tell me you plan on makeing more DF storys, and if so, will they be in the Seigedriven universe?.
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quot;You see friend, there are rules here. I make those rules, you follow them, and if you dont follow them, ill stuff that crossbow of yours where the sun dont shine. Whats that? You say were already deep underground?" -Moments before a incompetent dwarf
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