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AlanL

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #120 on: November 01, 2007, 05:25:00 pm »

*ponders the idea of scrambling NORAD by firing it at a satellite*

Thanks  :p

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #121 on: November 01, 2007, 06:09:00 pm »

I've seen your post in which you said you might do something like this in the new DF version. This is actually a very good idea, with all the windmills and water wheels and stuff. If you do, I'm sure you'll get even more "Beyond Quality!" posts.  ;)
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« Reply #122 on: November 01, 2007, 11:56:00 pm »

Thanks   :)

I already have ideas for what I could do in the next version... although, those are just ideas for stories. Until then I still have this to write.
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Time past, and Blitukus' body took well deserved down-time. That day he had a dream almost like a surreal warning. He found himself on the surface of the sun, fire all around. Goblins burned, and hell rained down... but he looked up. There was an entire universe outside of this fire, and far back, behind the stars themselves, he cought a glimpse of his mother. Messages came from the universe down to him, but the fire roared and shattered the messages before they could reach him. Eventually, the universe above seemed to become dimmer, monochrome. It was an eternity in age, and would take no annoyance in waiting patiently for the flames to die down. When Blitukus awoke, he felt the presence of his two conflicting goals. His vengeful feelings pulled him outside toward the battlefield, yet his desire to be with his mother pulled him inside towards the metals and workshops. His mother was beyond time, but time was of the essence when dealing with those who committed those atrocities. He sat up, and rose to his feet.

If only time would work with me rather than against me...

For the sake of justice and the name of all of his comrades, for the name of his mother, he would bring those vile agents of destruction to their own destruction. Still... He pulled out his timepiece. It read "04:57 PM, Felsite 26, 1082". Time, it was a beautiful force, flowing effortlessly and without emotion as empires rose and fell within its wake. He put his timepiece away. It was time to get back to work. He forged the shell of the device, the bomb, a spherical container, designed to hold the maximum pressure possible. Within, he loaded the loop, and set it to activate with the pull of a lever.

It is now summer.

He stopped for a drink then continued to forge the 4 sections, riveting them together as he finished them, the loop mounted on the inside. The inner chamber was spherical, but it had spikes on it that would shoot out when it exploded, causing extra shrapnel damage. Slowly, he slid the finished bomb out to a designated testing site, against the base of the cliff.

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« Reply #123 on: November 02, 2007, 02:53:00 pm »

[insert a repeat of everything I have said about this story here]

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(I'm no ASKII artist, sorry)
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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #124 on: November 02, 2007, 11:39:00 pm »

www.anywherebb.com  has Artscii (sp?), lets you actually draw it and then it spits out the ascii-art version. I'm still thinking of drawing a pictures of Fale and Blitukus using it, but unfortunately I'm not skilled in 2d art     :)

Now's where the massive chunks of not-from-df story come into play. Although, DF will still be involved to the end, it's impractical to render a lot of these scenes in DF. unfortunately, that means no images. It's technically all text anyway, though     :p
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Blitukus began to check all of the flying machines systems after mounting the weapon. He spoke, "We will see. Describe the route, I accept your challenge." Dracha replied, "There's a notch in the mountains to the southwest. The notch marks a path through those mountains. On the other side of that path there's a tunnel full of magma on the inside. The path goes through the tunnel, it's quicker than goin' around. Then there's the valley you passed through on the other side of the tunnel, the route goes through the valley and around the backside of the mountain, over the second range and you end up right back here. Never seen anyone take a flyin' machine through it but I've flown it a few times myself when I want to stretch my wings a bit. That crater of yours'll be the start and finish line." Blitukus nodded, and replied, "That sounds fun!" Dracha yawned and stretched, speaking "Hurry up already!" They laughed.

A minute or two later...

Blitukus finished, and hopped into the cockpit, pressurizing the steam tanks and starting his engines. Dracha backed off as he taxied out, and then he took off. Instead of slowly lifting off, the flying machine seemed to drift upward rapidly thanks to the new generators. He ascended, and tilted forward, allowing the craft to get a decent forward velocity, before switching to horizontal flight. He pulled up to level, flying at a slow speed in a circle. Dracha took off and flew alongside him. They exchanged smiles, and straightened out to fly along the cliffside. When they crossed over the crater, Blitukus firewalled the regulator, but Dracha let off a burst of magical energy and catapulted ahead. She quickly reached top speed, flying rapidly ahead of Blitukus. But, his machine kept accelerating, and accelerating, lunging forward when the turbines began to churn the generators, new ones included. Soon he found himself flying at the same speed as Dracha, and then he began to approach her from behind. They turned to face the southwest mountains, flying upward. Blitukus' engines roared, and he reached maximum speed, the pressure gauges redlining for the first time since his first flight. She seemed surprise as he overtook her and flew ahead, through the clouds and over the mountaintops. They came up to a corner in the path, and Blitukus had to slow down, the momentum of his flying machine forcing him into the outside edge of the corner. Dracha barely had to slow at all, and rounded the inside of the corner with agility, slipping ahead of Blitukus again. But, once the corner had straightened, Blitukus accelerated once more. She tried to block him passing but once again he passed her. The mountain ended in a cliff ahead, another mountain beginning shortly after, the tunnel near the bottom. Dracha retracted her wings and allowed herself to fall forward toward the entrance to the tunnel. Blitukus turned his flying machine upside down and pulled up, flying rapidly toward the ground. In the middle of the maneuver, he rolled right-side-up again, and pulled up. Dracha spread her wings, catching herself before entering the tunnel. Blitukus saw he was falling too fast, and pulled up with full force. He heard a "SHRANG!" as the tail of his flying machine barely scraped against the bottom of the entrance to the tunnel, sending sparks into Drachas face as she entered. Blitukus had to slow down, the tunnels were broad but unfamiliar, luckily lit by a pool of magma at the bottom. Dracha, on the other hand, was fully familiar with the tunnels, and sped ahead, focusing her magic to create an orb of light in front of her to guide the way. Blitukus accelerated once more, but Dracha suddenly rocketed ahead on a magical wave, proceeding out through the light at the end of the tunnel.

So, we're going to play that way?

He lowered his flying machine closer and closer to the magma.

Fumes hovering over the surface... looks kinda flammable!

He shut the back end of the turbines, allowing the gas to collect in the turbines, flowing back into the steam chambers as he allowed the engines to slow. The exit was nearing. He then pressed the lever for the blades tilt all the way, making the blades nearly align themselves with airflow, making them useless as propellers, and the engines quickly slowed to a stop. But, the blades now presented little drag.

This is probably a stupid stunt... I hope it doesn't break it but if it does, then at least it was one hell of a fun ride!

The gas had now entirely replaced the steam in the steam tanks, building up quite a bit at high pressure. Blitukus then opened the rear of the turbines, opened all valves of the pistons, allowing the gas to empty into the turbine, then allowed magma to touch the gas... Suddenly the engines let out a loud BANG, followed by deafening roar, the engines shooting blue flames out of the rear of their turbines. The turbine speed gauges were both maxed out, and Blitukus was firmly pressed against the back of his seat. The engines were stopped, but the machine accelerated, and accelerated, pushing a shockwave of air in front of it that set snow in motion as he exited the tunnel. It kept accelerating, far beyond any speed he had ever seen before. He found the terrain, and even the mountains, moving so fast it was all an entire blur. He kept low to the glacier, but he reached such speeds that any motion outside of straight and level flight felt as if it would cause his craft to disintegrate. He rocketed ahead, the wind feeling as if it would push his face inside of his head. He ducked down, just enough of his head exposed to see the world around. He saw a red streak, rapidly approaching. Air piled up denser and denser on the front of the craft, and for a moment, the steel seeming to warp and bend as if it were paper in the force of the rushing air, the waves of air piled over themselves, creating a solid wall of nothing but shockwave. Dracha smiled, effortlessly drifting, then looked back. Blitukus' flying machine rocketed towards her at an incredible rate, a streaking blur trailing blue flame and dark smoke. The shockwave in front of the craft was sending snow into the sky, leaving a white trail behind his craft. Dracha seemed to freeze. All was silent. A small fraction of a second later...

BOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMM!

Blitukus' machine rocketed ahead of her, the shockwave sending Dracha tumbling through the air, ears painfully ringing. Blitukus' craft rapidly slowed as the magma gas ran out. He waited for the craft to slow to a more sane speed, and engaged the pistons and propellers once more. He sighed, and looked straight ahead, an odd sense of displacement coming to him. He then laughed loudly.

That... for the slightly-over-one-second it lasted... was truly surreal.

He noticed that the very top of his head seemed to be numb. He also noticed that some of his flying machines frame seemed to have been warped and bent, but it wasn't serious. What was serious was the cause of the oddly grey smoke coming out of the engines. The turbine sections of the engines glew a bright orange due to heat, and the turbines refused to turn. He was forced to continue at a slowed rate, but Dracha had been stunned by the shockwave, and also continued at a slowed rate until she fully regained her senses. Blitukus noticed a slight bit of steam escaping the left engine from a missing rivet. Not a good sign. He shrugged and laughed again. If he hadn't have frozen when the craft reached those speeds, it likely wouldn't have flown perfectly straight, and would have disintegrated. But, he was still flying, and still in the race. Dracha regained her senses fully and rapidly approached Blitukus' slowed machine. They were now behind the mountains, and it was the last leg of the route, but several turns complicated it. He noticed an alternative path. Dracha smiles as she once again passed him, this time the she seemed guaranteed to win as Blitukus' turbines had completely seized up due to heat. He saw the designated, winding, long route ahead, and the deviant, short, straight route off to the side. He cleared his throat, looked around, and turned off to his left, taking the deviant path. He gritted his teeth together as he left the smooth glacier surface and flew over jagged rocks through an untraveled canyon. The turbines cooled, and he attempted to get them to start. They wouldn't start. He waited until they cooled completely. They still wouldn't start. He opened the turbine inlet completely and finally the wind forced the turbines to rotate. Once they started to turn again, they turned as they once had. There was a PANG, and the left engine began to lose more steam out of its side as the turbines once again churned the generators. Blitukus' machine once again reached its normal top speed. He exited the dark, jagged tunnel, merging back into the designated path. When he had left the designated path, Dracha was flying quite a bit ahead. Now she rounded the corner in the distance behind him. Blitukus snickered. It was the home stretch, he was flying along the cliffside far ahead, and was guaranteed to win, if dishonorably. Suddenly, he heard a zapping sound. Several second passed, and he heard a flapping. Dracha descended from above him, having seemingly jumped ahead in space. She was now ahead of him. Blitukus looked behind himself, then back ahead. He quickly passed her, but his left engine was still showing signs of trouble. The turbine in its blaze of glory had overstressed some of the generators. There was a loud BANG. The left engine began to spit out dark steam, almost the color of smoke, magma spewing out of the engine, covering the turbine exhaust. The steam pressure gauge fell, and the engine sputtered. He had to reduce the power of the right engine to avoid flat-spinning, and his craft slowed dramatically. Dracha once again rapidly approached. when they crossed the crater once more, ending the race... neither was in the lead. It was a tie.

The engine banged and sputtered once more, and Blitukus growled slightly under his breath, complaining to nobody, "Oh god-dammit!" That was quite a bit of work damaged, but at least it was in a friendly race. Had that happened over the battlefield, he would be resting in pieces in his own personal crater. Realizing this, he smiled once more. He switched to vertical flight, but the engines were refusing to fully support the weight. He turned the craft back to face the storage, and landed while still moving forward just fast enough to keep from stalling. He then skidded down to a taxiing speed, and taxied into the storage tail first, shutting off the engines after stopping. Dracha landed in front of him, and approached the front of his flying machine. She spoke, "Now you got me wantin' a couple of those engines to strap to my back! Never, ever, EVER seen something fly that fast! Not once in the last 3000 years!" Blitukus smiled. She continued, "And when did you learn teleportation? Saw you ahead of me but you never passed me?" Blitukus smiled, shrugged, and replied, "I flew high over the mountainside, outside of your field of view." She pressed him to his seat with her index finger, and spoke, "You took the crap chute didn't you? I've been around long enough to spot a piss-taking a mile away you cheatin' bastard!" Blitukus asked, "But what of your own teleportation stunt?" They hesitated a second, then both laughed.

Blitukus sighed as he looked at the half-broken engine, magma slowly dripping from it. He spoke, "I've got work to do, more armaments to load, two of those explosives to load." Dracha replied, "Off to fight the good fight somewhere?" Blitukus nodded. Dracha spoke, "Then I'll leave you to that. That was fun! Thanks for the run!" Blitukus nodded again, smiled, and waved as they parted. He smiled inwardly and outwardly, his loneliness being at least temporarily satisfied. He hopped out of the cockpit, and inspected the engine. Despite functioning in ways he had never before imagined, and having spewed smoke and magma, the engine was actually not damaged that badly. Some of the generators had ruptured, but he could hammer the bent areas back and fuse the cracks together, mending it. The turbines were char-black, through and through, and were warped due to heat and torque, but still spun efficiently and could easily be warped back. Patching up the short ends and forging new controls to release bombs would take two bars of bronze. He would use the leftover bronze to improve upon the generators to prevent such failures in the future. He was exhausted from the race, and walked back to bed. He lay, and found another book he had never seen before, "Glass Optics" by Tori Sightbend. Within, he found new information he had never seen before, regarding refraction, how to use it, and how to calculate it. Slowly, he let himself fall asleep after reading the first part of it. That day, he had a dream, that seemed almost like a nightmare, but nothing happened to him within it. He saw the damaged statue of his mother. He strolled the barren, desert landscape, charred buildings around, the sky a blood red above him. A zombie goblin seemed to emerge from the ground in front of him. It approached him. He had nothing with which to defend himself against it. He raised his fist, and brought it down as if to strike it over the head at a distance. A bolt of lightning came down from the sky and struck the zombie goblin, causing it to explode, blood and gore spattering everywhere, covering Blitukus. He opened his hand, and looked at the charred ground where the zombie goblin once stood. He awoke, and found the joy of the race had vanished. His flying machine had more than proved itself, and the time for horseplay was over. He had a quest to accomplish. He stood, and left the room. There was still malachite left over, so he brought one lump of malachite from deep in the tunnels back to the smelter, fetching the cassiterite to go with it, and stopping to eat breakfast before smelting them into bronze. As it pooled, he gazed into the molten substance. He realized, the smelter, the forge, the technology, was neither orderly nor chaotic, neither good nor evil. It served to amplify the order or chaos, amplify the good or evil of the one who wields it. He poured the bronze into the bar moulds, making sure the slag got dumped into the magma, and allowed the bronze to cool. Then he brought it up to the storage, set a generator to act as a heat source, then began to forge it into the line, mechanisms, and filler he would need, hammering and welding the ruptured generators back together. He pondered what that was, that shockwave, the sensation of what seemed like nearly infinite speed. Whatever it was, he wouldn't have a source of magma fumes on the battlefield. He noted that bronze and steel expand differently under heat. He used this to make a device that, when heated to high temperatures, would open a valve, releasing water and cooling the engine. The valve would automatically shut when the temperature dropped. He installed this new device, along with modifying the transmission from the turbine to the generators, allowing for the transmission to temporarily disengage if the turbines were to begin spinning too fast. When he was finished with repairs, he hammered mounts for the bombs onto the wings near the fuselage. If they were far out, then the mass of the remaining bomb would disrupt balance if only one were dropped. He connected these mounts to levers within the cockpit. Then, one at a time, he slid the bombs out to the storage, and lifted them, fitting the bombs, with a nearly tedious amount of care and caution, onto their mounts, and latching them in. When he had mounted both, he brought the 4 clips of ammunition and loaded one into the automatic crossbow, resting the other 3 under the seat. The metal of these war machines was cold and hard, seemingly contradicting Blitukus' scorching desire for vengeance.

Then, he realized... he would be corrupting his own technology by using it for solely combat. If he were to perish, it was likely that all of his discoveries would be forgotten, left to rust and turn to dust in this frozen wasteland. He walked back down the tunnel, and dismantled the remains of his archery target. Then, he retrieved some coal dust from the smelter, and proceeded to write down all that he could fit on the flat wooden surfaces. He wrote down the details of his steel-smelting furnace, his steam boiler and engines, the details of production en masse. He ran out of room by the time he got to writing down the design for the flying machine, but what he had written down was enough to begin a technological revolution if placed in the proper hands. He planned in his mind how he would introduce these technologies. He placed faith in the outcome of chaos. He would load these designs into his flying machine, and fly over that odd civilization on his way south. The wood was thin and would glide down, rather than plummet and shatter. He would fly over a town, and chuck it overboard, letting the winds dictate who received the designs. If he were to perish, then just maybe this civilization could use these technologies to stand a fighting chance against the super-weapon. He brought the thin lumber back to his flying machine, and placed it carefully in the cockpit, wedging it in to make sure that it wouldn't blow away unintentionally. He reset the generator back to its original function, inspected the flying machine one last time, then shut the panels. The steel rivets that had been lost were replaced with bronze rivets. It may not be as good as steel but he was in a hurry, and a full compliment of rivets was much better than simply leaving some missing. Once he was satisfied, he once again hopped in the cockpit, finding the fit a bit tighter with all of the other items, and activated the engines. The generators had been repaired, and worked properly, the engines spinning as they should. He taxied once more out onto the glacier. It was now the dead of night. It would likely be the morning by the time he arrived to the southern regions. He throttled up, and the craft, laden down with bombs, munition, and a few design... boards... hesitated to lift off. The engines spun faster with time, and shortly after it did lift off. He found with the extra thrust it was much easier to transition from vertical to horizontal flight and back again. After making that transition and speeding up to a proper cruising speed, he let the aircraft ascend on its own, finding its own preferred altitude slightly above the clouds. He steered it by the stars, directing it southward.

As he let the aircraft cruise, he looked up at the stars. He set his vengeful feelings aside for a moment, and allowed himself to daydream, delving deep into thought, allowing the stars to direct his mind. He was parting the flames, albeit temporarily, to receive one of the universes messages if it wished to send him one. He began to think about the universe and its chaotic nature. Actually, chaos seemed to be the natural tendency of things. A glass would drop, and shatter. Wood would burn, the ashes scattered to the wind. Order could be created, but in order to create a construction, you had to burn fuel, generating chaos that in total outweighed the order. A perfect machine could only hope to break even, and order would never magically appear in a closed space. The universe went from order to chaos as past went to future. Blitukus smiled.

Does the flow of time determine the progress of chaos, or does the progress of chaos determine the flow of time?

He thanked the stars above for this new train of thought, and processed the implications as he drifted on. Soon, he found the lights of towns below. He dislodged the lumber, and dumped the designs as he approached one town. Slowly, the thin, light wood segments tumbled and spiraled downwards, landing cleanly and intact in the towns streets... and in windows, on rooves, in trees, etcetera. Blitukus laughed at the sight of such randomness, but then felt a sense of a boundary come to him. Said broken glass took fuel to mend. A broken glass is broken, and spent fuel was nothing but refuse. As orderly constructs took to random dust and fragments, civilization, hundreds, maybe thousands of years down the road would spend itself, could spend the world in its pursuit of sustenance. Was there such a thing as too much chaos, when nothing useful could come of the environment? He sighed, and tried not to think about it. It was far, far beyond his days when such things would become a concern. For now, he had the deaths of hundreds to avenge. He had his mothers death to avenge.

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« Reply #125 on: November 03, 2007, 01:29:00 pm »

An entropic time, machine, pertum mobile, the circle is closing...

AlanL the awesomeness of awesome awesomenesses.

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« Reply #126 on: November 03, 2007, 05:34:00 pm »

Thanks  :p

I have no clue what a pertum mobile is though.

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« Reply #127 on: November 03, 2007, 05:53:00 pm »

I think itīs spelled "Perpetuum Mobile". Itīs latin, i think, for a machine that never stops. BTW: Best story ever!
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« Reply #128 on: November 03, 2007, 06:00:00 pm »

Thank you  :D

I kind of thought thats what it was but I wasn't sure, thanks for clearing it up.

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« Reply #129 on: November 04, 2007, 01:19:00 am »

I've said time and time again this has turned out better than I thought it would. The thing is, I haven't found a word to describe the magnitude of it. Thank you all for your support  :)

I tried the new versions Dwarf Fortress mode. Thanks to reading about everyones problems, I didn't encounter that many. Magma set-up worked the first time, and I got rid of the imps with nothing but wrestlers (which is, coincidentally, how i whittled it down to a lone inhabitant).
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Blitukus sat back, idly inspecting his automatic crossbow and ammunition as the flying machine continued on. Occasionally he would turn the machine slightly in a course correction. Dawn was breaking. The sun slowly rose, scattering its rays through the atmosphere, skipping off the clouds and surface at a shallow angle. Once again, he soared down from the poles, crossing from the freezing wastes through the temperate woodlands to his scorching homelands. As he traveled, the sun continued to rise. Animals looked up from the surface as the bat-winged steel contraption distantly roared through the sky far above, leaving a trail of light-colored steam behind it. He looked ahead, resting his head on his hand. He noticed he was entering the scorched land that was once called Anthath Sizet. He sighed out of his nose, and looked around. The goblins somehow managed to make flying machines of their own. They were primitive, and their machines would be easy to spot and intercept... if they were within visible range. He thought they would have a mobile army somewhere around, to sift through the wreckage and laugh about the destruction they had caused. Criminals such as them tended to return to the scene of the crime. He spotted a fleet of flying objects in the distance to the west, and changed course to approach. He approached, and noticed he was nearing, but they still seemed rather small. He gripped the trigger of the automatic crossbow, and watched carefully as he passed under the flying objects... nothing more than a flock of birds, forming a bottomless triangle in the sky. He watched them, but something moving, just out of the corner of his eye, triggered his instincts. He quickly looked over in that direction. Something was moving in the distance, the suns rays shifting over its surface. He turned southwest, and flew along the deserts. Whatever it was, it was flying over the suburbs of the old capital. As he approached... he saw their identity. He was coming up behind a fleet of flying machines. They were blimps, 20 feet in length and 3 feet across, ropes slung over their envelopes, carrying a 10 by 3 foot wooden platform each. The platforms each had two engines mounted to it, the broad blades slowly turning not under steam power, but under manual force, slowly pushing the blimp through the air. They were nearly still compared to Blitukus' flying machine. Each blimp had several green figures standing on the platform, one running each engine. He flew past, watching them. Something small parted from one of the blimps, and whizzed through the air. An iron bolt ricocheted off of Blitukus' right engine. Down below, many green figures were scrambling to find cover.

You only make this easier...

Blitukus flew forward, ignoring the blimps. He pulled up, and armed one of the bombs. The bomb creaked and heated to a glowing heat as Blitukus turned around. He saw many of the goblin infantry taking cover in an abandoned marketplace. They were expecting a rain of bolts. They had expected wrong. Blitukus lined up with the abandoned building, and swooped down, pulling the release lever as he neared the bottom of the swoop. The mounting unlatched, and the bomb detached from the flying machine, plummeting towards the surface. The magma-laden bomb punched through the ceiling, and detonated within the building, blowing the roof off and collapsing the walls, sending burning debris into the air. Many !!goblin corpses!! were catapulted away from the explosion, some were impaled with flying shrapnel, and several goblins ran frantically out of the burning, magma-filled wreckage, flaming. They set fire to all that they ran near, and died the most painful death possible, collapsing, occasionally twitching as their bodies lay. One of the goblins unfortunate enough to suffer this fate collapsed 3 feet away from a body of water. Liquid fire spilled slowly through the ruins, setting trees, brush, and the occasional hapless goblin ablaze. Blitukus watched it as he passed by, grinning and snickering. Blitukus armed the second bomb, and turned around.  The goblins below were scrambling behind the buildings. There were odd flying machines, more complex than the blimps, hidden behind the buildings. Three bolts rained down from a blimp above, two lodging themselves within the fuselage of Blitukus' flying machine, one piercing into the engine. Blitukus swooped down, and dropped the second bomb. It exploded on impact with a wall, magma raining down, ruining several flying machines but causing many less casualties than the last. That was the last bomb, Blitukus was down to his automatic crossbow. Several goblins ran under the nearby trees and began shouting and flailing about. Blitukus  wondered what they were doing. Soon, birds took flight from the trees. Birds? Blitukus laughed... BIRDS! He realized he was about to collide with several innocent avians. He pulled up full force and ducked. Several birds smacked into the front of the flying machine, sending feathers and blood into Blitukus' face. One bird was sucked into the left engines turbine, which resulted in a dismembered corpse and several chunks being catapulted out of the back. The flying machine shook, and the left turbine snapped and groaned for a second, the turbine speed meter dropping sharply, losing a third of its full value. The exhaust from the left engine darkened, and its power dropped, but it was still flying with plenty of power. Minor damage, nothing more. Blitukus wiped the bird blood from his goggles. Then, he turned the flying machine around, ascending to meet with the blimps. The blimps had begun to turn around, and their sides faced Blitukus as he lined up.

He faced four blimps, each carrying three goblin crossbowmen in their platform. As Blitukus approached, they fired simultaneously. Blitukus ducked and growled as several bolts sank into the front of his fuselage and into the wings of his machine. The goblin crossbowmen stopped to reload. Blitukus took advantage of this and turned, firing to the side, strafing by the blimps. He fired at the envelope of one blimp, each hit causing a larger impact until the seventh caused the envelope to rupture, sending the platform, and all those aboard, plummeting hundreds of feet. He approached the second blimp nearly head on, firing across its platform. A bloody mist rose as several goblins were hit. They returned fire at the same time, one goblin firing one shot just before his death, the bolt sinking into the tail of Blitukus' flying machine, another, the last alive aboard, firing as Blitukus flew past, the bolt striking the back of the wing, piercing a conduit. The conduit leaked some steam. Blitukus turned around, and fired directly into the sights of that goblin, finishing the goblin off, leaving that blimp to float, unmanned, derelict. The remaining two blimps fired, 3 or the 6 bolts landing. Two of those landed on fuselage plating, and one struck the top of the left engine, piercing a generator. Magma leaked out of the engine and water washed through. The engines power fell and the steam coming out of it darkened further. To keep the aircraft balanced, he reduced the power of the right engine slightly. He turned once again, and fired at the envelope of the blimp in front of him. Like the first, he ruptured that blimps envelope after several shots, sending the platform crashing down, destined to become wreckage on impact. As he approached the last blimp, he fired, and nothing came out. His clip was empty. Two bolts struck the right side of the fuselage, but the third crossbowman was taking his time aiming. Blitukus detached the empty clip, and held it, ready to throw it at the goblins as he flew by. The goblin crossbowman aimed carefully, and loosed his bolt as Blitukus approached. Blitukus immediately felt dread as the bolt whizzed through the air on its precise path. He moved to duck, to turn the craft, to do something, but his impulses were ever so slightly slower than the bolt. The bolt flew towards his head and struck just above his skull with a loud "PANG" as it sunk into the steel behind him. Pain shot through Blitukus' head and down his body. He shut his eyes and yelled in pain, feeling blood trickle down onto his head. He opened his hand, losing hold of the empty clip. He opened his eyes as he realized he had jerked to the side, and immediately shut them again. He was headed straight for the blimp. He braced himself. SH-SHANG! His flying machine jerked to the right, but wasn't sent out of control. He opened his eyes, and turned the flying machine around. His wing had cought on the ropes holding the goblins platform to their envelope, and severed them. The platform dangled vertically below the envelope, being held up by only one side, its former inhabitants plummeting toward the ground. blitukus tried to look down, but pain shot through his head once again as he tried to move. He looked up with his eyes. His right ear had been nailed to the back of the cockpit by an iron bolt, and blood was slowly dripping down his ear, onto his head. He growled, and pulled the bolt out, grunting as he did so. If it had landed only a couple of inches lower, that would've been his brains nailed to the steel plating. He looked over the side of his flying machine, and threw the bloody bolt down toward the ground, holding a slight hope it would fall upon a goblins head. Those odd flying machines spat out steam, and took to the skies, hovering beneath rapidly spinning rotors, a small fan on their tail to regulate their rotation.

Blitukus slowed his flying machine, and turned to face them, loading a new clip of bolts into his automatic crossbow. He fired at them as they fired at him. Bolts whizzed by at shallow angles, many ricocheting off of Blitukus' metal fuselage without sinking in. Many of Blitukus' bolts sunk into the unimportant front of the goblin flying machines, ricocheted off, or were effectively batted away by the rapidly rotating rotors. Blitukus continued firing, but the small goblin flying machines were very agile despite their lack of speed, and evaded Blitukus' sights. If Blitukus wanted a chance at hitting his target, he would have to fight on their level. He pulled up, and switched to vertical flight mode. He slowed down to a near hover, and hovered close to the ground, flying above the streets of the once prosperous town. The goblin flying machines surrounded him but couldn't get below him due to this. Blitukus advanced, charging at one of the goblins machines, firing as he approached. The shots were absorbed by thick wooden and leather armor. He held his fire as he pulled up to avoid a collision. The goblin fired, striking the nose of his flying machine. Blitukus tilted his flying machine to the side, and fired into the cockpit of the goblin flying machine. The goblin shook, gagged, and fell from his seat, the flying machine falling, bouncing off the ground, then crashing on its side, hard ground stopping its rotors. Another goblin was charging in behind him. He firewalled the regulator, making his flying machine jump upwards. The goblin flying machine behind him rushed under him and continued, smashing into a wall, putting a hole in it, but the machine didn't stop running. The pilot was stunned, but the rotor kept turning. He faced another goblin flying machine, and strafed it, trading shots with it. He saw the third remaining goblin trying ot help the first pull himself out of the hole in the wall, but ended up getting tangled in the rubble himself.

I think I'll call you dumb, and you dumber!

They were temporarily out of the way, and he faced one opponent at that moment. Blitukus tilted his craft the other way and forward, approaching as he strafed in. Blitukus held his fire as the goblin pelted his flying machine with bolts. Several more conduits were pierced, and he felt his controls losing a bit of pressure, but it was worth it. He fired into the side of the goblin flying machine, landing several direct hits on the goblins boiler and tail, breaking several valves on its boiler, and jamming the tail fan. The goblin machine relied on its tailfan to counteract the torque of its rotor, so, it began to spin out of control. It smacked into the ground and skidded, but that goblin, even without a tail rotor, refused to give up. No longer did steam escape the boiler of that goblins flying machine. The boiler began to tap and creek. There was a clanking and the sound of stones hitting one another as the other two goblins managed to dislodge themselves from the rubble and take to the air once more. They fired, striking Blitukus' right engine. The engine sputtered and began to spit out grey steam. Blitukus' machine rocked toward the damage engine, and stumbled to the side, but he regained control. He turned, and fired, but once again, nothing came out. He popped the empty clip out and threw the casing at one of the goblins flying machines. Sparks were sent as it ricocheted off of the rotor. He heard a goblin yell. The flying machine he had critically damaged, now behind him, steam spewing out of missing rivets on its boiler, lunged into the air, on a collision course with Blitukus. Blitukus brought his engines to zero power, and fell, letting the enraged goblin whiz by above him. He then firewalled the regulator to catch himself. The enraged goblin collided with his two friends. Blitukus laughed, and loaded another clip. He charged forward, lining up to fire, but saw the two goblins working together to hurl their injured squadmate at Blitukus. The goblins Xrotary flying machineX was hurled at Blitukus. He saw more rivets shoot out of the goblins boiler, and it laughed as it rocketed towards him, black smoke coming out of its engine. Blitukus held his breath and pulled back as hard as he could. He had broken the relief valve on the goblins boiler, and now it was reaching critical pressure. The goblins flying machine struck the bottom of Blitukus' flying machine, and Blitukus felt slammed into his seat with immense force. The goblins boiler erupted with intense force, disintegrating the goblin flying machine, sending flaming fragments flying everywhere. It all seemed a blur to Blitukus. He felt hot steam blow against his face, riding a shockwave, the body of his flying machine torquing and bending. Blitukus was stunned, his flying machine knocked back. He dimly sensed himself smacking into something, and stuff dropped into the cockpit, falling on his lap. He grunted, rubbed his head, and focused until he was no longer stunned, his blurry senses once again returning to clarity. He realized the tail of his flying machine had impaled itself in the wall of a building, dust was in the air and a few bricks had fallen into the cockpit. The other two goblin flying machines had also been blown back, smashed into walls. Blitukus saw the horrid damage that had happened, steam escaping out of his control console, his engines dented up and pierced multiple times, his wings warped and twisted, and much of the steel plating on the bottom of his fuselage had been blown open on top of it. Yet somehow, his engines still spun. He pressed the regulator and flight control forward in an attempt to break free from the wall. The controls were reluctant to move, but Blitukus forced them to. Slowly, the flying machine dragged itself out of the hole in the wall, and kept flying. Somehow, it kept flying. Blitukus laughed. Steel was the toughest metal around. He thought, maybe being the son of Fale Siegedriven, the devices that he made may have just inherited a bit of her toughness through him. He smiled as he faced the stunned and injured goblins. He turned to face one, still stuck in the wall. He fired at the flying machine until its transmission jammed, causing the rotor to seize, leaving it dangling from the wall, its pilot, nearly unconscious, sent tumbling down, becoming impaled in rubble when said pilot landed. The last goblin had just managed to free its flying machine from the building, and when he looked up, he found himself looking right into Blitukus' bloodied face. Blitukus had approached, and was practically nose to nose with the goblin flying machine. Blitukus laughed and grinned, ears laid back. Blitukus spoke, "Goodbye!" The goblin froze in dread, as Blitukus fired his automatic crossbow. Two bolts sank into the goblins forehead, and the goblin fell limp, sliding off of his seat and falling to the ground. The derelict flying machine slowly drifted downwards, and brushed against the ground, tipping over and parting from its rotor as it fell on its side.

Blitukus had defeated them. He continued with his laughing as he ascended away from the ruins. It was going to be a slow ride home. His wings were trash, and his engines would refuse to tilt anyway. He would have to fly in vertical mode the rest of the way. His flying machine shook slightly as it ascended. Blitukus sat back as he slowly rose up closer and closer to the clouds. He noticed the sun becoming blocked. Then, a loud roaring erupted, almost like a horn. There was then the sound of many goblins laughing, yelling, and cussing in their own tongue. A sense of certain, omnipresent gloom came over Blitukus. A flying machine, like nothing he had ever dreamed before, was slowly coming through the clouds. It wasn't just a blimp. It was a zeppelin, a full airship. It had an envelope 100 feet in length, a gondola suspended below 50 feet in length and 25 feet wide. It was powered by 4 steam driven engines, each half as large as Blitukus' entire flying machine. The gondola was open topped, and held a fully crewed ballista within along with a weapon he had never seen before. One of the goblins crewing it yelled down at Blitukus, "This is the end for you!" Blitukus felt his dread rising. It probably was the end for him. No matter, he would go out with a fight even if it was truly the last thing he would do! He pulled back, and aimed upwards. He ignored the goblin crossbowmen, and fired at the zeppelins right rear engine. He fired a continuous burst, puncturing several pipes, causing the engine to sputter and vent steam. A wave of bolts mostly missed him, but several landed, further damaging the front of his wings. He kept firing, the zeppelins engine spewing darker and darker steam until it smoked and flamed, seeming to come apart as Blitukus emptied his clip. He saw himself ascending to the same height as the zeppelin, and reloaded his automatic crossbow. This was his last clip. The goblins yelled furiously as their right rear engine was mangled, and scrambled to take aim at Blitukus. Blitukus turned to distance himself from them, but they fired right at that moment, further mangling the bottom of Blitukus' fuselage and his right wing. Several bolts pierced into the bottom of the right engine, and the turbine finally gave out. The engine sputtered, and lost a significant amount of power, magma and sparks spewing out from it as it trailed black smoke. It clanked as gears ground with one another. The zeppelin ascended once more above the clouds. Blitukus growled, and tried to follow, but his flying machine lost lift and refused to pursue to those heights. Once again, he saw the zeppelin dipping down below the clouds. He took aim on the enormous envelope and opened fire.

Pop goes the weasel!

The envelope seemed to absorb the bolts without becoming punctured or rupturing at all. It was reinforced, a thin leather coat draped over it as well.

... or not?

The zeppelin pulled in front of Blitukus, and they trained their odd weapon on him. When they fired, flame spewed forth from their weapon, engulfing Blitukus' flying machine for a moment. Blitukus ducked, and escaped much of the inferno, but after that moment, the fire was replaced by thick smoke. Blitukus coughed and couldn't see a thing. He tried to ascend as he felt himself suffocating, and eventually ascended above the trail of thick smoke. His fur had been partially blackened in the heat and smoke. Such a weapon could set fire to an entire town, that was for sure, but it wouldn't leave metal melted, energy burns on its victims. This was not the super-weapon, even though it was powerful. He yelled in rage, and fired full auto into the heavily populated gondola of the zeppelin, sinking his bronze bolts into the bodies and craniums of several goblins, but quickly running out of ammo. An enormous projectile whizzed by him. They had fired the ballista, and thankfully, missed. He flew up close to the gondola, and, despite bolts whizzing uncomfortably close to his own cranium, he detached the empty clip and threw it at a goblin, knocking the goblin back, off of the gondola. He then pulled away and turned back to face the zeppelin. They were rapidly loading another ballista arrow. He went to reload... and realized, that was his last clip. He had spent his means for vengeance, and now found himself unable to flee as well. The ballista the goblins had was able to rapidly and accurately aim thanks to steam machinery turning it. They finished reloading, and aimed at Blitukus. Blitukus pushed the regulator as far forward as he could possibly force it, and angled himself upwards, but his flying machine was refusing to move itself. It was too broken to dodge. The goblins loosed the ballista arrow, and it arced up, and fell right towards Blitukus. He was powerless to dodge. The arrow flew right into his flying machines left wing. The left wing parted from the flying machine, and the entire bottom of the left engine was ripped off, gears and generators torn away, left to tumble toward the ground. The left engine sputtered and let out its last turns as it trailed thick black smoke and flame. Blitukus found himself spinning out of control, but, he was above the goblin zeppelin. The goblin zeppelins flame thrower weapon had a large flame tank supplied by several fire snakes. If it were to hit the ground rather hard, the entire zeppelin would burst into flames. His flying machine was done for, but he wasn't... yet. He had one last chance to fulfill his vengeance, that one last chance was his right engine, spewing black smoke and sparks, but still managing to spin. With the last few gasps of steam left in his flying machines control systems, Blitukus directed the spinning near-wreck towards the top of the zeppelin.

Yeah, he was right. This is the end for me. It's the end for him too! Today... What a great day to die!

He laughed, and let himself sit, let his flying machine tumble on its own, not caring to move to change any of it. Blitukus' flying machine punched into the envelope of the zeppelin, rupturing three gas bags and punching a hole through the side of the gondola on its way down. The flying machine spun and tumbled downward, and Blitukus closed his eyes, awaiting his death in anticipation of what would come after. Behind him, the zeppelin, having lost nearly all of its lift, plummeted towards the ground. The roaring of the wind intensified, and Blitukus let out a breath, decided to make that his last one, and refused to inhale afterward.

A few seconds later...

SMASSSSHHHHHS!

CRUNCH!

CRANGGG!

The flying machine crashed through several trees, crashed into the ground, and skidded to a stop, leaving a trail of run down shrubs and mud behind it. During the crash, Blitukus' face was smashed into the console, and he was slammed into his own seat. He felt himself thrown from his connection to reality, and all was a dim, silent, nebulous white.

A few hours later...

Slowly, that nebulous white seemed to dissipate, and Blitukus found himself in a surreal, blurry depiction of reality. He felt rather numb.

Ugh... I think I landed so hard I punched right through hell, looped around, then ended up in heaven! At last... I'm at my final resting place.

The blur slowly faded, and he found himself looking up at at a tree. A bird had landed near him, cawed at him, then flew away. The numbness began to lift, and he found himself stifling a constant yell from intense pain. He had not reached his final resting place. He was ready to die... but the rest of the mortal plane wasn't so keen on letting him go it seemed. He found himself laying within the broken cockpit, mangled steel and mechanisms all around, the broken engines still smoking a bit. He slowly sat up, but still felt rather dizzy and light headed. He found his arm had come detached from his shoulder, and with a grunt, and a yell, forced it back into its socket. His left eye gave a clear image, but his right eye was still blurred. He found his face and much of his body soaked in blood, but much of the bleeding had stopped. Blitukus tried to move, to excavate himself from the wreckage, but yelled again as he discovered several bones in his body had been broken, his legs nearly so. He slowly eased himself out of the seat, sliding his legs out from the collapsed panel, and then carefully, gradually, stepped out of the cockpit, setting an unsure foot on the ground. Then, he eased his other foot down. He stumbled forward, holding his broken arm straight. He stood, and his body seemed to want to dangle over and collapse. Several parts of his skeleton had failed, and the only thing holding his body properly together and upright now was conscious effort and caution. He took his pulse. It was somewhat weak and rapid, but it was still there. He looked at the mangled wreck of his flying machine, engines smoldering, magma stewing below them. He looked at where the zeppelin had crash landed. The wreck of the zeppelin had been burned to a crisp.

Well there goes the whole zeppelin industry!

Blitukus laughed, but it was cut short as he found himself spitting up blood. He found a new sympathy for broken machinery. His body was in many ways broken. He stood, living on borrowed time. He remembered how the magic at the regions border had saved his mothers life in times of peril. The world had given him an opportunity to live. He slowly turned, and forced himself to walk toward the edge of the region. He would take the opportunity. He felt nearly invincible considering what he had just survived, but he realized just how close he came, how close he was, to death. Luck seemed to have fallen in love with him, it seemed. He snickered at the thought, and wore a bloody grin as he walked towards the region border. The fight wasn't over yet. He'd reach the border to heal, and then he would return. He limped his way forward. He promised the world that none of the goblins would survive that day.
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I hope the fact that this is detached from DF isn't a negative point (it won't be detached all the time).

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #130 on: November 04, 2007, 09:43:00 am »

Beyond Quality!
This is just becoming better and better!

And detachment from DF doesn't do anything at all, actually I have found the parts of this story not directly taken from DF to be the best ones.

Also, Draca, could you deliver this document to Blitukus the next time you sees him:

code:
  
for the ammoles gun, inset from number of magma loops (L)
feeding into presure camber (C), feed steam from loops (L2)
into C, when pressure builds up, open directed vent (V),
aim at enemies.

                         /\                            
                     /====/                            
                /-----L--\                              
          ------|        |/\       concept craving, not to scale.
                V    C  L2=/                            
          ------|        |                              
                \--------/                              

Can fire continuously  by having all lops on and the vent open,
or in shorter more powerful bursts by building up pressure before
opening V.
for an increased intensifier...

[the rest of the document is burned to ashes by magma,
it radiates whit a strange felling, like of an age negative
by thousands of years, or as if it wasn't made in this universe at all]


Hope he can make sense of this, and that not the same fate comes to him as to the previous owner...

I really don't want anything that disrupts this story from the path you choses AlanL, not DF, not making me look nicer that I really am, not having to listen to suggestions like the one above, not nothing.
However otherwise I think Blitukus have no reason to be limited on ammo when he have an literary unlimited amount of both molten rock and the power to propel it, no?

Great story, have I said that?

(Edit: page sise mesed up by the code tags, inserted
:s)

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Re: A Kobold's Quest II
« Reply #131 on: November 04, 2007, 10:33:00 am »

I think I could work that in. A hand-held version probably wouldn't work, but it wouldn't necessarily have to be hand-held. In fact, I already had another weapon in mind and this would make an interesting combo.

Thanks for the suggestion, and thanks for the compliment  :)

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« Reply #132 on: November 04, 2007, 12:05:00 pm »

At last, slaughter! Blood for the blood god, skulls for the skull throne! Death to the false emperor, death to the weakling Imperium of man! Now seriously, I'm glad you are a good action writer as well. Good job!

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« Reply #133 on: November 04, 2007, 12:10:00 pm »

Thanks  :D

I was actually thinking the piston would be powered both on extending and on retracting. The Automatic Crossbow was actually a reference to the famous AK, with some of the dynamics of the oldschool gatling gun thrown in.

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« Reply #134 on: November 04, 2007, 12:17:00 pm »

Eh, you saw my previous post I understand. I've seen your design includes a generator in it, which would make all that possible, though I don't think it would be small enough to be held. Mounting it on an aircraft is different thing, however.
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