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[Chevaleresse]

eh, why not, i might do this

Spoiler: Yukimura Hiroki (click to show/hide)

Gender: Female
Sex: Female
Age: 13
Description: A girl with fairly light skin and a rather small frame, even for her age, standing at about 4'4" or 132 cm. She has the unusual combination of somewhat large violet eyes and fine, hip-length silver hair. She's about as well-muscled as you'd expect the average thirteen year old teenage girl to be. Overall, her face lends itself to an impression of looking rather refined and aristocratic. She generally wears a dark-colored or black skirt with a similarly dark, long-sleeved top, both with violet accents to complement her eyes. She will occasionally pair this with leggings, and if she's feeling particularly adventurous (which is rare) she'll get a shorter skirt to achieve grade B zettai ryouiki.

Contrary to her elegant appearance, Hiroki is rather jittery and easy to upset, and doesn't appear to handle stress particularly well. However, she's also stubborn (though easily frustrated, this will rarely cause her to actually give up on something) in the extreme, doubly so if it involves winning an argument or otherwise proving herself correct. She's also in possession of a rather fragile ego. Despite this, or perhaps because of this, she's determined to prove that she's at least equal to everyone else, if not better.
Other: Anyone want to be the guardian for qt ex-idol loli? (ex-idol as in she started as an idol, not that this incarnation used to be an idol.

Spoiler: Umbral Knight (click to show/hide)

Type: Black (Synergy Type)
Description: Hiroki's Avatar is quite bulky, making her appear larger than she really is upon initially sighting her. Its most striking features are the large cannon mounted at about the elbow of the right arm, and the "wings" that are actually an array of thrusters and guns. The cannon is orange and has a hexagonal shape, extending almost down to the feet in a neutral position, with the distinctive yellow and black "caution" pattern in a stripe at the end of it. There's a squarish panel on the back underneath which many of the important systems are housed, though this is of course covered by the heaviest armor. The plating overall is a dark gray, with faulds protecting the waist area. The chest and legs are divided into four plates each. The outer and inner edges of each plate on the chest have blue stripes along them, and similar stripes are found along each joint of the mech. An orange glow can be seen leaking from underneath the plating. The mech also features a somewhat angular helmet covering her whole face, the visor leaving just her eyes and nose visible. The visor darkens in response to intense light. Finally, it also has two shoulder-mounted cannons that can be set to automatic fire or slaved to the main gun.

Stats
Level: 1
XP: 0/100
HP: [30+CON+Level]. HP increases by [CON+Level].
Burst Points: 100

Parameters: 0/18 points to assign, with the cap on stats unaffected by your Avatar Type being Level+6. You gain 4 points per level.
Strength: 4
Dexterity: 1
Agility: 0
Synergy: 6+2
Constitution: 5
Willpower: 2

Powers: You may choose from an Ability, an Armament or a Move. You have 4 slots to choose from, gaining 1 per level; this can either be used to gain a new Armament, Move or Ability or to power up one you already have with more power or a new effect. You can also learn or gain others independent of level by being taught Moves or given Armaments.
Armaments:
-Main Cannon: A hefty hexagonal cannon mounted just below the elbow of her right arm. Sturdy enough to be used for bludgeoning but mostly used for shooting powerful beams. SYN-based when using it for its actual purpose, STR otherwise.
-Shoulder Cannons: Fairly similar to the main cannon, but smaller. More SYN-based damage, and often used in conjunction with the main cannon.
-Auxiliary Guns: Mostly used for defense. They will automatically attempt to shoot down incoming attacks if possible, once again based on SYN. This is most effective on missile and missile-like attacks, and decreases in effectiveness against laser-type strikes.

Abilities:
-Hover: This Avatar actually hovers slightly above the ground in combat. Doesn't actually improve acceleration (probably hurts it, actually), but makes it possible to largely ignore rough terrain and grants small bonuses to melee combat.

Moves: None, yet.

requesting official review

[Bluexdog]

Spoiler: Definitely not a monokuma expy (click to show/hide)

Name: Makoto Kuma

Gender: male
sex: male
Age:16
 
Description: medium black hair, grey eyes, often wears a white and black hoodie with a red lightning bolt on the black side. Makoto is emotional and a semi pacifist (He will only fight when necessary) he is easily angered and or made happy. Makoto loves all animals.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Avatar Name: Obsidian Bear
Type: Black , Earth (Strength)
Description: A rather big bear with obsidian armor. Has one red eye and sharp claws

Stats
Level: 1
XP: 0/100
HP: 35 HP increases by [CON+Level].
Burst Points: 100

Parameters: 18 points to assign, with the cap on stats unaffected by your Avatar Type being Level+6. You gain 4 points per level.

Strength: 5
Dexterity: 4
Agility: 3
Synergy: 1
Constitution: 4
Willpower: 1

Powers: Mountains rage (AOE, 30% chance to stun nearby enemies or allies)

Armaments:

Abilities: Immovable (15% likely to shrug off staggering hits)

Moves: Boulder crusher: Grab an enemy and squeeze the life out of them or at least cause a lot of damage

This good, any help would be appreciated
 

[Twinwolf]

Sex does not refer to sexuality, it refers to what's in your pants.

[Bluexdog]

Fixed it then

[IamanElfCollaborator]

Powers are used to refer to Abilities, Armaments or Moves. They're not a separate category.

Also, he requires a humanoid base form. Ursine base form is a no go.

[Powder Miner]

>don't all go metal guys
>>goes metal
elf plesz

[Twinwolf]

Wait, do we need a color AND an element, or is it one or the other?

[IamanElfCollaborator]

Don't ALL go metal. If we have one or two metals, we should be fine before some arse with a magnetism ability or something shows up.

If not, I'm going to be the first to change. >_>

Wait, do we need a color AND an element, or is it one or the other?

One or the other. Elements, Metals and Colors are different classes of Avatar.

[Twinwolf]

Then Bluexdog has something else to fix

[SOLDIER First]

obsidian literally isn't a metal

[Twinwolf]

I think PN was referring to Elf's character. I was referring to the fact Bluexdog's is both Black and Earth types.

[SOLDIER First]

black is a color, earth is a type
solved

[Twinwolf]

Wait, do we need a color AND an element, or is it one or the other?

One or the other. Elements, Metals and Colors are different classes of Avatar.

[SOLDIER First]

i assumed it worked like Red (Agility Type) in elf's sheets
explain

[Twinwolf]

What I mean is, Bluexdog took both a color and an element. Which isn't allowed.