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[Lermfish]

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[Lermfish]

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[ManMan]

Welcome, new peeps!

When exactly am I?

Hmm, weren't you narrating in second person?

Also, why don't we know our sex, name and age? (I probably didn't pay enough attention)
I'd also leave a suggestion but I'm pretty bad at that.

That was supposed to be italicised to signify the character's internal thoughts. I apologise and will fix it!

Edit: Fixed. And you don't know name, age and appearance yet because I was going to write that in with the story. If it matters then I'll put it in beforehand. Just trying to push my abilities as a writer.

Give suggesting a shot! We all start from somewhere!

Ah well, you don't have to be conditioned by my ignorance! If you wanted to do something with your story, don't be stopped by me!

Try speaking to the guy in the suit.

[TheBiggerFish]

Hmm.

Whether to once again exit stage left...

Or to figure out why London and England are evillll...

Let's do the latter, but we should always be prepared to do the former.

[Lermfish]

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[Lermfish]

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[TheBiggerFish]

Ask it anyway.

[Lermfish]

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[TheBiggerFish]

((Yep.

I mean, I didn't know where it was from, but I did recognize the reference as a reference.))

Yes, joke.  Unless someone suggests something else.

[Lermfish]

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[TheBiggerFish]

"I don't think I want to enjoy my life brainwashed in some dystopian version of England where there's bloody Thought Police straight out of Orwell's 19-[EXPLETIVE]ING-84 if you ask me!

Now even if you do mind, I want out!  I do not consent to having my brain sanitised!  And I want a fair trial!  Also a dozen jammy devils!  And I claim diplomatic immunity!"

Come on, come on, power, do stuff...

[Lermfish]

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[TheBiggerFish]

Hmm...How about somewhere really dark-as-in-shadows?

[ManMan]

How about... I got nothing. Maybe try to return to the afro guy?

[Lermfish]

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