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[BlitzDungeoneer]

nah I'd rather you all die horribly and it's all my fault your tears fuel me!
Okay then do you have any ideas then or I could change the wording and make it so it only affects her specifically.

...literally anything else?

Extra damage from a certain damage type like, I dunno, light or Pure or whatever because unstable soul? Something like Amber's flaw that lessens healing because Cress' nature somehow disrupts it?

Y'know, something that targets her specifically.

[AbstractTraitorHero]

I changed her complication to 25% more damage from bullets and Reckless Endangerment does 60%, more damage.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Name:Cress Rutherland
Age:18
Race:human
Gender/Sex: female ((looks like a dude to her great annoyance))
Description:
Born at a young age to a rich family miss Sutherland grew up protecting the house from burglers and robbers one day she got shot and woke up in the morgue barely alive but with two mysterious brands she realized that she could control soul energy and at the age of 18 wants to be the hero the city will be proud of despite everyone calling them a guy they change their tune ussaly upon hearing her voice.

Perks:
Reckless Endangerment- 60% more damage dealt to enemy's at the cost of taking 25% more damage.
Heroic resolve- Immune to mind control effects their will burns with heroism!
Adrenaline rush-when reduced to 50%hp all stats are buffed by 2 points and she doubles her damage
Everyday hero-she gains fame twice as fast and gains infamy two times slower
Heroic spirit- At 0 HP, she does not lose consciousness and has 20 health before she dies.

Complications:
bullets my only weakness:Cress takes 25℅ more damage from bullets
Stalker- Some superpowers creepizoid is stalking her for probably neferaious purposes 80% chance her stalker ((nemesis)) will show up.

Equipment:
Weapon Name:unleashed spirit!
Weapon Damage: 1d6 (Special)
Type: Chosen
Effects:if an enemy is hit they must roll their resilence to not take a random stat debuff
Description:two oddly shaped birthmarks a dark blue shaped like a raging fire they glow a luminescent blue when activated via tapping them anyone can activate them this way.

Weapon Name:desert eagle
Weapon Damage: 1d8 (physical)
Type: Modifiable
Effects:Headshot + 10℅ critical hit chance when used ((passive upon equiping weapon))
Description: A very standard desert eagle she has the license for it.
   
Armour Name:DIVINTY'S SOUL SHIELD!!
Type:chosen
Effects: None.
Defense Bonus: 2RES, 2 agilty
Description:a bright red octagonal shield surrounding her body it is only visible upon getting hit.

Accessory:Locket
Type:Modifiable
Effects:Mood restorer ((,fluff for now))
Description:a simple heartshaped gold locket around her neck has a photo of her family.

Stats:


Level: 1
XP: 0
HP: 38
Init: 1d20+7
Defense: 4

Stats: 24 Points to assign. The total points one may place in a single stat is 6+Level.
Physical Attack:4
Resilience: 6
Special Attack: 6
Fame/Infamy:2
Agility:6
Knowledge:0

Skills: You may have six skills, not  counting your Basic Attack and Defense skills, which are unmodifiable.
Basic Attack
Basic Defense

Soul drain:Take away 5% of a enemy's health to replenish your own health or boost an attack 1 turn cooldown. (Special)
Hunker down:Cress releases her power to make her shield invulnerable for 2 turns and allow her to try to heal up or escape can only be used once a battle and she can not attack while in it.(special)

Unleashed spirit unleashing a ×5 damage attack at the cost of her passing out after the attack.

Fast hands: + 25% to any blocking action. Passive.

Stunning kick:at x2 less damage she can stun an enemy for 1 turn.
Unstable soul: Boosts her stats for three turns, by 1.5x her Phys. Attack, Spe. Attack and Agility,however she is completly unpredictable and must roll resilence in order to remain in control cool down 3 turns and halfs stats for a turn

Other:has a cat named fluffy it's very nice and likes to follow her around belongs to a rich family who are posting missing posters due to her leaving without explanation has 4000$ in a bank account Likes coffee.

[TheBiggerFish]

Oh geez what have you DONE.

[BlitzDungeoneer]

Oh geez what have you DONE.

whatever could you be talking about, tbf

[SOLDIER First]

To note, you don't have to quote your entire sheet whenever you make a change. It's easier and faster to just post what you think would work for whatever needs changing and edit the sheet after your change gets accepted.

[Twinwolf]

I changed her complication to 25% more damage from bullets

Not nearly enough. Double damage, like all other weaknesses.

[AbstractTraitorHero]

Oh geez what have you DONE.

I had a complication where there was an huge chance of something bad happening when I entered a encounter.

I changed her complication to 25% more damage from bullets

Not nearly enough. Double damage, like all other weaknesses.

She already takes  25% more damage from everything adding 25% more damage taken from bullets meabs she'll take 50% more damage.

[SOLDIER First]

Weak to everything, but especially bullets.
(Plus 75% weakness is... why even)

[AbstractTraitorHero]

Yeah 75% weakness is geez unsurvivable.

[Twinwolf]

...So I think I know who's going to make Sera useful as a tank.

[IamanElfCollaborator]

Yes, and everyone who has a weakness takes double damage from it anyway.

Good god, Cress's sheet, if I'm going to be blunt, is a mess. I know how Emp felt when he did this to Trespassers.

- Adrenaline Rush is both UP (2 points in a stat, not really that helpful compared to the Awaken Modes for the Arcana armours) and useless (she has a shield of invulnerability that lasts for 4 turns, when is she ever going to hit 50% HP?).
- Everyday Hero is useless. Seriously. Fame and Infamy do not work like a gauge in this game.
- Stalker still fucks everyone over. There was a similar flaw in the last game for Sanure's character, but that had a much lower 10% chance AND was justified by the backstory of the character. This flaw just seems to be there to pretty much screw everyone over.
- Unleashed Spirit is seriously broken for this early in the game, simply because it allows for any stat effects to be applied to the enemy using ALL of her attacks that use the weapon. The attack by the same name is also ridiculous in the other direction, purely for being far more useless than equivalent moves that do less damage but don't actually take their user out of the fight.
- Locket's mood restorer. Does that do anything in regards to mechanics? Or is that just fluff? It's vague.
- Hunker Down is seriously, seriously, SERIOUSLY broken. 4 turn invulnerability is damn broken, even if she can't attack or do anything but escape or heal. Also, Spiritual isn't a type of anything in this game.
- Fast Hands doesn't specify WHAT it adds the 25% to. What does it do? Does it make blocks take 25% less damage? It's very, very vague.
- Stunning Kick's damage calculation is unclear. How does one negatively double damage?

[TheBiggerFish]

WIP

Only working on abilities right now.

Spoiler: Coma Girl (click to show/hide)

Name: Caroline Fitzsimmons/Psyche
Age: 18
Race: Caucasian human
Gender/Sex: F/F
Description: A girl in a hospital bed.  Thin, emaciated, on life support, etc.  Black hair, grey eyes.

Perks:
Powerful Psyche A, B :Can summon multiple Protector-type summons (known as Manifestations), at her level.  One of these is always on guard duty over her body, in plainclothes, unless otherwise noted.  Her KNOW and FAME are applied to her non-plainclothes manifestations, not her actual body.

The formula for the number of summons she has available is: 1+(for each level, 1/level), round up at half a manifestation.
At every fifth level, she gains an extra manifestation.
For instance:
Level 1: 1 + 1/1=2
Level 2: 1+1/1+1/2=2.5 round up: 3
Level 3: 1+1/1+1/2+1/3 = 2.83... round up: 3
Level 4: 1+1/1+1/2+1/3+1/4 = 3.083.... round down: 3
Level 5: 1+1/1+1/2+1/3+1/4+1/5 = 3.283.... round down: 3 PLUS EXTRA: 4.
Level 6: 2+ 1/1+1/2+1/3+1/4+1/5+1/6 = 4.25
Etc.

Perfect Memory: Caroline remembers everything, and has a lot of time to spend reading.  Her KNOW is uncapped.

Psychic Replication: Gear placed on any Manifestation may be copied to other Manifestations. 

Force Of Will: Caroline may choose to double the stats of all her Manifestations for one turn, only to halve the number available the next turn, with a floor of two.  If there are only two Manifestations available, halve their intrinsic stats the next turn instead.

Breadth of Mind:Caroline may choose to double the number of Manifestations available to her for two turns, at the cost of halving their bonuses from Synergy and cutting their intrinsic stats in half.

Intrinsic stats are those stats not determined by Caroline's stats.

Complications:
Complete Paralysis: Exactly what it sounds like.  Paralyzed.  Has no stats of her own save Level/XP, FAME and KNOW.

Fameless:Caroline herself has no FAME in FAME checks.  Only her Manifestations.

Requires Life Support Equipment:Exactly what it says on the tin.

Equipment:
Life Support Equipment:Keeps Caroline alive. 

Police Radio:In Caroline's room so that her guard may listen to it for her.  Caroline may manifest at any fight scene.

Lots Of Science Journals: +1 KNO/lvl

Stats:

Level: 1
XP: 0
====
HP: 30
Init: N/A
Defense: N/A

Stats: 24 Points to assign. The total points one may place in a single stat is 6+Level.
Physical Attack:
Resilience:
Special Attack:
Fame/Infamy: 6 [N/A]
Agility:
Knowledge: 6+1 [7]

Skills: You may have six skills, not counting your Basic Attack and Defense skills, which are unmodifiable.
Basic Attack:Psychic Blast - in emergencies, Caroline can unleash raw power at an attacker.  Does KNOWd4.
Basic Defense:Psychic Shell:Summons a shield of 2KNOW.

Manifest (1): Caroline may redeploy Manifestations at her discretion.

Hidden Away (1): Save through succeeding at an opposed (alvl) KNOW v [opponent] KNOW roll, Caroline's body cannot be located.

Resist Psionics (1) (Passive): Upon psionic attack, roll KNOW to resist entirely, separately of any other prescribed check.  This carries to Manifestations, as it is Caroline who controls them.

Telepathy (1) (Passive):Caroline, and by extension Manifestations, can passively speak to and read surface thoughts and emotions of other minds.  She cannot control them (yet?).

Scramble (1): Caroline focuses her telepathic projection upon an individual, causing them to suffer a KNOW penalty to all actions undertaken that turn.  For each level, this ability gains another simultaneous target.

In Case Of Emergency, Panic (1) (Passive):Whenever Caroline is in life-threatening danger, all of her and her Manifestations' attacks have a 1/4th chance of fearing the enemy for 1d2 turns.

Other: Union member.

Spoiler: Manifestation (Protector) (click to show/hide)

Name:Psyche-# (Where # is the number, counting from zero, of the manifestations.  Psyche-0 is always on guard duty.)
Description:Normally, a girl in lightweight combat armor.  In plainclothes, rather similar to Caroline.  Unless she's doing something covert.

Perks:
Speed of Thought: When attacked, either reflexively make a Basic Attack if above 75%+1 HP, or a Basic Defense.

Synergy: Increase all stats by 2 for each other Manifestation on the field.

Complications:
Fragile Psyche: Disappears immediately when reduced to 0 HP, but does not return to the pool until the turn after it disappears.

Level: 1
XP: 0
HP: 30+(7)+(1)+(1) == 38. You gain (RES+New Level) HP every level up.
Init: 1d20+AGI [8]
Defense: [8]/2 = 4

Stat Points: 24/24 points to assign. The total points one may place in a single stat is 6+Level.
Physical Attack: 3
Agility: 7 [8]
Special Attack: 7
Fame/Infamy: 0[7]
Knowledge: 0[17]
Resilience: 7[8]

Basic Attack: Attack with Telekinetic Fists.

Basic Defend:Block, reducing incoming damage by SPL after DEF.  If DEF succeeds in blocking the attack entirely, do SPL damage.

Abilities:

Flurry of Blows(1): Attack SPL-1d4 times, doing (Basic Attack minus SPL) damage each attack.  The attacks may be split between two targets.  Has a 2-turn cooldown on a given Manifestation.  May not be used on the same turn as any other Manifestation using Flurry of Blows.

Sneak Attack (1): Dropkick someone from behind, piercing through SPL worth of DEF.  Has a 1-turn cooldown.  For each other Manifestation performing an attack on this target, increase damage by the level of this summon.

Force Fist (1):Does 2 Basic Attacks.  One-turn cooldown.

Bide (1): Do not act, but negate SPL damage.  The next turn, perform two actions.

Psychic Burst (1): Perform Caroline's Psychic Burst, but take a quarter of the damage.

Equipment:
Armor:
Tactical Armor (Chosen): +1 RES/lvl
Description:It looks like black combat armor, with a helmet.  There is a number emblazoned on the front, inside of Psyche's logo, that corresponds to the manifestation number.

Weapon:
Telekinetic Fists/Boots (Chosen): (lvl)dSPL + SPL
Description:Fists.  Or boots.

Accessory:
Ring of Flight (Chosen): Enables flight, +1 AGI/lvl
Description:A small ring with stylized wings on it.

"Talks like this."

Hey Blitz?  Abilities.

[SOLDIER First]

I would assume Spiritual indicates it's Special, but other than that I dunno.

[AbstractTraitorHero]

She's definitely gonna go underneath 50% HP because of how much damage she's gonna take and she can't just spam that shield it's a once per battle thing so elf if you don't like it then tell me how I can fix it.
Yes spiritual is special

[BlitzDungeoneer]

y'know, i just realised

i dont think you guys actually have any healers, barring maybe tobias if im remembering right