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[TheBiggerFish]

Go to the funeral.

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[origamiscienceguy]

You dusty your suit off (which you had been wearing the entire day) and you make your way to the funeral. There were several marines and many civilians. You look closer and see the college student, the janitor, the redneck, the pilot, and other people you met. You look up to the pulpit and see the president saying some words. "...sacrifice will never be forgotten. God Bless America."

[StrawBarrel]

Remember the sacrifice. Remember the fallen so they live in our hearts, so they can't die.

[germanyfrance]

I think he's talking about our sacrifice. We weren't supposed to live, remember?

[Gwolfski]

''Hia! So that's all we gotta do?''

OR

Take of hat and partain in mourning

[TheBiggerFish]

"Oh carp, I'm late to my own funeral?!"

[origamiscienceguy]

You suddenly realize that you failed to show up for your own funeral! Shameful Display! You run up to the pulpit and say, "Am I too late?"

There is silence, then everybody's jaw drops as they realize who you are. You are swept up and carried through the desert while praise is heaped upon you. It seems the nuke did completely fry every electronic device in the world. Humanity survived. You are hailed as a hero for all eternity, and you truly do live forever as the legacy of what you had done is passed on throughout the generations. After what you did, you really can't die.

THE END

hooray! Please let me know if you have any feedback.

[StrawBarrel]

*claps*

The game was pretty cool, the writing was good, you were creative, other posters were creative so it worked out pretty well. I liked that it was relatively short, a change of pace from most suggestions games around here, which helped us get to a conclusion.

This was the first time I participated in one of your "You Can't Die" games and I have to say it was worth. Usually when trying to come up with suggestion, I forgot the action would always succeed so that was something different to get used to. The only thing I can think you improve on is maybe have a table of contents for the updates or next/previous navigation links. It's not necessary, but it can help people slog through and catch up on readings a lot quicker.

[High tyrol]

I loved it.It was a really zany and fun game.this story is really well written.

[TheBiggerFish]

And we didn't actually die!

[Gwolfski]

When's the next one?

This one was great!

[origamiscienceguy]

When's the next one?

Whenever I feel up to it. Don't want to get burned out.