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Author Topic: Rise from Dust (OOC/Applications)  (Read 3890 times)

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Re: Rise from Dust (God Game)
« Reply #15 on: January 13, 2016, 06:30:35 pm »

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Re: Rise from Dust (God Game)
« Reply #16 on: January 13, 2016, 06:33:48 pm »

It was more worthless decoration then anything so i can get rid of it so ill fix the run on i can put it in bullet points if you want?
 i'll try to fix the errors i mainly use a text to speech cause of my disgraphia so ill take some time to fix the errors.

I could sort things out for you once I get back from class, if you would like me to do so.
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Re: Rise from Dust (God Game)
« Reply #17 on: January 13, 2016, 06:41:41 pm »

I think i made it better!
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Re: Rise from Dust (God Game)
« Reply #18 on: January 13, 2016, 06:51:05 pm »

Eastern continent; hilly steppes in the middle. Necromancy? Oh hell yes.
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Re: Rise from Dust (God Game)
« Reply #19 on: January 13, 2016, 09:20:11 pm »

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Re: Rise from Dust (God Game)
« Reply #20 on: January 13, 2016, 10:29:31 pm »

Something about Kara makes the human supremacist in me want to make a demigod just so I have a chance at killing her (or at least, at making her realize that she's not invincible).

And also the Queen of Thrones. It's probably due to the part in which she acts like a short-sighted, xenophobic fool. And then thinks that the retaliatory strike against the Dryads and all the bloodshed (uh, resinshed?) was the council's fault when it's completely her responsibility.

Too bad that I don't have the creativity for god games.

... or maybe I do. Hmm...
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Re: Rise from Dust (God Game)
« Reply #21 on: January 13, 2016, 10:43:51 pm »

Something about Kara makes the human supremacist in me want to make a demigod just so I have a chance at killing her (or at least, at making her realize that she's not invincible).

And also the Queen of Thrones. It's probably due to the part in which she acts like a short-sighted, xenophobic fool. And then thinks that the retaliatory strike against the Dryads and all the bloodshed (uh, resinshed?) was the council's fault when it's completely her responsibility.

Too bad that I don't have the creativity for god games.

... or maybe I do. Hmm...

I would prefer if the one you decide to target would be the former of those two individuals, if you decide to go through with the character creation.  I have something planned for the Queen of Thorns...
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Re: Rise from Dust (God Game)
« Reply #22 on: January 13, 2016, 11:34:01 pm »

Got it, Overgod.

I've started writing up a sheet. I don't think I'm particularly skilled at making interesting characters, but I'll try.
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« Reply #23 on: January 14, 2016, 12:37:23 am »

Very interesting backstory you have here.  Tells quite a bit of how your character acts.  Very nice.  Might be good to have it end when just when she gains power, at the start of reforming the tribes.  Gives something for you to work towards at the start of the game.

Ah yeah, can do. I more or less went back and added the parts at the end in editing because I thought you wanted us to start with our followers already worshiping us. (Also I added the parts about thorns flocking to her because I was afraid that I'd start with a tribe decimated by warfare so I wanted to add some fluff reason for starting with an actual population >.>)

And also the Queen of Thrones. It's probably due to the part in which she acts like a short-sighted, xenophobic fool. And then thinks that the retaliatory strike against the Dryads and all the bloodshed (uh, resinshed?) was the council's fault when it's completely her responsibility.

Hah, yeah. I had planned on making her slightly less xenophobic as the game went on, but yeah, she's certainly like, a bad person. I wouldn't be surprised if she ended up opposed to other gods at some point during the game (if she survives whatever nasty pve things the gm has in mind)

Edit: Although thinking about it, I'm currently the only applicant on the western continent, so there might not be any reason for me to conflict with other players.
 
I would prefer if the one you decide to target would be the former of those two individuals, if you decide to go through with the character creation.  I have something planned for the Queen of Thorns...

... Speaking of the devil.... The GM saying he has plans for your character is always ether a good thing or a really really bad thing. RIP Queen of Thorns.
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Re: Rise from Dust (God Game)
« Reply #24 on: January 14, 2016, 01:41:45 pm »

Hm... Maybe the Reclaimers scavenge around the outskirts of the city, or in some country villages?
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Re: Rise from Dust (God Game)
« Reply #25 on: January 14, 2016, 04:26:01 pm »

Hm... Maybe the Reclaimers scavenge around the outskirts of the city, or in some country villages?

Could have found one they believe to be on the lesser end of the danger spectrum, relatively, and are working on getting inside then reclaiming it.  Would make the visions you get quite valuable to the efforts.  If you leave it so the actual content of your visions is random, you could slowly train to focus on the ruin in question.

Ah yeah, can do. I more or less went back and added the parts at the end in editing because I thought you wanted us to start with our followers already worshiping us. (Also I added the parts about thorns flocking to her because I was afraid that I'd start with a tribe decimated by warfare so I wanted to add some fluff reason for starting with an actual population >.>)

Really, the only lines that would be needed to be removed are the last two in the final paragraph (After "In the years that followed...") and replace it with her dreams of the future or something similar.

... Speaking of the devil.... The GM saying he has plans for your character is always ether a good thing or a really really bad thing. RIP Queen of Thorns.

Let me just say, I am glad you stated there were survivors of both conflicts between the Blackstone and the Rose tribes.  Both helped me out with creating some future conflicts for your character and a backstory for the Metroidvania game's protagonist.



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As I mentioned priorly, would prefer a bit more detail with the Early Life.  If you don't have any real ideas, use it to build up their culture, detail how he was trained to become the chieftain, and write up the events that led his power awakening.  Maybe include as to whether he hid it or used it legitimize himself further, etc.

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Thank you, that helps out quite a bit with the legibility.


Fairly interesting.  I see that conflict will be fairly present in the game.  Going for a god of War or Conquest I'm guessing?
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Re: Rise from Dust (God Game)
« Reply #26 on: January 14, 2016, 05:59:15 pm »

Changed my mind on submitting a character. Can't figure out a backstory I'd be satisfied with. Not to mention the fact that my role-playing prowess and creativity are rather low.

I'll be watching though.
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Re: Rise from Dust (OOC/Applications)
« Reply #27 on: January 16, 2016, 06:04:37 pm »

So then, when are you thinking we're going to start the game?
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« Reply #28 on: January 16, 2016, 06:27:40 pm »

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Re: Rise from Dust (OOC/Applications)
« Reply #29 on: January 16, 2016, 09:01:51 pm »

So then, when are you thinking we're going to start the game?

Probably launch it on either Monday or Tuesday.  Going to only have 3 demigods at the start so I'm not overwhelmed.  Got an 18 hour semester, story I am rewriting, another game I am running besides this one, a couple stories I want to read, and there's going to be a reset soon on a minecraft server I go on from time to time (last time was roughly 3 years ago, if I recall correctly).
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