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Author Topic: The Chronicles of Clan Stonemane - The Rise and Fall of Fortress Stonemane  (Read 9641 times)

Railick Stonemane

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Re: The Chronicles of Clan Stonemane - The Horde Prepares
« Reply #90 on: June 22, 2008, 01:01:53 am »

Egads! What happened to the forums?! :P It's been a long time since I've had any time at all to write onto this story and I'm so sorry! I do have the net back at home now and work is starting to calm down finally, though I don't know how long it will last. I'm really pissed at myself for not finding time to right this.

Mah little boy is over 20 pounds now and he's just about ready to crawl ^_^ My daughter is old enough to say I love you too and she loves to pat Isaiah on the head and kiss him and sometimes tell him to "sut up!" When he's crying to much :P

I will do everything in my power to finish this story one day, if you still want it.
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martinuzz

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Re: The Chronicles of Clan Stonemane - The Horde Prepares
« Reply #91 on: June 22, 2008, 04:14:13 am »

Still wanting. Yep. New forums. You've missed out on The Great Move.
Good to hear your kid is doing well. Crawling already! Before you know it he'll be playing DF!

Oh.. If you would want to edit some of your old posts for whatever reason, think twice.
The forum transfer has left some junk-scripting when you 'modify' an old message. (old being before 15th june). This causes the layout to be screwed-up, which takes some time to fix.
« Last Edit: June 22, 2008, 04:18:44 am by martinuzz »
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Railick Stonemane

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Re: The Chronicles of Clan Stonemane - The Horde Prepares
« Reply #92 on: June 22, 2008, 12:13:22 pm »

Thanks for the warning! I lost my entire story document with all my fixes ect. The only copy of this story left is on this forum :P
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Armok

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Re: The Chronicles of Clan Stonemane - The Horde Prepares
« Reply #93 on: June 22, 2008, 03:20:21 pm »

Does this mean we might finally get the continuation of this soon?
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Railick Stonemane

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Re: The Chronicles of Clan Stonemane - The Horde Prepares
« Reply #94 on: June 22, 2008, 04:06:37 pm »

Maybe, if I feel the need  :o And I get some free time, which is much less likely. One good thing though, for some reason my spell checker works in forums now live, I dunno if that is a forum feature or a firefox feature or a microsoft office feature, regardless it is helpful :)
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martinuzz

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Re: The Chronicles of Clan Stonemane - The Horde Prepares
« Reply #95 on: June 22, 2008, 06:26:52 pm »

While modifying an old message messes up the layout, copy-pasting directly from the forum works fine.
I do this to backup my story in a Word document. Only the pictures need to be moved a bit for the layout in Word.

Hope you find some time to write soon!
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Railick Stonemane

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« Reply #96 on: June 09, 2009, 10:21:55 pm »

     The first wave of goblins to make it past the traps were met with stiff resistance. As they rounded corners they were smashed in the face with brutal hammers, speared with crude staffs with iron nails lashed onto them, and hacked with axes meant to chop wood. Soon the goblins realized these were not more traps, but solid enemies they could fight back against and kill. As the first defenders were overrun they fell back towards Armok’s ally only to be replaced by the next line of dwarves. Just a few dwarves could hold the narrow tunnels against countless enemies before they were forced to flee deeper, allowing their fresher replacements to take up the battle while they rested.

    The goblins on the other hand had no such rest; they were constantly pushed forward in the tight confines of the dwarven tunnels. These warriors lived in the same mountain, but were used to living in wide open caverns with high ceilings. Those that were not afraid of tight spaces quickly became so as they were sprayed with green blood and their ears were filled the screams of their fallen comrades. Of course the goblins could care less for their fallen kin, all they wanted was blood. This ignoble but fierce drive to carry on was their biggest weakness. They were fighting for nothing, nothing but the thrill of battle. The dwarves on the other hand were fighting for their very lives and the future of their people.
     
     The first platoon of goblins to reach Armok’s alley had to squat down to fit inside. Inside their large caverns they had grown lanky and tall. All the smaller goblins were killed in the orgies of violence the nights before and only the tallest and strongest remain. To a dwarf height had nothing to do with strength, and they were more than happy to spear the squatting goblins right in the face the second they had the chance. For hours the battle carried on until the goblins could no longer get into the ally past the corpses of their fallen warriors.

     The dwarves were more than happen to be trapped inside the ally; they could rest while their enemy tried to dig away all the corpses. When those warriors did finally clear the way they would meet even more fierce resistance and soon their bodies would be the ones clogging the passage way. In this way the final defense of the dwarven halls were a success. Those last few goblins finally gave up and decided to leave the tunnels; most were killed by random traps that didn’t go off correctly the first time they were sprung. The rest met their fate when the now dismounted Baltrog saw them exit the entry way. 
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Re: The Chronicles of Clan Stonemane - The Horde Prepares
« Reply #97 on: June 09, 2009, 10:34:45 pm »

It's been a year?!? I'm going to read this again.
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Railick Stonemane

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Re: The Chronicles of Clan Stonemane - The Horde Prepares
« Reply #98 on: June 09, 2009, 10:37:24 pm »

Since my last story update it has actually been a year and six months. . .  sorry ;P
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Railick Stonemane

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Re: The Chronicles of Clan Stonemane - The Horde Prepares
« Reply #99 on: June 09, 2009, 11:29:31 pm »

As the flow of warriors suddenly ended the dwarves declared the battle a victory, even though they did not believe the war to be over. Tindel was the first to force his way out of Armok’s ally and with a band of several brave dwarves from the back of the tunnel he set out to scout the rest of the fortress. Stonemane the Brave was now the land of the dead, and what goblins were still alive met with a merciful end as the head of Tindel’s hammer smashed out their brains. Finally the dwarf decided to check outside to see what remained of the enemy’s army. He did not expect to find any remaining soldiers, but what he did find was much more dangerous.

There was Baltrog, standing among the corpses of his own solders. His once mighty giant cave spider lay dead, punishment from the goblin's dark Gods with whom he no longer held any favor. With his defeat had gone his special abilities, even the darkest of Gods no longer held faith in Baltrog's abilities. Still he towered higher than any Goblin Tindel had ever heard of, and at once he knew that he was out matched. The giant goblin saw him as he poked his head out of the main entry tunnel and began to stalk his way at once. Though the two enemies did not share a common language that was spoken, their body language was more than enough to allow communication of the only thing that mattered.

Baltrog was coming to kill Tindel and his three dwarven companies, and maybe after that he’d go inside and kill the rest or just wait for them to come out to check on their missing comrades. The dwarves ran outside the entrance and quickly surrounded the menacing monster. Four on one were normally good odds, especially if the one was a goblin and the four were dwarves. In this case however this did not hold true. This battle would be the single most epic combat between dwarves and goblins in the history of the world and would not be repeated in the eons to come.

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Railick Stonemane

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Re: The Chronicles of Clan Stonemane - The Horde Prepares
« Reply #100 on: June 09, 2009, 11:46:07 pm »

Progress Report : I've reclaimed the entire story from the forum and saved it into a word document.


My babies are 2 years and 6 months old and 1 years and 6 months old. Gabby is talking up a storm and Isaiah is starting to talk as well. I just bought a home and I have a stable internet connection. I still have this story in my head and am more determined than ever to get it out.
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« Reply #101 on: June 10, 2009, 12:31:28 am »

I must say I just read through your story this night and am amazed by the quality of it, its making me want to start writing again to. Bravo on getting a house and the internet connection as well, I'm sure everyone else will be happy to.
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« Reply #102 on: June 10, 2009, 03:07:10 am »

Haven't read the new parts yet, will have to reread the whole thing to remember, I'm just posting now to express my great approval and awe.

I had written this off as dead and forgotten, NO ONE resumes a story after this amount of time, such things simply does not happen, and certainly not for things like fan arts in a forum. but you proved me wrong, and showed a continuity of intent, will, and memory that I have only otherwise seen in the likes of toady one himself.

Railick Stonemane, you are made of awesome.  :D
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« Reply #103 on: June 10, 2009, 10:48:16 am »

You are back??? No way! I'm so glad to see you post again, I will have to catch up on any new parts
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« Reply #104 on: June 10, 2009, 02:40:15 pm »

I just read trought the parts you've completed, and I must agree with Armok, this is fantastic....

You've managed to capture the spirit of the game down to the tinies detail, the characters are interesting and feel "real", and despite you trying to convince us otherwise, your writing is suberb.

I'm trying to come up with some sort of silly remark using dwarven logic (Masterwork story with hanging rings of awesome etc...), but none of them do you justice....

The only praise I can give has already been said multiple times, but this is indeed Beond Quality!
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