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Voting closed: July 01, 2016, 11:25:29 pm

[Twinwolf]

Also; a portrait for your character, like the ones we've been using. Most games don't require them officially, but your chances of getting in are basically zero if you don't have one.

[Swordstar]

But others can make those for you if you need help (hiiiiiiiii~) so feel free to ask if you need help. Also if you need help for anything else

[AbstractTraitorHero]

 character sheet:

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Name:Axel Clayden
Class:Scavenger
Class Special:
Character Specific Skill:Fortune
Personal fault: why lass oh why within 3 tiles of a female enemy unit axel loses -10HIT&EVA
Personal skill:you can thank the lord when within 3 tiles of an allied female unit (includes allied female npcs) Gain +15HIT
\\ Personal Skill:Don't Die!:if a high bonded character (A) (S) is in the state of dying (the bleed out stage) Axis gains +10HIT&EVA.
Personal skill III:I guess this curse is good for something. if under attack from dark magic Axel gains +2 RES
 
Preferred Stats:Skill,Luck
Progression spent: 320/330%
Weapon  Skill:  1 Sword Subcategory  (D), 1 Dark Subcategory,  Sword (D), Dark (D)
Luck special:  Lockpick   Scavenge  Gold   Passive Effect The  first  time  a  Scavenger  lands  an attack  on an enemy  target,  they  steal  a  sum  of gold,  equal  to 100 from  First  Tier  enemies, and 200 from  Promoted enemies.  A  Scavenger can  only  steal  from  a  particular enemy  once  per battle,  but  can  potentially  steal  from  every  deployed enemy  on the  field.   Power of the  Underdog   Passive Effect The  unit  with this  skill  gains  a  +1 bonus  to DMG  and  +5 to  Hit  and Evasion  for every  Total  Level  the enemy  has  over them.  This  caps  at  +5 DMG  and  +25 Hit  and Evasion.  Promotes  To:  Wanderer,  Bounty  hunter
Base  Stats:   
HP  17  (50%)
STR  4   (30%)
MAG  3   (50%)
SKI  5   (%50)
CON 6 
AID 5   
LUC  5   (35%)
DEF  4  (35%)
RES  3   (40%)
SPD  7   (40%)
MOV 5
Chosen E Rank Weapon:Iron Dagger
Backstory (3):
- Born as a noble heir to a now dead house that originated in gregoria and moved to the starting country before they died off due to curses betrayals and foul magic he is now all that remains the lord of the house being the only one left
- Cursed to sound happy and chipper in tone of voice until the day they die a bloodline curse that can only be fixed by finding ones true companions and overcoming and acceptings ones shortcomings no one has ever succeded and thus the curse remains maybe it will finally end?
- Cursed to have their soul eternally tortured while alive and into death where he will become an undead monstrosity he must revive his house for the curse to end this is extremely similar to the Gregorian curse and is most likely a more extreme version this also means Axel is part gregorian and that his family must have started there making his family not incredibly old and maybe the reason why his family was killed.
 
Beliefs (3):
- Life in a word pain eternal pain not that death will be any better...but i won't give up becuase of that.
- Always be polite to the ladies they will save though from a great curse.
- if you must die die to protect what is precious to you cherish everymoment for your time with those things and people will be the best moments in your life.
 
Goals (3):
- Restore the house and end the curse.
- Protect and if nessecary die for that which you cherish
- to attain real happyness for once in his life.

Edit he is a scavenger
And it is most likely done if the math is correct now.

But others can make those for you if you need help (hiiiiiiiii~) so feel free to ask if you need help. Also if you need help for anything else

I'm definitely gonna need help with portraits
His appearence

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Axel is a young 19 year old and it shows being 5ft5 with a youthful but not childish face with wide dilated black eyes clearly the result of the curse.
 he wears a tattered banner on his back wearing it much like a cloak it has his familys symbol on it (a purple sword surrounded by green sickles) this symbol is also on his  cloth shirt in the center of it but it is other wise plain white.
In points
- Dilated eyes so dilated that his entire eye looks black
-white cloth shirt with large family insignia in the center (a purple downwards facing sword surrounded by green scythes
-Neck length dull red hair swept to the left side of his face.
-a quite youthful angular face that shows some hardship most notably his right cheek which bears several intercrossing scars
-5ft5 feet tall
-Wears a tattered blue banner with the family insignia on it like a cloak on his back.
-He does not appear to wear any armor besides the cloth clothes he wears
 His pants are simple and green and his hair is a dull red and hangs around his face in sideswept bangs the back of his hair being neck length.

[Blade Master Model 42]

Okay, you seem to have confused character and personal skills, so you'll need to fix that. Also might want to touch up your formatting. You have a lot of missing spaces and traditionally the stats are stacked vertically, rather than horizontally.

[Swordstar]

Also, everyone is starting as first class, not trainee class so you'll want either myrm, merc (we have one already) or fencer. Honestly, if you want swords, a thief class might be a better option. We don't have one of those and those are always useful

Edit: Also that Personal fault is wayyyyyyyyy strong and I would suggest a) changing it to within 3 squares of 3 female enemies and b) reducing the effect drastically. A standard thing is like -15 hit, -10 hit/evd, -2 def or res, etc.

[GiglameshDespair]

Posting my new character.

Spoiler: Knight Mercury (click to show/hide)

"I beseech thee, listen! Though mine eyes are sightless, thou art more blind than I."
Name: Mercury
Class: Knight
Character Specific Skill: Charisma
Personal Fault: Exchange of ills: poison lasts 2 more turns.
Personal Skill: Grit thy teeth: When enemy has more str than mag, +2 def
\ Personal Skill: Steel thy soul: When enemy has more mag than str, +2 res
\\ Personal Skill:
 
Preferred Stats: def hp
Proficiency: Swords D, Thrust C
Progression spent: /330%
 
HP 22 (45%)
STR 5  (50%)
MAG 0
SKL 3 (50%)
CON 9
AID 8
LUK 1 (20%)
DEF 9 (45%)
RES 0 (+2=2)(60%)
SPD 2 (+2=4)(60%)
MOV 4
 
Chosen E Rank Weapon:
Iron Blade | Crsh (E) | 1 | 8 | 9 | 70 | 0 | 45
Iron Knife | Side (E) | 1-2 | 5 | 4 | 90 | 0 | 40

Backstory (3):
- Mercury was born to an esteemed family (and a different name) in Uxanin, but she was a strange child, knowing things she shouldn't, learning things she wasn't taught. Being blind was no hindrance. She disturbed her mother terribly, and eventually she was sent away to live with others. She spent almost all of her time being read ancient story-books in the library of the mansion there.
- She lived (and was studied) briefly in Gregnar as a child, with distant family in-laws, where her talents as a seer were recognised and she learned a way to focus magic inwards. She'd never cast a spell, but her flesh would be strong as iron.
- She came back to live in her home nation, Uxanin, and made her talents available. Unfortunately, this may have caught the wrong attention...
 
Beliefs (3):
- Uxanin must end up united if it is to prosper as a nation.
- That while she sees the future, it can be changed for good or worse.
- The idea that one weapon is always superior is a silly, outdated notion, and demonstrably false.
 
Goals (3):
- Unite Uxanin.
- Gain safety and security for herself.
- To discover the reason why she is a seer.

[AbstractTraitorHero]

Okay i think i fixed the sheet now how do i get a mug.

[Twinwolf]

Alright:

You still have "You can thank the lord" after Fortune in the sheet.
"You can thank the lord" is way too strong. Also generally personal skills only effect the unit with them, and don't heal at all.
"Young lass you wound me so" is still stupidly strong. -15 hit is enough.
"My soul or my friends? Well, that's easy" is also strong. Percentages usually aren't used, move bonus is only ever +1, hit is only ever +15 or +10, and you can only have one effect.
Personal skills triggered on death or causing death are not a thing. And the same issue of only effecting the unit with them.

As for the portrait (or "mug"): Describe the character's appearance, and someone will probably make it for you.

[Swordstar]

Yeah, ok, all your personal skills and faults need to be reworked. Go look at other sheets for examples of those to see what sort of things you're looking for.

[AbstractTraitorHero]

Yeah, ok, all your personal skills and faults need to be reworked. Go look at other sheets for examples of those to see what sort of things you're looking for.

I think I've finally made them reasonable.

[F.O.E.]

Yeah, ok, all your personal skills and faults need to be reworked. Go look at other sheets for examples of those to see what sort of things you're looking for.

I think I've finally made them reasonable.

Spoiler: no (click to show/hide)

no

[F.O.E.]

okay but seriously, -1 skill is hardly a loss but the rest is actually kinda okay
not sure how Xanmy feels about moves PSs and, either way, it'd be either the 2 skill or the 1 move; personally, I'd change the skill to +15 hit or +10 hit/evd
there's no way you're getting Savior, a character skill, as specific as you made it, for free or another +mov PS.
additionally, you're not getting a 5% chance to nullify an entire weapon type. you could probably get away with +2 res against dark magic tho

[Xanmyral]

character sheet:

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Name:Axel Clayden
Class:Scavenger
Class Special:
Character Specific Skill:Fortune
Personal fault: why lass oh why within 3 tiles of a female enemy unit axel loses -1 skill -1 constitution and a nullification of his character specific skill if he's within 2 tiles of a female enemy these stay in effect until Axel has moved far enough away or said female enemy units are slain.
Personal skill:you can thank the lord when within 3 tiles of an allied female unit (includes allied npcs) Gain +1 movement and+2skill
\\ Personal Skill:Don't Die!:if a high bonded character (A) (S) is in the state of dying (the bleed out stage) Axis gains +1 movement and the ability to pick up said downed ally with no penalty's.
Personal skill III:i guess this curse is good for something. if under attack from dark magic he has a small chance to negate it entirely if the gm chooses this skills effect can grow stronger if he gets promoted to a higher class.(%5)
 
Preferred Stats:Skill,Luck
Progression spent: /330%
Weapon  Skill:  1 Sword Subcategory  (D), 1 Dark Subcategory,  Sword (D), Dark (D)
Luck special:  Lockpick   Scavenge  Gold   Passive Effect The  first  time  a  Scavenger  lands  an attack  on an enemy  target,  they  steal  a  sum  of gold,  equal  to 100 from  First  Tier  enemies, and 200 from  Promoted enemies.  A  Scavenger can  only  steal  from  a  particular enemy  once  per battle,  but  can  potentially  steal  from  every  deployed enemy  on the  field.   Power of the  Underdog   Passive Effect The  unit  with this  skill  gains  a  +1 bonus  to DMG  and  +5 to  Hit  and Evasion  for every  Total  Level  the enemy  has  over them.  This  caps  at  +5 DMG  and  +25 Hit  and Evasion.  Promotes  To:  Wanderer,  Bounty  hunter
Base  Stats:   
HP  17   
STR  4   
MAG  3   
SKI  5   
CON 6 
AID 5   
LUC  5   
DEF  4 
RES  3   
SPD  7   
MOV 5
Chosen E Rank Weapon:Iron Dagger
Backstory (3):
- Born as a noble heir to a now dead house he is now all that remains the lord of the house
- Cursed to sound happy and chipper in tone of voice until the day they die a bloodline curse that can only be fixed by finding ones true companions and overcoming and acceptings ones shortcomings.
- Cursed to have their soul eternally tortured while alive amd into death where he will become an undead monstrosity he must revive his house for the curse to end.
 
Beliefs (3):
- Life in a word pain eternal pain not that death will be any better...but i won't give up becuase of that.
- Always be polite to the ladies they will save though from a great curse.
- if you must die die to protect what is precious to you cherish everymoment for your time with those things and people will be the best moments in your life.
 
Goals (3):
- Restore the house and end the curse.
- Protect and if nessecary die for that which you cherish
- to attain real happyness for once in his life.

Heyya, thanks for making a character sheet! As the others said, your personal skills and faults need a bit of work. I'll offer a few suggestions you're free to work from as examples that might suit what you're going for.

Why Lass Oh Why: The trigger is fine (although when within 3 tiles of 3 is the standard, however you have a more stringent clause so that's fine), although for the effect I would suggest either -2 AS (Attack Speed, which affects your ability to dodge or double/get doubled), -2 SKL (Affects your ability to hit and crit), or -10 HIT&EVA (Your ability to hit and dodge) since that seems to be what you're going for. The line about it persisting isn't necessary as for as long as the trigger is in effect, the fault will persist.

You Can Thank The Lord: The trigger is fine as well (see above comments), but for the effect I would only suggest +1 MOV or +2 SKL (Or +15 HIT/+10 HIT&EVA if you more specifically want to be better at hitting, or hitting and dodging).

Don't Die!: The typical trigger here is often "When within 3 tiles of a unit with support ranks" or something akin. The effect will need to be reworked however, as that's pretty much a character skill Savior. What I would suggest if you want to minimize the effects of rescuing a unit would be +10 HIT&EVA, as rescuing a unit halves your SKL and SPD so those would go a fair way to helping make that up.

I Guess This Curse Is Good For Something: The trigger is alright, although the effect however is far too strong. What I would instead suggest would be +2 RES, which is the stat used to take less damage from Dark Magic, which would be more in line with what I think you're wanting there.

Don't forget to spread out your progressions among your stats, following the rules of the book (10-70 for normal, 40-100 for HP, none on MOV/CON/AID).

I would also suggest reading the lore attached to the setting as I pick more based upon that than anything else in this, you can find it here.

EDIT: Made a goof on the min progressions, my bad.

[Melissa]

Wao this sure looks like an RP
that Iiiii will be trying to post a signup to later
Wao~

[Tiruin]

Wao this sure looks like an RP
that Iiiii will be trying to post a signup to later
Wao~

Hiya Melissa, welcome to the B12 FEF zone

Spoiler: *sees her avatar* (click to show/hide)

Woah o_o That is awesome work there!

Is it possible to join here too? I've got a sheet but unsure what's already in game. x3