Go check on the Basement Nuclear Reactor you've been building.
((Personally I recommend some spacing up of the paragraphs of that. Textwalls tend to lead to skimming and skipping of useful information, and although they are useful for dialogue (which is a good spot to have paragraphs sometimes), you generally don't want people skimming the middle of the paragraph. Me for example, I tend to read twoline stuff but I start skimming when there are three or more lines. I don't even intend to, it just happens. This paragraph will probably result in minor skimming in the middle also unless you focus on it.))
((I'll spoiler how I would have written it, this is just how me personally would have, there is no right way, the main thing I see with the paragraph is flow, so most alterations would be towards making it flow better. Red means I changed words/sentence structure rather then spacing it.))
You awaken in your soft bed, the warm glow of the sun shining on you through your window's blinds.
You pull, or rather push, the sheets off your body and roll out of bed, your feet landing on the coushiny shagg carpet flooring in your room. Lifting your arms, you let out a yawn and stretch.
You look down at your wooden night stand to see your alarm clock. The black box has dark red numbers glowing on its face: 6:23
(("It's" means "it is" You want its in this. Good way to tell if you wanna use its or it's is see if "it is" fits where you're trying to put "it's"))
Looks like you awoke two minutes early. You press the button to turn your alarm off and grab the glass of water sitting next to the alarm clock. Bottoms up as you finish off the half full glass ((Removed part of the sentence here, personally I think it flows better, although others might disagree.)).
Your throat no longer dry and yourself fully awakened what do you do?
((I tend to separate the prompts from the rest of the stuff, makes it easier to spot in my mind.))
((I also tend to put notes and stuff in spoilers, the OOC parenthesis tend to make reading the story stuff a bit hard in my mind cause it disrupts the shapes of everything somewhat.))
((Using the thing in the codebox below prolly would help for breaking up the page to keep OOC and IC stuff separate if you don't like how spoilers look. Also you could just opt to not use spoilers or that, there is no
Right way to go about writing.))
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