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(SG) Returned.
« on: July 21, 2015, 12:37:32 am »

Long have you hungered. Long have you thirst. Long have you lingered. Sleeping here, cursed.

But now, by midnight, when the moon turns red, once more shall you rise, back from the dead!


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"Is the story true, elder?" asked a little girl, huddling closer to the rest of the children by the fire.

"No, no, a simple talltale is all," the storyteller lied. He knew, far, far away, a force of darkness had returned. The children were all gathered under his shack, away from the prying gaze of the red moon above. Midnight was nearly upon them.

"What is he? What's his name?"

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They speak of you once more... They fear you once more...

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The elder looked apprehensive. He clearly regretted telling them about the story. "Well, he was...

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"What was his name?"

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My name was, is, and always will be...
« Last Edit: July 29, 2015, 11:01:55 pm by Cheesecake »
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« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2015, 12:56:32 am »

-A sorcerer named Kaviik Naltarai. He sought secrets that shouldn't have been found. And it changed him greatly. So great was his crime that no hell would take his soul. The corpse buried into the ground has now been spat back up in disgust. And the dead come back with him...


Necromancy is best mancy.

Besides diplomancy, which is best paired with necromancy.
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« Reply #2 on: July 21, 2015, 01:16:39 am »

-A sorcerer named Kaviik Naltarai. He sought secrets that shouldn't have been found. And it changed him greatly. So great was his crime that no hell would take his soul. The corpse buried into the ground has now been spat back up in disgust. And the dead come back with him...


Necromancy is best mancy.

Besides diplomancy, which is best paired with necromancy.
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*slow clap* Well ATHATH congratulations. You managed to give the MC a mental breakdown before we even finished the first arc.
I didn't even read it first, I just saw it was ATHATH and noped it. Now that I read it x3 to noping

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« Reply #3 on: July 21, 2015, 01:19:23 am »

...A demon. A very, very powerful one, ruler of its own hell, who came to the land to buy the soul of a king of ancient times. The king tricked the demon, locking it in his castle, now lost forever in a dark forest.

"What was his name?"

He was...

Ein Soph Aur, an ironic epithet granted upon a king too wise to fool.
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« Reply #4 on: July 21, 2015, 04:24:09 am »

The roosters crowed. Quite unnatural, given that it was the dead of night. All the dogs and wolves (and those like wolves) howled fiercely, as if relishing the blood moon. Swarms of bats and crows and ravens took off into the night and claimed it as their own. Rats and bugs and spiders scurried through the sewers and wastes. Deep beneath the ground, something stirred.

As the town clock's hand reached twelve, a flash of thunder drowned out the crowing, the screeching, and the howling, but even the terrible thunder could not drown out your bloodcurdling scream as you claw your way out from the ground. The mud was giving way, making it easy for you to climb, though it felt strange to move after a hundred years of being underground.

You clamber out and into the graveyard, slowly relishing your return to the land, after a hundred year long trial by the archdemons of hell. They deemed you so heinous, so twisted, that they forbid you from the afterlife, condemning you to undeath. To spite them, you took a good number of tortured souls from the demons and condemned them to undeath as well.

As if on cue, the rest of the graveyard trembled as skeletons clawed their way out of the dirt. While they stand hunched, you stand straight. While they shake and shamble, you walk with dignity and pride. While they are mindless, you possess mental clarity and acuity the likes this world has only seen once.

"And they will see it again..."

You realize you are weak, physically and magically. You are as feeble and as unimposing as the skeletons around you. You realize if you die again, you are forbidden from heaven and hell, and no one can die more than twice and retain their soul. No, that would mean one thing: your soul would simply cease to exist.

A fate far, far worse than death. You must find some way to stave off death, and possibly safeguard yourself from that cruel fate. Perhaps even gain immortality in the truest sense. You, however, cannot do it alone, nor simply with mindless undead. A hundred years have passed, but the auras of your followers still act as a beacon. You feel strong enough to call one of them:

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« Reply #5 on: July 21, 2015, 04:51:23 am »

-Your general. His bones lay in a sarcophagus, undisturbed in over seventy years. He faithfully continued your fight for power for twenty bitter years after your death. You feel you must reward him with the same gift you have: a second life, if a half-life at that. He was renowned for his martial prowess and inspiring leadership in his life. Now he will be renowned for cruelty and inspiring terror.

This guy continued to fight for us 20 years after we'd died. Loyalty like that must be rewarded. Besides, we can pick up our still-living apprentice and village girl later.
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« Reply #6 on: July 21, 2015, 05:10:29 am »

-Your general. His bones lay in a sarcophagus, undisturbed in over seventy years. He faithfully continued your fight for power for twenty bitter years after your death. You feel you must reward him with the same gift you have: a second life, if a half-life at that. He was renowned for his martial prowess and inspiring leadership in his life. Now he will be renowned for cruelty and inspiring terror.

This guy continued to fight for us 20 years after we'd died. Loyalty like that must be rewarded. Besides, we can pick up our still-living apprentice and village girl later.

+1.

Dude's been fighting for us for 20 years after we hit the dust. Dang, if you ask me THAT's loyalty.
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« Reply #7 on: July 21, 2015, 06:25:35 am »

-Your general. His bones lay in a sarcophagus, undisturbed in over seventy years. He faithfully continued your fight for power for twenty bitter years after your death. You feel you must reward him with the same gift you have: a second life, if a half-life at that. He was renowned for his martial prowess and inspiring leadership in his life. Now he will be renowned for cruelty and inspiring terror.

This guy continued to fight for us 20 years after we'd died. Loyalty like that must be rewarded. Besides, we can pick up our still-living apprentice and village girl later.
+1

Though I pretty sure the village girl is going to have some sort of hidden power or story.
+1.

Dude's been fighting for us for 20 years after we hit the dust. Dang, if you ask me THAT's loyalty.
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« Reply #8 on: July 21, 2015, 07:12:07 am »

Yes, your great general: Bokor Blackboulder of Brutalos. You felt the souls he and his men slew sacrificed in your name while on trial with the archdemons. Suffice to say, those souls gave you quite a bit of bargaining power, enough to ensure they didn't allow Death to destroy your soul outright. Bokor deserves his reward.

Arms upraised, head upturned, you whisper words of power to the howling wind, and the dead respond. The hundreds of forgotten souls of soldiers yearn to please their returned master, yelling in cacophony the location of Bokor's tomb. They say he is returned to the blistering, barren desert that is Brutalos, buried in his own pyramid.

Once more you whisper to the damned, and the damned comply. They give you your location: Redridge village. Half a year's journey to the blasted wastes of Brutalos by normal means. The village proper is an hour's walk away from the cemetery, with sparse farms and houses along the way.

Redridge village is, suffice to say, a backwater. The town's population of three hundred mark it as an insignificant beacon of civilization in an otherwise long stretch of wilderness. You don't remember dying here, however. Though they could have simply buried your body here, unmarked and forgotten. You tremble with rage indignantly. They'll know who you are once more...
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« Reply #9 on: July 21, 2015, 07:54:59 am »

Raise the dead in the cemetery and storm the village, heading to the orphanage to pick up our follower and killing everyone on the way.

Many games begin with us being subtle in our initial moves. Let's shake it up a bit.
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« Reply #10 on: July 21, 2015, 08:23:47 am »

Raise the dead in the cemetery and storm the village, heading to the orphanage to pick up our follower and killing everyone on the way.

Many games begin with us being subtle in our initial moves. Let's shake it up a bit.
What follower? Anyway, +1.
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« Reply #11 on: July 21, 2015, 08:31:37 am »

Raise the dead in the cemetery and storm the village, heading to the orphanage to pick up our follower and killing everyone on the way.

Many games begin with us being subtle in our initial moves. Let's shake it up a bit.
What follower? Anyway, +1.
The orphan girl from the village.
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« Reply #12 on: July 21, 2015, 08:36:22 am »

What makes you think she's in an orphanage in that village? What makes you think that a village of 300 has an orphanage?
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« Reply #13 on: July 21, 2015, 09:37:43 am »

-A village peasant. A young girl, daughter of a bloodline of loyalists, directly from your first followers. She, the only competent family member alive, lives in an orphanage. True, she may not have your apprentice's magical aptitude or experience, or your general's strength and brutality, but she is the most loyal, the most devoted, despite never having met you. You have heard her prayers for years when you were still in hell, begging you to come back and save her. And you still hear her pray, praying for her master, praying for the savior her parents taught her about before they were murdered.
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« Reply #14 on: July 21, 2015, 09:59:11 am »

-A village peasant. A young girl, daughter of a bloodline of loyalists, directly from your first followers. She, the only competent family member alive, lives in an orphanage. True, she may not have your apprentice's magical aptitude or experience, or your general's strength and brutality, but she is the most loyal, the most devoted, despite never having met you. You have heard her prayers for years when you were still in hell, begging you to come back and save her. And you still hear her pray, praying for her master, praying for the savior her parents taught her about before they were murdered.
It doesn't specify which village.  It could be another one entirely.
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