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(SG) Generations
« on: July 15, 2015, 11:06:13 am »

Generations

As you stare across the bonfire, flames dancing in the light breeze, throwing their light and illuminating the faces on the other side. In a moment of thought, you experience, the trodden blades of grass massage your feet. You hear, the breeze rustling the leaves of the tall fir trees that surround the clearing, interspersed by the crackling of the fire. You feel, the mellow heat of the fire reaching for your body, warming you. And you think back on your childhood, the events that lead to this moment.

I was born in this village and named (Name). my father. His brown eyes, dark tanned skin and black hair were opposite to my mothers who like the other villagers, having blond hair, blue eyes and pale, if somewhat tanned skin. I myself, look more like my father, with my black hair and darkly tanned skin but unlike him I have dark blue eyes.

The village is isolated from most things, the only intrusions into the daily life being tax collectors. But other than that we live off the land as best we can. The sun beats down hard on us during the summer, then leaves again in the winter, allowing the snow to escape the heavens. It can be cold. But we survive. Through supporting each other if nothing else.

When someone needs a house built, we build it. When someone needs some food, we give it. When someone needs a a field cleared for farming we all help out. Only a hundred or so live here. My father tells me elsewhere there are massive town containing thousands, but here everyone knows everyone else. We pray every Sunday at the fortified wooden church on the hill.

The Lord who owns the village rarely visits. But he seems nice enough from what I have seen, if a bit large in the belly. But his wife and son live here with their servants and tend to stay out of the village main. Instead staying safely in their manor.

That's the village. Small but tighnit.

Unlike the others in my village my father taught me to read and write as well as speak in his own tongue. And other skills when I got even older. My father is from across the mountains in the east you see.

I remember the day he told me how he arrived here...


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Re: (SG) Generations
« Reply #1 on: July 15, 2015, 11:10:02 am »

Joachim Steinmetz
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« Reply #2 on: July 15, 2015, 12:14:50 pm »

Joachim Steinmetz
Yes! One day, we can rise from the peasant Joachim and become a lord, or King!
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« Reply #3 on: July 15, 2015, 12:32:23 pm »

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Yes! One day, we can rise from the peasant Joachim and become a lord, or King!
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« Reply #4 on: July 15, 2015, 01:45:49 pm »

It was spring and the sun was low in the sky when my father came back from working the fields. I remember him taking off his straw hat and wiping the sweat from his brow before slumping down next to me on the ground. I was eight at the time if I remember it right. And I was very curious on why my father looked so different from all the other men.

After a long comfortable silence, I thought the moment was right for me to ask. "Father. Why do all the other men look different from you" I asked curiously and also slightly tentatively.

"Because I don't come from here" he spoke while still looking towards the setting sun and the now blood red sky.

"Where do you, come from?"

"East, past the mountains."  He looked at me. His brown eyes showed thought, while his face was blank as slate. "Beautiful place, palaces so large you can get lost in them, paintings so beautiful you could spend days looking at them. And women so pretty you wouldn't want to leave their side." His voice conveying his longing. "Nothing compared to your mother though" he said quickly, glancing at me as he smiled.

"Why did you leave then?" I asked curiously

"War, far too much war. It destroyed those buildings, ruined those paintings and murdered those women. So I left." His smile now gone, replaced by a grimace. "I walked past the mountains. But bandits taking advantage of the war, ambushed me. I fought back and was wounded. I rode as fast as I could and ended up here. Your grandmother tended to me with help from your mother. I fell in love so I decided to stay. The rest you know." He lay back again, his head resting on the grass and his eyes shut.

"Anything else you want to know?" He asked, his eyes still closed.

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« Reply #5 on: July 15, 2015, 11:58:08 pm »

No questions? This is exposition time so anything you want to know about the world.
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« Reply #6 on: July 16, 2015, 12:28:05 am »

"Is the war over? Can you and I go there?"
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« Reply #7 on: July 16, 2015, 10:34:26 am »

Exposition time didn't work and let's pretend that never happened. If you want to know something then just ask me. And if the character knows it I'll tell you.

Also yes the war probably has finished as that was what your father last heard.

Intro Part 2

When you were ten. Your friend Michael and you were exploring the forest early in the autumn. The coming of winter meant night was falling earlier, and both of you lost track of time building a den of dead branches and leaves.

It was almost pitch black under the canopies of the trees, except for the occasional haven of moonlight bursting through and showing your way. Both of you were worried as your parents had always told you to stay out of the woods at night. Your anxiousness was not helped by the utter silence only broken by the snapping of branches as you both stumbled about in the darkness.

Michael was worriedly talking about directions and how we couldn't be going the right way, when a breeze rustled the canopy around, allowing moonlight to reflect off the edge of something shiny. moments later the growls of wolves coming your way could be clearly heard in the direction of the shine.

Do you head for it, or go the other way...


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« Reply #8 on: July 16, 2015, 10:44:26 am »

We go in the direction of the shine
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« Reply #9 on: July 16, 2015, 11:22:27 am »

As you run towards the shine with Michael at your side you hear your father shouting, back the way you came.

You get to the place where the shine was to find a half eaten and semi decayed body. A sword lying on the ground and a bow and quiver wrapped around the body. Ths stink coming off the body is overwhelming and makes you gag. The body is also wearing a tunic and a boiled leather chest plate with two arrows piercing it. This person did not die peacefully, judging from the horrified expression permanently plastered on his face

As you stare at the body, you hear Michael say "screw this" before crashing through the undergrowth towards the voice. But he quickly comes back, out of breath and pointing behind him, before saying, through the gaps in his heavy breathing "w-wo-wolves".

You hear growling all around you. But back the way you came, you can vaguely see a flickering orange light. You only have time to pick up one thing. The bow and arrows or the sword.


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Re: (SG) Generations
« Reply #10 on: July 16, 2015, 07:11:30 pm »

Sword.
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« Reply #11 on: July 16, 2015, 07:15:40 pm »

((Make updates faster for a while, wait until you have more material. When people notice your thing has been going on for a while, they'll post actions more often.))
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« Reply #12 on: July 16, 2015, 07:47:36 pm »

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« Reply #13 on: July 17, 2015, 12:09:25 am »

Sword just to fulfill rule of three.

Also I think this forum is most active on East Coast or Europe hours.

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« Reply #14 on: July 17, 2015, 12:20:08 am »

Sword. Swords are easier to use than bows.

So far, all the updates have been going on while it was about 1-2AM here. It's probably different for others, though.
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