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[Detoxicated]

Search the park for a hidden spot where we can rest and sleep, because they probably will think of us sometime

[pikorge]

Due to your fur, you are pretty much hidden between the brances and leaves of the tree while you sleep.
With 'they', I meant its gibbon family cause it hasn't seen them in months since its kidnapping.

[Detoxicated]

Begin looking for maps in the areas closeby the park.

[pikorge]

You open your eyes, still a little sleepy, and tiredly look around you.
At first you ask yourself why there is sunlight and no stinking poop nearby before realizing you've escaped from that forsaken place.
You look through the leaves and see its only dawn.
After taking a drink from the fountain, and washing yourself some more, you go ahead and seek a map of the city.
...At least you would do that IF you could read the dammed thing!
You wander around in the park ( It's early so few people would be in the park, you figure) And find some berries.
You eat a whole bush to shush your belly when suddenly...
*Hey shoot me if it ins't a monkey I'm seeing. Hi there little fellow!*
Oops! Spotted by a human with dirty clothing and a long brown beard.
He is not well build, rather bony and has a nice cap on his head.
Aside from his cap, his clothing consists of a shirt and torn jeans and he doesn't have shoes.
He does have his feet fully packed in bandages.
He doesn't seem like the other humans but looks can be deceiving.
He takes his time to you so it would be easy to escape.
 

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Health missing some fur but you smell normal again.
Energy 30/30
Hunger  belly happy, but can still be filled
Feeling wary.
inventory  little handy axe for chopping meat hanging on your 'belt'.
Thoughts: Should I trust this human?.

Which gender is our gibbon friend, BTW

[Detoxicated]

We are male.

Dance and do funny stuff for the human, we shall act as his pet and manipulate him to do our biddings.

[Shaporia]

We are male.

Dance and do funny stuff for the human, we shall act as his pet and manipulate him to do our biddings.

+1

[pikorge]

You decide to let him come closer to see if you can manipulate the sucker.
When he stands before you he takes one glance at the bush you were eating from.
*OOH! I recognize those from my first time here in this park!
Pretty sad day, was kicked out of my house because I couldn't pay the bills.*
He starts Looking closer to the bush and notices half of the berries are missing, then looks back to you.
*I see you ate some of the berries... You know they're poisonous, right?*
Some seconds after he said that is when you're belly proves it by sending them right back at ya.
You become green in the face and jump after one of the bushes to let it all out.
The human laughs at your expense and almost falls over before calming down.
*Don't worry, little monkey. The same happened to me! Nothing to be ashamed of.But ain't it ironic we make the same mistake? HAHAHA!*
You step back to him, still a little out of it and annoyed at him for laughing with you, which you make clear with a glare.
*Okay, I'm good again. Sorry for laughing.*
He apologizes.
You're still annoyed but more from the feeling in your belly.
*Alright, apey. You must eat something healthy for your belly and I know just the place! Follow little ol' cappy.*
 He walks away and you follow him to see if he has food you can steal.
Beside, maybe you can learn more about the city from this crazy man.

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Health missing some fur, Feeling sick.
Energy 28/30
Hunger  Fucked up
Feeling Annoyed.
inventory  little handy axe for chopping meat hanging on your 'belt'.
Thoughts: Stupid berries.

 

Feedback is welcome.
Ideas and inspiration are also welcome and I'll if I can/will use it.
Edit: Argh stupid colors! I'll fix that later. Sorry for the inconvenience.

[pikorge]

Update's gonna be tomorrow guys.
I'm really really sorry for that, but head can't think of anything after I tried solving that color problem.
When the human 'cappy speaks, it will be shown with a star.
Again, sorry for the delay, got to rest now.

[Detoxicated]

Follow him and listen closely to his rambles about the city. Attempt to speak with him, when were alone.
Edit:
Maybe if you explained more mechanics on how to gain evolution, or what our main objective is could greatly increase interest in this. I like it the way it is, I am only unsure on how many actions I can choose to post. I mean I could come up with a huge plan on how this monkey becomes a super power.

[pikorge]

Maybe if you explained more mechanics on how to gain evolution, or what our main objective is could greatly increase interest in this. I like it the way it is, I am only unsure on how many actions I can choose to post. I mean I could come up with a huge plan on how this monkey becomes a super power.

I didn't really thought of an objective yet besides surviving and doing silly things. Going back home is for later in the game.
As for evolution, hmm. Was thinking after one or two days after the one before that, would that work, or would the game be too easy?
Ideas for how to trigger the evolving process are welcome.
As for the actions, you are welcome to post as many as you want.
Don't know if I can use them all but it'll help, heck even ideas for the plot help like villians , a task or something.
Ideas for the plot or villains must be sent in PM so we don't spoil the surprise.
Excuses on being so vague, its my first time ever for making something like this and the only example I really follow is that of kitten snot.
 

[pikorge]

You follow Cappy out of the park.
He goes in a street that, according to him, is named aliba street. (writer apologizes in case he insulted somebody, source of inspiration is disneys alladin)
You give him a strange look when he says the name, he just shrugs before resuming their little trip.
You attempt to learn a thing or two by asking some questions.
Even if its not helpfull, you will at least be distracted from your aching stomach.
You start the first question by squeaking and pointing at an object.
*That's a bicycle, used for fast traveling but boy, is it expensive.
Hey I know a good song about a bicycle. It goes like this.*
After taking a good long breath, he starts singing.
* Just wanna ride my bicycle. Just wanna ride my BIIIIIIIIIIMMNNGH*
You stop the torture he calls singing by jumping on his shoulders and clamping his mouth shut with your two hands.
After realizing what you did, he pulls your hands away before saying.
*BLECH! Alright, alright, I get the message. Ugh I don't even wanna know where those have been!*
You feel guilty while scratching your ass with one of your hands befor jumping off and walking next to him.
He stops by an alley.
* Wait here. I'll be right back.* He goes in the alley for two minutes with something that smells really, really old.
 It's a backpack that has some small holes in it and look like it was sewed multiple times. Cappy sees you looking at it.
*This, my friend, is my inheritance! My uncle was too greedy to give anymore to my name... Meh, can't help it now.
Now I know a fruit Shop where I sometimes go 'shopping'.
Unfortunately the owner of the place is starting to see through my tricks, but I doubt they will see YOU coming.*
He smiles as he thinks about his scheme while you grin and start planning.

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Health missing some fur, Feeling sick.
Energy 28/30
Hunger  Fucked up
Feeling exited.
inventory  little handy axe for chopping meat hanging on your 'belt'.
Thoughts: This gonna be fun...

 
Was planning to write the scheme with this update but thought you guys may want the honnor of scheming.

[pikorge]

Alright. I've decided that evolutions will vary from to at least 2 days to a week (7 days) at max after the last evolution.
Let's say you get into a lab and find the right serum, then you can get a bonus that way. Kay?
Gonna think of more mechanics for this game ( ideas and opinions are welcome) and update tomorrow.
If something bothers you guys or you have an idea of improving this, don't be afraid to share.

[pikorge]

You go with cappy to the location of the fruit store.
You are in a more busy section of the city and you get some looks while passing through the street.
According to cappy, most of them have seen stranger things then a monkey walking with a hobo through the streets, hence why so few people actually pay attention to you.
Proof of this claim came in the form of a human, whose's hair and skin are green, was riding a tandem together with a a kangaroo.
You arrive by the fruit store and are told to wait outside while cappy goes in.
You listen carefully and after 5 minutes, you hear a voice.
Cappy? What are you doing here? I thought I was clear when I said you are NOT welcome anymore.
*Don't tell me. My back stopped hurting just 2 days ago after I last came here.* He says in an annoyed tone.
*It's true I can't pay you but I need food too, you know? Speaking of wich...*
There's a slight pause before you hear him bite in a fruit, probably an apple.
You're gonna pay that apple, you arrogant piece" of... 

*Shush you. There might be children nearby.* Cappy says calmly.
*Anyway, I can't nor do I want to pay for this stupid apple and- Oh no. Not that broom again. Oh well, see ya!*
You stand against the wall while Cappy shoots through the door, running for dear life while a fat woman, with a broom in her hand, rushes after him like a raging bull, shouting after him to get back immediately.
You go inside and quickly take some banana's, melons, berry's, nuts and apples of different kinds.
You manage to go outside undetected and hide in a ally 2 streets further.
You eat an apple while you wait for Cappy to arrive.

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Health missing some fur, Feeling sick.
Energy 26/30
Hunger  better
Feeling happy.
inventory  little handy axe for chopping meat hanging on your 'belt'.
Thoughts: Cappy sure can run while motivated.

 

[Detoxicated]

Take the best bites of the bunch for yourself and feast on the food. Tell cappy that we need to get good clothes for him. ((Are we able to speak with him actually?))

[pikorge]

Only throug hand sighns and making monkey noises.
speaking can be unlocked later in the game.