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New player(s), sure

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Eh, 10 is large enough

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I'm not a player and want to see results all the time

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Total Members Voted: 14

[Swordstar]

Oh whoops, sorry. Will edit

[Gaterhyme]

Was told I could post a sheet, so here's an archer/medic. And maybe a bit of crowd control.


Sheet

edit: smoothed out neck shading a bit, pushed part of head outline out a pixel, overlapped fur on outside, hair overlapping neck thing messed with
PS edits: changed first PS to over 50% HP instead of under so that it fit with the name better, changed second PS to +15 Hit

[GiglameshDespair]

Was told I could post a sheet, so here's an archer/medic. And maybe a bit of crowd control.


Sheet

Something seems off about that mug

[Swordstar]

I thought it was fine besides the hilights being a bit choppy but that can be how dyed hair turns out sometimes

[Gaterhyme]

Any advice's welcome. Not exactly an artist here. ^^

[Swordstar]

Oh hmm, neck shading is prolly not quite right.

Also I said this in pm but need to think about last two ps,but besides that errything looks good

[GiglameshDespair]

It's also kind of odd to me that the fur goes under the other side - as something warm and waterproof, it'd make mroe sense to me if it was on the outside rather than inside.
Dunno. Maybe that's just me being picky.

The side of the head looks rather flat to me, and like it doesn't quite mesh with the fringe.

[Gaterhyme]

I dunno. I don't think it's picky - if it's illogical enough to stick out to you and bother you every time you end up looking at the mug, then it's a problem.

I modified it a bit in attempts to try to address the issues you brought up, but it might be best to PM me about further improvements; I don't want to clog up the OOC with mug critiques. ^^;;

[GiglameshDespair]

Yeah, wouldn't want to interrupt the thrilling conversation going on otherwise

[Swordstar]

Yeah dun worry

[Melissa]

yeh the shoulders are a bit unlevel, the hair needs more AA (antialiasing) where the colors intersect, the next needs to be touched because the hair's going over it now
otherwise it's decent :v

[Melissa]

uh idk how bad double posts are here but i poked at your pixels, hope it helps
you're free to use it as is if you're fine with the edits

[SeriousConcentrate]

I don't think people mind double-posting too much as long as it's relevant. Also, having a week between posts doesn't hurt either.

[Gaterhyme]

uh idk how bad double posts are here but i poked at your pixels, hope it helps
you're free to use it as is if you're fine with the edits
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I really like what you've done with the hair, especially fixing the abrupt cut off on the left that I never noticed until now. The highlights are pretty wild now, but in a good way.

Can we agree to disagree on the shoulders, though? The ones on your modification are probably more realistic and/or more proportional, but I intended to hew close to the shoulders the original portrait's body had, and yours are bulkier and more square in that regard. >< Would you be terribly bothered if I only used the modifications you made to the hair?

In any case, thank you. I don't mean to complain or seem ungrateful by noting the shoulders thing; I really appreciate you having taken a look at the mug.

[Melissa]

All I did was raise the shoulder up. If you're not into it, you don't have to use it. You're welcome o3o