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[Swordstar]

I moved the head over so the neck makes sense now

[SOLDIER First]

They still look the same. Weird. I'm just gonna use the old one until I can transparently the new one.

[F.O.E.]

Swordy

Bio was editted in.

[hops]

Welp, looks like we have two literally androgynous characters.

[Swordstar]

I'm 95% sure I'm going to step aside here. Seems like it'll be for the best

[hops]

Oh. In that case

ALPHA ANDROGYNE

[Swordstar]

Bluh, actually, I'll probably stay. Need to talk to MC about some stuff though.

Also, Cinder, no offense but... your mug isn't very andro. It's pretty feminine. Also the eyes are kinda... well... creepy and she seems to be missing her right arm?

[hops]

:C

[UXLZ]

Did you use the girl with the super thin neck and alien green eyes again? :v

[Swordstar]

Yeah, the whole fef4 signup was reused

[Tiruin]

-snip-
While I have many armored mugs, ideas for bio and other stuff aren't that easy to come up with.

Hmm, try redirecting ideas maybe? There's lore, and then there's analogical modeling, wherein we bring those old and probably unused concepts, and think about the in-lore concepts and ask ourselves 'How do I connect this concept in a way that I like it, and it makes sense in-lore.'
And then reference.

But I totally get how that feels ._.

Spoiler: Sheet! ...I'm remaking an old sheet. (click to show/hide)

Portrait:

First Class: Swordsman Trainee > Myrmidon >
Affinity:
Character Specific Skill: Adept

Personal Skill: Mindsight = If the character is within 1 space of any Enemy Unit; +15 Evasion {Only effective for the first ATTACK by any enemy.}
//Personal Skill: Sword Affiliation = When wielding any Slashing-type Sword; +10 Critical
//Personal Skill: "Stand Firm" = When below 50% Health; +3 LUK

Personal Fault: "Fragile" = When below 50% Health; -3 to DEF/RES

Preferred Stats: Skill, Speed
Weapon Profs: Swords (E)

Level: 1 (0/100)
Total Level: 1
Progression spent: 300/300%
HP: 18 (40%)
STR: 4+2 (40%)
MAG: 1 (0%)
SKL: 5 (50%)
CON: 4
AID: 3
LCK: 2+2 (50%)
DEF: 2 (50%)
RES: 0 (10%)
SPD: 4 (60%)
MOV: 4

Code: [Select]

Inventory:
Name            Type () RNG MT WT Hit CR QL
Slim Sword     Thru (E)   1  4  3  100  10 35
Bio:
Jora was born and raised under the care of a mountainous farming community set on the outskirts of the Alemni kingdom. Given the status of the people, the history of the state, and the local livelihood available, Jora was cultured in a system of philosophy deeply steeped in the sphere of peace, having honor and duty heavily ingrained into the conduct and mannerisms of the populace. Losing her mother in her youth, she was an aide to her father in all his works and deeds until her coming of age; he was a protector of the nobility, namely an attendant, and was a firm believer in such a philosophy, having passed it down with due care onto his daughter along with the myriad teachings and practical usages it had. Such came to pass until a strange disease came upon her father--attributed to a curse from his grand parents and his parents--which led Jora to continue a different way of life, given that service to the nobility was both individually and universally symbolic by blood connection.

This is as far most people know of her past nowadays, given her practice as a traveling blade, and less officially, as a sell-sword--said to be a very kind and calm-natured person, her profession shows in times of danger and battle (as seen in many a bar fight with the use of the flat blade), having a fiery determination and a will to die for those oppressed and innocent. It is said she fights for coin, as a primary motive, yet never seen as a first impression about her given her demeanor, attitude and lifestyle. Though all this is hearsay.

She carries with her, a four-pointed talisman around her neck, symbolic of her family heritage.

...Swordstar shhhh.

[scapheap]

Kurai (scapheap)
Nothing in particular stands out as problematic with this character, but the "dark and brooding" archetype for characters is, while fun to play as, not very fun to interact with. I'll let you pass with it, because I trust you to not be overly stereotypical about it (and the PM you sent me lets me know that you won't) so you're ok.

Yeah, Kurai is based on true ninjas so I'll always been basing her personalty on someone who can blend into a crowd rather then the brooding one man army of popular fiction(or Naruto, any Naruto character aside from maybe Kakashi). Of course FF random leveling may make her a one woman army anyway.

[Tiruin]

Kurai (scapheap)
Nothing in particular stands out as problematic with this character, but the "dark and brooding" archetype for characters is, while fun to play as, not very fun to interact with. I'll let you pass with it, because I trust you to not be overly stereotypical about it (and the PM you sent me lets me know that you won't) so you're ok.

Yeah, Kurai is based on true ninjas so I'll always been basing her personalty on someone who can blend into a crowd rather then the brooding one man army of popular fiction(or Naruto, any Naruto character aside from maybe Kakashi). Of course FF random leveling may make her a one woman army anyway.

@_@
Historical high-five!

[Praefectus Screptum]

I am an armored- mug-making-machine, coming up with Bios do take time for me. Mostly because I intend to change the class too, I just intended to go with Social Knight because of the beetle rider idea.

[Twinwolf]

Guys, it'll probably be easier for MC if you either repost your sheet or quote it in a new post so that he doesn't have to dig through 20+ pages of stuff to find it

Spoiler: Diana the Mage (click to show/hide)

Name: Diana
Mug (Provided by Giglamesh Despair):
Class: Mage Trainee - Mage - Mage Knight
Character Specific Skill: Stillness
Affinity: Wind
Personal Fault: Fidgety (if unit does not move, -15 evade)
Personal Skill: Not Yet… (when under 50% HP, +15 evade)
Personal Skill: This seems familiar (when attacking with Fire magic, +10 hit)

Preferred stats: Magic, skill

 Weapon profs: Anima (E)
Starting Progression: 330%

HP: 17 (60%)
STR: 2 (20%)
MAG: 5 (70%)
SKL: 4 (35%)
CON: 3
AID: 2
LCK: 2 (30%)
DEF: 0 (45%)
RES: 3 (50%)
SPD: 4 (20%)
MOV: 4
Inventory:

Name            Type () RNG MT WT CR Hit QL


Fire |              Fire (E) | 1-2 | 7 | 4 | 85 | 0 | 40
Vulnery
Battle Stats (with weapon):
AT: 9
Hit: 85
AS: 2
Eva: 6
Crt: 2
DG: 2

Bio:
A woman who has lost her memory. She woke up one day on a beach in neutral territory, taken in by a kindly old man who let her stay until she was back to health. She seems to be a very mixed heritage, and was found with a tome, but she doesn’t know anything about the world. Eventually she left the man, to try to find where she was from. The name “Diana” was scribbled on the cover of the tome, so she assumed that was her name, although no last name was present. Oftentimes, she can be rather still while concentrating, to the point where you forget she’s there.
When looking for shelter one night, she decided to sleep in the cargo hold of an Alemni ship. When she woke up, they were at sea. Rather than wait to be discovered and thrown to the sharks, she revealed herself immediately, asked to join the expedition as opposed to, well, execution. The fact that she's alive speaks for the result.

Speaks in this color