Okay, so based on what you're saying, it is very imperative that there comes forth a number system, right? If plural is implied or found in a modifying word, then numbers would play heavily into nearly everything that isn't a singular object/entity. ( Of note, there are already words for one, two and three. Lod, nob, mez. )
As per your verb conjugation, it seems like a good system. Though it does ignore the possibility of vowel ending verbs. It also doesn't take into account the imperative form of a verb. ( Which is very important for delivering commands and I think should be grammatically differentiated as the inem-nikot ( "required action") with its own conjugation rules. ) I think also that there still need to be noun-modifying conjugates. At very least one to create an adjective&/adverbal form and one to create a plural. Possibly all three. As a totally arbitrary example set that I don't much like nor am I suggesting,
nilr - "Hammer essence", sort of a super-noun version. The metaphysical property/existence of the hammer. It's quite possible, given the lengths that are used to describe objects in game, it's not beyond belief that they could have religious, philosophical, or metaphysical connotations/meanings. Especially the hammer, due to its factoring in Dwarven capital punishment. With dwarves becoming more complex, I feel like this should at least be tossed in for consideration.
nilar - "Hammerly", adverb form. For example Urist imike shèrel nila rîthol. "Urist threw [the/a] rabbit [at the/a] noble hammerly." ( Literally rendered "Urist chucked bunny hammerly noble."** )
enil - "Hammer-like", adjective form. For example, Såkzul sanrebe* enil emen. "Såkzul [has; lit. "owns"*] hammer-like strength."
danil - "
the hammer" - For when a specific hammer is being talked about and the article cannot be inferred from context.
And, I'm still advocating the same plural system as before, so:
nila - "hammers" - Urist ulengetha*** nila nina. - "Urist dropped hammers [on his****] toes.
*modified with Dirst's conjugation system for the persistive state.
**Yay! New issues! How do we note that something is being directed
at something else? ( I guess, I'm asking: how do we render prepositions and prepositional phrases. )
*** Ulengeth: Place holder for "drop" that compounds "uleng" - lost, with "kegeth" - hold. Another alternative: ozkakungèg, or a contracted ozkunèg, which is "carry-fail"
**** Possessives will need to be standardized in some way or another.
Also! We need a way to denote proper nouns and common nouns. Especially considering most dwarven names
are common nouns. Is there anything beyond capitalization? Is anything beyond capitalization
necessary? Do we want a way to note that a noun is a name given to a particular dwarf?
EDIT: Here are the above example phrases rendered in VOS sentence structure instead of SVO. Mostly for the hell of it.
imike nila shèrel Urist a rîthol. ( Lit. "Threw hammerly [the]rabbit Urist at [the] noble." )
sanrebe enil emen Såkzul ( Lit. "Owns hammer-like strength Sakzul." )
EDIT EDIT: Also, before anyone else notices it and corrects it, shèrel is "bunny" and lestus is "rabbit." I'm guessing that's to differentiate age? It's a small slip, but still.