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[flame99]

Reserved, sheet pending.

Actually, question about the population rules: Could I be the sky castle (i.e. -1 pop) and still have people inside me, a la Jabu-Jabu or Monstro? If so, what would I put there? Can I even start at -1 pop?

[RAM]

This sounds too awesome to refuse, though I may have to bow out : (

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Name: Dr. Coggington
Colour: Purple with yellow trim.
Theme/Background: Steampunk+Mad Science. A concentric series of heavy stone walls(topped with mechanical gargoyles performing perpetually-looped and vaguely menacing poses) conforming haphazardly to the terrain, house-sized cogs protruding from the ground seemingly at random, Tesla-coil-towers in neat rows, tufts of green scattered about, trying to grow in various cracks and seams. The whole thing looks like a massive stone disc stacked on top of a barely-visible tangle of pipes and prods that are perpetually obscured by a steady stream of steam that occasionally spurts out in great jets and the castle manoeuvres. Internally it is a combination of two environs. The former, large stone-work cog-scapes devoid of stable ground and constantly inviting visitors to tumble into the nigh-unstoppable machinery. The latter environ is composed of a maze of cramped metallic tubes with irregularly strewn panels of imperceptibly-complex and typically unshielded masses of wires, sockets, and flickering multicoloured lights. The panels seem to have a fondness for randomly discharging electricity into the surrounding space and are, as a rule, not to be trusted...
Created long ago from an attempt to produce a self-perpetuating and autonomous maintenance system, the experiment soon went awry as the system attempted to incorporate all available materials into itself. The reaction of its progenitors was swift and decisive, the entire section of island was ejected by explosive means and propelled to as great a distance as could be managed. Attempting to forge an ever larger and more robust version of itself it was not long before the whole of the new island had been incorporated into a single unified construction. Once it was clear that there was no more materials to be converted, the system set about forging motive systems, which soon required coordination, which resulted in a rudimentary mind forming. After a few brief meetings with civilisation, the new entity resolved to escape the world and settle in isolation, and so rose to the greatest height that it could achieve. After spending unknown ages at the roof of the world, and finding nothing but disappointment, the castle has returned with a wariness of civilisation but a desire to understand it.
Starting present: Infernium Core
Starting grid location: Q1

Example stats:
Propulsion: 10
Structure: 3 / Integrity: 3
Shield: 0
Population: -1
Luck: 7
10+3+10+7=30
---

(Power)Steam: 3
Steam is rapidly gained while in clouds, and is typically lost at a rate of one per major turn to keep the castle aloft. If all steam is exhausted, it drops, and hopes to fall through a cloud or other source of moisture. Steam can be expended rapidly for additional movement in emergencies. While it will not admit to such, exhausting its formerly massive steam supplies, which were expended at a somewhat reduced rate at extreme altitudes. Attaining that altitude in the first place required an obscene amount of steam and a very light structure which is unlikely to be reproduced in a practical timeframe.

---Weapons---
Centrifuge
Atop the castle sits a metallic spar on a massively reinforced strut with heavy stones affixed to either end. Massive forces from deep below adjust the angle of, and spin this strut to ridiculous speeds, at which the stones can be released.
Destructiveness: 20
Massiveness: 15
Speediness: 3
Stability(ness): 20
Specialization(ess):big gun, +2 against large targets
60

Gargoyles
While the gargoyles are mostly for show, some few amongst them possess heads that can track targets and produce jets of steam-propelled shrapnel from their mouths.
Destructiveness: 4
Massiveness: 3
Speediness: 20 (all told there are quite a lot of them)
Stability(ness): 13

---Defenses---

Steam
A perpetual layer of hot air obscures this castle, making it difficult to see and disrupting the path of light particles.
Specialization: 10
Integrity: 10
Massiveness: 20

Tesla Grid
When active, this will use large electrical discharges in an attempt to vaporise most anything that gets close.
Specialization: 20
Integrity: 5
Massiveness: 15

Rock walls
Everything has to stop somewhere...
Specialization: 0
Integrity: 12
Massiveness: 8

[Aklyon]

You can have people inside you at -1 still, they just aren't quite as relevant, since even if they're all dead you are the castle itself, so its still under control anyway. -1 (#) I suppose would be what you'd have.

[flame99]

Oh god it's finally finished. That is a long bloody sheet.

Spoiler: Fluxxstone (click to show/hide)

Name: The Fluxxstone, ruled by the Omnipotent Overmind
Color: #0f6e63

Background: The Fluxxstone is a great, lumbering thing in the sky. Close examination shows the seemingly rocky outside of the rough sphereoid to actually be flesh of a sort, though hardened against the elements. In the middle, there's a large hole, serving as a sort of docking bay for any entering, and doubling as a mouth to consume those the OO declares unworthy. Inside is a labyrinthine complex of interlocking tunnels, dead ends, and hideous horrors that the inhabitants navigate with uncanny ease. Speaking of which, each inhabitant is horribly deformed. The Fluxxstone demands sacrifice, and all those who inhabit it are commonly fed upon. The OO's favourite foods are lingering remnants of hope and sanity, with the blood of the once-humans a close second. All those inside are bound to it, so that any who leave without permission will fall dead, though many would consider that a fate more merciful than the remainder of their pitiful existence bound to the ever-shifting Fluxxstone. At the moment, it seems to have feasted on all of its crew, and lies devoid of life save for the demons scrabbling at the walls. However, it seeks to find more slaves soon.
The creature's heart is not one of blood, but rather a roiling portal to the evershifting dimension of Chaos called the Fluxx. It draws power from it, uses it in combat, and uses it for execution purposes. It's unknown what happens to those placed inside. If the screams are anything to go by, it isn't pleasant.

Starting present: Infernium Core

Starting grid location: D16, moving NE

Propulsion: 3
Structure: 4 / Integrity: 4
Shield: 2
Population: -1
Luck: 10

[Power] Raw Fluxx
Fluxx is gained or lost randomly each turn (No idea how much should be gained or lost, as I don't have any frame of reference). Fluxx can be used to instill temporary order into the chaos; the Fluxxstone can spend some of it to prevent any luck-based effects occurring to it for one turn. In addition, it can also give a temporary surge of speed.

--WEAPONS--
The Scourge of the Fluxx x2
20 destructiveness
15 massiveness
10 speed
10 stability
5 specialization
Designed to take advantage of hull breaches in the enemy ship. However, it can still deal major damage to pristine ships.
A truly terrible weapon, the Scourge of the Fluxx opens a massive breach of the Fluxx preferably in the heart of the ship. The beasts and chaos thereof ravage the ship. Unfortunately, it isn't the most reliable weapon. On one notable occasion, the only thing that arose from the portal was one admittedly pretty aggressive poodle.

Tear Asunder x8
10 Destructiveness
8 Massiveness
15 Speediness
7 Stability
0 Specialization
The method of attack the Fluxxstone most seems to favor. Similarly to the Scourge of the Fluxx, the Omnipotent Overmind simply tears a breach in the Fluxx. However, the breach is much more controlled, and is usually just used to begin weakening the opponent before finishing the the Scourge. Tear Asunder is perfectly dangerous on its own, however.

--DEFENSES--
Orbiting Fluxx x8
0 Specialization
11 Integrity
9 Massiveness
Nothing particularly fancy. Merely some orbiting crystallized Fluxx, which often veer to intercept incoming weaponry.

Dire Hatred x3
20 Specialization; Specializes in removing slower moving objects (Missiles, invading crew, unfortunate birds, etc.) from the area via mental blasts. While is *can* destroy laz0rs, it's probably not gonna.
10 Integrity
8 Massiveness
A curious method of self defense; rather than directly dealing with enemies actively, it seems the sheer hatred for all life can protect the Fluxxstone from projectiles.

Skin of Stone
0 Specialization
20 Integrity
15 Massiveness
A thick layer of the Fluxxstone is made up of hardened stones and metals. This "shield" is very strong, and hard to break. Despite the stone-like look, it's actually predominately calcium and flesh networks running through actual stone.

Slaves! Attack! x4
5 Specialization; Specialized in attacking on board intruders. The OO has no problem flinging hapless slaves at incoming missiles, however. Or even at the enemy forces if it feels it'd be funny enough. Occasionally, if they're really really lucky, they get a weapon first.
1 Integrity
1 Massiveness
When desperate, the OO has no problem sacrificing crew.

[micelus]

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Name: The Hand of God [Ruler: Queen Kekerezzar]
Color: #81CE5B
Theme/Background: A hive built of metal and covered with biomass harvested from prey and recycled servants, the Hand of God is a citadel representing the new found faith of its ruler all the while paying service to the insectile nature of her race. The Queen has also acquired direct aid from the angels themselves, which she happily uses to deal with her enemies.
Starting present: Gilded Box
Starting grid location: J8

Castle Stats
Propulsion: 9
Structure: 8 / Integrity: 8
Shield: 0
Population: 10
Luck: 3
Brooding Mothers [power]: ?? (awaiting GM approval increases population growth by #BMx2 per turn.

Weapons
Siege Swarm Hangar (launches swarms of shock troops to assault castles; useful only at close range. Uses population.)
Destructiveness: 15
Massiveness: 20
Speediness: 5
Stability(ness): 10
Specialization(ess): 10
Suggested Pop Use: 2

Skirmisher Swarm Hangar x2 (launches swift skirmishing troops to deal with enemies; also able to disable weapon/defense systems if they are able to get to them. Extremely effective at close range and somewhat effective at midrange. Uses population.)
Destructiveness: 10
Massiveness: 10
Speediness: 12
Stability(ness): 13
Specialization(ess): 15
Suggested Pop Use: 1

Toxin Spitters (emits toxic poisons.)
Destructiveness: 10
Massiveness: 10
Speediness: 20
Stability(ness): 20
Specialization(ess): 0

Angel Fire Cannons x2 (Just big cannons firing divine energy)
Destructiveness: 17
Massiveness: 18
Speediness: 10
Stability(ness): 15
Specialization(ess): 0

Shard Priests Conclave x2 (Combat priests sacrifice population to direct shards of highly explosive energy into enemies)
Destructiveness: 20
Massiveness: 5 (awaiting GM approval: small as its only a temple; balanced out by the population cost required to use it)
Speediness: 20
Stability(ness): 15
Specialization(ess): 5
Suggested Pop Use: 5

Defenses

Divine Shields (Generic shields powered by faith)
Specialisation: 5
Integrity: 20
Massiveness: 15

The Hallowed Choir (nullifies the effect of magical damage)
Specialisation: 15
Integrity: 10
Massiveness: 15

Ritual of Fertility (restores population by 1/4 of total damage dealt)
Specialisation 20
Integrity: 5
Massiveness: 15

Wall of Flesh (sacrifice population to absorb damage)
Specialisation: 5
Integrity: 15
Massiveness: 20
Suggested Pop Use: 1/4 of damage if used.

Did I do it right?

[Eric Blank]

Okay, here's my application; tell me what won't work for you.

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Name: Heaven's Acropolis
Color: FFCC00
Theme: flying fortress city built by human hands. Includes battlements, lobes for storage, onboard factories, domiciles, greenhouses, wind turbines, a fusion generator, six engines, three separate hangars, and an auxiliary capacitor
The inhabitants are the vanguard of a group of political refugees seeking a new home where they can be their own masters. They came ready to fight to permit colonization to proceed.
Leader: Captain Tholin Areseer
Desired present: infernium core
Square: E16.

Stats:
6 prop
12 structure/ 12 integrity
0 shield
7 pop
5 luck

Power: Auxiliary Capacitor:
Captain can direct 1d4 of power to engines, integrity maintenance systems or weapons stabilization systems to provide advantages in specific situations. Charge can also be expended to manufacture drone squadrons. Capacitor will only provide bonus for one turn, will take 2 turns to recharge, and can be damaged as per an engine.
Capacitor is charged by the vessel's fusion core and receives 1 charge every 3 turns if the vessel is under power (engines online) or 1 charge per turn if the vessel is anchored/drifting, by generating additional power from wind turbines. (Turbines also a valid target of damage when anchored.) The generation rate at anchor is affected by a lack or excess of wind. A lack would reduce the charge rate to 1 per 2 turns, and an excess would increase it to 1 per turn or more on gm approval.
(Awaiting GM's say or more data to determine how capacitor should affect propulsion, integrity and weapons damage)
Charge: 5/5

Weapons:
Shredder cannon: 60 pts x2
20 destr, 15 mass, 5 speed, 15 stability, 5 specialization (large area of effect energy weapon for tar getting structures.) Uses electromagnetism and high-frequency vibrations to induce stresses in a structure in order to rip it apart. Can be used to push or pull objects.

Artillery: 60pts x4
17 destr, 13 mass, 7 speed, 18 stability, 5 spec (40mm artillery battery for damaging moderately armored targets.)

Precision lasers: 40pts x6
5 dest, 3 mass, 12 speed, 20 stab, 0 spec. (Long range precision lasers capable of intercepting incoming projectiles.)

Unmanned drones: 50pts x6
14 dam, 11 mass, 10 speed, 15 stab, 0 spec. (Long-range unmanned combat drones, treating them as a normal weapon, but requires 1 pop per drone squadron to operate. Can intercept incoming projectiles)
Drone squadrons can be manufactured at the factory at 1 squadron per 3 turns under normal conditions, or manufactured in 1 turn if a charge is spent from the capacitor.

Defenses:

Ablative plating 40pts
12 spec, 20 integ, 8 mass - absorbs damage

Point defense lasers 40 pts - targets incoming projectiles
20 spec, 11 integ, 9 mass

Damage control drones 20pts - attempt to repair or prevent loss of systems
5 spec, 9 integ, 6 mass
(Vessel keeps one DCD squadron in hangars at all times. Can be replaced once every 3 turns by factory or within one turn if charge is spent.)

Evacuation cars 20pts - protects population by removing many of them from the castle during combat (all but 3?)
9 spec, 5 integ, 6 mass

[Shadestyle]

Oh god it's finally finished. That is a long bloody sheet.

Spoiler: Fluxxstone (click to show/hide)

Name: The Fluxxstone, ruled by the Omnipotent Overmind
Color: #0f6e63

Background: The Fluxxstone is a great, lumbering thing in the sky. Close examination shows the seemingly rocky outside of the rough sphereoid to actually be flesh of a sort, though hardened against the elements. In the middle, there's a large hole, serving as a sort of docking bay for any entering, and doubling as a mouth to consume those the OO declares unworthy. Inside is a labyrinthine complex of interlocking tunnels, dead ends, and hideous horrors that the inhabitants navigate with uncanny ease. Speaking of which, each inhabitant is horribly deformed. The Fluxxstone demands sacrifice, and all those who inhabit it are commonly fed upon. The OO's favourite foods are lingering remnants of hope and sanity, with the blood of the once-humans a close second. All those inside are bound to it, so that any who leave without permission will fall dead, though many would consider that a fate more merciful than the remainder of their pitiful existence bound to the ever-shifting Fluxxstone.
The creature's heart is not one of blood, but rather a roiling portal to the evershifting dimension of Chaos called the Fluxx. It draws power from it, uses it in combat, and uses it for execution purposes. It's unknown what happens to those placed inside. If the screams are anything to go by, it isn't pleasant.

Starting present: Infernium Core

Starting grid location: D16, moving NE

Propulsion: 3
Structure: 7 / Integrity: 7
Shield: 5
Population: 5
Luck: 10


--WEAPONS--
The Scourge of the Fluxx
20 destructiveness
15 massiveness
10 speed
10 stability
5 specialization
Designed to take advantage of hull breaches in the enemy ship. However, it can still deal major damage to pristine ships.
A truly terrible weapon, the Scourge of the Fluxx opens a massive breach of the Fluxx preferably in the heart of the ship. The beasts and chaos thereof ravage the ship. Unfortunately, it isn't the most reliable weapon. On one notable occasion, the only thing that arose from the portal was one admittedly pretty aggressive poodle.

Tear Asunder
10 Destructiveness
8 Massiveness
15 Speediness
7 Stability
0 Specialization
The method of attack the Fluxxstone most seems to favor. Similarly to the Scourge of the Fluxx, the Omnipotent Overmind simply tears a breach in the Fluxx. However, the breach is much more controlled, and is usually just used to begin weakening the opponent before finishing the the Scourge. Tear Asunder is perfectly dangerous on its own, however.

--DEFENSES--
Orbiting Fluxx
0 Specialization
11 Integrity
9 Massiveness
Nothing particularly fancy. Merely some orbiting crystallized Fluxx, which often veer to intercept incoming weaponry.

Dire Hatred
20 Specialization; Specializes in removing slower moving objects (Missiles, invading crew, unfortunate birds, etc.) from the area via mental blasts. While is *can* destroy laz0rs, it's probably not gonna.
10 Integrity
8 Massiveness
A curious method of self defense; rather than directly dealing with enemies actively, it seems the sheer hatred for all life can protect the Fluxxstone from projectiles.

Skin of Stone
0 Specialization
20 Integrity
15 Massiveness
A thick layer of the Fluxxstone is made up of hardened stones and metals. This "shield" is very strong, and hard to break. Despite the stone-like look, it's actually predominately calcium and flesh networks running through actual stone.

Slaves! Attack!
5 Specialization; Specialized in attacking on board intruders. The OO has no problem flinging hapless slaves at incoming missiles, however. Or even at the enemy forces if it feels it'd be funny enough. Occasionally, if they're really really lucky, they get a weapon first.
1 Integrity
1 Massiveness
When desperate, the OO has no problem sacrificing crew.

((Bleh, it's like the bizzaro version of mine. *Shudders in abject fear*))

[flame99]

Oh god it's finally finished. That is a long bloody sheet.

Spoiler: Fluxxstone (click to show/hide)

Name: The Fluxxstone, ruled by the Omnipotent Overmind
Color: #0f6e63

Background: The Fluxxstone is a great, lumbering thing in the sky. Close examination shows the seemingly rocky outside of the rough sphereoid to actually be flesh of a sort, though hardened against the elements. In the middle, there's a large hole, serving as a sort of docking bay for any entering, and doubling as a mouth to consume those the OO declares unworthy. Inside is a labyrinthine complex of interlocking tunnels, dead ends, and hideous horrors that the inhabitants navigate with uncanny ease. Speaking of which, each inhabitant is horribly deformed. The Fluxxstone demands sacrifice, and all those who inhabit it are commonly fed upon. The OO's favourite foods are lingering remnants of hope and sanity, with the blood of the once-humans a close second. All those inside are bound to it, so that any who leave without permission will fall dead, though many would consider that a fate more merciful than the remainder of their pitiful existence bound to the ever-shifting Fluxxstone.
The creature's heart is not one of blood, but rather a roiling portal to the evershifting dimension of Chaos called the Fluxx. It draws power from it, uses it in combat, and uses it for execution purposes. It's unknown what happens to those placed inside. If the screams are anything to go by, it isn't pleasant.

Starting present: Infernium Core

Starting grid location: D16, moving NE

Propulsion: 3
Structure: 7 / Integrity: 7
Shield: 5
Population: 5
Luck: 10


--WEAPONS--
The Scourge of the Fluxx
20 destructiveness
15 massiveness
10 speed
10 stability
5 specialization
Designed to take advantage of hull breaches in the enemy ship. However, it can still deal major damage to pristine ships.
A truly terrible weapon, the Scourge of the Fluxx opens a massive breach of the Fluxx preferably in the heart of the ship. The beasts and chaos thereof ravage the ship. Unfortunately, it isn't the most reliable weapon. On one notable occasion, the only thing that arose from the portal was one admittedly pretty aggressive poodle.

Tear Asunder
10 Destructiveness
8 Massiveness
15 Speediness
7 Stability
0 Specialization
The method of attack the Fluxxstone most seems to favor. Similarly to the Scourge of the Fluxx, the Omnipotent Overmind simply tears a breach in the Fluxx. However, the breach is much more controlled, and is usually just used to begin weakening the opponent before finishing the the Scourge. Tear Asunder is perfectly dangerous on its own, however.

--DEFENSES--
Orbiting Fluxx
0 Specialization
11 Integrity
9 Massiveness
Nothing particularly fancy. Merely some orbiting crystallized Fluxx, which often veer to intercept incoming weaponry.

Dire Hatred
20 Specialization; Specializes in removing slower moving objects (Missiles, invading crew, unfortunate birds, etc.) from the area via mental blasts. While is *can* destroy laz0rs, it's probably not gonna.
10 Integrity
8 Massiveness
A curious method of self defense; rather than directly dealing with enemies actively, it seems the sheer hatred for all life can protect the Fluxxstone from projectiles.

Skin of Stone
0 Specialization
20 Integrity
15 Massiveness
A thick layer of the Fluxxstone is made up of hardened stones and metals. This "shield" is very strong, and hard to break. Despite the stone-like look, it's actually predominately calcium and flesh networks running through actual stone.

Slaves! Attack!
5 Specialization; Specialized in attacking on board intruders. The OO has no problem flinging hapless slaves at incoming missiles, however. Or even at the enemy forces if it feels it'd be funny enough. Occasionally, if they're really really lucky, they get a weapon first.
1 Integrity
1 Massiveness
When desperate, the OO has no problem sacrificing crew.

((Bleh, it's like the bizzaro version of mine. *Shudders in abject fear*))

((I hadn't actually looked at yours, yet. Though, it is pretty similar. I was going for a more Elder God/Warhammer Warpstone feel, though, and it seems like yours is more of an idyllic fantasy kingdom thing? Still, though, I just know that we're going to both roll an instantdeath event or something on turn 1.))

[Shadestyle]

((Oh we totally have to team up/kill one anouther, Chaotic evil and Chaotic stupid go so well together.  But mine is intended to be more of a "Pray to the RNG, or it will transform your children into wolves made of heavily irradiated macaroni" type castle.))

[10ebbor10]

Question:

This is a very flexible stat that depends on what you want it to do, and is separate from the main 5 above as far as points go

Am I correct in assuming that this means that we don't need to spend points for this stat, ie, opposed as to how everyone else did it?

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Name: Devastator Airship
Color: Red
Theme/Background: A massive airship, equipped with flamethrowers, chemical weaponry and other nastiness.
 
Starting present: Infernium Core
Starting grid location: N 18


Propulsion: 5
Structure: 10 / Integrity: 10
Shield: 0
Population: 5
Luck: 10
Power: ?  [Retribution-capacitor]
     - Positively affected : Vessel being hit by energy weapons of any kind (Energy can be taken very broad here)
     - Negatively affected: Damage to engines and/or the capacitor itself
     - Usage: Can be used to instantly teleport the vessel a number of tiles. If another vessel is occupying the destination, locations of vessels are switched.


Weaponry : 

"Incinerator"*2
6 destructiveness
4 massiveness
10 speed
10 stability
20 specialization "Damage over time"

"Dual Flamethrowers capable of lighting up the skies, and all nearby vessels. "

Poison Gas Launcher*4

2 destructiveness
2 massiveness
1 speed
5 stability
15 specialization "Area Denial/Damage over time"


"Poison Gas launchers intended not so much as to fire directly at the enemy vessel, but rather to strategically deny enemy tactics by coating entire areas in poisonous gas."

"Aerial Torpedo"*2

8 destructiveness
6 massiveness
1 speed
5 stability
0 specialization

An airborne torpedo, little more than an explosive charge attached to small gas bag and turbine engine. Slow, yet moderately deadly.

"ClF³-Torpedo"

20 destructiveness
5 massiveness
1 speed
14 stability
20 specialization "Releases a deadly poison gas cloud on impact, as well as igniting the enemy vessel"

"An aerial torpedo (effectively a micro-airship), loaded to the brim with Chlorine Tri-Fluoride. It's highly destructive even for it's small size, but that comes at a serious cost. Being inherently unstable, any hit to the weapon system is likely to set it off, and will necessitate dumping the weapon system, as well as abrupt movement to evacuate the poison gas."


Defenses:

Retribution Capacitor
     - Integrity: 5
     - Massiveness: 15
     - Specialization : 20

"The retribution capacitor absorbs all energy weaponry used against it, using it to charge the Devastor's blink drive.

"Blaze" Protocol:
    - Specialization : 16
    - Integrity: 12
    - Massiveness : 4

"By diverting and venting the fuel channels from the primary flamethrowers, the vessel is coated in a protective layer of flame, heavily distorting kinetic projectiles and prematurely detonating missiles."

Armor slabs
    - Specialization : 0
    - Integrity: 16
    - Massiveness: 12

"Armor of last resort."

[Aklyon]

Question:

This is a very flexible stat that depends on what you want it to do, and is separate from the main 5 above as far as points go

Am I correct in assuming that this means that we don't need to spend points for this stat, ie, opposed as to how everyone else did it?

You would be correct there. Power gains/loses points depending on how it works, like how RAM's is described.
Looking over all the thing things now.

[flame99]

Oh, right, power. That's a thing.

Added to my sheet.

[Aklyon]

Okay, so in about the right order:
Kevak: Pending
Criptfeind: Pending
Cptn Kaladin Anrizlokum: Later
Arcvasti: Probably later
OREOSOME: Possibly later

GiglameshDespair (Krarkkus, Sky Kraken): Pretty cool Sky Kraken. Stats are alright, though what effects the Blood/how do you get more of it, and what can you use it for as an example? Defenses can be added later if you've got some in mind.

ansontan2000 (Baron Andrews of the Laputae's Laputa): That name sounds like a reference to something, but the name is eluding me. Stats are alright, power's undetermined so I've got nothing to say there, and 40 points of weapons is well under the active cap. Defenses are too big though, they have to fit into 40 points; with 60 and only three stats all of them could be maxed without a problem without any modifications or augmentations to them, which I was trying to avoid.

flabort (High Councilor Flabor of Castle Arrip): This one is pretty neato, with all the magic and rope bridges. You've only got 27 points spent though, so like I just answered, you don't need to put those three into Power. As far as I can tell, you make the metal with magic and get about 200lbs. per turn, and spend 140lbs. of that on castle maintenance, so the leftover amount would go into Metal Production [Power] if you wanted to keep track of it like that. So you'd have 60 lbs. in it right now, correct? Also, one of your defenses is over 40 points.

Shadestyle (Illustrious King Portsummon's Castle Zipworld): Interesting idea. You only have 19 points spent though, something is missing. Warp stat and Warp crystals are alright, but how do you get the crystals? Weapons and defenses are ok.

RAM (Dr. Coggington): Mad science! Stats work out, Power works, weapons work, defenses work! Wondering why you didn't start in a cloud, but thats your decision to make.

flameboy99 (The Omnipotent Overmind of The Fluxxstone): Sounds like quite the chaos beast there, although its stats don't seem to add up to 30. 3+7+5+(10+5)+10=40. The weapons and the defenses should work though, and the power works. Would a d6 work for the random gain/loss, or do you want to use something else for it?

micelus (Queen Kekerezzar of The Hand of God): A pop-throwing hive appears! You've only got 25 points spent, like I answered for flabort points in Power are not part of the 30. What determines the x in 'plus x pop per turn'? The Shard Priest Conclaves low massiveness is acceptable as long as they use much more population than the other weapons. The Bioengineers are a bit overspecialized for a defense (Even if you have it over, the reduction stops at what you get at 20 since I don't have it scaled out any further), but if they don't prevent damage outside of getting hit by it in combat, they wouldn't have any in the first place, wouldn't they? Also, since they're named hangars, I'm guessing the troops thrown out of some of the weapons have an amount of flight potential, or do they just depend on momentum to reach the target before falling and splattering on the ground?

Eric Blank (Captain Tholin Are seer of Heaven's Acropolis): Not the fanciest or uniquest, but very practical sounding. You're missing three points like a couple others, Power is not part of the pointbuy stats as previously mentioned. What is the capacitor starting at, and what recharges it? The weapons and defenses sound fine.

10ebbor10 (The Devastator Airship): You have like, all of the fire. And things that cause fire. Stats work, Weapons and defenses work, and for lack of a better idea what to start it at lets put the Retribution capacitor at 1. Does it leak Retribution if its damaged, or just lose some charge?

[GiglameshDespair]

Laputa is the name of the space stations in UFO: Aftershock.

Blood would be generated by the Deep Organs, and can be used to clot hull breaches or overcharge weaponry and defences.

[10ebbor10]

10ebbor10 (The Devastator Airship): You have like, all of the fire. And things that cause fire. Stats work, Weapons and defenses work, and for lack of a better idea what to start it at lets put the Retribution capacitor at 1. Does it leak Retribution if its damaged, or just lose some charge?

It was intended as becoming increasingly unreliable as the system becomes more damaged.