Done. Do tell me if you can't use Imgur for some reason.
I can read it, but I am afraid you are not done yet. There are a few assorted errors here and there, so I'll try to list off what I see immediately.
Kyle's Sheets
1). Your current stats and the stats that you could have do not add up, even after applying stats from being Level 3.
2). You've taken Basic Martial Artists without adding Rock Smash to your move list.
3). You've listed the incorrect money amount, and you mostly won't be starting with items unless you pass it by me first. Small amenities will available when you arrive anyways.
Satori's Sheets
1). Experience is cumulative. Satori would have 90 EXP right off the bat and would need to get 20 more EXP to become Level 11.
2). Satori is missing it's Evasion stats.
And I'm also missing a background.
Ok here's my trainer and pokemon, I hope it's all ok. I don't really mind which region he's from if I get in.
Trainer
Pokemon
Leaf was born into a travelling circus, his mother was the ringmaster and his father was the lead acrobat of the show. Ever since he was born he was surrounded by the wonders of the troupe. He grew up among clowns, acrobats, magicians and anyone else the troupe picked up along the way. The young boy did his best to learn from each and every one of them, doing his best to learn the secrets of each fabulous trade of the various people that travelled with them. With his eagerness to learn from the performers he made quite a few friends amongst them despite the ever shifting nature of the circus. He also grew up among the multitude of pokemon that inhabited the circus.
Leaf got his first pokemon on his thirteenth birthday as a gift from his mother, it was a small Zoura and the teenager couldn't be any more happy with it. He wasted no time picking the name Mirage for his small pokemon. Despite his enthusiasm however raising Mirage proved a lot more difficult that he had expected it to be, the little creature was unruly and generally didn't listen to a single thing that Leaf tried to get him to do. This wasn't helped by the fact that it was sometimes impossible to find her due to the fact that she would change into almost everything and everyone that she saw.
It wasn't until an almost tragic event occurred that Mirage started to listen to Leaf. One day when they were taking one of their few breaks, Mirage and leaf were down by a river and he was once again trying to teach her. It was having about the same success of every single previous event, when she was down by the riverside she slipped and fell into the river. She couldn't swim. Yelling out Leaf jumped down in the river after Mirage and tried his best to rescue the pokemon, he fought his way through the current and managed to grab the pokemon. They were still being taken further down the river though, that probably would have been the end, if his yell hadn't attracted some of the other performers and that he managed to luckily grasp onto the edge of one of the banks. He received a scolding from his parents but from that day onwards Mirage was Leaf's closest friend.
When he was sixteen his parents decided it was finally time for him to have his own adventure in this world. At first he refused but eventually the idea of travelling on his own and the words of his parents took over him. He set off on that journey with his faithful companion Mirage and went to find adventure and his own destiny.
Again, you won't start with items unless it's something small and you check it by me first. Darkvision goggles included. That said... Things seem to check out.
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