Illgeo - Not a terrible player, but I would recommend working on activity and proactive play to improve his town game. Getting mislynched isn't the worst thing in the world (get to that in a bit), but it does hamper the town's chances of winning. I would recommend interacting more with the other players and setting up more cases to push and evolve.
Salsacookies - First game, so not much to really say. Definitely, working to get a better read on other players is key. If you have a null read on a player, drill them until that read has turned into something else. If you feel like a player is scummy, examine why, present your thoughts, and see how they respond. It's okay to be wrong.
GayArchaea - Hard to tell, since Day 1 play is so very different than the rest of mafia. Seems like he's learning pretty quickly. Would like to play another game with him in it.
Kilojoule Proton - Same as Salsacookies. I would def recommend working on why you feel a certain way about a player. Also, when you are at L-1 (About to be lynched) make sure to claim, even if you're just claiming VT. Lynching power roles just should not happen on Day 1. Even if scum are fakeclaiming, at least they're fake claiming early so that the real power role can out them.
Cptn Kaladin Anrizlokum - Good play. Not much of a read, since this slot was pretty quiet all game. If I hadn't let my meta read on Illgeo color my suspicions, I would have been more attentive to this slot.
Worldmaster27 - Good play, especially for a new player. One thing though, NEVER stop conversation. If someone is trying to interact with someone else, ending the day is insanely scum-sided. The point of mafia, when playing town, is to have as much information as possible. More interactions can ONLY be bad for scum in the long run.
TheDarkStar - Good scum play, though midway through Day 2 I started becoming suspicious. I probably would have pursued a TDS lynch if Illgeo hadn't been playing to his meta.
Jim Groovester - Good play, of course. I'd love to go through a full game with Jim sometime. I think he was limited by the fact that the scum team were terrified of him and killed him ASAP.