Hi guy, I just started my first succession game. With barely one game under my belt I may not be the best to tell you this, but anyway.
You should edit you first post and use it as the game rules and details. A succession game seems to be mostly working the forum, by that I mean (write better).
Read all the better than yours and mine succession games on the forums and take stuff you like from everywhere.
Might want to check your game once a day as well.(I forget too.)
Also I have seen that if events happen in game like "ravens killed me" you might want to exaggerate for the sake of entertainment. Thats what all the people I read do anyway. Like seriously make stuff up.
I'd like to join for a turn or at least a dorf (zubb, farmer) if this thing gets ironed out some.
Mainly don't quit, even if your terrible. People will play eventualy. Good fort to you.
Wow, I don't EVER lie about what happened, but I don't go all nothing on the details either. "Ravens killed me" is a summary that paints no picture and is the bare-bones facts. I might write instead: "One raven swooped in, biting my eye, and as I was busy trying to choke it, these other ravens came at me pecking and scratching, it was like that scene in Hitchcock's "The Birds!". Anyway, I eventually succumbed to their ferocious attacks and they cawed with laughter at their newly slaughtered feast."
The story is in the "how" and the "why" and the particularities of the "what". "How" did the ravens kill you, "why" did they do it and "specifically, in what" manner? It also helps to understand "how" your person got into that situation, "why" they were there in the first place and "specifically what" they were doing that led up to their demise. Sometimes it's more interesting to tell it from an observer's point of view - for instance, suppose the person telling the story is the adventurer's weapon? That point of view might be similarly bitter because "your" mount, (the adventurer), was slain by these ravens - now you have to attract another mount by being all shiny and "ooo look, a sword!" (or whatever).