@Kansa, Sen has 4 Paperstock, since I'm doing away with her normal paperstock mechanic to allow her a bit more strength.
This would have been nice to know at the beginning, since it puts everything into perspective now. Before it was hard to tell how easily she could have spammed things or the relative costs of her spells. So... Here are my revised thoughts. This is assuming that paperstock can't be recovered during a fight of course, and that increasing the amount of paperstock is going to require a perk for another point.
Thoughts:Blood Soaked needs to specify that the bonus to damage is to the range of the roll, and not just a straight up damage modifier, because the way it's worded it seems like a straight up damage modifier. Though since she's dropping a quarter of her paper stock on that spell... It could be a straight up damage modifier.
Reaping Spiral still needs to be based off a stat, so that its damage can scale with her levels and that the target can make an appropiate defense roll. I don't care what it's purpose is for or whether you make the damage fixed to the value of her STR/MAG, I'm just saying that flat damage is going to eventually be obsolete. But if it scales with a stat it'll be fine.
Kicking and Screaming is... Yeah. Moving on.
Insult to Injury is even more hilariously underpowered now. 50% paperstock for a whole extra 2 damage a turn? Why even bother?
Paper Dragon is better now. Expending 75% paperstock for 4x STR damage is... Honestly still way better than anything a magic user could pump out. Especially with the added AoE damage... Either increase the paper stock to 4, or make the damage 3x and 1x and it'll be
fine more acceptable. Because for something that Sen can easily bust out it's really damaging, and the cost isn't high enough to reflect that.
I still have no idea how the heck Demonic Cruficiation is supposed to work. It just looks like a bunch of fluff, without any actual effects or damage. So I can't really talk about it because... I don't know what it does.
Bloom looks even weaker now. The instakill chance should probably be increased to compensate.
Needlestorm is alright now. No real complaints here.
Weren't the world-spanning organizations supposed to be used very sparingly?
Though with DARPA apparently taken over and a trainload of combat robots going through Iraq, that does sound like the kind of thing we'd call IRIS and MPRA in for. Because it's a reasonable response to the situation. The only unreasonable thing is to expect them to moblize so quickly, since they aren't on combat alert.
I have absolutely no idea how Linda has so much pull with MPRA to get a couple of drones. Unless MPRA wanted to control the site for themselves...
I have not read the IC thread yet.