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[MaximumZero]

Nice nice nice! Codec call! *metalgearbrofist*

That's been my ringtone for quite a while.

[TwilightWalker]

Oof, just read through the entire thing. What a ride.

[Nighthawk]

Oof, just read through the entire thing. What a ride.

Welcome to the cult.

[Blaze]

Urgh, it is really Friday already? I've completely lost track of time.


I'm actually really surprised that this last update has garnered such positive replies. I was pretty unhappy with how it turned out as I was rushing through it to fulfill my own self-imposed deadline. I guess it's one of those "Observer sees a work of art, the artist sees a flawed realization of what it could of been" things.

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YOUR DIALOGUE IS SO DERISIVELY IRRELEVANT IT BORDERS BABBLING!
YOUR CHARACTERS' INITIAL INTRODUCTIONS ARE SO DULL AND HOMOLOGOUS THEY'RE ALMOST INTERCHANGABLE!
THE SPEED OF REGULAR UPDATES IS RIDICULOUS! I'VE SEEN NOSES THAT RUN FASTER YET YOU STILL FAIL TO PRODUCE ANYTHING WORTHWHILE YOU SLUG!
THE ADDITIONS OF MEANINGLESS AND VAGUE REFERENCES SERVES NOTHING BUT TO ESTABLISH YOURSELF AS A SOCIAL OUTCAST!
THE FACT THAT YOU INTRODUCE NEW CHARACTERS AND THEN PUT THEM ASIDE WITHOUT ANY THOUGHT IS INCONCIEVABLE!
YOUR PLOT IS SO CONFOUNDING THAT EVEN YOU PROBABLY AREN'T EVEN AWARE HOW IT'S GOING TO GO!
MISTAKES, MISSED OPPORTUNITIES, AND CONTRADICTIONS HERE AND HERE ANDHEREANDHEREANDHEREANDHEREANDHERE
ANDHEREANDHEREANDHEREATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATA!!!!!!!






YOUR DEPICTIONS OF SUCH HIGHLY POPULARIZED CHARACTERS IS SO AMATUERISH IT UTTERLY DISGUSTS ME!
YOUR WILLINGNESS TO SHELL OUT SAID CHARACTERS IN PANTY SHOTS AND FANSERVICE BELONGS IN SOME LOW-BUDGET, BOTTOM-GRADE SMUT!
GET OUT MY SIGHT YOU MAGGOT!






YOU SERIOUSLY HAVE THE GALL TO  BELIEVE THE PALTRY SUMS YOU DONATE TO TOADY MEANS ANYTHING YOU INCOMPETENT SIMPLETON?!
THE ONLY REASON PEOPLE BOTHER TO EVEN GIVE THIS THREAD A GLANCE IS THE MONEY THAT GETS THROWN AROUND AS IF IT WERE SOME BACK ALLEY WHOREHOUSE!
YOUR MONEY IS ALREADY DONATED!

Anyway, votes are open, hopefully we can catch up.

Cicero: Space Rangers
Sirus: Super Time Force Ultra
i2amroy: Agarest Zero
NullForceOmega: Magicite
IronyOwl: Xenonauts
Sinistar: Legions of Ashworld
Shadowlord: The Last Federation

There's only seven so we need that last one.

[Sirus]

Bah, those anime muscledudes don't know what they're talking about

[TwilightWalker]

Bah, those anime muscledudes don't know what they're talking about

'Tis truth. Also, vote for Agarest Zero.

I should probably play my copy of Agarest: Generations of War...

[n9103]

Bah, those anime muscledudes don't know what they're talking about

'Tis truth. Also, vote for Agarest Zero.

I should probably play my copy of Agarest: Generations of War...

Also, they're wearing dresses, and at least one has a hair bow.

Also, also, Blaze-chan is far too hard on herself.
But I'm just an INTJ, so what do I know? </sarcasm>

[IronyOwl]

Urgh, it is really Friday already? I've completely lost track of time.

Well maybe if you weren't curving it so much it'd be easier to keep track of!

Bah, those anime muscledudes don't know what they're talking about

'Tis truth.

I dunno, that last one's kinda rocking that bow and hairstyle...

[USEC_OFFICER]

I dunno, that last one's kinda rocking that bow and hairstyle...

It's those magnificent, flowing locks of hair. A lesser man would not be able to pull it off.

[Shakerag]

-snip-

*slow clap*

As a bit of analysis, responding line by line:
Irrelevant or not, the dialogue certainly leans on the entertaining side of things.
There have been a slew of battletitship girls introduced.  I certainly lost track of who is who a little ways back.  Their introductions -do- basically amount to "Hi, I'm a filler character."
Speed of updates is relatively okay.  I've seen worse offenders.
I don't catch a lot of references, but I'm A Bit Out of Touch with things.  I think that here, of all places, we don't really give much of a shit about "social outcasts". 
Re: new characters - see point #2 above.
Considering that, between my significant other and myself, a conversation that would take most people a few minutes takes us three hours and involves half a dozen tangents ... plot wandering doesn't really ping on my radar.
Quit thinking about food so much, fatty, and maybe you can focus on making fewer mistakes.

Meh, it's your story; portray the characters however you want.
Fanservice - Obviously a means by which to distract your readers from how fat -you- are.

Donations - Well, every bit does help.  I'm curious as to how the individual amounts break down, but I'm willing to bet that if all of the $1/$5/$10 donators stopped, the monthly bottom like would take a bit of a hit.
I think many of us are sticking around for the writing/story and, as I've mentioned, likely the gravitational pull from all your fat.

I should probably play my copy of Agarest: Generations of War...

You and me both, buddy.  At least I got to the second generation before getting distracted by something shiny. 

Also voting for Agarest Zero.

[i2amroy]

Yay votes! Someday my waifu point grinding will work!

[Nighthawk]

Did you say waifu point grinding? I shall support your noble efforts, sir!

Voting for i2amroy.

[Blaze]

It looks like my laptop's internal wireless adapter went kaput. It doesn't appear on the device manager unless I look for hidden devices and even then it says it's not attached.

I'm currently logged in on a public computer, but there's no way I'm going to risk logging into Paypal/Steam on it. So I'll have to put this on hold until I can somehow obtain an external adapter, replace my internal one, or it magically starts working again. Which isn't going to happen until at least Wednesday.

[IronyOwl]

We warned you about operating delicate machinery in extreme high-G environments, Blaze!

That aside, my condolences on the loss of your internets.

[Shadowlord]

Those are fairly cheap on... amazon... I see how that could be a problem if you can't plug your laptop into your router's ethernet jacks (or if it doesn't have them, or you just have an all-in-one router-modem with wireless).

The Best Seller in laptop wireless adapters on amazon is http://www.amazon.com/Edimax-EW-7811Un-Adapter-Raspberry-Supports/dp/B003MTTJOY/ref=sr_1_2?s=pc&ie=UTF8&qid=1411186529&sr=1-2 and appears to be $8.70. (Obviously if you're not in/near the US, this wouldn't necessarily be helpful either)

I'm sure there are actual physical stores that sell them too (Best Buy perhaps?), although they might be almost certainly are more expensive.