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too fast for me. Contracts should be longer, more drawn out.

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at just the right pace. Keep doing what you're doing

4 (66.7%)

too slowly. There's too much time where not much is happening

2 (33.3%)

slowly at times, quickly at others. (Explain what you mean)

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Total Members Voted: 6

[scapheap]

Clair should always block.

[Samarkand]

To make sure I understand the magic system I made this visual aid. (Pardon the shittyness it's my first time using mspaint)

A) Do not apologize for your drawing skills. Celebrate them. That diagram communicates effectively your understanding of magic in this world.

B) I fully approve of this distillation of the understanding of magic I have presented. My only comment is that the final characteristic, of races inherently using the energy effectively, may or may not be implemented. Other than that, dead on. Actually, you had one characteristic which you accidentally included which I had planned but not alluded to yet.

C) Unrelated to this beautiful diagram, I am working on the next turn but it may not come tonight. I am dog tired and my back is extraordinarily sore. I will have it posted tomorrow night at the absolute latest though.

[Remuthra]

Alright, I block while jumping in a startled fashion.

[The Froggy Ninja]

B) I fully approve of this distillation of the understanding of magic I have presented. My only comment is that the final characteristic, of races inherently using the energy effectively, may or may not be implemented. Other than that, dead on. Actually, you had one characteristic which you accidentally included which I had planned but not alluded to yet.

That's why I put in the part about crystals in their person like the blink dogs. Also what did I predict?

[Samarkand]

Also what did I predict?

I'll leave that as a mini game for you, as an observer. Look carefully at your statements (there aren't many of them) and figure out which ones say something more than has been said in my description.

[The Froggy Ninja]

Is it that they absorb energy instead of generating it?

[Samarkand]

Is it that they absorb energy instead of generating it?

Yup.

[The Froggy Ninja]

Well that was a fair assumption as that's usually how this kind of magic system works. But, then again I may just be a nerd at magic systems.

[Samarkand]

Hooray for nerds!

The turn has been posted, and I may have time tomorrow morning to work on stuff, so I'm looking for what lore needs cleaning up/expanding, since that's what the poll says needs to be done the most. I've changed the poll so you can tell me what sections need changing. Thank you to everyone for giving me feedback, and I hope you enjoy the first mission.

Also, lots of information is available if you hold your mouse over stuff, mostly what's in spoilers. I'm experimenting with using this to present information, since I saw it done elsewhere, and it looks slick.

[Remuthra]

Yesssss...

[Samarkand]

Turn posted and Challenges sections expanded drastically. Also, I caught a number of terribly embarrassing grammar mistakes. Please understand that these are made because I'm writing quickly, not because I have the IQ of a McDouble.

[Samarkand]

Just added a short section on metals. The turn is mostly written and will be posted shortly after Remuthera posts an action.

[Remuthra]

What are we doing? As it seems to me, we haven't moved on yet, and I don't have anything to do post-combat.

[Samarkand]

What are we doing? As it seems to me, we haven't moved on yet, and I don't have anything to do post-combat.

Ah. Then I'll post the next turn in a couple of minutes.

[The Froggy Ninja]

Psst. Look at my IC post *hint hint nudge nudge*.