Mark: His eyes, which could be taken for very, very light brown, but are actually honey-yellow.
Excellent Mark.
Catalyst Emotion: Approval, both of others and his own, in the sense of doing the right thing.
A bit...well, I've said it before and I'll say it again: It's not a very "active" emotion. Fear, hate, anger, lust, guilt, even depression are all "Active" emotions that drive out rational thought and replacing it with emotional response. That's a bit part of what the catalyst emotion is supposed to be.
Alright, I understand that the whole background of my character is invalid if magic is not inherited. I'll rewrite it, if that's the case. Sorry. Are my skills alright?
It's fine.
The source material was not focused on the details of magic or where it came from, so it's all good.
Don't expect "primitive crafting" to be making you anything detailed or complex without a great roll, and I assume "remedy-making" is making medicines from plants and such?
Yes, remedy-making is pharmaceutics, just tribal and retarded. And I picked the "primitive crafting" thing because I think it's something a guy like him should know how to do - I realize it's probably bloody useless.
About the catalyst emotion thing, I just couldn't define it correctly - I mean that warm fuzzy feeling you get when you are praised. In my head, Yuun does things to please others without really considering if what he is doing is worthy; therefore, his desire to be good and useful replaces his common sense. However, if that's not convincing, I'll change it to Excitement or something.
Ah, another question. Is the Mark actually excellent, or are you being sarcastic? I tend to assume I'm a dumbass in these situations, so...
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