I have tried this and here are some notes:
* You should allow 15 minutes for your first play session. in welcome email: sounds weird to me
* "no updates since your last visit" on first login looks weird, show updates from, say, last month, or nothing
* after logging in I was looking at Fullscreen / Window options for a minute, waiting for something to happen -> add please something like "please select your view mode"
* resuming game gets you fullscreen mode, your last selected mode is not remembered
tutorial parts
* Select an account avatar: missing "you" in "may as well set your avatar"
* Select an account avatar: "Click the button" with big C after comma
* Open Avatar panel: "Hover the white text" with no white text to hover
* Open Avatar panel: mouse over of "Exit Forum" is "Complete the Tutorial Request", missing "first" in the end
* Open Avatar panel: maybe name it "tab" instead of "panel"
* apparently switching to other forum threads when tutorial tells you to exit the forum is a bad thing: tutorial messages disappeared, after some clicking I made them reappear but exiting forum did not get registered ... funny how some other controls told me to "complete tutorial first" ... log out, log in repaired it -> please add option to omit it completely at first and then run it later
* Channel: there is no button in top right of the comm panel
* that Advisor comm panel is blinking all this time, apparently I was attacked by raiders while in tutorial ... I think it should either happen later randomly or tutorial should somehow note that event
* Building Structures: there is no button in top right of the comm panel again, "shrink in now" -> "shrink _it_ now"
* How to jump a fleet: there is no "green diamond shaped icon", my new fleet is marked with an orange square
* How to jump a fleet: tutorial tells me to send out "Scientific mission" prebuild fleet (marked with green something) while talking about my new fleet
* How to jump a fleet: green marker at "Scientific mission" fleet disappears once you select any fleet
* Destination options: "May not retreat here" on other stars is missing its subject
* ok, archeo fleet sent... and now? ... tutorial disappeared again, this time without me clicking "bad" things I think, relogging again, it's back
* Comm video: add "see later" option before loading it
* Comm video: video talks again about shrinking of comm panel
* ok, video ended ... and now? ... tutorial disappeared again .. relogging again, it's back
* View cultural awards: "by by doing so" repeats "by"
* View cultural awards: tutorial window is over comms buttons and can't be moved
* View cultural awards: Current goals is just a header, so which 3 are those selected as current goals?
* once more again, tutorial offers "Close" button which closes it ... so relogging again, and it is not back ... *shrug* ... let's start playing then, I guess
other places
* Star: "Close Create" button in Planning sounds weird
* Fleet: buttons for transfer of all contraband are missing a space ("contrabandleft", "contrabandright")
* in overall, be more conserve with big letters, I guess