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[monk12]

Whaaat, Page 3 is up? Now we know what [unnamed insect protagonist] was "in the middle of," the ambiguity of which was no doubt causing much suspense-related stress for everyone.

Comments, suggestions, criticism, etc you know the drill.

[Xantalos]

Intrigued is I!
I'm waiting for more.
I'm also bad at giving criticism, but I like what I see so far.

[monk12]

Page 4! I certainly hope this dystopian undercity has a good fire department and good ventilation systems, because otherwise everyone is going to die of smoke inhalation.

[Xantalos]

Ah.
Jeez.
Sorry to say this, but that explosion was bad.
It looked like a bagel.

[monk12]

Ah.
Jeez.
Sorry to say this, but that explosion was bad.
It looked like a bagel.

In the words of the artist, "Gosh darn explosions." But hey, he gets to grow as a person, I get to chortle as he draws stupid ideas I come up with, it's win-win!

[Xantalos]

Indeed. I'm still watching, just to note.
Work on your explosions.
They're not cakes.

[GlyphGryph]

There doesn't seem to be any way to go back a comic with your client. FYI. Pretty frustrating navigation scheme overall but I'm not sure if you have any control over that. The framing is getting better for the artwork, now you just need to convince him to learn how to make and fill word bubbles.

[monk12]

There doesn't seem to be any way to go back a comic with your client. FYI. Pretty frustrating navigation scheme overall but I'm not sure if you have any control over that. The framing is getting better for the artwork, now you just need to convince him to learn how to make and fill word bubbles.

It's reasonably unintuitive; if you look in the grey bar running down the sides of the comic there's forward and back buttons in the middle. I thiiink we have the flexibility to change it, I'll look into that.

[monk12]

Another Friday, another update, another radical design change! New template has better navigation (now featuring obvious forward and back buttons) and a nicer color scheme. And by nicer I mean grayer.

[monk12]

Updoot! Careful, there's violence in this one.

[Xantalos]

OH MAH GAWD HE SHOTS AN ANTENNA

[monk12]

The seventh update is lucky, right? Well, maybe not for Bohdan...

[Xantalos]

DUH DUH DUUUUUHHHH

[IronyOwl]

Wouldn't have thought a mercenary would much care for royalty. Guess you can take an ant out of the hive...?

[Farmerbob]

Heh, the first page text was a bit small, but no problems after that  Set up a link in my webcomics favorites folder