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Author Topic: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my  (Read 3183543 times)

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Re: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my
« Reply #65790 on: April 23, 2014, 12:50:44 pm »

<I'm at the bit with the MIGHTY MAN MEAT.>

<It gets better. Waaaaaay better. Trust me. I didn't know whether to cringe or break out into laughter when they get at it.>

<I thought I wrote it well...>

<Oh. Uh... This is kinda awkward...>
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Re: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my
« Reply #65791 on: April 23, 2014, 12:53:17 pm »

Kyle takes off his bracelet.

There's a sad sniff in Kate's line.
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Re: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my
« Reply #65792 on: April 23, 2014, 12:56:53 pm »

There's a sad sniff in Kate's line.

<Uh... Don't feel too bad, we can't, um, you can't expect your first few fics to be stupidly amazing, you know? You've got to keep practicing and accept criticism and this isn't your first fic, is it?>
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Re: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my
« Reply #65793 on: April 23, 2014, 12:59:13 pm »

<No.... Are my descriptions of the clothing done well?>
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Re: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my
« Reply #65794 on: April 23, 2014, 01:01:34 pm »

<No.... Are my descriptions of the clothing done well?>

<Pretty good, yeah. They could be a little more brief, but that's my person opinion. You mostly have to improve your grammar and stuff, I think. And learn how the human body works too.>
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Re: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my
« Reply #65795 on: April 23, 2014, 01:04:32 pm »

<Oh... I haven't even seen a man naked though...>
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Re: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my
« Reply #65796 on: April 23, 2014, 01:06:44 pm »

<Oh... I haven't even seen a man naked though...>

<Really? You're posting smutty fics on the internet and haven't even seen a man naked before? Is that even possible?>
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Re: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my
« Reply #65797 on: April 23, 2014, 01:09:35 pm »

<It's not my fault I look like I'm fourteen... and the only time I don't I look... dirty...>
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Re: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my
« Reply #65798 on: April 23, 2014, 01:11:13 pm »

<It's not my fault I look like I'm fourteen... and the only time I don't I look... dirty...>

<Um... Okay? Do you want to talk about it?>
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Re: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my
« Reply #65799 on: April 23, 2014, 01:12:23 pm »

<Obituary? Damn...someone should go to canada and search for information there. But damnit, I can't be delving into Roses past without looking like some overly jealous bitch to Alice. Can you find someone else? I think Alice would not...take it well if it turns out Rose was some kind of villain all along.>
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Re: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my
« Reply #65800 on: April 23, 2014, 01:15:02 pm »

<Not really... I wouldn't want to be a burden...>

((Also I'm on a phone so making that description would be annoying.))
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Re: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my
« Reply #65801 on: April 23, 2014, 01:24:15 pm »

<Obituary? Damn...someone should go to canada and search for information there. But damnit, I can't be delving into Roses past without looking like some overly jealous bitch to Alice. Can you find someone else? I think Alice would not...take it well if it turns out Rose was some kind of villain all along.>

Lunette shrugs, "I'll try. I don't know who else I'd ask though."

<Not really... I wouldn't want to be a burden...>

<No no, it's fine. I won't mind. I'm not doing much right now anyways, I can listen whenever you're ready to talk.>
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Re: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my
« Reply #65802 on: April 23, 2014, 01:26:48 pm »

<Who are you again?>
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Re: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my
« Reply #65803 on: April 23, 2014, 01:27:39 pm »

<Who are you again?>

<Ester. You must be new then, because I don't recognize you either. What's your name?>
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Re: Rise of the Magic Girls v2 IC Thread: Antimagic and gods and souls oh my
« Reply #65804 on: April 23, 2014, 01:27:52 pm »

"Have you considered the new girl, Kate? She is an IRIS professional, and Rose hasn't met her yet I think."
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