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[IamanElfCollaborator]

((I'm not too sure myself. I'll probably figure something out as I go along.))

[Projeck37]

((Oh dear, all that character critiquing. Not sure how I like that...))

[Xantalos]

((Yeah, sorry about that. Just came up rather suddenly.))

[Empiricist]

((Would be interesting to see at least. If I have some spare time, I could help with overly long descriptions of inanimate objects or spells. Because apparently I am much better at describing them than people ))
((At least it's in-character, hence primarily reflecting the thoughts of the actual critiquing characters rather than the actual players. Like I said, Cyrielle indeed dislikes the book series.))

[Projeck37]

((I'm okay with it. Do I like it? Not really, but I'll get over it. I've been trying to keep my characters the same while dealing with my depression. It's hard, but I'll manage. Hence why Isaac might've overreacted to Darnos' harming of his bear. But then again, Darnos did just say it was just 'because I'm bored'))

[IamanElfCollaborator]

((Pretty in-character for Richard considering Richard.))
((I just needed something to do during the weekdays.))

[Empiricist]

((At the end of the day, they're in-character reasons to dislike him rather than out of character, hence there aren't any glaring issues with how he is written, the characters in that conversation simply do not get along well with him due to their opposing personalities, ideals and whatnot rather than any detached literary reason. Actually, It's probably beneficial to have some dislike from a few other characters since it creates a greater degree of possible interactions.))
((Okay, I am reasonably confident I can create fences of text about character abilities and whatnot when I have spare time.))

[RangerCado]

"Well, maybe your parents could homeschool you if they thought you were ready?"

"But I no age so I never be big enough..." Meme sighs sadly.

[Projeck37]

((Yeah, I get your point Emp. I was just surprised a bit as to why it was my characters.))

[Xantalos]

((You've been doing good in that regard. And yeah, Darnos has no basis for his actions and he knows it, so feel free to beat him down and such.))

[Empiricist]

((Because conversations were prone to going off on tangents You were just unfortunate enough to have that tangent occur on top of Issac.))

[RangerCado]

"So, what do you want to buy Ash? I'm up for any store, anything." Conny smiles at her happily.

[Projeck37]

"Nothing in particular. I just like looking at times."

((True. I read it, and was more surprised at the fact that it went on for like 2-3 pages.))

[IamanElfCollaborator]

Richard just wanders.
Albrecht idly reads a book.

[RangerCado]

((...Should I go back and read that? I've read the other tangents but didn't feel like reading one that went on for several pages uninterupted.))

"I can appreciate that." Conny sighs happily and hugs her.

"So how were your parents?"