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[Projeck37]

Ashley is still unconscious because I'm in class..

[kj1225]

((What's happened in the last eleven pages?))

[Empiricist]

[Wow.
100+5]
Cyrielle succeeds.

The visual novel is now much better than it was. The writing is incredibly detailed, the characters are lovingly crafted and the routes work fine. Barely any bugs.

The visual novel seems to be based off the various people around her, and the protagonist seems to be an ordinary student called Kyle, who can choose from several routes, from the girl next door Conny to the friendly school nurse Maria, to the haughty cheerleader Nuriel.

[IamanElfCollaborator]

((We now have a visual novel because Cyrielle crit failed and then crit succeeded. Also, AshleyxRichardxCamille is now a thing.))

[Empiricist]

((Apparently it has every character that Cyrielle has met so far as love interests and some more, risque stuff as well.))

[IamanElfCollaborator]

((Obviously the canon ending was the harem ending you get by consoling Cyrielle after the big party in her route.))

[kj1225]

Kyle wakes up with only one thing is his head.
<Did someone touch my computer?>

[Empiricist]

<Yeah, I was programming something. Didn't end up remotely like what I intended though. I finished it however, professional pride and all that.>

[kj1225]

<What did you make?...>

[IamanElfCollaborator]

Maria is in the computer room, typing fanfics. Because why not.

[Empiricist]

<One of those, what are they called? ...those electronic pieces of literature. Can't remember what they're called. I was trying to make a statistical calculation application but somehow I ended up making that instead. I complied it so, the executable file should still be there.>
((D100+5 to use.))

[IamanElfCollaborator]

((Never mind.))

[kj1225]

Kyle gets up and opens the file... (64)

[Empiricist]

((I meant if Kyle decides to read it. *Awaits result.*))

[Again_Dejavu]

Ray walks up to Kyle.
"Was it really necessary to leave without me?"