OK PEOPLE, well, BFEL, at least.
I went through the eye-burning sludge that was the raws for the elves, and I rewrote it, not from scratch, I just copied and pasted BFEL's stuff so that is should function completely identically to how it has been, however, the file itself is now about half the size it was before because I consolidated the vast amount of redundant terminology.
Seriously, who taught you to mod?
This is how I made it look, it should be the same as before, but less of an eyesore, and primarily, easier to navigate.
[CREATURE:ELF]
[NAME:Treelord:Treelords:Forested]
[DESCRIPTION:A sentient tree, progenitor of the elven menace.]
[CREATURE_TILE:6][COLOR:6:0:0]
[PREFSTRING:natural majesty]
[CREATURE_CLASS:ALL]
[APPLY_CREATURE_VARIATION:CLEANS_SELF_DAILY_HLG]
[DIURNAL]
[HOMEOTHERM:10067]
[CANOPENDOORS]
[NO_SLEEP]
[HAS_NERVES]
[CASTE:TREELORDMALE]
[CASTE_NAME:treelord:treelords:forested]
[POP_RATIO:10]
[MALE]
[CASTE:TREELORDFEMALE]
[CASTE_NAME:treequeen:treequeens:forested]
[POP_RATIO:10]
[FEMALE][LITTERSIZE:7:30]
[CASTE:ELF]
[POP_RATIO:80]
[DESCRIPTION:A medium-sized creature claiming to be a ruthless protector of nature. In truth it is a mere pawn of the forests and has no will of its own.]
[CASTE_NAME:elf:elves:elven]
[CASTE_TILE:140][COLOR:7:0:0]
[CASTE_SOLDIER_TILE:140]
[CAN_SPEAK][SLOW_LEARNER][VERMIN_HATEABLE]
[NOTHOUGHT][WAGON_PULLER][BENIGN]
[MAXAGE:1000:2000]
[CREATURE_CLASS:HUMANOID][CREATURE_CLASS:MAMMAL][CREATURE_CLASS:VERTEBRATE]
[BODY:CORE_HLG:BACK_LEGS_HLG:ARMS_HLG:EXTERNAL_EARS_HLG:TEETH_HLG]
[BODY_DETAIL_PLAN:CORE_MATERIALS_HLG]
[BODY_DETAIL_PLAN:CORE_TISSUES_HLG]
[BODY_DETAIL_PLAN:TEETH_HLG]
[BODY_DETAIL_PLAN:CORE_LAYERS_HLG]
[BODY_DETAIL_PLAN:BACK_LEGS_LAYERS_HLG]
[BODY_DETAIL_PLAN:ARMS_LAYERS_HLG]
[BODY_DETAIL_PLAN:EXTERNAL_EARS_LAYERS_HLG]
[BODY_DETAIL_PLAN:HAIR_HLG]
[BODY_DETAIL_PLAN:HAIR_ON_HEAD_HLG]
[BODYGLOSS:TWOLEGS_HLG]
[TENDONS:LOCAL_CREATURE_MAT:TENDON:400]
[LIGAMENTS:LOCAL_CREATURE_MAT:TENDON:400]
[BLOOD:LOCAL_CREATURE_MAT:BLOOD:LIQUID]
[APPLY_CREATURE_VARIATION:PUNCH_HLG]
[APPLY_CREATURE_VARIATION:KICK_HLG]
[APPLY_CREATURE_VARIATION:ROUNDHOUSE_KICK_HLG]
[APPLY_CREATURE_VARIATION:BITE_NO_LATCH_HLG]
[PHYS_ATT_RANGE:AGILITY:450:950:1150:1250:1350:1550:2250]
[PHYS_ATT_RANGE:RECUPERATION:450:950:1150:1250:1350:1550:2250]
[PHYS_ATT_RANGE:DISEASE_RESISTANCE:1250:1500:1750:2000:2500:3000:5000]
[MENT_ATT_RANGE:INTUITION:450:950:1150:1250:1350:1550:2250]
[MENT_ATT_RANGE:PATIENCE:150:600:800:900:1000:1100:1500]
[MENT_ATT_RANGE:MEMORY:5000:5000:5000:5000:5000:5000:5000]
[MENT_ATT_RANGE:LINGUISTIC_ABILITY:1250:1500:1750:2000:2500:3000:5000]
[MENT_ATT_RANGE:SPATIAL_SENSE:450:950:1150:1250:1350:1550:2250]
[MENT_ATT_RANGE:MUSICALITY:450:950:1150:1250:1350:1550:2250]
[MENT_ATT_RANGE:KINESTHETIC_SENSE:700:1200:1400:1500:1600:1800:2500]
[BODY_SIZE:0:0:3000]
[BODY_SIZE:1:168:15000]
[BODY_SIZE:12:0:60000]
[BODY_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:HEIGHT:75:95:98:100:102:105:125]
[APP_MOD_IMPORTANCE:500]
[BODY_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:BROADNESS:75:95:98:100:102:105:125]
[APP_MOD_IMPORTANCE:500]
[SET_BP_GROUP:BY_CATEGORY:EYE]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:CLOSE_SET:0:70:90:100:110:130:200]
[APP_MOD_NOUN:eyes:PLURAL]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:DEEP_SET:0:70:90:100:110:130:200]
[APP_MOD_NOUN:eyes:PLURAL]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:ROUND_VS_NARROW:0:70:90:100:110:130:200]
[APP_MOD_NOUN:eyes:PLURAL]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:LARGE_IRIS:25:70:90:100:110:130:200]
[APP_MOD_NOUN:eyes:PLURAL]
[APP_MOD_DESC_RANGE:30:60:90:110:150:190]
[SET_BP_GROUP:BY_CATEGORY:NOSE]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:BROADNESS:25:70:90:100:110:130:200]
[APP_MOD_DESC_RANGE:30:60:90:110:150:190]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:LENGTH:25:70:90:100:110:130:200]
[APP_MOD_DESC_RANGE:30:60:90:110:150:190]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:UPTURNED:0:70:90:100:110:130:200]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:CONVEX:0:70:90:100:110:130:200]
[APP_MOD_NOUN:nose bridge:SINGULAR]
[SET_BP_GROUP:BY_CATEGORY:EAR]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:SPLAYED_OUT:0:70:90:100:110:130:200]
[APP_MOD_NOUN:ears:PLURAL]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:HANGING_LOBES:0:70:90:100:110:130:200]
[APP_MOD_NOUN:ears:PLURAL]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:BROADNESS:90:95:98:100:102:105:110]
[APP_MOD_IMPORTANCE:700]
[APP_MOD_NOUN:ears:PLURAL]
[APP_MOD_DESC_RANGE:91:94:98:102:106:109]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:HEIGHT:90:95:98:100:102:105:110]
[APP_MOD_IMPORTANCE:700]
[APP_MOD_NOUN:ears:PLURAL]
[APP_MOD_DESC_RANGE:91:94:98:102:106:109]
[SET_BP_GROUP:BY_CATEGORY:TOOTH]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:GAPS:0:70:90:100:110:130:200]
[APP_MOD_NOUN:teeth:PLURAL]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:LENGTH:100:100:100:100:100:100:100] for vampires
[APP_MOD_IMPORTANCE:1000]
[APP_MOD_NOUN:teeth:PLURAL]
[APP_MOD_DESC_RANGE:30:60:90:110:150:190]
[SET_BP_GROUP:BY_CATEGORY:SKULL]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:HIGH_CHEEKBONES:0:70:90:100:110:130:200]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:BROAD_CHIN:0:70:90:100:110:130:200]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:JUTTING_CHIN:0:70:90:100:110:130:200]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:SQUARE_CHIN:0:70:90:100:110:130:200]
[SET_BP_GROUP:BY_CATEGORY:HEAD]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:BROADNESS:90:95:98:100:102:105:110]
[APP_MOD_IMPORTANCE:700]
[APP_MOD_DESC_RANGE:91:94:98:102:106:109]
[BP_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:HEIGHT:90:95:98:100:102:105:110]
[APP_MOD_IMPORTANCE:700]
[APP_MOD_DESC_RANGE:91:94:98:102:106:109]
[SELECT_CASTE:TREELORDMALE]
[SELECT_ADDITIONAL_CASTE:TREELORDFEMALE]
[INTELLIGENT][NO_THOUGHT_CENTER_FOR_MOVEMENT][NO_DIZZINESS][NO_FEVERS]
[NOBONES][NOMEAT][NONAUSEA][NOSKIN][NOSKULL][UTTERANCES]
[MOUNT][EXTRAVISION][BUILDINGDESTROYER:1][NOEXERT]
[BODY:TREELORD:TREELORD_BRANCHES:TREELORD_ROOTS:TREELORD_VEG]
[BODY_DETAIL_PLAN:PLANT_MATERIALS_BFEL]
[BODY_DETAIL_PLAN:PLANT_TISSUES_BFEL]
[BODY_DETAIL_PLAN:PLANT_LAYERS_BFEL]
[BLOOD:LOCAL_CREATURE_MAT:SAP:LIQUID]
[APPLY_CREATURE_VARIATION:ELF_RESURRECT_BFEL]
[PHYS_ATT_RANGE:AGILITY:100:170:230:280:350:390:450]
[PHYS_ATT_RANGE:RECUPERATION:450:950:1150:1250:1350:1550:2250]
[PHYS_ATT_RANGE:DISEASE_RESISTANCE:5000:5000:5000:5000:5000:5000:5000]
[MENT_ATT_RANGE:PATIENCE:5000:5000:5000:5000:5000:5000:5000]
[MENT_ATT_RANGE:MEMORY:5000:5000:5000:5000:5000:5000:5000]
[MENT_ATT_RANGE:LINGUISTIC_ABILITY:1250:1500:1750:2000:2500:3000:5000]
[MENT_ATT_RANGE:SPATIAL_SENSE:450:950:1150:1250:1350:1550:2250]
[MENT_ATT_RANGE:KINESTHETIC_SENSE:700:1200:1400:1500:1600:1800:2500]
[BODY_SIZE:0:0:10]
[BODY_SIZE:10:90:200000]
[BODY_SIZE:100:168:2000000]
[BODY_SIZE:400:37:8000000]
[BABY:10]
[CHILD:50]
[CHILDNAME:seedling:seedlings]
[SWIMS_LEARNED][SWIM_SPEED:25000]
[SPEED:5000]
[ATTACK:SMASH:BODYPART:BY_TYPE:STANCE]
[ATTACK_SKILL:STANCE_STRIKE]
[ATTACK_VERB:smash:smashes]
[ATTACK_CONTACT_PERC:100]
[ATTACK_FLAG_WITH]
[ATTACK_PRIORITY:SECOND]
[ATTACK:WHIP:BODYPART:BY_TYPE:GRASP]
[ATTACK_SKILL:GRASP_STRIKE]
[ATTACK_VERB:whip:whips]
[ATTACK_CONTACT_PERC:100]
[ATTACK_PRIORITY:MAIN]
[ATTACK_VELOCITY_MODIFIER:30]
[ATTACK_FLAG_WITH]
[ATTACK_FLAG_CANLATCH]
[ATTACK:SLASH:BODYPART:BY_TYPE:GRASP]
[ATTACK_SKILL:GRASP_STRIKE]
[ATTACK_VERB:slash:slashes]
[ATTACK_CONTACT_PERC:100]
[ATTACK_PRIORITY:MAIN]
[ATTACK_PENETRATION_PERC:100]
[ATTACK_VELOCITY_MODIFIER:30]
[ATTACK_FLAG_WITH]
[ATTACK_FLAG_EDGE]
The prefstring of "dying screams" has been lost because it's a creature token, not a caste token.
When a person likes dogs, they like
all dogs, not just female ones. At least in DF.
If you want to put it back in so hobbits like Treelords for their dying screams, go right ahead and put it back in.