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[jaass]

Yes, they are just there for the challenge of the civilization.

[GreatWyrmGold]

1. What was that?

[kj1225]

And you think they will even go into them for any reason?

[GreatWyrmGold]

Good point. Humans haven't, we haven't even sent people past the Moon.

[kj1225]

Well it probably doesn't help that you would need to have efficient space travel to begin with.

[jaass]

They are close until the civilization has sufficient standard of technology and understanding to open and that is if they even they know about this wormhole network.

[jaass]

1. What was that?

1. A galaxy, Wormhole network, Planet with basic descriptions, species, govt,tech and culture. Where my deity's heart is.

2. My Avatar

[Remuthra]

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1. Neutralize
2. Disagree

[GreatWyrmGold]

1. What was that?

1. A galaxy, Wormhole network, Planet with basic descriptions, species, govt,tech and culture. Where my deity's heart is.

Two questions.

1. Was that a petition? It seems like the kind of thing that should be broken down into several--maybe one for the galaxy itself, one for the wormholes, one for the void critters, and one for each planet.
2. Does the galaxy include what's already been made?

[Remuthra]

It's an entire galaxy just for your domain, with C'thulus in it, which contains a planet with readymade life and your own species, which already gets technology far beyond what all the other species have developed. Why does this seem overpowered to me?

[kj1225]

Mainly because it is.

[GreatWyrmGold]

It's an entire galaxy just for your domain, with C'thulus in it, which contains a planet with readymade life and your own species, which already gets technology far beyond what all the other species have developed. Why does this seem overpowered to me?

You missed something.

It's two planets with readymade life and technology far beyond all other species put together.

[kj1225]

Done

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On a continent that is in accordance to what the gods describe it having on genesis I propose we start making monsters. As such I have already made one race with an off shoot or two. (Off shoot as in an actual offshoot and a version that is just the same but looks more 'classic'.
Harpies:
   Style one: cute normal harpy
Location:  Middle area of a mountain on the southern point of the continent. It has many cliffs and is difficult to climb. At the top of the mountain is a small city premade for those who can get up the cliff.
Sentient: Yes.
Average intelligence: Same level as humans.
Behavior:  Pleasant monsters that like almost all life. They sometimes will sing when travelers (Especially ones they fancy.) pass by.
Agreeabililty: High
Mating habits:  Go into a heat once a year where they lay an egg, if it has been fertilized by a male. (They lack a male gender.) They will protect the egg and keep it warm until it hatches.
Life cycle:  Age quickly and are unable to die of old age or age much past their prime.
Appearance:  Cute girl with wings in place of arms (They have small gripping talons at the end of their hands) and from the knee down their legs are like that of a bird. (Depends on the Harpy, something like a swallow for example.)

  Style two:  Magpie Harpy
Location:  Middle area of a mountain on the southern point of the continent. It has many cliffs and is difficult to climb. At the top of the mountain is a small city premade for those who can get up the cliff.
Sentient: Yes.
Average intelligence: More intelligent than the regular harpy.
Behavior:  Mean and hostile unlike regular Harpies. They are however rarer than the average Harpy and thus it is less likely to find one.
Agreeability: Low
Mating habits:  Unlike the regular Harpy is able to be impregnated at any time with no set cycle. When they wish to mate they snatch a male and 'uses' them. When they already have a child the kidnapped male is in charge of tending to it.
Life cycle:  Age quickly and are unable to die of old age or age much past their prime.
Appearance:  Cute girl with wings in place of arms (They have small gripping talons at the end of their hands) and from the knee down their legs are like that of a bird. They always look like a magpie.

Style two:
  Classic Harpy
 The only diffrence between the two types is this one is constantly hungry and lives in the northern in the mountains.

[jaass]

Mainly because it is.

It's an entire galaxy just for your domain, with C'thulus in it, which contains a planet with readymade life and your own species, which already gets technology far beyond what all the other species have developed. Why does this seem overpowered to me?

Yes, I just realize this I will reorganize and separate in smaller chunks for the galaxy petition. Then, put the races into a committee for further feedback.
I will be doing this later on today.

[jaass]

Committee: Space Creatures

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Void Sharks- Opportunist pack hunters that are usually a challenge to civilizations in early space age they usually tend to take apart deep space probes or ships. They usually tend to stay away from planets that support life for some strange reason and usually attack when target that get out of the outer orbit of the planet. It uses the sun as a energy source similar to what a plant does.

Void Krakens- cthulhus, the deep ones these legendary creatures are called many things due to their mysterious nature. They usually lurk in the dark recesses between solar systems and celestial bodies. They are next to possible to detect however there is one way to track them is by the detecting the gravitational sinkholes it makes in order to propels itself. It usually attacks by slowly constricting the prey with its’ tentacles  then bring it towards it “mouth” to swallow it whole. It adsorbs ambient radiation as a fuel source for itself
Note: Void Krakens won't go into solar system and clestial bodies due its' primary mode of movement will be effected
Note; Space creatures can't leave this galaxy.

Committee: Races/Planets and Creatures

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Type: Desert Planet
Name: Lepidop

Due to its slow rotation it has an 8.5 month night cycle, and 8.5 month day cycle. This had led to the surface to be a dry cracked surface with only limited surface water, and primitive plant life. However the below the surface is a thriving ecosystem with numerous plants and animals. The most dominant of these are insects.

Creatures

Glowing Fungus, this produces most of ecosystem's oxygen

Large burrowing Worms (domesticated by the Arthros, used for expand current settlements)

Thorax, a deadly predator which uses echolocation to track its prey

Sentient
Name: Arthros
Their only one sentient species on this planet they are a hybrid between ant and spider. Their endurance, webbing, and the requirement of very little water or food has made them able to survive on this hostile planet

Culture
They place a great deal of value on cooperation and greater good for the group.

Technology level
Late Iron age, with heavy reliance on their very strong silk for everyday use.

Government
They run a pseudo-communism type of government

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Type: Tropical Jungle Planet
Name: Cabonif
Warm, humid planet with huge biodiversity ranging from mammoth size birds, to plants that can create deadly darts.

Creatures

Briar wolves (domesticated) - used in hunts

Sun Bird- Colossal bird that is always in constant flight, it has symbiotic relation the moss on its' back which provides it nutrients in exchange it has to constantly keep pace with the sun in order to survive. Numerous other flyers also roost on this animal's back in exchange the animals that roosts on this bird get rid of annoying parasites the eat away at the moss.

Camofilus- it is an ambush predator that uses its natural camouflage in order to attack prey. It sometimes uses it very long and elastics tongue to inject poison into its prey.


Sentient
Name: Eurepti

They are aggressive, strong reptilian humanoids that adapted to the planet's biodiversity perfectly. They have flaps on the undersides of their arms this allows them glide, along with very sharp claws allow them climb the sides of tree. Their carnivorous teeth behave similarly to a shark so every time one gets blunt another one replaces it.

Culture
This species values strength and skill and they will often follow who has the most of these traits. They often have elaborate tattoos over their body they shows their status within their society. They also have domesticated numerous different species of animals the most common domesticated species are called Briar wolves which are used often to overwhelm or test prey.

Technology Level
Late Bronze age, with early concepts from the early Iron Age.

Government
Tribal (hunters), but slowly converting to Stratocracy.

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Type: Temperate mountainous Planet
Name: Vedanthangal

This planet has a strange magnetic sphere which allows floating mass of rocks which are usually tethered down by very thick vines. Another important feature is the vast mountain ranges with the occasional plateau that act as an oasis for different life forms.

Creatures
Geolants- an extremely hardly plant that grows on the side of mountains, which also grows really nutritious fruit.

Thunder bird- A Legendary bird that usually appears before the arrival of thunder and rain.  It is said you can often feel the ground shake with the beat of its wings.

Lightning bird- Extremely fast flying birds that are usually found on coast and they usually prey on small prey. They will usually defend itself aggressively if it they feels threaten.

Sentient
Name :Falrinus
A very intelligent bird that uses second set of arms that are used to manipulate objects. It relies on its’ excellent eyesight to spot prey then it uses advance tactics and traps in order to capture it with minimal effort. They do have basic agricultural practice and domestication however this is in very limited role due to the abundance of prey. They are usually located near the coast of ocean or large bodies of water and they typically use the floating mass of rocks as roosts.

Culture
They value innovators and inventors; if they provide a more efficient means to their problems

Government
Tribal slowly turning into a Geniocracy.

Technology
Late Iron Age, with early concepts of domestication and agriculture.

Petition: Galaxy

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Name: Vitae
It is a sombrero-type galaxy, where towards the center is a very complex maze of black holes but in the very center there is a super massive black hole that keeps the galaxy together. The God of Life’s heart is located in the very center of this super massive black hole.
I claim the center of this galaxy as my domain.

Petition: Phenomenon

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Wormhole Network

It is connected to every planet and even the centre of the galaxy although the closer you get to the deity heart the harder it is to navigate the network. However it is also extremely difficult to locate one of these portals.
Note: the planets that have sentient life on them have their portals closed they will need sufficient standard of technology and understanding in order to open it.

Petition: Avatar

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Avatar it has two different forms

Description: Skinny humanoid that has bright red eyes with no mouth, and has only two small holes where the nose and ears are supposed to be. For skin it has a sleek black carapace, with tentacles that are constantly moving which are coming out of its back.

Abilities/Forms

1. It has the ability to short range teleport (600m, 2km if it concentrate.), and the ablitiy to invisible (silent footsteps, inert smell, invisible to most of the electromagnetic spectrum). It also has the ability to transform and look likes other bipeds and sometimes animals depending on their size. For offensive capabilities it has extremely sharp and strong claws that can pierce most material. They can be retracted to look like normal fingers.

Since it doesn't have a mouth it speaks in form of telepathy.

2. This form is amorphous(goo) this allows it to transform to greater variety of different objects and densities. In this form it is Immune to most damage. Although it lacks eyes in this form he has to rely on it telepathy to guide it more.

Other

It also has the ability to consciously adapt to new environment and situations.

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1.Mine
2.Neutral