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Slayerhero90

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Re: Write A Poem About The User Above You
« Reply #75 on: March 16, 2013, 01:30:34 pm »

Poetry is quite
capable
at its job. A man who is
unidentifiable
is still perfectly
describable
with suffix-rhymes. Is it
deniable
to be completely
able?

But this man goes by a medical
condition.
Acquired by the cold, rather than
ammunition.
What little I know of him causes me
attrition,
one that's like a snake and its
constriction,
but I keep performing to this poem
addition
to fill the man with more
intuition
to gather more
position
around Bay 12 and cause
ignition
or our minds' who-you-are
indication.
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Nosaneinme

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Re: Write A Poem About The User Above You
« Reply #76 on: March 16, 2013, 06:04:50 pm »

Poetry is quite
capable
at its job. A man who is
unidentifiable
is still perfectly
describable
with suffix-rhymes. Is it
deniable
to be completely
able?

But this man goes by a medical
condition.
Acquired by the cold, rather than
ammunition.
What little I know of him causes me
attrition,
one that's like a snake and its
constriction,
but I keep performing to this poem
addition
to fill the man with more
intuition
to gather more
position
around Bay 12 and cause
ignition
or our minds' who-you-are
indication.
GREAT STORY BRO
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kahn1234

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Re: Write A Poem About The User Above You
« Reply #77 on: March 16, 2013, 06:13:27 pm »

ths thread is hilarious.

Remuthra

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Re: Write A Poem About The User Above You
« Reply #78 on: March 16, 2013, 06:34:16 pm »

Kahn1234
An' unto the door
We see an elf
All by herself
She has a wand
Or maybe it's a staff. I wond-
er why her armor
Is the color of bark, an unhealthy pallor
This poem has no rhythm
And the rhymes strike a schism
Through any good poet
You enjoyed this poem, I know it.

« Last Edit: March 16, 2013, 06:38:15 pm by Remuthra »
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Re: Write A Poem About The User Above You
« Reply #79 on: March 16, 2013, 08:43:22 pm »

Wearing pink slippers, and a bathrobe too,
is this guy great, or is he a tool?
His smiles, incessant, his glasses, are tinted,
yet he still looks pretty cool.
((Not my best poem, but eh.))
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Il Palazzo

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Re: Write A Poem About The User Above You
« Reply #80 on: March 17, 2013, 12:37:17 pm »

Hold me tight, my blimey pirate,
Like the patch holds your wrecked eye;
This sardonic smile mirrors my own
On the thought of you and I.

Though you've been born an 'O',
While I am but a lowly palazzo,
No social taboo can prevent
My racing heart's stacatto.

Sour is the cream, but you are the sourest;
Verdant is thine skin an porous and honest;
Let us together adjourn to the stormy waters,
Or walk me down the plank this very moment!



(Terribly sorry, sirrah, but love poems are the easiest to write. Probably because they're all sorts of daft by definition.
I've got one to Kashyyk sitting in my notepad too, but the thread rules prevent me from posting it unless he's the user above me.)
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Kashyyk

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Re: Write A Poem About The User Above You
« Reply #81 on: March 17, 2013, 01:12:29 pm »

Post post, quickly man,
This user has one ready.

Seeing the news Kash blithely ran,
On two legs not quite steady.

What could the poem be about?
His avatar, or personality?

I guess tonight we'll find out,
Unless someone intercepts ninjaly.

((Yay, forced rhyme))
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Il Palazzo

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Re: Write A Poem About The User Above You
« Reply #82 on: March 17, 2013, 01:20:44 pm »

(heh, good job. Here you go:)

Venus's got nothing on you
My full-bodied wonder,
Bedazzled eyes fail to grasp the bulk
Of this heavenly wanderer.

I covet your orb fiercely
To quench my thirst for roundness so celestial;
Oh, the curvacious bodies, daughters of gravity!
Lithe and firm, voluptously circumferential!

Gone are the rings, and saddles and planes,
And topologies of pretty faces;
Morpheus alone grants me my beauty fair,
In dreams I burrow through ellipsoidal spaces.

To probe the biosphere, to test the surface tension,
Where would I start, how could I hope to finish?
There's too much of you for more than one man;
All 4pi steradians I jelously cherish.

And if you were to reject me,
My eccentricity would reach unity;
I'd never more know warmth or shade,
Adrift in frigid, etherless serenity.

Pray tell,
Who begat thee, what sculptor carved this vastness?
Was it Eru or Eli, Marduk or ancient Chaos?
The Divine wobbles upon the tilted axis.

Thine potential well no mortal could escape,
Thus meekly I tread our worldlines' dictate;
Let me be your hermit, and you - my cell;
I'll eternally embrace my mother surrogate.

My old marbles are gone, but this one suffices,
Filling the void with desire so primal, so basic;
Curious compasses cry out to caress thee;
I strive to chart you with my geodesic.
« Last Edit: March 17, 2013, 01:27:35 pm by Il Palazzo »
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Fniff

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Re: Write A Poem About The User Above You
« Reply #83 on: March 17, 2013, 01:26:09 pm »

(This thread turned out even better then I expected.)

Ah, in this smoky lounge of poets and writers,
he steps up the microphone and blows us all away
as we smoke our cigarettes and talk about nothing,
the things he can say
can rival Ted Hughes or William Nugent
Bright star, please do not leave us
We enjoy your company,
and we cannot compare our lust...
for your poetry, of course.

Fr0stByt3

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Re: Write A Poem About The User Above You
« Reply #84 on: March 17, 2013, 01:39:47 pm »

Words flow as rivers
Idea gone better than right
A master praised
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Kashyyk

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Re: Write A Poem About The User Above You
« Reply #85 on: March 17, 2013, 01:46:45 pm »

((That was beautiful))

Cold data chills flesh
Name never needs consonants
Always speaks truth
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Fr0stByt3

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Re: Write A Poem About The User Above You
« Reply #86 on: March 17, 2013, 02:25:35 pm »

((Spaciba.))
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Il Palazzo

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Re: Write A Poem About The User Above You
« Reply #87 on: March 17, 2013, 03:08:33 pm »

(tell me should it get too creepy)

"Frostbite"

Do not hurt me so,
Don't grapple with my sanity.
I only entreat your love
To entertain my vanity.

So frigid is your alcove,
Betoothed growls your bedchamber;
I fear my lust soon to die
Of this eternal December.

I never did design to lie
With an iceberg to warm my side.
You should've warned me of your bite
Before I took you for this ride.

I really thought I had your name right,
Who'd guess you'd care for such oddities.
Now necrosis is all I can expect
In my precious extremities.
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Fr0stByt3

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Re: Write A Poem About The User Above You
« Reply #88 on: March 17, 2013, 03:17:11 pm »

((Dayum.))
There are no words to
Describe the genius before
Us. Master of words.
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Nosaneinme

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Re: Write A Poem About The User Above You
« Reply #89 on: March 17, 2013, 04:10:41 pm »

((Dayum.))
There are no words to
Describe the genius before
Us. Master of words.
Hello,My name is Fred
Your blueish mane is Unshaved
it remind to to be ... naughty
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