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[Gamerboy4life]

[Hiki! Why did you do that?!]

Insist to know the true purpose of throwing our doll off the roof.

[borno]

Silently scream at his terrible treatment of your doll.

[Talvara]

Punch him! throwing a doll of a roof is realy dickish! (and you don't have more serene ways of expressing discontent)
edit2: and run off to get your doll.

edit: this would also be my ptw

[Gamerboy4life]

No no, don't punch him, the guy's blind for god sakes. It's a dick move, yes, but we're above that.

But I'm not past going and running to get the doll. It holds some importance, and it's necessary for something.

[Talvara]

No no, don't punch him, the guy's blind for god sakes. It's a dick move, yes, but we're above that.

But I'm not past going and running to get the doll. It holds some importance, and it's necessary for something.

we're a mute girl, how hard could we possibly hit him? and I cant think of another way to tell him that wasn't okay that doesn't involve grabbing his hand and signing it to him.

edit: a slap maybe? too romantic for me (yes slaps are romantic damnit!)

[Gamerboy4life]

No no, don't punch him, the guy's blind for god sakes. It's a dick move, yes, but we're above that.

But I'm not past going and running to get the doll. It holds some importance, and it's necessary for something.

we're a mute girl, how hard could we possibly hit him? and I cant think of another way to tell him that wasn't okay that doesn't involve grabbing his hand and signing it to him.

edit: a slap maybe? too romantic for me (yes slaps are romantic damnit!)

What does being mute, and being a girl have to do with it? That's no excuse to punch a guy who can't SEE IT COMING.

He's not some blind samurai Like Lilly, and I know many, many girls that hit pretty hard. And I don't know how muteness has anything to do with punching a blind guy either.

Not a slap, we civilly ask him, or we do something worse: We give him the cold shoulder to let him know that shit ain't acceptable. He'd be able to see that at least. Not a fist flying for his face

[Karnewarrior]

>Demand an answer

You snag his hand and press yours violently into it. [What part of given to me by a friend don't you understand?]

[I told you not to bring it. What did you expect was going to happen?]

[I expected you to be civil, dammit!]

[I want to tell you, Daisy, I do-]

[Shut up. Shut up shut up shut up. Do you know how I got that doll? Do you know what it means to me? That's the last thing I have left of Hana-chan.] You're crying now, spilling your guts. [That doll is the last thing I have to remind me of home. My parents don't visit anymore. My friends can't make it up here. Hana-chan is...]

>Go home

 You give in, taking the doll from Hanako. The sun is blazing in the sky, and soft brown leaves fall from summer trees. You never see that in anime, trees in summer dropping dead leaves. It's always a fall thing, always on the onset of winter. But it happens in real life.

 The doll is a pristine white, and filled with the soft downy fluff of a pillow. You want to give it back to Hanako, she seems so sad nowadays, but today she seems oddly uplifted.

"Daisy, I want you to take it and give her a good home, O.K?" There are bags under the girls eyes, worry lines more suited to a old matron than someone barely hitting puberty. "Take her from me. I'm bad luck."

"Hana-chan," you mumble. But Hanako is already leaving, and you're alone in the playground, among the rustle of summer winds in vibrant trees. It's a bright, happy day, not a cloud in the sky, but somehow it feels dark. And it only got darker when you took the DOLL. You could swear it.

>Go home?
>Follow Hanako

Spoiler: Daisy (click to show/hide)

Inventory:

Ruby Doll
Button
Bit of String
5 Yen

[Talvara]

> Follow Hanako, (to witness a horrible murder and or suicide? a memory so painful it has been repressed until this very moment )

(also violently signing sounds like the perfect compromise to me, nice )

[Gamerboy4life]

>Follow Hana-Chan?


Are we talking about THE Hanako from the setting you are using, or a different one?

[Karnewarrior]

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Different Hanako. You don't know the canon KS Hanako. You don't even know her name.

The memory wasn't repressed, You just weren't thinking about it until now. The same way you can remember your last birthday but we aren't having a flashback.

I'm happy this thing has grown so fast! It's too bad I'll have to leave in May, and it may not be done by then... But with the speed it's moving, we might just make it!

[Gamerboy4life]

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Different Hanako. You don't know the canon KS Hanako. You don't even know her name.

The memory wasn't repressed, You just weren't thinking about it until now. The same way you can remember your last birthday but we aren't having a flashback.

I'm happy this thing has grown so fast! It's too bad I'll have to leave in May, and it may not be done by then... But with the speed it's moving, we might just make it!

Damn you, it sounds like little Bacon isn't going to make an appearance.
Because I'm sure it would get confusing for non KS-players to have 2 Hanako's in the story.

Did you have the idea of using KS as a setting all along, or did it just sort of happen?
Anyway, I really do like the direction this is heading. Keep on with it.

[Gentlefish]

> Follow Hanako, (to witness a horrible murder and or suicide? a memory so painful it has been repressed until this very moment )

(also violently signing sounds like the perfect compromise to me, nice )

Plus one.

[Karnewarrior]

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Different Hanako. You don't know the canon KS Hanako. You don't even know her name.

The memory wasn't repressed, You just weren't thinking about it until now. The same way you can remember your last birthday but we aren't having a flashback.

I'm happy this thing has grown so fast! It's too bad I'll have to leave in May, and it may not be done by then... But with the speed it's moving, we might just make it!

Damn you, it sounds like little Bacon isn't going to make an appearance.
Because I'm sure it would get confusing for non KS-players to have 2 Hanako's in the story.

Did you have the idea of using KS as a setting all along, or did it just sort of happen?
Anyway, I really do like the direction this is heading. Keep on with it.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

The idea started as a straightup fanfiction with one OC taking over from Hisao, with a secret, which was to be superpowers derived from weaving bits of string with his hands. Misha was one too, and they were fighting a war with the Suicide Man and needed Hanako to help. But Misha wasn't doing it fast enough OC came in to help out by taunting her into violence several times until she finally grew strong enough to fight him, even without powers. But he went to far and she snapped and became an antagonist, and eventually they went back in time and it turns out Hanako's mom survived the fire; rescued by the OC. So who saved little Bacon from the flames?

Older Bacon. Stable time loop, big weepy finish, and the Suicide man dies as well because earn your happy ending by sacrificing Hanako for Hanako.

Oh and OC and Rin were to have a rap battle. Which was awesome.

But I broke off the weaving bit, decided to erase most of Hanako's stuff, make it a horror story and put some new OCs in. I do intend to use that weaving though. Elsewhere, not here. Also no time travel. I think. My brain works closer to Rin's sometimes. All over wacky shit. Still got my arms though.

It should become more obvious later but the Hisao in this iteration of the KS universe is on Lilly's path. I definitely intend for "What's shakin' Bacon?" to be a phrase that is used, although I'm not sure wether to make it comedic or poignant.

[IamanElfCollaborator]

...and suddenly my dreams of SLs fall apart.

Anyway.

>Follow Hanako +1

[Karnewarrior]

>Follow Hanako

The path to Hanako's house is littered with falling summer leaves. It's not far away, but to you it feels like a lifetime.

But your parents catch you, and drag you home to eat dinner sullenly. A dry, suddenly tasteless meal filling your stomach, you head back over to Hanako's house. You ask her mother, a kind woman, with long, flowing hair and big, claming brown eyes, where Hanako is. She smiles and said Hanako is in her room, crying. She asks if you were sent here to apologize. You shake your head no and tell her that you just want to give her DOLL back.

Hanako's door is bright pink. Trying the knob doesn't work; she's locked it. There's no response when you knock.

Spoiler: Daisy (click to show/hide)

Inventory:

Ruby Doll
Button
Bit of String
5 Yen

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

..SLs?