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[Xantalos]

Aww, I'm getting d'awwish over Aur-Sha.
Seriously though, I am a tad bit concerned that Udil apparently cares nothing for the demise of his wife and son(s). Or at least mentions them, though I think it was mainly because we all forgot Udil had a family.
Ah well. I can only watch now.

All dwarves were ressurected, remember? They are fine.

Still, no mentions or nuttin! It's actually rather cool to see Udil's Darth Vaderesque transformation into a n undwarven abomination god of violence and wrath.

[Ardas]

Yeah, being burend alive 24/7 is not really conducive to thinking about one's family. Although he feels better for a brief moment when he realises that Dwarves were ressurected.

[Xantalos]

Yeah, being burend alive 24/7 is not really conducive to thinking about one's family. Although he feels better for a brief moment when he realises that Dwarves were ressurected.

Which is encouraging when it comes to the matter of his possible eventual redemption and completion of the Vader archetype thing.

[Digital Hellhound]

Polypian, you cannot just ignore the giant checkpoint I built around the rift, not as an Elder God. Please stand by while I decide whether to blast you into oblivion or not. Wouldn't want your nice Acts ruined by getting retroactively shot at, would you?

[IamanElfCollaborator]

Did you put in a Duty Free? And where's the baggage check?!

[Digital Hellhound]

And do you have any omnicidal murderous intents to check in? I'm afraid we can't have those in our nice little universe. You could be a godly terrorist all I know.

[Polypian]

I'm trying to put into action a plan thar should at least slow down the genocide of pretty much everything. We are nearly being suffocated by all the corpses piling up!

[Digital Hellhound]

Better be convincing now.

Anyway, starlight-building is my thing. Mine. Get your filthy hands off my starlight.

[Ghazkull]

*sniffs* I smell ripoffs...

[IamanElfCollaborator]

Ghazkull, next turn?

[SunRaTheThird]

My turn is up now

[Ghazkull]

3 things i'd like you to change:

1. Punctuation and Space.

That block is night unreadable. put it in readable smaller parts. It is an eyesore to read that way.

2. Your Creations

While you may very well create a species, you just create the species by this act, not its history. Nor can you advance them several hundred years by that act. Just like every other god you post your actions aka Create the  reptilians and the Humans and if you want give them the Divine law but they certainly haven't developed Sedentary Lifestyles. They lack teh Knowledge to build huts to farm and so on and so forth. These are all Technologies which the species either develop by themselves or you have to for in acts.
Furthermore you have no influence over their culture whatsoever. You can create them in a certain way but you can't instantly influence their culture, such things take time and acts.

3. Your Start.

You enter through the rift not just appear in the midst of the universe. More so that rift is guarded, so you have to deal with Sabt-Golgo first before doing anything.

[SunRaTheThird]

right

[SunRaTheThird]

so now i changed and im trying to talk to DH

[Ghazkull]

try to work some more on your writing. Remember you are a God not a street thug. So "Thru" is as wrong as it can get

Try it with "through"