Just a few grammatical/structural fixes to the entity/bestiary lists. Yes, I do get easily annoyed.
Udilsbor ( The Underhomes)
Population: One Hundred Thousand/100,000 (80% Dwarf, 20% Human)
Government: Kingdom
Standing Military:
The Stone Guard (1000,Enhanced Strength and Longevity, Elite Infantry, Steel)
Dwarven Remnants (10000, Drakeslayers,Heavy Infantry,Steel)
Golems (300, Elite Infantry, Steel)
Technology: High Medieval, Golem Crafting
Faith: Dwarven Faith (30%), Cult of Lo (2%), Death Cult (0,001%), Cult of the Devourer (0,5%), Misotheists/Naytheists (ca. 67,5%)
The Shattered (The Sphere)
Population: Twenty Thousand/20,000
Government: Theocracy
Technology: Renaissance
Faith: Cult of Lo (50%), Misotheist (10%), Agnostic (40%)
The Seaspawn and Squiddle Kingdoms
Population: Fifty Thousand/50,000 each
Government: Kingdoms
Technology: High Classical
Faith: Cult of Vanida (87%), Misotheist (10%), CUlt of the Devourer (3%)
Karas Clans
Population: Fifty Thousand/50,000
Government: Tribal Kingdoms
Technology: High Medieval
Faith: Misotheist (80%), Agnostic (20%)
Men of the North (The North)
Population: Forty Thousand/40,000 (Human,True Skrettir,Wildkin)
Government: Clans
Technology: Fear Cavalry, Late Iron Age, Fortifications
Faith: 95% Faith of the Wildgod, 5% Agnostics
Sons of Thaneos (Father's Hall above Eversummer)
Population: Twenty Thousand/20,000 (50% Fjôrtun, 50% Njôltun)
Government: Elder Council, The Three Brothers
Technology: Late Middle Ages, Father's Steel
Standing Military:
Chosen of Thaneos: 10.000 (Undead, Father's Steel)
The Homunculi: 12 (Father's Steel, Warmachines)
The 1st March: 5000 (Njôltun,Father's Steel)
The 2nd March: 5000 (Fjôrtun, Father's Steel)
Faith: 100% Misotheists
Crowborn (Corvid Moon)
Population: Two Hundred Fifty Thousand/250.000 (80% Human, 20% Crowborn)
Government: Theocracy
Technology: Renaissance
Faith: 95% Faith of the Guardians, 4% Cult of Lo, 1% Cult of the Devourer
Fire Giants(Fifth Continent)
Population: One Thousand/1000 (Eldtursar)
Government: Anarchy
Technology: -
Faith: 100% Autotheism
Children of Sabt-Golgo (Spider's Ring)
Population: One Million/1,000,000(Mirrorborn)
Government: Theocracy
Technology: Renaissance
Faith: 100% Agnostics
Minor Divines:
Fireborn Extinct
Beings of pure Magma.
They don't need to eat.
Lifespan: Unknown.
Have 1 Lesser Fireact per turn,
Giants of Life/Fjortursar
Massive Green-Grey Skinned humanoids covered in moss.
Don't need to eat.
Invigorate nearby lifeforms.
Have 1 Lesser Nature Act per turn,
The Fallen Sisters
Beings made of the Horrors of War and Death.
Have 1 Lesser Act per turn.
Giants of War/Orrostursar
Massive red skinned humanoids, with glowing orange eyes.
Don't need to eat.
1 Lesser Act of War per turn.
Giants of Darkness/Njôltursar
Huge black skinned humanoids, able to conjure up clouds of utter darkness.
1 Lesser Act of Darkness per Turn.
Giants of Fire/Eldtursar
Huge beings made of fire and magma.
1 Lesser Act of Fire per Turn.
The White Stag
Ice Phoenix
Mythical Beings:
Skrettir
Human Shapeshifters.
Lesser Darkness Giants/ NJôltun
Emberguards Extinct
redskinned humanoids wreathed in flames.
Don't need to eat.
Lifespan: Unknown.
Mirrorborn
Shapeshifting Humanoids.
Shattered
Formerly mad Shapeshifting Humanoids.
Can teleport and slow time.
Lesser Life Giants/Fjortun
Soultaken Extinct
Dwarf-sized Dragons.
Shades Extinct
Shadowy creatures which are night invulnerable. Can be hurt by Divine Means.
Multiply if attacked with cutting weapons of a mundane variety.
Sentients
Crowborn
Crow-like Humanoids.
Humans
Look in a mirror.
Dwarves
This thread is on Bay12 you know.
Squiddles
Sentient Octopii.
Smoulderborn Extinct
Redskinned humanoids emitting heat.
Lifespan: 300 to 400 years
Ashborn Extinct
Blackskinned humanoids immune to heat.
Lifespan: 300 to 400 years
Seaspawn
Massive green-blue skinned humanoids with face tentacles.
Others
Mountain Tortoises
Massive Turtles carrying whole mountains on their backs, live in water and carry kelp on their backs.
Clawdrakes Extinct
15 foot long reptilians hunting in packs. Live on the Ninth Continent.
Fangdrakes Extinct
50 Foot long reptilians. Lives on the Ninth Continent.
Whipdrakes Extinct
Massive Reptilians living on the Ninth Continent.
Domesticated for Food and Leather.
Frost Wolves
Wolves emitting Cold.
Claws cause Freezings.
Essence can be used as medicine or poison.
Fears
Massive Bears emitting Cold.
Can Freeze other beings by looking at them.