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Re: Spearbreakers Alternate Reality Story Fort: The Broken Spear
« Reply #15 on: November 27, 2012, 06:36:00 pm »

wel, i know who shows up if Asea dies...
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Re: Spearbreakers Alternate Reality Story Fort: The Broken Spear
« Reply #16 on: November 27, 2012, 06:45:49 pm »

Actually, on second thought, it would probably be either in autumn or winter of The Master's reign, or the Spring following... I got the timeline a bit messed up.
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Re: Spearbreakers Alternate Reality Story Fort: The Broken Spear
« Reply #17 on: November 27, 2012, 06:51:35 pm »

Either way, ask and ye shall recieve. If Reudh would like like to return with her I'll do so as well.

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« Reply #18 on: November 27, 2012, 06:59:54 pm »

Posting to watch as well, this should turn out fairly interesting :P

If you need another soldier, I'd love to be redorfed (I'm working under the assumption I was either dead before the loyalty cascade, or killed during it). Dorf!Magnus swore to protect Spearbreakers until it fell, and it isn't dead yet.
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Re: Spearbreakers Alternate Reality Story Fort: The Broken Spear
« Reply #19 on: November 27, 2012, 07:04:32 pm »

I can work that in. After all, there are so many bodies and abandoned tunnels I  wouldn't be shocked if, given his cybernetics, he just came stumbling up into the fortress living area sober and confused.

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« Reply #20 on: November 27, 2012, 09:14:42 pm »

Vanya has experience with advanced mechanics (thanks to Mr Frog), so if you wanted dwarf!JackMagnus come back in a permanent mechsuit, Jack, she could help get him into shape.
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« Reply #21 on: November 27, 2012, 09:20:52 pm »

Whichever way is easiest to write and incorporate into the story is fine by me. Although, I wonder how Vanya will react to dorf!Magnus having died several times - and subsequently being brought back to life with more and more mechanical body parts - will be.

Or, I could still be "alive" and just lost in Spearbreakers somewhere. That also seems likely >.>
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« Reply #22 on: November 27, 2012, 09:22:33 pm »

After all, there are so many bodies and abandoned tunnels I  wouldn't be shocked if, given his cybernetics, he just came stumbling up into the fortress living area sober and confused.

Hence this.

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« Reply #23 on: November 27, 2012, 09:25:22 pm »

Whichever way is easiest to write and incorporate into the story is fine by me. Although, I wonder how Vanya will react to dorf!Magnus having died several times - and subsequently being brought back to life with more and more mechanical body parts - will be.

Or, I could still be "alive" and just lost in Spearbreakers somewhere. That also seems likely >.>
After all the stuff she's seen and been through, I think at best it would get a sigh out of her, so long as he's still alive. By this point in the story, she knows that Mr Frog is cloned (holy shit, Mr Frog is cloned, so he could come back!), so a dead-but-now-not-dead Jack Magnus wouldn't be the biggest surprise she's had.

After all, there are so many bodies and abandoned tunnels I  wouldn't be shocked if, given his cybernetics, he just came stumbling up into the fortress living area sober and confused.

Hence this.
Guess it's official, then. Thanks to Drac's mad skillz, Jack didn't die.
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« Reply #24 on: November 27, 2012, 10:23:38 pm »

Posting to watch. And yes, Vanya and perhaps Reudh can come back. Vanya will be shocked, but Reudh absolutely apopleptically grief stricken.

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« Reply #25 on: November 27, 2012, 11:16:40 pm »

I'm glad to think someone thinks I have "mad-skillz".  However let's remember the late Draconik Sankis Haunted by the memory (and specter) of the Emperor Sankis god of darkness... Yea I don't think my dwarf will be having much of a peaceful (or everlasting) death rest. =)
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« Reply #26 on: November 28, 2012, 11:50:08 am »

Chapter 4: A looter and bins.
“So long as a few remain, there is hope.” - Unknown

Things had been slow around the fortress . While others were busying themselves with bodily functions and burial rites, Dauros had decided to put their remaining wood to use for storage bins. “Why?” from Fischer was met with a simple “We need them.” Mitch and Corai agreed, as it would greatly simplify things overall. They also fully expected to be alone for another six months, as surely the humans who had escaped Dauros and Asea would inform the world of the evidently dead fortress, though Fischer clung to hope that the sheer wealth of the fortress would get at least a few braver souls to come. Burner was outside gathering remains to be buried later when he stumbled upon a kobold seeking loot. “Hey! Put that down you little shit!” He said angrily as he tackled the kobold. He then locked and broke the kobold's knife hand before slamming his head into the road repeatedly, until it was nothing but unrecognizable mush against what the mercenaries from a couple years back called concrete. “I heard yelling! What... Eesh. Think you smashed its head enough?” Mitch said, a bin laden with random goods under his arm indicating he had come from the depot. “There's plenty of other things to steal laying about outside and this stupid fuckwit-” Burner kicked the kobold's side for emphasis, “-wanted the shiny shit inside the fortress.” “Such a waste of a life.” Mitch said. Burner nodded. He never cared for kobolds but it brought him no joy to beat one to death, and the remaining soldiery would have killed it as one would step on an ant.

There were other less pressing concerns also among the survivors. There were still crops among the fields, not enough bins on hand, equipment everywhere, and now looters were starting to encroach upon the fortress in its weakened state. There were also many crippled animals and a herd of sloth-bears that needed to be trained or put down, and countless skeletons of other livestock that perished in the riot. Asea busied himself cleaning up the dining hall, which had piles of skeletons still scattered about. Hedgeman began cleaning out cabinets as bins became available. He only hoped the mess of items they still had laying around would slowly disappear with nothing new being produced. Fischer had managed to learn how to at least operate the cameras in Mr Frog's lab, if nothing else. One night at dinner, Mitch absently proposed digging another clover below the first or beside it. “We've always used the clover for burial... I don't see why we shouldn't.” Dauros said in agreement. “We don't have any miners is why we shouldn't. We're havin' enough trouble with the bodies and coffins we got.” Hedgeman said with a mouth full of cheese. “I agree. None of ud has the skill or build to mine efficently except the soldiers and we kind of need them in their battle gear and armed, not digging up rocks.” Draignean made a point of thgrowing a small rock at him. “These rocks are what all glorious dwarfdom are built upon you heretic!” “You don't even worship any gods....” Paintbrush said.“ELDRITCH ABOMINATIONS COUNT GODS DAMN IT!” Draignean shouted in defense of his object of worship. “No. No they don't. They count as monstrosities that need a pike through their head.” Dauros said irritably. The group continued arguing and debating the legitimacy of the worship of some monster or another, during which time a yak gave birth which sent Draignean into a tizzy about his monster of worship blessing the yak or some such nonsense. Fischer meanwhile decided to excuse herself and headed for Mr Frog's lab.

She wanted to learn how to use the machinery in the lab, if only because the now departed scientist had done so much good with the stuff. She set Splashslowed against the wall as she began sifting through items, when she heard a rather irritable moaning from behind her. “Go away Zulban.” She said. “I told you we'd bury you when we buried you.” The ghost floated over beside her “You've no respect for ghostly rights do you? Until you people bury or carve me a headstone I get to be as annoying as I want.” Fischer wasn't really paying attention, trying to find a journal, instruction book, something to allow her to mess with the elixirs and machines in the room. “You woke both me and Dauros up with your moaning so shut up. We'll bury you as coffins become available.” The ghostly weaver just pouted and sat himself on Mr Frog's bed. “If you want something that'll teach you some of the basics of those weird machines and chemicals, press the panel on the wall there.” Fischer looked at the ghost and then where he pointed. “Why should I believe anything is there?” Fischer asked irritably. “Because I can go places you can't. Being a ghost isn't dignified, but there are advantages. There's another bedroom in there with a bunch of beginner's books on engineering and such.” Fischer walked over and pressed the slightly raised panel that had an engraving of a barbarian warrior on it. Shortly after a door opened revealing a room similar to an apprentice's dwelling, albeit with some extra amenities for hygiene but otherwise more basic, save the book case and small desk. “Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to try to get a rise out of the Dauros fellow. Maybe I'll throw a mug at him or something.” Zulban said as he floated off.

Fischer stepped in and began going through the books, grabbing any that she thought would be useful and stuffing them in her field pack. Given a few years, now that she could begin figuring things out using the books,  She could probably figure this mess of shiny machinery. But that could wait one more day; she needed sleep.

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Re: Spearbreakers Alternate Reality Story Fort: The Broken Spear
« Reply #27 on: November 28, 2012, 02:55:16 pm »

i like the ghost.
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Re: Spearbreakers Alternate Reality Story Fort: The Broken Spear
« Reply #28 on: November 28, 2012, 03:05:30 pm »

I didn't know he was there until I checked for other wildlife. His presence allowed me to finish the chapter. And for somereason, even though Dauros didn't know anyone in-game, Zulban seems to really not like him.

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Re: Spearbreakers Alternate Reality Story Fort: The Broken Spear
« Reply #29 on: November 28, 2012, 03:18:47 pm »

hmmm.
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