The first component of it, yes. I was hoping to get comments on that much before continuing.
http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=118466.msg3747888#msg3747888
After reading your previous post, I present my counterpoints:
What is in the opening statement is already said in the current constitution. The debate is to what qualifies as "providing for the general welfare", "defense", and exactly what is "fair and just". Your statement seems no less ambiguous.
House of commons: I guess this is sort of like the house of representatives we have now, minus the formal election by voting. It could still be rigged in favor of particular people. Though, that could happen with any election, with it being supposedly "random", there would be no public reaction to gauge weather or not it is accurate
(if only 20% of people say they vote for candidate A, and he still wins, it's a pretty big red flag). With a supposedly "random" drawing, only the people running it would have any idea weather it is fair or not.
House of Experts: This seems to be like a combination of the house and senate methods. I am most curious as to how this jury would be chosen and run. That bit about no income or jobs within 3 months of their vote won't change much. They can still be promised money before or after that session, or the "income" can come in another form, such as an unrelated gift.
House of representatives: This is how the current Senate used to be, but some of the states wouldn't send anybody because of gridlock. An amendment was added to have them elected by popular vote instead.
And none of this addresses the problem that people can be bought off or may have friends in high places. These things are often already illegal, but happen behind closed doors where nobody can see it anyways. Hell, a lot of it is done out in the open, because any good lawyer can find a loophole to exploit
(especially if it's something as vague as giving something, anything to somebody else). I see the house of commons being the most vulnerable in a way, because they are the most likely to be poor and really need the extra money. Making it illegal to do deals in the shadows does nothing if you can't see into the shadows anyways
(how else are you to know it's happening?). Surely, you can't monitor everything everyone is doing at all times.
The bold text is just to make it easier to read, no emphasis intended.