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Lillipad

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The Saint's Students
« on: October 27, 2012, 07:59:12 pm »

The continent of Ashberg, a dangerous, inhospitable land full of perils no mere mortal could handle alone, lived a kindly saint. He traversed the land, aiding the common people, who had long been outcast by the upper class, which lived behind the safety of the capital walls that could be found around various cities in each country. This saint took the dangers of Ashberg head on, clashing with wild beasts, horrible monsters, demons, and even nature itself. Along the way, he picked up six children of varying circumstance, who no longer had a home, and who needed a father to guide them.
As these seven traveled, the saint tried to give each of the orphans their own path, teaching them the ways of the world, and attempting to instill hope in the children. The group continued to travel the continent, aiding the common folk, until a temple was erected in the saint's honor. For a time, they had settled down, and the saint had begun to train them further, in an attempt to help them shape their own futures. But when a powerful demon rose with an army of terror, the saint was struck down as he tried to protect the land once more.
Now, with the kind saint gone, the people are forced to fend for themselves once more. And the orphans, now just barely old enough to take the ceremony of passage into adulthood, leave the future uncertain. Times are once again troubled. And only the orphans, lost and confused, have a chance of righting what was made wrong.

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Character dump and OOC thataway --> Swish!

Spoiler: general knowledge (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: signup sheet (click to show/hide)

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Spoiler: Monk (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Engineer (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Mage (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Warrior (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Priest (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Archer (click to show/hide)
« Last Edit: November 17, 2012, 04:58:55 am by Lillipad »
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Re: The Saint's Students
« Reply #1 on: October 27, 2012, 08:21:21 pm »

Spoiler: Done (click to show/hide)
« Last Edit: November 03, 2012, 11:30:51 pm by Caellath »
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"Hey steve." You speak into the air.
>Yes?
"Could you guys also make a hamburger out of this arm when they cut it off? I wanted to eat it just for the sake of tasting it."
>That is horrible and disgusting. It will no doubt set you apart and create fear in your team mates. So of course.

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Re: The Saint's Students
« Reply #2 on: October 27, 2012, 08:29:04 pm »

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Is this all ok?

« Last Edit: October 28, 2012, 12:50:46 am by mesor »
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Re: The Saint's Students
« Reply #3 on: October 27, 2012, 08:37:38 pm »

Apprentice: Engineer
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Backstory: Coming Soon!

Level: 0
Stats:
Strength 6
Dexterity 13
Agility 8
Intelligence 20
Willpower 5
Balance 6
Attack Power 3-9
Spell Power 3-9

Skills: ??


Stupid ninjas.

Apprentice: Mage
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Backstory: The Mage was a normal child...for almost four years. Then his magical talent manifested. The first time, he burnt his beloved elder sister to death on accident, and it got worse from there. At the age of 8, the church finally showed up and took him away to a distant island prison, where he was left for a while. Finally, not too long ago, the Saint came to save him. He was taught by the Saint how to control his powers and use them to aid instead of harm. He has done well, but after the death of the Saint his old uncontrollable outbursts are starting to return...

Level: 0
Stats:
Health: 150
Mana: 390
Strength: 7
Dexterity: 5
Agility: 5
Intelligence: 9
Willpower: 15
Balance: 15
Attack power: 3-8
Spell power: 6-20

Skills: ??
« Last Edit: October 27, 2012, 10:50:25 pm by GreatWyrmGold »
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mesor

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« Reply #4 on: October 27, 2012, 08:40:41 pm »

(( Sorry Wyrm I seem to ninja you a lot lately lol ))
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Lillipad

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« Reply #5 on: October 27, 2012, 08:46:46 pm »

You missed a few 'shes' in there, and you should probably take out the 'polite' if he's only barely able to control his anger. You didn't have to use the original text, but it's not a problem that you did. Other than that, there are a few minor grammatical errors, but those don't really matter too much, and it'll be easy to fix up once I make the sheet dump/OOC. Sheet looks fine otherwise.
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« Reply #6 on: October 27, 2012, 08:48:29 pm »

I'll fix it up a bit :) should probably have triple checked since I've been awake coming up on 45 hours at the moment.
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Lillipad

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« Reply #7 on: October 27, 2012, 10:43:32 pm »

Forgot to mention, but this isn't just going to be a first-come basis. I'm going to select the sheets I like best, and that come from people who seem genuinely interested in playing. Mesor, you can feel pretty secure right now, since you seem to have a real interest, but anyone wanting to post anything else, just do it. I'm not going to take any one sheet for the sole reason that it was posted first, so don't let anyone else bother you. Just come up with something you like, and think is interesting.

Also, I will have your skills posted sometime tomorrow, Mesor.
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« Reply #8 on: October 27, 2012, 10:52:32 pm »

Thats fine thanks, I'll be on most of the day in any case otherwise I'll catch it the day after tomorrow as it will be for me since it's 4 am here now.

I'm gonna make a couple of changes to my back story I had an idea to tie in his fortress to the story and expand on him a bit to explain the way he will be behaving in game.
« Last Edit: October 27, 2012, 11:09:24 pm by mesor »
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« Reply #9 on: October 27, 2012, 11:52:21 pm »

Reserving the Priest. Sheet incoming.
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mesor

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« Reply #10 on: October 27, 2012, 11:53:22 pm »

(( I'm pretty sure you can have any class you want mate I doubt it's limited to a single one of each since he's picking who joins first. ))
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« Reply #11 on: October 28, 2012, 12:28:34 am »

There will only be one of each class. I'm picking who gets in because of this. You can reserve a spot to post your sheet in, but I'm going with the best sheets, rather than the first ones submitted.

One thing about your sheet. If you're going to make his anger and vengeance a driving force behind his actions, then the dark path would probably be better for you. The light paths are typically brighter, and have your characters rediscovering themselves. Basically it's for brighter emotions. The dark path is gloomier, and about your character harnessing their rage, corruption, or desires for revenge, and is probably more of what you're going for.
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« Reply #12 on: October 28, 2012, 12:38:23 am »

Oh I meant people can apply as any class but only one of each can get in I should really start explaining things in more detail but was only  a guess in any case.

Rediscovering fits what I had in mind.
My rough plan was for him to start off full of anger ( wouldn't you be if the person had more or less become your parent was killed? ) but as things go he'll come to understand what the saint was teaching him more and more and as that happens the good in him that the saint was building becomes stronger and the evil will become weaker so by the end of the game ( assuming I survive that long ) his desire for revenge will be all but gone and he can in true cheesy movie style forgive the evil that killed the saint before he smites it's ass.
His core values are light he's just been partially consumed by darkness because of the desire for revenge.
But it is also partially because I really like the light skills as well.

I guess that would fit better for neutral though if thats not ok for a light character.
« Last Edit: October 28, 2012, 12:47:36 am by mesor »
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« Reply #13 on: October 28, 2012, 12:59:00 am »

It's perfectly fine for a light character. Neutral is for cases that don't fall under either the light or dark path. I just wanted to make sure you weren't sending a revenge freak down the path of peace and love.
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« Reply #14 on: October 28, 2012, 01:04:48 am »

Hah naw I just decided since your making a game thats a bit more ordered then most games on here and is going to develop a lot over time. I'd make a character that will be a bit more of a mixed slate and then will develop as the game progresses so it'll make my character a bit more interesting for you as well as me. Rather then coming into the game at the end of his development and his actions and choices are almost the same for every situation.
So I have a lot more variety to choose from in his actions and I can throw some curve balls at you with a sudden action that is totally off track from his recent ones to show his conflicted mind.

So if it goes fairly we'll he'll get better and you wont see much of his evil side, if it goes half good half bad he'll get better slowly but every now and then he'll slip up and something bad will happen and if it goes horribly and the whole team gets killed around him he'll become a demon of hatred turn his floating fortress into a death star and start destroying everything that even resembles a demon in the bloodiest and most painful way he can imagine....
But thats worst case scenario and if it reaches that stage then I'll have needed the luckiest rolling streak in history to have survived anyway.
« Last Edit: October 28, 2012, 01:07:25 am by mesor »
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