Eh what the hell, I'm going to go with a completely different character.
Name: The Entity (Jim)
Sex: None (Male)
Age: Unknown (21)
Description: True form is constantly changing but somewhat serpent/leech like
Disguised Form - Brown eyes and hair (medium/short length), white skin, about 6 ft tall and sporting some pretty sweet sideburns, a thin beard and mustache along with some dark shades (sunglasses). Wears flannel pajama pants and a grey sweat shirt for maximum flexibility when fighting but in social situations may wear a rather dashing white tuxedo along with a Fedora, white dress shoes and a cane (the shades too of course).
Origin: Born in the darkest recesses of the void, the Entity has lived since time immemorial in a seemingly endless slumber that until recently had been undisturbed. While the Entity is very old, it has little life experience due to spending all its time in a hibernation like state. While the Entity was sleeping however, large groups of void beings came around it and began worshiping the Entity as their god due to the mutative energies they felt emanating from the creature. In an attempt to wake their proclaimed god, the void beings tried to cast a ritual but things went wrong. The Entity awoke and saw its followers but moments later was hurled out of the void and cast down to the planet Earth. Upon impacting with the surface in a wooded region, the beast ate the first living thing it found to sate its hunger. The Entity acting on instinct, rapidly mutated its body after consuming the man and took his form so as to blend in with this new environment. Flashes of the man's life flew through the Entity's mind. This man had been named Jim and he owned a small run down house nearby in the woods.
Traits: The Entity has just woken up after a long nap. Despite being very old, the Entity has little life experience and relies somewhat on instinct to compensate. It has not yet developed much of a personality but is quite curious of its new surroundings. The entity is somewhat small but that will likely change now that it is awake and can eat. It misses the comfort of the void and wishes to open a way back but does not know how. Its instincts however tell it to take advantage of the many living beings of this planet and that this will help accomplish its goal. It will likely use its powers to try to open a way to the void and in the meantime make this world as close to home as possible.
Powers: The Entity has the ability to mutate living things including itself. Eating things helps it grow and evolve. It also has telekinetic powers (moving things with its mind) allowing it to easily shape the environment just as it shapes living beings with its other power. Lastly it has some biological abilities that it can develop through its mutations like acid spitting, swimming well, breathing underwater, etc
So any changes that need to be made, just let me know.
Nice work. Looks like everything checks out.
I have a feeling The Entity and TorZon will either end up being the best of friends or bitter arch rivals. Probably arch rivals, as I could imagine them getting pretty competitive over available food should they ever happen find themselves in the same general area.
In other news, due to a number of miscellaneous distractions gluttonously eating away at most of my time as of late, the next update is taking slightly longer than expected. Your continued patience is appreciated.