Well, I downloaded the latest Orc Fortress version to check it out.
I must say, the manual is really good work. Answers almost all the questions I had as someone who knows very little about the current orc fortress. It is also well written, fun and does a good job of getting across the flavour of your orcs while also making the flavour informative.
Some questions you might think of adding answers to (though some of these can be easily answered by a look at the raws, if they are in the manual it saves new players time):
*How long orcs can live, how fast they breed and how fast they mature.
*Can orcs mine as well as the Dwarfs (I assume yes, but it isn't clear from the manual).
*Is there anything orcs need trade caravans to get, or can a player get everything via the raiding and orc trade workshops?
*Do orcs need booze?
*Do orc nobles have mandates like Dwarf nobles? And is there an "orc king" who has to immigrate to your fortress, or all the nobles promoted from within?
*It would be nice if you went into more detail about what workshops orcs get and what materials they can access.
Again, it is a stunning piece of work. Having struggled with writing documentation myself, I am really impressed by what you have achieved here ON TOP of making your mod.
I find it amusing how this mod makes the orcs so worldly, as contrasted with the Dwarfs holed up in their forts. Not only do orcs get the normal trade depot, but they also get the Caravanserai, the raider docks, adventurers coming and going, a monetized economy (where the Dwarfs are still making due with barter) and slaves and immigrants of other species working in the fort, making for a proper multi-ethnic community... Why it makes the Dwarfs seem like the antisocial race.
Have either you or Meph tried making trolls and goblins and the like that can live in the fortress and act as limited members of the community like concubines and golems do for the Dwarfs? Since both concubines and golems are both kinda Dwarfs, if strange, alien sorts of Dwarf, I wondered if there was a practical limit to having intelligent pets that were of another species.
I will be following the community fort with interest.
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