Char Sheet.
Might have messed something up...
You've placed 4 dots in all of your attribute sets, instead of going with 5/4/3. It looks like you put an extra dot into your physical skills (you have 12, instead of 11) unless I'm counting wrong. Either your mental or social skills, whichever you decided was the Secondary set, is missing 3 dots. You should also think about picking specialties (if you have three) since those are useful in their situations. Merits are fine, I'm going to assume you got your math right for the other stuff.
I haven't been able to do much more than skim the backstory so far, but it looks good. Just fix up the attributes and skills, and you're in.
My character.
On leave from the military. Saw some weird shit in Afghanistan (On GM's discretion what she saw) and is curious as to what is going on. She was a sinking suspicion that whatever she saw in that country isn't limited to just there...
It looks like you're missing attribute dots somewhere (I'm counting only two in social and mental), and you're also short on skills and merits. Investigation specialty is a tad vague, but I'll let that slide because it makes enough sense anyways. As with File's sheet, I'm going to assume your math checks out, rather than going through health, willpower, etc.
Aside from those issues, I also need a slightly more in depth backstory. What have you been up to since getting back? Are you working? Living with family or friends? Do you see a therapist for potential PSD? Stuff like that, also information on your personality. The more info I have, the more I can work with you.
I ran a game back where a player had a similar character idea (soldier on leave, saw some pretty wack shit while in sand land) but the game didn't last long. So I've got some stuff cooked up already, it'll be nice to actually make use of those notes.