Mcclay, I'm not even going to make an attempt to read your post for the following reasons:
1. You know by now that I put a lot of stress on at least trying to spell things correctly. (I mean, hell, I'll be the first to say that there is at least one update riddled with spelling errors. But at least put the effort in, yeah?)
2. Formatting. It's ugly, plain and simple. I mean, your OOC was not only almost indistinguishable from the IC, but you made not attempt to even note where it ends.
3. If you can somehow manage to hit space enough times to emulate an indent, you can do the above two.
I realize you're apparently using a very small keyboard. Let me remind you why this is not an excuse: I am writing this from an iPod touch. Just to prove a point. (And I have to question your story, anyways. At first you said you were on a kindle, then an e-reader, and then a netbook. Which is it?)
And before you tell me that you can't edit a post and will need to clutter the thread with another: You most certainly can. If you can click a link of any kind (which you undoubtedly can), you can click the "edit" button. In fact, you can probably even click the button for italics, but if not there's nothing stopping you from using the BBCode for italics which I will helpfully show you below.
[i]text[/i]
I normally don't have endless bounds of patience, considering that I had to make your character sheet for you, even after three iterations of the backstory, I'm surprised I haven't just thrown my hands up by now. Please clean up your act.