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Flying Dice

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Fath Nilkinem Bothonthukkan
« on: March 20, 2012, 02:42:14 pm »

Fath Nilkinem immigrated to the fortress Ambertown in 153, fleeing poverty and corruption in the mountainhomes with his family. He had been a member of the militia for several years in the mountainhome, and still remembered some of his training. He knew he was no match for a trained soldier, but he still had more experience than any of the other citizens of Ambertown. The blacksmith used nearly their entire stock of iron forging a suit of platemail and a finely crafted glaive for Fath, gifting them to him on the day he accepted the position of commander in the nonexistant militia. From that day, he dedicated his days to training tirelessly, alone. In his few spare moments, he assisted in the ongoing construction of the walls and keep.

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In the spring of 154, Ambertown was running dangerously low on food. Attempts to barter with the elven caravan had failed when a mason accidentally offered a wooden bin full of stone harps; the pointy-ears left in disgust. The westerling merchants, with typical human pride, turned their noses down on what few products Ambertown had to offer. Fath met with the expedition leader and several prominent members of the community, and they regretfully concluded that drastic measures were required. Fath donned his armor, hefted his glaive, and strode up the ramps to the trade depot, only to find it empty. The westerlings had already departed. Fath rushed to the outer gates, and, with a mixture of shame and relief, saw that their wagons were only a short distance away. He crossed the ground in moments, and cut down two of the guards before they knew that he was upon them. The others turned to face him, shouting in their barbaric tongue. He ignored them, dodging towards his true target. He struck down each of the merchants in turn, their draft animals fleeing the scent of blood. Atop one of the halted wagons, he returned his attention to the outraged guards. He dispatched one, then another, in quick succession. The final three eyed the bodies of their comrades, and broke for the border of Ambertown's territory. Fath gladly let them go, and motioned to the civilians that they could collect the food from the westerling wagons. As hungry children clambered up, prying open barrels stuffed with fruits, meats, and cheeses, he sunk to his knees, soaked in the blood of the innocent. That day, he took the title Bothonthukkan, "Murky Amber". He was the blade of Ambertown, stained with blood shed in impure actions that others may live in peace.

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Several months later, Fath was returning from his pursuit of a daemonic ambush. Thankfully, few of the others had been outside, and the daemons had been spotted by a lookout. He had slain two; the others had fled, though one took a bolt to the throat as he rushed past a returning hunter, and had swiftly bled out on the rough granite cobbles. As he approached the gates, Fath noticed a strange figure walking alongside the lead human wagon. The... human? was shrouded in a black cloak, and seemed rather pale. His arms were coated in layers of bone jewelry, crowns of bone sat upon his shapely head, and the lobes of his ears were stretched nearly to his shoulders by the sheer weight of bone and hair rings piercing them. Fath motioned one of the human guards over, and gestured towards the tall human.

"Who's that bloke, then?"

"Oh, that is His Grace, Lawgiver of the Confederation of Flowers. He's basically a king, only he isn't called it."



Fath mulled this over for a moment, but was broken from his thoughts by a rather toothy grin from the lawgiver. Fath's thoughts raced, and he hit upon an old memory, from long ago, when he was nearly a child. A string of deaths in the mountainhome, ending with a confrontation with a dwarf weighed down with bone jewelry, who fled into the night. Whispers in the night for months later. 'Vampire', the adults had called it. Fath's face tightened as he strode back into the fortress. The lawgiver would be here to meet with the Baroness, of course.

 He turned to one of the farmers working the outdoor fields, "You wouldn't happen to know where Etur is, would you, Obok?"

"Ah, the last I heard, she was helping the other miners with the new workings near the hospital."

"Thank you!"

"Wait, what did yo-"

"No time!"

Fath pushed through the crowded halls of the keep, past human merchants and guards, dwarven workers and children, jumping down the first level of the central spiral. With a hand on the column, he quickly slid down the ramps to the hospital level, jumping out towards the freshly dug tunnel. Fath ran down the narrow passage, literally climbing over a miner.

"Datan, did that human come this way?"

"Yeah, he chased me out, told me not to spy on his meeting with Etur. Lousy humans, some times I wonder why we bother treating with them at all."

Fath continued down the tunnel until he reached a branching point. He hesitated for a moment, but turned down the left fork, following the sound of a pair of voices.

"I told you, we can meet after I finish work here, human."

"Baroness, this is most important for the future of our peoples. I must insist."

"Later, I said. Are your ears clogged, human?"

"Very well. I believe we are finis-"



The lawgiver cut off with a yelp as a dwarf clad in bloodstained armor leapt over the Baroness. Fath thrust his glaive home, splitting the lawgiver's head nearly in two with a single motion.



As the dead "human" fell to the ground, a veritable explosion of human bone and hair jewelry flooded the tunnel nearly halfway to the ceiling.



"Damn vampires."




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Just a short little thing I felt like writing up. I hope someone enjoyed it. Let that be a lesson to vampires: at least bother disguising yourselves, or a short, bearded little man might stab you in the face.
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Re: Fath Nilkinem Bothonthukkan
« Reply #1 on: March 20, 2012, 02:54:51 pm »

Loved it.
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Re: Fath Nilkinem Bothonthukkan
« Reply #2 on: March 20, 2012, 03:04:07 pm »

Very nice. Thanks!
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Re: Fath Nilkinem Bothonthukkan
« Reply #3 on: March 20, 2012, 03:44:11 pm »

True dwarven heroes spill blood for the good of the fort.
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Re: Fath Nilkinem Bothonthukkan
« Reply #4 on: March 20, 2012, 03:50:57 pm »

!!Fath for soapmaker 2012!!

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Re: Fath Nilkinem Bothonthukkan
« Reply #5 on: March 20, 2012, 03:52:07 pm »

Excellent read, good sir!
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Re: Fath Nilkinem Bothonthukkan
« Reply #6 on: March 20, 2012, 03:55:30 pm »

Excellent!
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Re: Fath Nilkinem Bothonthukkan
« Reply #7 on: March 20, 2012, 06:52:20 pm »

I suppose you could say... When it comes to vampires: don't Fath about

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Re: Fath Nilkinem Bothonthukkan
« Reply #8 on: March 20, 2012, 07:44:49 pm »

This story is of the highest craftsdwarfship and menaces with spikes of awesomeness.
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Re: Fath Nilkinem Bothonthukkan
« Reply #9 on: March 20, 2012, 07:50:24 pm »

Cute.  More, please!
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Re: Fath Nilkinem Bothonthukkan
« Reply #10 on: March 20, 2012, 07:54:09 pm »

More!!
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Re: Fath Nilkinem Bothonthukkan
« Reply #11 on: March 20, 2012, 09:00:25 pm »

Nice!

...Did you mean: "One thing I never could stand about Ambertown:  All the damn vampires." ?  XD
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Re: Fath Nilkinem Bothonthukkan
« Reply #12 on: March 20, 2012, 09:10:18 pm »

Very nice! Thoroughly enjoyable! Well written!

Side note, for some reason I didn't think vampires killed other vampires... Guess that's just blood sucking.
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Re: Fath Nilkinem Bothonthukkan
« Reply #13 on: March 20, 2012, 11:59:28 pm »

Autumn 154

The merchant caravan arrived on schedule as usual. Fath was practicing in the dusty barracks as the call went up. Many of the dwarves rushing about on various errands dropped what they were doing to begin hauling the year's product to the trade depot. As for himself, Fath donned his armor and trotted out the gate. Daemons, goblins, and other scum preferred to raid convoys over confronting the solid granite walls of Ambertown. He could hear the footsteps of the trainee marksdwarves as they rushed to the ammunition depot. Each of the five was a hunter, but none had been training for long enough to aquire proper military discipline. For that matter, there were too few quivers and bolts in Ambertown to properly equip them. No matter; Fath knew he would continue to face threats alone until there was time and food to spare for him to train some of the civilians.

The dwarven caravan was approaching from the south; five wagons, and several pack animals. As Fath rounded the outer corner of the keep walls, he saw a group of daemons rise from the tall grass, brandishing weapons of steel, iron, bronze, and mythril.


The daemons cut down the lead wagon driver as the poorly positioned caravan guards rushed forward to meet them. A merchant broke off from the group, leading his yak towards Fath as quickly as he could run. Fath hefted his glaive and advanced. A single daemon armed with a greataxe followed, covering the flat ground in great strides. Without breaking pace, the daemon cut down the merchant. The panicked yak took a second, crippling blow. Fath darted around it as it fell, and with three slashes cut down the daemon.


Fath hurried towards the wagons, waving at them, trying to signal them to continue forward past him.  The merchants ignored his cries and turned their wagons in tight circles, whipping their yaks in their haste to escape. The daemons closed with the caravan, and struck down a second wagon driver. In the brief, furious melee that followed, three of the caravan guards died in exchange for one daemon killed outright and another that bled out while attempting to flee the area. The surviving daemons sprinted to the east, faster than Fath's short legs could follow. Nevertheless, he gave chase.

A single daemon split off, heading north toward Ambertown. A faint, shouted warning from the marksdwarves on the wall brought him up short. The daemon rounded on him, raising its waraxe high as another squad of daemons rose from the grass between a pair of small ponds.


Fath gritted his teeth and dashed forward, taking off the daemon's arm, then gutting it. As it bled out on the rich loam of Ambertown, Fath stepped over its still-twitching body and stabbed downward, cutting the foremost of the new party of daemons off at the ankles, so to speak. The daemon howled in pain as it collapsed onto a shale boulder. Fath brought his glaive around in a tight arc, cutting deep into its throat. The daemon commander, like all his folk nearly half again as tall as a human, brought the charge up short, glaring down at Fath. A bolt fired from the distant walls shattered on the boulder, shards of iron rebounding into the earth. With a growl, the daemon motioned to his warriors and turned heel, running.

Fath whistled to the marksdwarves on the walls, who sounded the all-clear. He returned to the site of the battle between the caravan guards and the daemons.


 In the wreckage of the wagons his eyes caught the glint of bars of refined starmetal, steel, heartstone, mythril, iron, bronze, even shining steel. Poorly crafted weapons which could be melted down and recast by Dôbar, their smith. Barrels of food of all sorts. The bodies of his fellow dwarves. Why were they so small, so insignificant? Five dwarves of the Basement of Coincidences, some likely distant relatives or friends of his own family and friends, yet their lives paled in comparison to the treasures gained through their deaths.

"Limul, Datan, guide me in this. I feel that I have wronged my fellows, yet this bounty will aid the growth and survival of Ambertown. I-I just do not know what is wrong, if anything. Please, answer me, if you are truly gods..."

Fath cut off as three dwarves approached.

"Poor bastards."

"Nothing to be done. It isn't as if they need any of this now. Isn't that right, Fath?"

"Yeah, cheer up. Dôbar might make you a new glaive to replace that dented old thing, if you butter him up. We've certainly got enough metal now, at any rate."

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Re: Fath Nilkinem Bothonthukkan
« Reply #14 on: March 21, 2012, 01:28:33 am »

What's his weapon skill?

Also, the dude is 111 years old, haha.
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